八年级上英语课件写作素养提升练_牛津译林版 17页

写作素养提升练 安徽译林版八年级上 本单元的话题为“朋友”，要求写描述“朋友” 的短文。我们可从外貌、品质、个性、能力等方面进行 写作。在写作时要注意正确使用描述性形容词，并能结 合具体的事例进行合理的阐述。最后，用一两句话来表 达对朋友的认识及对友谊的思考。 写作时，主要使用第三人称单数，故要注意动词 的第三人称单数形式。文章条理要清晰，表达要准确。 安徽译林版八年级上 假设Susan 是你的好朋友，表格中是Susan 的个人信 息，请你根据提示，以“ My good friend” 为题，用英语 写一篇100 词左右的短文。 内容提示： Name Susan Age 14 Country America Appearance tall, blue eyes, long golden hair Characters lovely, helpful, friendly Favourite sports swimming, running Hobbies reading, listening to music Interest Chinese history and culture My good friend ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ 【思路构建】 步骤 构思 列纲 1 点题，引入 正文 a good friend, her name 2 详细介绍 Susan 的个 人信息 14 years old, from America, a tall girl, with blue eyes, long golden hair, doing sports, enjoy reading books and listening to music, lovely and friendly, get on well with 步骤 构思 列纲 3 结尾呼应开头， 表明观点 lucky to have such a good friend My good friend I have a good friend. Her name is Susan. She is 14 years old. She’s from America. She's a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair. She likes doing sports, especially swimming and running. She enjoys reading books and listening to music. What’s more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture. So she often reads 【精彩范文】 books about China. She’s lovely and friendly. She gets on well with her friends. She’s also helpful. She often helps me learn English. With her help, I have made great progress in English. I’m lucky to have such a good friend. tall, strong, square, smiling, helpful, humour, wear, singer, bored, unhappy 【单词】 have a square face, smiling eyes, wear glasses, because of, too much, have a good sense of humour, feel bored, tell funny jokes, make sb. laugh, grow up, work hard 【短语】 He/She has... He/She doesn’t like... He/She wants to be... when he/she grows up. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 【句型】 请根据下列相关信息，以“ My best friend” 为题， 写一篇介绍朋友Daniel 的短文。词数不少于80 词（开头 已给出，不计入总词数）。 特点 圆脸，瘦，高个；很幽默，经常讲笑话 让我们开怀大笑 品行 愿意和朋友们分享东西；对人友善；时 刻准备帮助别人 爱好 喜欢阅读，旅行；今年暑假去了北京的 世界公园……(简单介绍世界公园之旅) 理想 长大想当…… My best friend I have a wonderful friend named Daniel. I’d like to tell you something about him. _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ My best friend I have a wonderful friend named Daniel. I'd like to tell you something about him. He is tall and thin with a round face. He is very humorous and often tells jokes to make us laugh. He is willing to share things with his friends. He is kind and always ready to help others. For example, he often gives his ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ seat to others on the bus. He likes reading and traveling. He went to Beijing World Park this summer holiday. There he enjoyed himself and learned a lot. He wants to be a teacher when he grows up.