全国版2020中考英语复习方案第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作05假日旅行课件人教新目标版 25页

话题写作（五）假日、旅行第一篇　教材考点梳理\n“读万卷书、行万里路”,旅行是学习的最好方式之一。请以“Travelling”为题,根据以下思维导图的提示,写一篇短文,发表你的看法。典例分析【话题点睛】针对的话题主要涉及节日习俗、节假日活动、旅游日记、旅游路线等。\n[注意](1)要点齐全,适当发挥;(2)从思维导图Sayings部分选择恰当的格言合理利用在短文中;(3)句子及篇章结构准确、连贯,书写规范;(4)词数：80—100;(5)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其他任何个人相关信息。\n【思路点拨】1.要点提炼：主题是对旅行是学习的最好方式之一这一观点的论述。文章主要有三个要点：(1)概述;(2)旅行的益处;(3)个人列举益处或经验。2.确定时态：一般现在时。3.确定人称：第二人称、第一人称。\n【写作架构】\n【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.旅行是最好的学习方式之一。(oneof+形容词最高级+复数名词)Travellingisforlearning.2.直到你亲眼看到它,你才会得到准确的印象。(not…until)Youcannevergetanexactpictureofit.3.在旅途中,我们可以一起处理可能遇到的问题和困难。(dealwith)Wecananddifficultiesinthejourney.oneofthebestwaysuntilyouseeityourselfdealwiththepossibleproblemstogether\nⅡ.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)1.Moreandmorepeopleliketravellingaroundtheworld.Becausepeoplecanbenefitalotfromtravelling.(用Thereasonwhy…合并为一个句子)2.Youmayhavereadorheardaboutsomething.Youcannevergetanexactpictureofituntilyouseeityourself.(用连词连接两个句子)Thereasonwhymoreandmorepeopleliketravellingaroundtheworldisthatpeoplecanbenefitalotfromtravelling.Youmayhavereadorheardaboutsomething,butyoucannevergetanexactpictureofituntilyouseeityourself.\n3.Iliketravellingwithfriends.Idon'tliketravellingalone.(用preferto…ratherthan…改写句子)Iprefertotravelwithfriendsratherthantravelalone.\n【连句成文】TravellingThereasonwhymoreandmorepeopleliketravellingaroundtheworldisthatpeoplecanbenefitalotfromtravelling.Asthesayinggoes,readtenthousandbooksandtraveltenthousandmiles.Travellingisoneofthebestwaysforlearning.Youmayhavereadorheardaboutsomething,butyoucannevergetanexactpictureofituntilyouseeityourself.Seeingisbelieving.Furthermore,ifyouareacarefulobserver,youcanlearnmuchduringyourtravelaboutthegeography,biologyand\nhistoryoftheplacesyouvisit.Whiletravelling,youcanmeetmorepeopleandmakemorefriends.Youcanalsocreategreatmemoriesforyourlifetime.Nomatterhowwelleducatedyouare,thereisalwaysalotforyoutolearnthroughtravelling.Asforme,Iprefertotravelwithfriendsratherthantravelalone.Becausewecandealwiththepossibleproblemsanddifficultiestogetherinthejourney.\n【参考谚语】1.Travelbroadensthemind.旅游开阔思维。2.Hewhotravelsfarknowsmuch.远行者见识广。3.Readtenthousandbooksandtraveltenthousandmiles.读万卷书,行万里路。拓展积累\n【相关短语】enjoythesunshine享受阳光;oneofthebiggestmountains最大的山之一;haveapicnic野餐;aseveryoneknows众所周知;befamousfor因……闻名;haveagoodtrip旅途愉快;havefundoingsth.做某事很有趣;haveagoodtime玩得愉快\n【亮点句型】导入主题句1.Thesummerholidayiscoming.Wearegoingtospendseveraldaystravelling.2.LastApril,ItravelledtoBeijingwithmyfamily.ItwasthebestseasontovisitBeijing.3.LastsummerwetookatriptoBeijing.4.Travellingisagreatsourceofknowledge.\n文章发展、过渡句1.Nanjingisacitywithalonghistory.Itwasalsothecapitalofsixdynasties.2.Wevisitedsomefamousplacesofinterest.3.Andwelearnedmoreaboutthehistoryofourcountry.4.Duringthetrip,wefoundthatourcountryismoreandmorebeautiful.\n文章结尾句1.Wenotonlyenjoyedthesights,butalsomadesomegoodfriends.AndIthinkthat'sthefantasticpartoftravelling.2.Travellingmademerelaxedandexcited.AndIalsolearnedalotfromtravelling.3.IwillneverforgetthejourneytoXi'an.Itwasreallyexciting.\nA假如你是北京的李丽,下周你在哈尔滨读中学的表妹李兰要来北京旅游。请根据以下提示,给她写一封信,并告诉她在北京旅游期间做一名文明的(well-mannered)中学生。[写作要点](1)欢迎她来北京。(2)介绍北京的情况：①下周天气：白天最高温度超过33℃;②交通方式：最好乘坐地铁;③必去的名胜：长城。(3)对她在北京旅游期间如何做一名文明的中学生提出具体建议。实战演练\n[写作要求](1)不得使用真实的姓名和校名;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;(3)字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰;(4)至少80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。\nDearLiLan,Howareyoudoing?Bestwishes!Yours,LiLi\nOnepossibleversion:DearLiLan,Howareyoudoing?I'mgladtohearthatyouarecomingtoBeijingnextweek.WelcometoBeijing.I'llgiveyousomesuggestionsonthistravelling.NextweekBeijingisgoingtobeveryhot.Sometimesthehighesttemperatureisover33℃.You'dbettertakeanumbrellawhenyougoout.Aseveryoneknows,Beijingisacrowdedcity.Andthesubwayisoneofthemostconvenientwaystotravelinthiscity.SoIadviseyoutotakethesubwaytotakearound.Beijingis\nfamousfortheGreatWall.Soyoucan'tmissvisitingit.Duringyourtravel,don'tthrowlittereverywhereandkeepquietinpublic.Onlyinthiswaycanyoubetreatedasawell-manneredmiddleschoolstudent.IbelieveyourtripwillbefulloffunandIhopeyouwillhaveagoodtimeinBeijing!Bestwishes!Yours,LiLi\nB为了进一步提升扬州国际文化旅游名城新形象,我市正在举办中学生英语导游大赛。请根据以下流程图提示完成一篇参赛导游词。\n[参考词汇]SlenderWestLake瘦西湖Five-pavilionBridge五亭桥HeGarden何园double-pathcorridor复道回廊[要求](1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;(3)词数：100左右(开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数);(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。\nLadiesandgentlemen,WelcometoYangzhou!I'myourtourguide.Yangzhou,myhometown,liesbetweentheHuaiRiverandtheYangtzeRiver.Ihopeyou'llhaveaverynicestayinYangzhou.\nOnepossibleversion:Ladiesandgentlemen,WelcometoYangzhou!I'myourtourguide.Yangzhou,myhometown,liesbetweentheHuaiRiverandtheYangtzeRiver.Yangzhouhasahistoryofover2,500years.Therearemanyinterestingplacestovisit,suchastheSlenderWestLake,theFive-pavilionBridge,HeGarden,thedouble-pathcorridor,andChinaPaper-CuttingMuseum.TheSlenderWestLakeisanationalparkinYangzhouCity.TheFive-pavilionBridgeisthesymboloftheSlenderWestLake.He\nGardenisthebest-knownprivategardenofthelateQingDynasty.ChinaPaper-CuttingMuseumisinYangzhou,too.Yangzhoupaper-cuttingcandatebacktotheSuiDynasty.Yangzhoudishesmaybeoneofthereasonswhysomanypeopleareattractedbythecity.Theyarenotonlydeliciousbutalsocolorful.Ihopeyou'llhaveaverynicestayinYangzhou.