2020秋八年级英语上册Unit1Wheredidyougoonvacation单元写作专项作业课件 18页

单 元 写 作 专 项 Unit 1　Where did you go on vacation? 本单元以“假日活动”为话题, 要求学生会运 用一般过去时态描述自己度过的一个假期, 体裁是 记叙文, 可以是一篇旅游日记。写作时一般涉及到 时间地点、人物、经过、结果等信息; 在写经过时, 可涉及景点、食物、住宿等具体信息。文章内容要 做到详略得当, 结尾表达自己的感受。 【高频词汇】 1.go to summer camp ______________ 2.go on vacation __________ 3.have a good time _________ 4.nothing much ________ 玩得开心 去度假 去参加夏令营 没什么 5.相当多 _____________ 6.感受到 _________ 7.因为 ____________ 8.在乡下 ____________________ because of feel like quite a few in the countryside 【开头句】 1.I went to the countryside with my parents last Sunday.上周日我和父母去了乡下。 2.It was hot and wet today.今天天气炎热又潮 湿。 【中间句】 1.I went there by bus with my parents.我 和我的父母坐公交去那儿。 2.There is much to do there.在那儿有很多 事可做。 3.There are many places of interest in Sanya. 三亚有许多名胜。 4.The only problem is that… 唯一的问题是…… 5.Everything tasted really good. 所有的东西尝 起来都很好。 【结尾句】 1.We had a good time there. 我们在那儿玩得 很开心。 2.It's really worth visiting. 它真的值得游览。 3.I was tired but very happy. 我感到累但很快乐。 【名言警句】 1.To see is to believe. 眼见为实。 2.It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books. 读万卷书不如行万 里路。 【写作任务】 假设你是王明, 上周末和父母一起去三亚旅游。请根据 提示及要求写一篇英语短文介绍你们的三亚之旅。 时间 7月5日—7月6日 人物 你和父母 天气 炎热、潮湿 活动 周六: 去海滩、冲浪、游泳…… 周日: 参观博物馆、购物、品尝美食…… 【写作点拨】 1.审题: (1)确定体裁。本文是写一篇旅游日记, 要求介绍活动时间、天气以及具体的活动内容, 属于记叙文。(2)确定人称。介绍自己与家人的 活动, 以第一人称为主。(3)确定时态。要求写 上周末的旅游活动, 应用一般过去时。 2.写作提纲 ①Last weekend my parents and I went to Sanya on vacation. The weather was hot and wet. On Saturday, we went to the beach. ②There was much to do there. 【范文点评】 ① Last weekend my parents and I went to Sanya on vacation. 首句直 接交代了事情发生的地点、时 间、人物等信息。 ② There was much to do there. 该句总写在沙滩有很多 事可做。 ③First of all, I surfed and swam with my father. My mother enjoyed the sunshine on the beach. After that, we played volleyball together. We saw some old things on show. Then we went shopping. We bought something special for my grandparents. Also, we tried some seafood in the restaurant. It tasted really delicious. ④All in all, the trip was enjoyable. Though we were tired, we learned a lot. ③First of all, after that, then, also等 词的使用使文 章逻辑清晰。 ④All in all, the trip was enjoyable. 用all in all 总 写, 并且点题, 首尾呼应。 假如你是来自北京的Jack, 上周末你和妈妈到上海游玩。 请你根据提示及要求给爸爸写封邮件, 简述你们的活动和感 受。80词左右。 Activities: Day 1: went to Shanghai Disneyland(上海迪士尼乐 园) Day 2: visited the Oriental Pearl Tower(东方明珠塔) and tried local(当地的) food 参考词汇: 机会chance; 景色scenery ___________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ Mom and I had a great time in Shanghai last weekend. It was sunny and windy. Last Saturday, we went to Shanghai Disneyland and took a lot of photos there. Also, I was lucky to meet some visitors from the US. And I talked with them in English. It was a good chance for me to practice my English. The next day, we visited the Oriental Pearl Tower. Dear Dad, It's a tall building and people can see beautiful scenery of Shanghai on the top. So many people visit it every day. We also tried local food and it tasted really delicious! We were tired last weekend, but we had great fun. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ _________________________ ___________________________________________________ _____ Love, Jack 谢 谢 观 看 Thank you for watching!