八年级英语上册Module7Afamousstory模块同步作文指导课件新版外研版 10页

Module 7　A famous story 模块同步作文指导 本模块以 “ 讲故事 ” 为话题，学习了过去进行时态。具体到书面表达中，要求同学们能根据所提示的信息运用过去进行时描述过去正在发生的事情。 常用表达： ① Once upon a time ， there were three little sisters ， and they lived... ②Alice had nothing to do. ③Once or twice she looked into her sister's book. ④There was nothing strange about that. ⑤Alice found that she was falling down a very ， very deep hole. ⑥While she was falling ， she was thinking about her cat. 请描述下面 3 幅图中的内容，并根据生活常识，发挥你的想象力， 续写第 4 幅图可能发生的事情。词数： 80 词左右。 【 思路点拨 】 写这类短文时，常用到表示过去的时间状语，如： yesterday ， last night ， last Sunday 等，同时要运用相应的过去时态，如一般过去时或过去进行时等。在写作时要注意以下几点： 1 ．明确中心思想，无论是看图写作，还是情景描写，都要围绕文章中心展开； 2 ．要注意记叙文的几个要素，即把时间、地点、人物、事件、起因、结果等交代清楚； 3 ．要合理安排好写作的顺序； 4 ．叙述事情时语言要简洁，把故事写得生动、翔实。 【 经典范文示例一 】 It was one day in my holiday.I was alone at home.I thought ， “ My father and mother are busy working.Why not cook a dinner for them ？ ” Then I began to cook.Suddenly the telephone rang.It was my mother.She asked me what I was doing.I said I was doing holiday homework.I wanted to give my parents a surprise.When I came back to the kitchen again ， the dish was burnt and smelt terrible.I hurried to turn off the gas.Just then my father came back.He didn't scold me but praised me.And my father took me to eat a big dinner at a restaurant.I can never forget that day. 【 经典范文示例二 】 假如你是大明，上个星期六晚上 7 点钟，你们一家人都在做什么呢？ 请根据下表提示写一篇短文进行描述。 Family members What they were doing Grandparents Watch TV Father Draw a picture Mother Wash clothes Sister Play the piano Brother Chat with friends on the Internet Daming Listen to music 　　 Hello ， I'm Daming.Last Saturday evening ， my family were all at home. At 7 ： 00 ， my grandparents were watching TV in the room.My father was drawing a picture at the desk.My mother was washing clothes.My sister wanted to take part in a piano competition and she was playing the piano.What was my brother doing ？ Oh ， he was chatting with his friends on the Internet.What about me ？ I was listening to music in my bedroom.What a happy family! 请根据表格提供的信息，写一篇 70 词左右的英语短文，描述昨晚八点钟停电时以下四个人的情况，可以适当发挥。 Mr Zhang watch a basketball match ， listen to the radio later Sally play the piano ， stop to have a rest Tom do some reading ， go to bed later Mrs Wang in the lift ( 电梯 ) ， can't get out When the light went off at eight o'clock yesterday evening ， Mr Zhang was watching a basketball match.Later he decided to listen to the radio.Sally was playing the piano at that time.Then she stopped to have a rest.Tom was doing some reading in his room.Later he went to bed.Mrs Wang was unlucky.She was in the lift and couldn't get out until the worker came to help her.