2019届二轮复习书面表达高分解读课件（73张） 26页

1 2019 届二轮复习书面表达高分解读 Skills in Compositions --- complex structures and advanced expressions 2 How to write a good composition 技 巧 1. 学会使用丰富的句式 2. 学会使用较高级词汇 实战演练 3. 学会使用适当的连词 3 一、学会使用丰富的句式 “既求达，也求雅”已成为高考高分评判的依据，所以要讲究句式结构的变化，避免单调、呆板和千篇一律的句子，尽量多使用各种句式，使句子丰富、灵活。 4 使用分词 Once it is held, it will bring a lot of chances to Beijing and make it more prosperous and modern. Once held , it will bring a lot of chances to Beijing, making it more prosperous and modern. Faced with the environmental problems to be solved, some people don’t approve of it. Weighing the advantages and disadvantages, we should welcome the Olympic Games. 5 使用定语从句 Many pollution problems can be more serious, and it can eventually do damage to our surroundings. Many pollution problems can be more serious, which can eventually do damage to our surroundings . More visitors from all over the world will flood into China, which financially benefit Beijing. What’s more, more people will be attracted to Beijing, which will contribute to the development of tourism to a great extent. 6 使用 with 结构 When the number of tourists is increasing, traffic will become more crowded. With the number of tourists increasing, traffic will become more crowded. With more and more visitors going to Beijing, tourism will be flourishing . With everyone doing his bit , the game will be a great success. 7 使用被动句 Measures should be taken to avoid the bad effect mentioned above. Only in this way can we hold a successful Olympic Games. 使用倒装结构 8 二、学会使用较高级词汇 用词准确、得体是写作的前提，在此基础上使用高级词汇和短语，既可以体现出作者的语言驾驭能力，又有助于获得高分。 9 How to use advanced expressions In my opinion, it is difficult to hold the Olympics. In my opinion, it is challenging to hold the Olympics. It will have a great effect on the development of Beijing. far-reaching profound significant 10 In a word, the Olympic Games will make Beijing more beautiful . fascinating In the long run, hosting the Olympics will play a necessary part in prospering economy as well as booming tourism. an indispensable The advantages of the Game is over heavier than its disadvantages. outweigh 11 Replace the underlined expressions Among all the people going to work, car drivers make up 18%. 2.The Internet can help us finish many tasks. 3.The library is important to us. 4. One can only become a skilled one after many failures. 5. Last year saw a more and more fierce competition in the job market. 6. He tried to pass the exam, but failed. complete accomplish fulfill vital essential endless countless numerous witnessed attempted to account for get through 12 7. Some students don’t value their money at all. 8. It is also essential that you get some skills for taking exams. treasure cherish acquire obtain gain 9. It would take me a great deal of time, which would surely invite numerous inconveniences to me. undoubtedly unquestionably 10. More and more people come to big cities, which causes serious housing problems. flood into crowd into pour into definitely 13 advanced synonym (the answer is not unique) invaluable capability a variety of cope with encounter demonstrate competent precious various diverse reveal indicate come across priceless ability different deal with meet with show able valuble run into talent 14 Assignment 试卷八 书面表达 Part 1 (30 words) Para1 : More and more Chinese parents prefer to send their children to study abroad. Para2: be for studying abroad Para3: be against studying abroad 15 16 17 18 19 More and more Chinese parents prefer to send their children to study abroad, assuming that their children can receive the best education despite heavy financial burdens. People’s opinions on this vary . 20 Part 2 Opinions and Reasons (2~3) 21 22 23 24 I think it makes good sense to send children to study abroad for the following reasons. First, when studying abroad, children are exposed to a different culture, which will help broaden their horizons and provide them with a chance to improve their foreign language. 25 What’s more , living apart from their family, children can learn to adapt to the new environment and live on their own . Last but not the least , faced with fierce competition in a job market, a person owning a foreign diploma can have an edge over others. 26 In summary , it goes without saying that studying abroad is an excellent experience from which children can benefit a lot, so if possible, children should make the most of the great chance.