八年级上英语课件写作素养提升练_人教新课标 (1) 13页

人教版 八年级上 写作素养提升练 人教版 八年级上 闲暇时间的活动丰富多彩。有的人喜欢去旅游， 饱览美景；有的人喜欢锻炼，强身健体；有的人喜 欢听音乐，陶冶性情；有的人喜欢读书，增长智慧。 同学们，你们有什么业余爱好？让我们养成良好的 生活习惯吧！ 假如今天英语课上你们就“ habits”这个话题进行了讨论， 课后老师要求你们写自己的习惯。请用英语写一篇短文介绍 自己的好习惯和坏习惯完成此次写作任务。 1. 谋篇布局：理清文章要素，构建文章结构。 介绍“我” 的习惯 引出话题 Everyone has his own habits. Here are my good habits and bad habits. 好习惯 help with housework; finish homework; have vegetables… 坏习惯 never do some reading; use the Internet; eat junk food; never exercise… 2. 遣词造句：就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。 (1) 我经常帮忙做家务。 _______________________________________. (2) 我总是独立完成作业。 _______________________________________. (3) 我每天吃水果蔬菜。 _______________________________________. (4) 我从不读书。 _______________________________________. I often help with housework I always finish my homework by myself I eat fruit and vegetables every day I never do some reading (5) 我经常使用互联网到深夜。 ______________________ deep into the night. (6) 我吃垃圾食品一周三到五次。 _______________________________________. (7) 我几乎从不运动。 _______________________________________. I often use the Internet I eat junk food three to five times a week I hardly ever exercise / play sports 3.巧妙衔接：利用连词，使句子意思连贯。 本文中，在列举好习惯和坏习惯时，可用and 等词 作为列举的连接纽带，从写好习惯转到写坏习惯时可 用however 作为对比和转折的连接纽带。 4.连句成篇： Everyone has his own habits. Here are my good habits and bad habits. _______________________________________________ 【品读范文】 Everyone has his own habits. Here are my good habits and bad habits. I have a lot of good habits. I often help with housework and I always finish my homework by myself. I eat fruit and vegetables every day. Also, I go to the dentist for teeth cleaning twice a year. I never arrive late for school. Good habits will benefit people forever. However, I have some bad habits too. I never do some reading. I often use the Internet deep into the night. And I eat junk food three to five times a week. Also I hardly ever exercise. Old habits die hard, so I’ll start changing before it’s too late! 假如你是李华，你的笔友Mike 给你发邮件，询问你的业 余活动。请你根据提示，给Mike 回一封邮件。 要点提示：1. 打篮球：锻炼身体；2. 读书：开阔视野，充 实自我；3. 参加志愿者活动: 帮助需要帮助的人。 要求：70 词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇 ：broaden one’s horizons 开阔视野；rich 丰富的； take part in 参加；volunteer 志愿者 Dear Mike, I’m glad to hear from you.____________________________ _________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Dear Mike, I'm glad to hear from you. How are you doing recently? In your email, you asked me about my free time activities. Now let me tell you something about it. I often play basketball in the school playground after school, because I think it is good for my health. On weekends, I usually read books at home. Reading can not only broaden my horizons but also increase my knowledge. Besides this, I ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ take part in volunteer activities twice a month in my free time. I can help the people in need through the volunteer activities. All these activities help make my life rich and colorful! What do you usually do in your free time? I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________