全国版2020中考英语复习方案第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作03安全问题课件人教新目标版 24页

话题写作（三）安全问题第一篇　教材考点梳理\n树立自我保护意识,健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课。下面是某地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年编写的《青少年自我保护、健康成长手册》的部分内容。作为一名中学生,写一篇文章,内容包括：①陈述你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的;②补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。典例分析【话题点睛】该话题主要涉及如何保护人身安全、校园安全、交通安全等。此类试题常以要点提示的方式来考查。\n[要求](1)语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;(3)词数：80—100,文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。\nSelf-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.ButhowdoIprotectmyselfandgrowuphealthily?Nowletmesharemyexperienceandideaswithyou.First,Inshort,ifweobeytherulesandtakecareofourselves,wewillgrowupsafelyandhealthily.\n【思路点拨】1.要点提炼：主题是关于提高中学生的自我保护意识。文章主要有两个要点：(1)描述已给出的安全措施;(2)提出自己的建议。2.时态：一般现在时。3.人称：第一人称。\n【写作架构】\n【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.直到交通灯变成绿色我才会过马路。(not…until…)Igountilthetrafficlight.2.我经常吃得比较健康和安全。(healthily;safely)Iofteneat.3.吃太多的快餐将对我们的身体造成伤害。(doharmtosth.)fastfoodwillourbodies.4.我想给你们一些建议。(wouldliketodosth.)giveyousomeadvice.won'tturnsgreenhealthilyandsafelyEatingtoomuchdoharmtoI'dliketo\nⅡ.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)1.Obeyingthetrafficrulesisthemostimportant.(用“Nothingis+比较级+than…”改写句子)2.Eatingmorefruitandvegetablesisimportant.(用it作形式主语改写句子)3.Ialwayscrossthezebrawalk.It'ssafe.(用because改写句子)Nothingismoreimportantthanobeyingthetrafficrules.It'simportanttoeatmorefruitandvegetables.Ialwayscrossthezebrawalkbecauseit'ssafe.\n【连句成文】Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.ButhowdoIprotectmyselfandgrowuphealthily?Nowletmesharemyexperienceandideaswithyou.First,nothingismoreimportantthanobeyingthetrafficrules.Ineverruntheredlight.Whenthetrafficlightisred,Iwon'tgountilitturnsgreen.Ialwayscrossthezebrawalkbecauseit'ssafe.Second,Iofteneathealthilyandsafely.It'simportanttoeatmorefruitandvegetables.Eatingtoomuchfastfoodwilldoharmtomybody.Third,Inevermeetstrangersalone,especiallyfriendswhoImakeonthe\nInternet.Atthesametimeifwearetruefriends,weshouldhelpeachother.What'smore,I'dliketogiveyousomeadvice.Nowsummeriscoming.Inmyopinion,it'sdangerousforustoswimalone,especiallyindeeplakesorrivers.Sodon'tdothat.Inshort,ifweobeytherulesandtakecareofourselves,wewillgrowupsafelyandhealthily.\n【参考谚语】1.Cautionistheparentofsafety.小心驶得万年船。2.Accidentswillhappen.天有不测风云。3.Bettersafethansorry.谨言慎行不吃亏。拓展积累\n【相关短语】callthepolice报警;askteachersforhelp向老师求助;goupstairs/downstairs上/下楼;withoutpermission未经许可;keepawayfrom远离……;howtoprotectourselves如何保护我们自己;followtheschoolrules遵守校规;obeythetrafficrules遵守交通规则;bestrictwith对……要求严格\n【亮点句型】导入主题句1.Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldlearntoprotectourselvesfromeverypossibledanger.2.Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskills,especiallyforteenagers.3.Asweknow,moreandmorepeoplepayattentiontostudents'safety.4.Inrecentyears,students'safetyhasbecomeahottopic.\n文章发展、过渡句1.Ontheonehand,westudentsshouldlearnsomeskillsabouthowtoprotectourselves.2.What'smore,wemustcallthepoliceorourteachersforhelpifweareindanger.3.It'stimeforustotakemeasurestokeepthestudentssafe.4.However,therearesomedangerousthingswhichareharmfultostudents'safetyinourdailylife.\n文章结尾句1.Inaword,followingthesesafetyrulesabovecanmakeusliveinpeace.2.Learntoprotectourselvessothatwecangrowupsafelyandenjoyourwonderfullife.3.Ihopemoreandmorepeoplecangivetheirhandstohelpstudentsgrowhealthily.4.Inmyopinion,students'safetywillimproveaslongaseffortsaremade.\nA3月26日是第二十三个全国中小学生安全教育日。今年安全教育日的主题是“普及安全知识,确保生命安全”。暑假即将来临,为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,学校将举行以安全为主题的征文活动。请你根据下列表格内容写一篇题为“Howcanwemakeourselvessafe?”的英语短文。实战演练\n[参考词汇]becareful(小心)gobad(变质)要点内容饮食安全不吃变质食物,少吃或不吃垃圾食品交友安全网上慎重交友,不和陌生人交谈旅行安全照看好私人物品,遇险及时报警游泳安全不独自游泳,不到河、湖里游泳…………\n[要求](1)必须包含所给的全部要点及内容,可适当发挥;(2)文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名;(3)词数：80—100,开头已给出,不计入总词数。Howcanwemakeourselvessafe?Asteenagers,tolearnhowtomakeourselvessafeisespeciallyimportant.\nPossibleversion1:Howcanwemakeourselvessafe?Asteenagers,tolearnhowtomakeourselvessafeisespeciallyimportant.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.First,wearesupposedtobecarefulwhenmakingfriendsonline,whichmaybringusunnecessarytroubles.Second,remembernevertogoswimmingonourownintheriverorlakebecausedoingthatwillprobablyputourselvesintodangeroussituations.Besides,inordertoeathealthilyandsafely,we'dbettereatlessjunkfoodandnoteatfoodthatgoesbad,fortheywilldoharmtoourhealth.Atlast,whentravelingoutside,takecareofourpersonalthingsandcallthepoliceforhelpintimeifweareindanger.Inshort,safetymustcomefirst!\nPossibleversion2:Howcanwemakeourselvessafe?Asteenagers,tolearnhowtomakeourselvessafeisespeciallyimportant.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.First,weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.Second,weshouldtakecareofourpersonalthings.Ifweareindanger,wemustcallthepoliceforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.Also,weoughttoeathealthilyandsafely.Don'teatbadfood;eatlittleornojunkfood.Besides,weshouldn'tcrowdeachotherwhenwegoupstairsordownstairsatschool.Lastbutnotleast,summeriscoming.Wemustrememberit'sdangeroustoswimalone.Wemustnotswimaloneinriversorlakes.\nB[2019·安顺]请结合以下提示,以“HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?”为题,写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。[提示](1)谨慎交友;(2)不参与打架斗殴;(3)面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。\n[参考词汇](1)self-protection(自我保护)(2)bully(n./v.欺凌)(3)personalsafety(人身安全)(4)haveviolentbehaviors(打架斗殴)HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?\nOnepossibleversion:HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?Schoolbullieshappeninalmosteveryschool.Inmyschool,wesometimeshavebulliesandsomestudentsarehurt,soitisreallybadforustobullyothersorbebulliedatschool.Wearesupposedtostopanyschoolbullywhenweareinthetroubleofit.Forexample,weshouldstaycalmbeforeabullyingbehaviorhappens.Weshouldalwaysbefriendlyandhelpfulwhenmakingfriendswithothers.Herearesomeofmyideasabout\nstoppingschoolbullies.Firstly,wewilllearnhowtohaveself-protectionbecauseourpersonalsafetyisthemostimportant.Secondly,weshouldbepeacefulwithothersatalltimesandcan'thaveanyviolentbehavior.Finally,obeyingschoolrulesisalsoawaytoavoidschoolbullies.I'mhopingthatnoschoolbullieswillhappenatschoolinthefuture.Doyouthinkso?