2018全国中考英语试题分类汇编 ：书面表达（教师卷） 104页

‎2018全国中考英语试题分类汇编 ：书面表达 ‎ （一）四川省达州市 ‎ ‎1．书面表达 作为一名中学生，我们不仅要有独立意识，还需有团队合作意识。在团队合作学习中，我们能互相学习，互相帮助，共同讨论。能分享学习中的快乐与悲伤，能感受到爱与被爱。让团队合作精神伴随我们成长!‎ 请你以 How to learn together as a team?为标题写一篇英文演讲稿，代表学校参加达州市中学生英语演讲比赛。‎ 要求：1．卷面整洁(无污迹)，书写工整(有美感)。(卷面分1分)‎ ‎2．全文字数90词左右。文章开头已给出，不计入单词总数。‎ ‎3．条理清楚，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。‎ ‎4．内容尽量包括提示信息，并适当发挥；文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。‎ ‎5．参考词汇：friendly, help, discuss I(talk, listen), share, grow up,‎ How to learn together as a team?‎ Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is “How to learn together as a team”.‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ That’s all for my speech. Thank you!‎ ‎【答案】How to learn together as a team Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is "How to learn together as a team". It's very important for us to learn, think by ourselves. And it is also important for us to learn together as a team First, we must be friendly to others, whether beautiful or ugly, tall or short, kids or adults. We should help others when they are in trouble. For example, your classmates can't finish homework Your friend is becoming upset when he can't solve the problems between his parents and him. Here is no doubt that helping others is helping itself. In a team, anyone is helped and anyone helps others.‎ Second, we are supposed to discuss. When we discuss, we either talk or listen. We have to talk ‎ clearly and we must listen carefully, so you can find where the mistakes will be and how you should ‎ correct them. After discussing, you are sure to get more.‎ Third, in a team, it is very important to share. Many of us are only one or two from our families. We are used to thinking about ourselves. So we are loved more. Now it is time to learn to share with others; Share love and loved; share happiness and sadness and so on. Let’s grow up in sharing!‎ In a word, we are like a family in a team. Let’s help each other, discuss happily and share little by little. Then we grow up.‎ That’s all for my speech. Thank you!‎ ‎【解析】‎ 这是一篇话题作文，根据题目中的相关信息介绍一下How to learn together as a team? 所提供的内容中列举了我们不仅要有独立意识，还需有团队合作意识。在团队合作学习中，我们能互相学习，互相帮助，共同讨论。能分享学习中的快乐与悲伤，能感受到爱与被爱。时态以一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称。注意演讲比赛中必须包含所提供的内容中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。‎ ‎【高分句型一】‎ We should help others when they are in trouble. 当别人遇到困难时，我们应该帮助他们。when they are in trouble.是由when 引导的时间状语从句。‎ ‎【高分句型二】‎ We have to talk clearly and we must listen carefully, so you can find where the mistakes will be and how you should correct them. 我们必须清楚地交谈，我们必须仔细听，这样你就可以发现错误在哪里，你应该如何改正。where the mistakes will be是由where 引导的宾语从句。‎ ‎ （二）辽宁省阜新市 ‎ ‎2．根据要求完成作文 ‎ 父母是我们最亲的人，他们给予我们生命，含辛茹苦抚养我们长大。请你根据以下提示，以“Care for Our Parents”为题，写一篇短文。‎ 提示: 1. 父母尽力给我们提供最好的生活和教育；‎ ‎ 2. 希望父母锻炼身体，饮食健康；‎ ‎ 3. 尊重父母，多沟通，帮助父母做家务；‎ ‎ 4. 照顾好自己，不让父母担心。‎ 要求: 1. 短文包括以上提示内容，联系实际，可适当发挥；‎ ‎2. 条理清晰，行文连贯，段落分明，书写规范；‎ ‎3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎4. 词数：60—80词。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：offer…, respect (尊重), communicate with…‎ Care for Our Parents Our dear parents, you love us more than anybody else in the world. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Care for Our Parents Our dear parents, you love us more than anybody else in the world. As your children, how should we care for you? ‎ You have tried to offer the best life and education to us, so you are very tired and have too much pressure. To keep healthy, you should do more exercise. You shouldn’t stay up so that you can get enough sleep. You should also eat healthy food. ‎ Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we should respect them and communicate with them. We should also get on well with them. Then they may feel happy. Second, we should help them do housework as much as possible. Third, we should study hard.‎ We had better take good care of ourselves and try not to make them worry about us. ‎ ‎【解析】‎ 这是一篇给材料作文，以“Care for Our Parents”为题，介绍父母为我们所做的事以及我们应为父母做的事。‎ 结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：so you are……，you should……，we should……，Then they may……，We had better……‎ 等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。‎ ‎ （三）北京市 ‎3．“静以修身，俭以养德”，勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德，无论生活富足与否，我们都应该提倡节俭，拒绝浪费。‎ 某英文网站在开展以“节约是美德”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿．谈谈生活中你是怎么做的，以及这样做的意义。‎ 提示词语：thrifty(节约的).save.turn off.money.virtue（美德）‎ 提示问题：·What do you do in your daily life？‎ It’s one of our traditional virtues to be thrifty. ‎ why do you do so？‎ ‎【答案】It’s one of our traditional virtues to be thrifty Being thrifty is a good virtue which has been passed down from generation to generation . It’s a good idea to start on in our daily life.‎ First of all , I constantly check the lights and the taps to make sure that they are off when leaving the house , Besides, never have I wasted any food, what’s more, I don’t spend too much money on unnecessary things and save money regularly.‎ The reason why I do so is that I want to make a difference to my life, As the old saving goes, “Waste not, want not”I make up my mind to be thrifty as much as possible. I think everyone should take actions to stick to this virtue.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 这是一篇话题作文。主题为“节约是美德”，考生需要从两个方面作答，第一个方面是介绍日常生活中你都做了什么？第二个方面，你为什么这样做？时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。写作时，在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。‎ ‎【高分句型一】‎ It's a good idea to start on in our daily life. 在我们的日常生活中提倡它是个好主意。这里It's a good idea to do sth. 表示做某事是一个好主意。‎ ‎【高分句型二】‎ I think everyone should take actions to stick to this virtue. 我认为每个人都应该采取行动来坚持这一美德。这里think后面跟的是一个宾语从句。‎ ‎ （四）新疆维吾尔自治区 ‎ ‎5．书面表达 请以“My Travelling Plan”为题写一篇短文介绍你的旅行计划，提示信息如下：‎ ‎1.Where are you going and who are you going with?‎ ‎2.Why are you going there?‎ ‎3.What are you going to do there? ‎ 注意：1.书写清晰，字迹工整，行文流畅，语句通顺，内容完整。‎ ‎2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。‎ ‎3.字数在80-100词。‎ ‎【答案】I am going to travel in Beijing with my friends next month. Beijing is a beautiful city with a long history. It is the capital of china. I am going to stay there for several days. There are many interesting places. First I am going to visit Tian’anmen Square, the Summer Palace and the Great wall. Then I am going to Wangfujing Street, there are a lot of stores there, I want to buy some gifts for mm parents. And I am going to eat Beijing Duck there. How delicious it is!‎ ‎【解析】‎ 这篇作文要求我们以My Travelling Plan为题，介绍自己的旅行计划。题目中用问题的方式给我们做了提示，文章的主要内容应包括：你打算去哪里旅行、和谁一起去；你为什么要去那里；你在那里打算做什么。写作时，应按照这个提纲来组织语言，串联成文。通过分析可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般将来时态或一般现在时，可以使用be going to结构，表示自己的打算，人称应以第一人称I为主来叙述。注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照提纲逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，使用恰当的词汇、句型和短语。句式以简单句为主，穿插使用并列句和复合句。为提升文章档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇和复杂句式。同时注意语句之间使用连接成分，使行文流畅，表达连贯。‎ ‎ （五）山东省烟台市 ‎6．书面表达 分享是一种行为方式，也是一种良好的品质（quality）， 人生处处充满分享，懂得分享非常重要。分享快乐，快乐加倍；分担烦恼，烦恼减半。‎ 请根据以上观点，结合思维导图所示，以“My Sharing Experience”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。‎ 要求：1.短文须包括所有要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；‎ ‎2.题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。‎ 参考词汇：be full of, cut…in half, thanks to, overcome My Sharing Experience Sharing is a way of behavior as well as a good quality of people ‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ My Sharing Experience ‎【答案】My Sharing Experience Sharing is a way of behavior as well as a good quality of people. Everyone has his experience of sharing. So do I. I often share my feelings with my mum. When I make progress or win a competition, I share my happiness with my mum. After seeing a big smile on her face, I get a sense of satisfaction. When I meet some troubles and feel depressed, I told my sadness to her. She always hugs me and comforts me. Her courageous words make me learn that love is always around me. It makes my heart full of warmth and strength. To sum up, sharing my feelings with mum is really a good way which drives my bad mood and brings me pleasure. As a saying goes, ‘Share your happiness, your happiness doubles; share your sorrow, your sorrow cuts to half.’‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 本文属于话题作文，描述分享的经历、意义以及感悟。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。‎ 亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如so引导的倒装句, share with, make progress, a sense of, make sb do, full of, to sum up以及谚语Share your happiness, your happiness doubles; share your sorrow, your sorrow cuts to half。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：‎ 认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。‎ 构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。‎ 初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。‎ 修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。‎ ‎ （六）吉林省 ‎ ‎7．文娱、体育、户外等丰富多彩的课外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以 “After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful” 为题,为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。‎ 内容包括:1.你所参加的1---2项课外活动；‎ ‎2.课外活动给你带来的收获及感受。‎ 写作要求:1.词数90词左右；‎ ‎2.文章不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。‎ ‎【答案】After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful ‎ Nowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more popular. There are many different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to playing volleyball after school.‎ In the volleyball club, I’ ve made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future.‎ All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 这篇作文要求我们以After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful为题，给学校的专栏写一篇文章，内容包括两个方面：首先介绍1到2个你参加的课外活动；然后总结课外活动给你带来的收获和感受。题目中只给出了写作的提纲，这里具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力，结合自己的实际情况来补充，并使用正确的英语表达出来。首先要仔细审题，确定写作的提纲和内容；然后确定短文中应使用的人称和时态，通过分析可知，这篇短文应主要以现在时态为主，第一人称来叙述。接下来列出文章中可能用到的词汇、短语和句型，把他们串联成句，为提升文章档次，在文章中要有几处亮点，使用高级词汇、复杂句式，如各类从句、非谓语动词等。语句之间应使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章具有连贯性，表达更加流畅。‎ ‎（七）云南省昆明市 ‎8．书面表达 A small thing 提示：请根据所给题目“A small thing”写一篇英语短文，叙述一件你经历过的小事。‎ 要求：‎ ‎1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个；‎ ‎2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计；‎ ‎3.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。‎ ‎【答案】A small thing There are many small things in life that make you moved． I had a very unforgettable thing on June 11 th，2012． It was a sunny day．On the way to school，my friend did something rude to me．It made me sad．What's worse，I got a"C"in my favorite subject．After school，I went home unhappily．It was dark in the room．Suddenly the lights were on，and I heard the song"Happy birthday"．I was surprised to see many people and a big cake．"Oh，it's my birthday．"I was so excited and happy．It was my first time to have a birthday party． I'll never forget that day．‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【分析】‎ 这是一篇命题作文，给出的题目是“A small thing”（一件小事），需要叙述一件经历过的小事，写作的时候要注意描述过去的事情要正确使用过去时态，描述一件事情要有条理，有内容，有时间地点人物以及具体的事件，描述要尽量具体一些，事情要有条理，避免流水账，同时要注意相关短语的正确使用，注意开头和结尾要自然。‎ ‎【详解】‎ 写作亮点：开头可以说“There are many small things in life that make you moved”（人生中有很多事情会让你感动。），这样的句子开头有总起的效果，然后就可以开门见山，开始叙事，叙事的过程中用到了很多短语，例如had a very unforgettable thing有一件难以忘怀的事情，On the way to在去…的路上，What's worse更糟的是，was surprised to do惊讶地做某事，这些短语应用准确，也用到了一些精彩的句型，例如It was my first time to do…是我第一次做…，这则故事主要讲了白天的时候自己屡屡经历了不太愉快的事情，但回家后惊讶地发现是自己的生日，最后和大家度过了一次难忘的生日，故事虽短，但有转折，有内容，可以说是一件小事，也是一件难以忘怀的小事，完成了既定的写作任务。‎ ‎（八）辽宁省沈阳市 ‎9．英国作家萨克雷曾说：“播种习惯收获性格，播种性格收获命运”。在生活中，一定有好的习惯伴随你的成长。请你以Good habits make me_____为题写篇短文(词数80-100)。步骤与要点如下：‎ ‎1.确定主题，并在文中说明原因；‎ ‎2.围绕主题，进行叙述；‎ ‎3.写出具体计划，也可以讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历。‎ 要求：‎ ‎1.补全标题(参考词汇：better, happier, healthier, stronger等)；‎ ‎2.字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范；‎ ‎3.鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发辉不予扣分。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎4.作文中可以写出具体计划内容，也可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，但要注意时态的运用；如果参照短文中的内容，不可以直接引用短文中的句子；‎ ‎5.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。‎ Good habits make me___________‎ Good habits are important in our lives. They influence us a lot in many ways. I think_______‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Good habits make me happier Good habits are important in our lives. They influence us a lot in many ways. I think reading is a good habit of mine. Every day, I read books for at least half an hour. Before I go to bed, I will read some books first. I think reading can broaden my horizon. It can also help me learn some knowledge which I can’t learn in class. Reading brings me happiness and confidence and these make me a better person. To keep this good habit, I will join a reading club in the future. I think reading is really a good habit and I’ll keep it forever.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 这是一篇话题作文，话题是Good habits make me_____为题写篇短文。首先要根据参考词汇补全题目。题目补全了之后，主题也就确定了。第二步围绕主题，进行叙述；第三根据主题写出具体计划，也可以讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。‎ ‎【高分句型一】‎ I think reading is a good habit of mine. 我认为读书是我的一个好习惯。这是一个宾语从句。句子很短，但是表达很丰富。是我们熟悉的句子。‎ ‎【高分句型二】‎ It can also help me learn some knowledge which I can’t learn in class. 它还能帮助我学习一些我在课堂上学不到的知识。which I can’t learn in class.是由which引导的定语从句。说明知识点和语法功底扎实。‎ ‎【高分句型三】‎ To keep this good habit, I will join a reading club in the future. 为了保持这个好习惯，我将来会加入一个读书俱乐部。To keep this good habit, 是动词不定式做目的状语。‎ ‎ （九）上海中考 ‎ ‎10．Writing(作文. )‎ ‎ Write at least 60 words on the topic My progress(以“进步了”为题,写一信不少于60个词的短文,‎ 标点符号不占格)‎ 你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步,比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习慣的养成。请选取其中一个方面,结合自身经历,谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的。‎ ‎（注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。）‎ The following is for reference only(以下表达仅供参考)‎ used to do/be…‎ try my best to do…‎ make progress in( doing.…‎ ‎【答案】I used to write badly, especially in English. It affected my performance every composition. I felt annoyed because I didn’t know how to do it.‎ Several months ago, our English teacher reminded us to pay attention to our English Writing. He prepared a copybook for each student. We were asked to practice every day. I tried my best to copy well. The teacher encouraged me and kept on telling me what to do next. With the help of my English teacher, I made progress in writing.‎ No pains no gains. I will study hard to achieve greater progress and I believe I will do better and better.‎ ‎【解析】作文要求以“My progress”为题，叙述自己一次进步的过程。故取得怎样进步是描述的重点，以前怎样，以后怎样也需要简单叙述。时态以一般过去时为主，人称为第一人陈。可以借鉴所提供的词组，另外，写作时还需注意语句间的衔接，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。‎ 高分句型：‎ ‎1. We were asked to practice every day. 我们被要求每天练习。此句用的是一般过去时的被动语态。‎ ‎2. The teacher encouraged me and kept on telling me what to do next. 老师鼓励我并不断告诉我下一步该怎么做。keep on doing sth.不断地做某事。‎ ‎3. No pains no gains. 没有付出就没有收获。谚语的使用，为作文增添了亮点。‎ ‎（十）徐州市 ‎11．书面表达 ‎ 你校英文报组织了题为“我喜欢的英语谚语，，征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句英语谚语中任选一句，写一篇90词左右的短文，参加征文活动。 ‎ Many hands make light work. ‎ Meaning: If lots of people share the work, it will make a job easier to complete.‎ Practice makes perfect. ‎ Meaning: If you keep practising，you will be better at it. ‎ 短文内容须包括： (1）你喜欢的谚语及其含义 (2）体现该谚语含义的个人经历 注意：1．短文中已给出的部分（见答题卡）不计入总词数。 2．短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。‎ ‎【答案】My favourtite English saying My English saying is many hands make light work. It means if lots of people share the work, It will make a job easier to complete.‎ Last term, our class decided to give a charity show to help children in poor areas. It was difficult to get everything ready in a short time. Luckily, all my classmates worked together and shared the work. Some students handed out leaflets, others prepared the costumes, and others helped download the music. I’m good at singing, so I sang a song while my best friend played the guitar.‎ The charity show turned out to be a great success. We all realized that the success belonged to every one of us. Teamwork really works!‎ ‎【解析】这篇作文要求我们写一篇英语短文，参加学校英文报组织的“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动。题目中给出了两条谚语，我们可以从中选择一条，介绍一些它的含义，并描述能体现该谚语含义的个人经历，这才是文章的主体部分。通过审题可知，文章应主要包括两个内容：首先选择自己最喜欢的谚语，介绍它的含义；然后叙述一件自己经历过的、能体现该谚语含义的故事。写作时，可以根据这两个内容分为两段。短文应以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主，介绍自己的经历时，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式，尤其注意不规则动词过去式的变化。注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不一样的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。而应从句子整体结构考虑，以英语中的简单句结构为基础，使用恰当的词汇和句型。为提升文章档次，穿插使用并列句或复合句，如and、but等连接的并列句，以及宾语从句、状语从句等复合句。语句之间、段落之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。‎ 点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息。短文分为两段，第一段作者用了两句话，介绍了自己喜欢的谚语以及这个谚语的含义；第二段作者讲述了自己的一个经历，这个经历与自己喜欢的谚语是有关的，能较好的体现该谚语的含义。两段的格式使短文结构清晰，叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第一人称为主，第一段使用了一般现在时态；第二段使用了一般过去时态，谓语动词形式准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式。第三，短文句式表达符合英语的习惯，语言准确、地道。句子以简单句为主，也用到了很多的复合句，如并列句、宾语从句等，语句之间也用到了一些连接成分。较好的短语和句式有： It was difficult to get everything ready in a short time. 、Luckily, all my classmates worked together and shared the work. 、Some students handed out leaflets, others prepared the costumes, and others helped download the music.、 I’m good at singing, so I sang a song while my best friend played the guitar.、The charity show turned out to be a great success.、 We all realized that the success belonged to every one of us.等。‎ ‎ （十一）贵州省安顺市 ‎ ‎12．请根据上面五个问题的内容及你的回答，以“Saying No to Plastics”为题，写一篇 80-100‎ 词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。‎ 参考词汇： 1.pollute(污染) 2.recycle(循环、回收) 3. protect(保护) 4.cloth bags(布袋) 5. basket(竹篮)‎ Saying No to Plastics ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Saying No to Plastics As we know, plastics, which have seriously polluted our world, can be seen everywhere.‎ Actually, I use plastics too much in my daily life. Now I have come to realize that it’s a terribly bad habit. I’m supposed to reduce the use of plastics and everyone can do this. For example, we should use a cloth bag or a basket instead while shopping. More importantly, even if we need to use plastic bags, we should recycle and make full use of them.‎ All in all, we should reduce the use of plastics so that we can hopefully protect the earth and make it greener. Do you think I am right?‎ ‎【解析】这是一篇有关环保方面的话题作文，作文的题目“Saying No to Plastics”已经给出。写作内容围绕上面提出的5个问题以及答语来展开，所给出的参考词汇尽量要用上。时态主要以一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称。首先分析现状，塑料制品随处可见，接着写自己在生活中也有经常使用塑料制品的习惯，并认识到这是一个不好的习惯，会对周围的环境产生危害，最后倡导大家如何对塑料说“不”，号召大家要行动起来，加入到环保的行列中去。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。‎ ‎（十二）广西北部湾经济开发区 书面表达 假如你是李华，是向阳中学九年级（1）班的一名学生，你的初中生活即将结束， 请你以“My suggestions”为题写一篇 80 词左右的短文，在学习、生活、校园活 动、同学关系这几个方面给七年级的新生提几点建议，并提出你的希望和祝愿。 写作要求： ‎ ‎1、内容必须包含所给的信息，可适当发挥，使行文连贯。‎ ‎2、语篇完整，语句通顺。语法正确，书写规范。‎ ‎3、文中不能出现除题目以外的个人信息，否则一律不予评分。‎ ‎4、开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎【答案】My Suggestions ‎ My name is Li Hua. I’m a student in Class 1, Grade 9 in Xiangyang Middle School. Here I’d like to share some advice on how to live a meaningful and colourfulschool life in middle school.‎ First, We should make a study plan to balance every subject. It’s a good idea to listen to the teacher carefully in class and finish home work on time after class.Second, It’s important to develop good habits in middle school. How about doing exercise and practice playing kinds of balls in order to keep healthy?Third, Why not take part in school activities and make more friends?Last but not least, we had better get on well with our classmates and teachers because they will help us when we are in trouble.‎ I hope these suggestions will help you. If we follow the advice, we will be sure to make great progress in middle school life.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ ‎1. 从作文的话题来看，今年的作文题延续了往年常考的校园类型作文， 为中学生所熟悉，贴近学生生活的实际，让考生有话可写。‎ ‎2. 从命题的形式上，今年仍然是常见的“提纲式”作文，给出要点提示，给考生留下足够的自主发挥空间， 同时也有效防止考生“直译”要点，对写作能力的要求在不断提高。‎ ‎3. 从写作类型上来看，本次作文属于表达建议类型的作文。在写作的得分点要求上，只要同学们能按老师平时要求的注意事项去把握好作文的四大得分点：（1）书写工整；（2）要点齐全，且有逻辑；（3）语法正确；（4）句式多样。特别是在句式多样性方面，我们切忌使用重复的句型，要有意识地使用以往学过的表建议类型的句子，来达到句式多样性的要求。‎ 亮点说明：‎ 本文使用了逻辑连接词First/Second/Third，使文章层次清晰。‎ ‎【高分句型一】‎ Here I’d like to share some advice on how to live a meaningful and colourful school life in middle school. 在这里，我想和大家分享一些关于如何在中学里过一个有意义和丰富多彩的学校生活的建议。how to live a meaningful and colourful school life，做介词on的宾语。‎ ‎【高分句型二】‎ Last but not least, we had better get on well with our classmates and teachers because they will help us when we are in trouble. 最后但同样重要的是，我们最好与我们的同学和老师相处好，因为他们会帮助我们当我们遇到麻烦。because they will help us when we are in trouble.是由because 引导的原因状语从句。‎ ‎【高分句型三】‎ If we follow the advice, we will be sure to make great progress in middle school life. 如果我们听从劝告，我们一定会在中学生活中取得很大进步。If we follow the advice是由if引导的条件句。‎ ‎ （十三）湖北省荆州市 ‎ ‎14．请以“My hohby”为题写一篇短文，必须包含以下要点和词语提示信息。‎ ‎1. What is your hobby?‎ ‎2. How do you develop your hobby?‎ ‎3.Share your happiness you get from your bobby.Give at least one example.‎ 提示词语：practice，different，forget，no longer 要求：‎ l、可以适当发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎2、语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； ‎ ‎3、词数：80词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ My Hobby Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】My Hobby Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I.‎ It may give him lots of happiness. My hobby is listening to music. When I was a child I enjoy listening ‎ to music especially the cartoon music, though I'm not good at it, I often lose myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health.‎ Do you like listening to music? If not, I hope you can have a try, you will find it beneficial.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 这篇作文要求我们以My Hobby为题，介绍一下自己的爱好。通过审题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先点明自己的爱好是什么；然后说明自己是如何培养了这个爱好的；最后分享一下你从这一爱好中得到的快乐。写作时，应根据这一提纲，组织语言，连贯成文。整篇文章应以一般现在时态或一般过去时态为主，第一人称来叙述。注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型。句子结构以主谓宾或主系表为主，穿插使用并列句和复合句，使文章富有节奏，提升文章档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯，语句通顺。‎ ‎ （十四）内蒙古通辽市 ‎ ‎15．根据提示，以“How to keep safe”为题写一篇80词左右的英语作文，要求层次清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。‎ 要求：‎ ‎ 1.文中不能出现真实校名和人名，否则不得分。‎ ‎ 2.题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎ Safety is important. As a student, we should learn to protect ourselves and keep safe. ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Safety is important. As a student, we should learn to protect ourselves and keep safe.‎ First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, we should follow the traffic rule. We may get hurt or lose our lives if we don't. ‎ In short, safety must come first!‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 这篇作文要求我们根据提示写一篇题为How to keep safe的作文，介绍一下在我们的日常生活中，我们应该注意些什么，来保证安全。题目中利用图示告诉我们写作的大概内容，从以下的几个方面来介绍：交通安全、饮食安全、遇险报警及其他方面。这些只是对我们写作的一个提示，而具体的内容，需要注意什么，这些都需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，串联成文，还要注意层次清晰，这对于学生们来说是一个难点。其次要注意英语句子表达和汉语的习惯是不同的，不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的句子结构，如主谓宾或主系表结构，同时穿插并列句和复合句，调整文章的节奏，长句、短句结合使用。同时应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章有连贯性。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 这是一篇优秀的作文。首先作文的内容充实、完整，符合题目要求。文章中作者从网上交友、遇险报警、饮食、交通等方面，介绍了我们应如何保证安全，保护好自己。这些内容的安排也比较合理，叙述清楚，有层次、有条理。文中用First, Second, Also, Last but not least等词和短语，将这些内容呈现出来，既使分清了文章的层次，又使整篇文章的内容很连贯。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，动词形式准确，还使用了一些情态动词，如must, should, ought to等。语言得体，语句通顺，句式符合英语的习惯。另外，文章中还使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line.、 Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.、Last but not least, we should follow the traffic rule.、In short, safety must ‎ come first!等等。‎ ‎（十五）青海省西宁市 ‎16．学校英语报社正在开展题为“The Greatest Help”的征文活动。什么人或物给了你最大的帮助?你取得了哪些进步?有什么感想或受到了哪些教育?请写一篇80词左右的英语短文进行投稿,文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。‎ The Greatest Help ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】The Greatest Help I have got lots of help, but my father gives me the greatest help of all.‎ Though my father is a very kind man, he is very strict with me. He always pushes me to study hard and tries to find mistakes in everything I do. Sometimes, I doubt if he is my father. He leads me to read plenty of books. He says, "The more books you read, the better person you will be." He also says that health is the most important thing for everybody. So I am made to do lots of exercise. Anyway, we have left our happiness and laughter everywhere, on the playground, in the swimming pool, on the mountains and so on. When I meet any difficulties, he encourages me and helps me out. He is always there for me.‎ As I grow older, my thoughts change from misunderstanding to understanding. He is not only my father and a sincere friend but also my guide and helper. I will never forget the greatest help and deepest love from his strictness and exceptions because they make some big difference in my life.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 这篇作文要求我们以The Greatest Help 为题，介绍一下在你的生活里，什么人或什么事给了你最大的帮助，并说一说你的感受。审题可知，这是一篇话题作文，题目中只给出了题目，具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力，来组织语言，串联成文，因此写作前，要仔细思考，确定具体的写作内容。然后再确定文章的时态和人称，这篇短文应以一般现在时态或者一般过去时态为主，第三人称来叙述，要注意谓语动词形式的变化。写作时，应注意英语句式表达和汉语习惯的不同，不要逐词翻译，而应使用恰当的词汇、短语和句式结构，以简单句结构为基础，穿插使用并列句或者复合句。为提升文章水平，应选用一些较高级的词汇和复杂结构，成为文章的亮点。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容符合题目要求，文章中作者介绍了对自己帮助最大的一个人—父亲，具体介绍了父亲如何对自己严格要求，促使自己不断进步的。也介绍了自己的感受，从开始的误解到后来的理解。整篇文章内容充实、完整，叙述也很有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态、人称，语法规范，语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。文章中长短句结合，简单句和复合句穿插使用，使文章富有节奏感，表达也很流畅。短文中使用了较丰富的短语和句型，如Though my father is a very kind man, he is very strict with me.、He says, "the more books you read, the better person you will be." 、He also says that health is the most important thing for everybody.、When I meet any difficulties, he encourages me and helps me out.、He is not only my father and a sincere friend but also my guide and helper.、 I will never forget the greatest help and deepest love from his strictness and exceptions because they make some big difference in my life.等等。‎ ‎（十六）山东省东营市 ‎17．（题文）在你的成长历程中，一定收到过礼物。有件礼物不一定贵重，但是在你看来却非常珍贵。‎ 某英语杂志以“A Precious Present(一件珍贵的礼物)”为题举办征文活动，请写一篇短文，跟大家分享。内容包括：‎ ‎1.这件礼物是什么？‎ ‎2.你为什么觉得它珍贵？‎ ‎3.它背后有什么故事？ ‎ 要求： 1.100词左右； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。‎ ‎【答案】A precious present The title “A Precious Present” reminds me of quite a few gifts I’ve got. Yet, the first come to my mind is the book, the Adventures of Tom Sawyer. ‎ On my tenth birthday, my father gave it to me as a gift. Because I didn’t like reading, I put it on the bookshelf. One boring day, I picked it up and looked through it. Unexpectedly, the story interested me greatly. I found pleasure in reading books. From then on, I became fascinated in reading. ‎ Though the book is not valuable, it’s precious. I’ll regard it as a treasure forever.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 这是一篇命题作文，以“A Precious Present”为题与大家分享一件自己所拥有的珍礼物。人称为第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主。写作时要注意作文的整体框架。首先介绍这件礼物的名字是什么，附带着说明它的来历，接着讲述这件礼物背后的故事，最后可以总结说明为什么这件礼物对你来说非常珍贵。另外，写作时还需注意语句间的衔接，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。‎ ‎（十七）云南省 ‎18．书面表达 Doing Something Nice to...‎ 提示:每个人都向往美好的生活,美好的生活需要我们真诚的付出和给予。请以“Doing Something Nice to...”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你曾经或将要为他人、社会等做的一件美好的事情。‎ 要求：1.请先将题目补全后再做答；‎ ‎2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个；‎ ‎3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计；‎ ‎4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。‎ ‎【答案】Doing something nice to my friend A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart!‎ Jerry is my good friend. He's very thin. Last winter, he got ill. He had to go to hospital once a week. He took lots of medicine. I hoped he would be as strong as me. So every weekend, I asked him to practice playing basketball with me. I taught him how to play it. Now he is much stronger and healthier.‎ I feel very happy to have done something nice to my friend.‎ ‎【解析】本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。‎ 点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定短语，为文章增色不少，如go to hospital； once a week ；lots ‎ of； as as 等；So ；Now ；I feel very happy to 等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。‎ ‎ （十八）安徽省 ‎ ‎19．某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇题为"Thank you, my teacher!"的短文参加此次活动。要点如下:‎ ‎1.严格要求;‎ ‎2.耐心指导;‎ ‎3.热情鼓励;， .....‎ 注意: 1. 词数80~ 100 ;‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。‎ ‎【答案】I’d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Li, because she's helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to studyharder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, lve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.‎ Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.‎ ‎【解析】 这是一篇要求感谢自己老师的文章。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一，三人称，一般过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。‎ ‎（十九）浙江省温州 ‎20．如今,国内外很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末,如下图中的Jack。请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法,以 Weekend or Not?为题写一篇约110词的英语短文向 Parents杂志投稿,让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发。‎ 注意:文中若出现“Jack"以外的人名或任何学校名称,该作文得分不超过12分。‎ Weekend or Not?‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Weekend or Not?‎ Jack has to attend lots of classes at weekends. He has little time for his favorite sport-soccer. Still, his parents are pushing him to do more math exercises, which worries him a lot.‎ Nowadays, many students are under much pressure like Jack. Their parents believe it necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible. As a result, some students are stressed out and therefore lose interest in learning anything. What is worse, they may not be able to learn to manage their own life.‎ I do hope all the children can have the freedom to choose what they like to do and enjoy their weekends.‎ ‎【解析】写作分析：这篇文章需要写一篇稿件，稿件的主题是讨论当下父母把儿童的周末都安排满是否可行，写作的目的是让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发。要注意的是写作的时候不能脱离漫画，不能脱离里面的任务Jack，看似是一篇议论题材的文章，但是要关注漫画，简单介绍漫画中Jack的生活，通过Jack引出自己的观点，讨论这样做的劣势在哪里，最后最后表达出自己的期望，写作要注意逻辑性，分段要合理。‎ 写作亮点：首段用几句话简单描述了漫画，用到了一些较好的短语（attend lots of classes，has littl e time for…，pushing him to do，worries him a lot），这些短语运用准确，能使文章首段非常有吸引力。第二段描述了自己的观点，使用了一些议论文常用的句式（…believe it necessary for … to…，As a result, What is worse,），文章末尾有自己的希望，清晰简练地表达了自己的观点。总体来说这篇文章分段清晰，每段功能准确，表意明确，有一定的说理性，完成了既定的写作任务。‎ ‎（二十）山东省青岛市 ‎21．书面表达 现在，中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量，但在校外普遍缺少运动甚至不运动。请就 此现象写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。内容包括：‎ ‎1. 缺少运动甚至不运动的原因；‎ ‎2. 缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响；‎ ‎3. 针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议。‎ 要求：1. 词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；‎ ‎2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 参考词汇：be short of 缺少 Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now ‎ ‎【答案】Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now.They think doing exercise can affect their studies.Therefore they have less time to study.Doing sports is good for their health. A person who takes exercises regularly will keep fit. In the school, students are forced to take exercise in the PE class, they need to join certain activities.In this way, students live in a healthy lifestyle, they won’t get sick easily.But after they leaving school, no one forces them to do so, so they are lazy to take exercise so that their bodies get weaker.‎ I think students should take exercise every day outside the school.In a word, exercise is helpful, important and absolutely necessary.‎ ‎【解析】话题作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。‎ ‎（二十一）重庆市（B卷）‎ ‎22．书面表达。‎ 中澳友好协会准备就“A Gift from the Heart”为题举办征文比赛，要求参赛者分享在一些特别的日子(生日、节日....)用心准备的礼物。‎ 写作要求:‎ ‎1.词数：80—120词；‎ ‎2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。‎ 参考要点：‎ ‎1.介绍特别的日子；‎ ‎2.分享赠送的礼物；‎ ‎3.表述礼物的意义。‎ A Gift from the Heart ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】A Gift from the Heart ‎ It was the last day of that term. My classmates were very excited at the coming holiday. But my friend, Mike, looked unhappy because he failed the English test.‎ While thinking about how to cheer him up, I saw my English notebook. Although it was very important for me. I decided to give it to him. He looked at me in surprise. He knew how carefully I took the notes. I told him that I could also help him learn English.‎ Mike has made progress with the help of my gift, the notebook. It’s not expensive but it’s from my heart.‎ ‎【解析】这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你在一些特别的日子(生日、节日....)用心准备的礼物。所提供的材料中列举了书写的要点：1) 介绍特别的日子；2) 分享赠送的礼物；3) 表述礼物的意义。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意征文中必须包含材料中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，根据题干要求，可分为三段：1. 特别的日子及得到的礼物；2. 介绍礼物的原因；3. 表达礼物的作用或意义。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。‎ ‎【高分句型一】‎ But my friend, Mike, looked unhappy because he failed the English test. ‎ 但是我的朋友迈克看起来很不高兴，因为他英语考试不及格。这句话用了because引导的句子。‎ ‎【高分句型二】‎ While thinking about how to cheer him up, I saw my English notebook. 在想着如何让他高兴的时候，我看到了我的英语笔记本。how to cheer him up是动词不定式短语。‎ ‎【高分句型三】‎ Mike has made progress with the help of my gift, the notebook. 迈克在我的礼物、笔记本的帮助下取得了进步。with the help of在……的帮助下。‎ ‎（二十二）山东省威海市 ‎23．“照镜子”是生活中的平常事，以生活为镜，可以照出现实中真实的自己。请以“Me in the mirror”为题，写一篇80词以上的英语短文。围绕自己最突出的一至两个优点和缺点，‎ 重点谈谈在未来的生活和学习中如何扬长避短、完善自我，成长为更好的自己。‎ 要求：1.题目已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎2.观点正确、条理清晰、表达流畅；‎ ‎3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。‎ ‎【答案】Me in the mirror Looking at myself in the mirror, I know I am an outgoing girl. I like to make friends and I'm always ready to help them. So I'm very popular in my school. But I have a big problem, I'm less interested in my lessons and I can t concentrate in class. In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don' t get good grades which make my parents disappointed.‎ When I go to senior high school I hope to get along well with my classmates and try to make more friends. I hope we can help each other and learn from each other. I will make a good study resolution and try my best to go for it. I decide to have a healthier lifestyle. I'll spend more time on my schoolwork and develop good learning habits. I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully. What's more, I will read more books and master good leaning methods. I hope to make great progress and make my parents proud of me.‎ ‎【解析】这是一篇话题作文，根据所给的材料介绍一下镜子里的我。所提供的材料中涉及到介绍自己的最突出的一至两个优点和缺点，重点谈谈在未来的生活和学习中如何扬长避短、完善自我，成长为更好的自己。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含所给的材料的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。‎ ‎【高分句型一】‎ I'm less interested in my lessons and I can’ t concentrate in class. 我对功课不太感兴趣，上课也不能集中精力。be interested in短语的使用，使文章增色不少。‎ ‎【高分句型二】‎ In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don' t get good grades which make my parents disappointed. 业余时间，我花太多的时间在电脑游戏上，所以我没有取得好成绩，这使我的父母很失望。which make my parents disappointed. 是由which引导的定语从句。‎ ‎【高分句型三】‎ I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully. 我将集中精力在课堂上，认真完成我的学习任务。说明作者在后来认识到了错误，而努力学习。‎ ‎（二十三）四川宜宾 ‎24．初中三年即将过去，你在这三年中一定有没有实现的愿望。为此,校园广播站特向全校初三学生征稿。请你根据下面提示,写一篇广播稿。‎ ‎1.没有实现的愿望(如学会吉他)；‎ ‎2.没有实现愿望的原因(至少两个)；‎ ‎3.进入高中后为实现愿望的计划。‎ 要求：‎ ‎1.短文应条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明,90词左右。(开头己给出,不计入总字数)‎ ‎2.短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息。‎ ‎3.短文应包括全部信息,可围绕主题适当发挥。‎ How time flies! Three years of junior high school has gone by before we know it.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】How time flies! Three years of junior high school has gone by before we know it.‎ Each time I look back on my school days, I feel regretful, because one of my wishes hasn't been ‎ realized. That is to learn how to play the guitar.‎ Although I am really interested in playing the instrument, I was busy working at my lessons. Besides, there was much homework to every day.‎ The end of junior high school is the beginning of new life. If I can enter the senior school, I will take part in after-school activities to learn to play the guitar. I believe I'll live a colorful life in the senior high school.‎ ‎【解析】 这是一篇要求介绍自己在这三年中没有实现的愿望和进入高中后为实现愿望的计划。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般过去时态和将来时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。‎ ‎（二十四）江苏省泰州市 ‎25．书面表达 假如你是李华，你们学校正在对本校学生英语学习的情况进行调查，并征求同学们对英语教学的建议。请按下表提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的英语学习情况以及你对老师教学的建议。‎ 项目 内容 你对英语的认识 ‎1. 英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言；‎ ‎2. 英语有助于了解世界上不同的文化；‎ ‎……‎ 你目前的英语水平 ‎1. 能用英语与同学进行简单的交流；‎ ‎2. 喜欢演讲，去年在校演讲比赛中获奖；‎ ‎……‎ 你英语学习中存在的问题 ‎1. 不能正确地运用语法规则；‎ ‎2. 写作中有时不能清楚地表达自己；‎ ‎……‎ 你对英语教学的建议 ‎…… (考试自己发挥，至少一点)‎ 要求：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右。开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ‎ ‎2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。‎ ‎3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。‎ I am Li Hua. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ I wish our school will consider my advice.‎ ‎【答案】I am Li Hua. Here are some of my thoughts about English. I think English is the most widely used language in the world. English helps us understand different cultures in the world. English can also help us improve our communication skills. And speaking more English can improve our confidence.‎ At present, I can make simple communications with my classmates in English. I also like making speeches. I won the prize in the school speech contest last year. And I believe that I should be able to speak English fluently when I go to a Western country.‎ However, I have some problems in learning English. I can’t use the grammar rules correctly. Sometimes I can’t express myself clearly in writing. I often find it hard to remember more difficult words.‎ At last, I have some suggestions for English teaching as well. I think teachers should communicate with us in English when they are in class.‎ I wish our school will consider my advice.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，结合所给内容，把各要点有条理的表达出来。注意一些常见句式的应用，注意把握时态与人称。还要注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的观点和想法。‎ 写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中help sb. do sth，at present, make simple communications with, be able to, in class, However, and, at last等词(组)的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还使用倒装句、宾语从句、并列句、时间状语从句等丰富的句型，大大增加了信息的容量，情态动词运用精准，使文章增色不少，值得学习。‎ ‎（二十五）江苏省南京市 ‎26．书面表达 请根据你校校刊KIDS MAG中HAVE YOUR SAY栏目的征稿内容，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。‎ Hi,‎ ‎ At KIDS MAG we like to share your ideas about our school. In my column, HAVE YOUR SAY, you can let other kids know what you think. This month we want you to have your say about Culture Week in our school:‎ ‎ ●what theme(主题)of Culture Week you like ‎ ●why you like the theme ‎ ●what activity/activities you can organize for the theme ‎ Looking forward to hearing from you.‎ ‎ Sam Southland 注意：‎ ‎1．对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。‎ ‎2．词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎3．文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。‎ I am glad to share my ideas about Culture Week in our school. ____________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】I am glad to share my ideas about Culture Week in our school. I like the theme about international cooking for our Culture Week, because this can help us better understand different cultures while enjoyed nice food.‎ First, we will invite teachers and parents to give talks about international cooking. Then, we will hold a Cooking Festival. All the students can bring their own dishes and share them with each other. Near the end of the week, we will have a DIY competition. There will be a surprise in the end.‎ I hope our Culture Week will be a great success!‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 写作要求对学校文化周的主题、活动内容等进行讨论、分享。从三个方面展开叙述：你喜欢什么文化周主题？你为什么喜欢这个主题？你可以为主题组织什么活动？要求将自己喜欢的主题，喜欢的原因及为此安排的活动叙述清楚，并适当发挥。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。‎ ‎（二十六）湖南省邵阳市 ‎27．情景作文 初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的时光一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的记忆,请你根据图表提示简要描述这段时间的学习生活情况。‎ 要求：1. 80词左右，开头已给出，‎ 不计入词数。‎ ‎2. 语法正确，文理通顺，流畅。‎ ‎3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。‎ My Life in Junior Middle School I have studied in my junior middle school for three years. My life in junior middle school was rich and I have learned a lot. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】My Life in Junior Middle School I have studied in my junior middle school for three years. My life in junior middle school was rich and I have learned a lot. I have made a lot of friends in my school. They often helped me when I was in trouble. Our teachers were friendly and patient, especially my English teacher. She often helped me with my English. So my favorite subject was English. I liked sports. In my free time, I often played basketball or football with friends. It was good for health and it is a good way to relax from the busy study.‎ In a word, my life in junior middle school was colorful and unforgettable.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 这篇作文要求我们根据提示描述自己初中的学习和生活，题目中利用图表的形式列出了文章的提纲，包括：美丽的学校、友好的同学、最喜欢的老师和最喜欢的运动。我们应从这四个方面出发，组织语言，充实内容，串联成文。通过分析可知，文章介绍的是已经结束的初中生活，因此这篇短文应使用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词的形式，尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化。写作时还应注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子整体结构考虑，写完整的句子，以常见的主谓宾结构和主系表结构为主。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句或复合句，如宾语从句、状语从句等。也可使用一些高级句式和短语，如倒装、被动语态、感叹句等。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求回忆了自己初中的生活。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者主要从自己的朋友、老师、自己最喜欢的科目以及最喜欢的运动等方面进行了 介绍，层次清晰，内容充实。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时态、第一人称来叙述，语法规范，语言得体，符合英语的表达习惯。句子结构完整，以简单句为主，穿插使用了并列句和复合句。文章中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They often helped me when I was in trouble.、 Our teachers were friendly and patient, especially my English teacher.、In my free time, I often played basketball or football with friends. 、It was good for health and it is a good way to relax from the busy study.、In a word, my life in junior middle school was colorful and unforgettable.等。‎ ‎（二十七）北京市 ‎28．假如你是李华，你们学校要举办一场关于京剧的讲座，你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加，请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他讲座时间和地点以及需要做什么准备。‎ 提示词语：lecture（讲座）,invite,information,question,online 提示问题：·When and where will you have the lecture?‎ Dear peter,‎ How is it going?‎ There’ll be a lecture on Peking Opera in our school. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ If there is anything that I can do, please let me know.‎ Yours,‎ LiHua what do you advise Peter to prepare for it?‎ ‎【答案】Dear Peter How is it going?‎ There’ll be a lecture on Peking opera in our school .The Peking opera will start at 10:00 this Friday morning in the school hall.I am writing to invite you to take part in the meaningful lecture.‎ In the lecture ,we can not only get some useful information about the Peking opera ,but also get close to the traditional Chinese culture, which can benefit us a lot.‎ There are some suggestions for you to prepare for it. First of all, remember to be there on time, what’s more, don’t forget to bring a camera with you ,which can record the precious moment, last but not least, it’s a golden chance for you to come up with some questions that you are willing to learn about.‎ If there is anything that I can do please let me know.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 这是一篇提纲作文，因为要邀请交换生Peter参加京剧讲座。所以要根据提纲中的相关信息向Peter介绍一下京剧讲座的时间和地点以及需要做什么准备。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。写作时，在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。‎ ‎【高分句型一】‎ I am writing to invite you to take part in the meaningful lecture. 我写信是想邀请你参加这个有意义的演讲。这里invite sb. to do sth. 表示邀请某人做某事。‎ ‎【高分句型二】‎ If there is anything that I can do, please let me know. 如果有什么我能做的，请告诉我。这里let sb. do sth. 表示让某人做某事。‎ ‎（二十八）湖北省随州市 ‎29．书面表达 目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。请根据下表内容写一篇短文。‎ 赞成者的观点 ‎1. 能够学得更好，上更好的高中；‎ ‎2. 避免花太多时间看电视、玩游戏。‎ 反对者的观点 ‎1.学生需要时间休息；‎ ‎2. 太多压力不利于发展。‎ 你的观点 ‎1. ……‎ ‎2. ……‎ 注意：1．文章必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；‎ ‎2．词数：80词左右：（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）‎ ‎3．文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名。‎ Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.‎ Some people think that ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after—school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.‎ Some people think that taking after—school classes can help students learn better and get into a good high school. What’s more, students can avoid spending too much time watching TV or playing computer games.‎ However, others think students need time to rest and relax. After—school classes can cause a lot of ‎ stress for students and it is not good for their development.‎ In my opinion, if necessary, we can take after—school classes, but it can’t take up too much time. We should first rest well at weekends and on holidays.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如middle school students，all kinds of，after—school classes，at weekends，on holidays，get into，avoid doing，too much time，watching TV，play computer games，be good for，a lot of，in my opinion，last forever等。而Some people think that taking after—school classes can help students learn better and get into a good high school./ However, others think students need time to rest and relax.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。‎ ‎（二十九）四川省眉山市 ‎30．书面表达 为了学习和弘扬东坡文化，我们学校举办了东坡文化艺术节，请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇报道。‎ 要点：1.时间、地点：5月23日（星期三）上午9点，学校英语厅；‎ ‎2.形式：东坡文化讲座、东坡诗词诵读、学生才艺表演；‎ ‎3.感受：……‎ 参考词汇：lecture讲座； develop弘扬 注意：1.所写内容必须包含所有提示要点，并作适当发挥；‎ ‎2.词数80左右。（开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数）；‎ ‎3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息；‎ Meishan is a great place with colorful and traditonal Dongpo Culture. _____________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Meishan is a great place with colorful and traditonal Dongpo Culture.We held a Dongpo Culture Festival in order to develop our culture in the school hall at 9 am on Wednesday, May 23. We celebrated the festival in many ways.We had a lecture on Dongpo Culture.We also read some poems about Dongpo Culture.We had a students’ talent show. The teachers were satisfied with our show.We enjoyed ourselves. We think the festival was successful.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【分析】‎ 这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇关于我们学校举办的东坡文化艺术节的报道。‎ ‎【详解】‎ 结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Meishan is……，We held……，We celebrated……，We had a lecture on……，The teachers were……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我们学校举办的东坡文化艺术节的时间和地点，接下来介绍东坡文化艺术节的形式，最后表达我们的感受。此处in order to, have a lecture, be satisfied with, enjoy oneself等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。‎ ‎（三十）河南省 ‎31．书面表达 每个人都生活在一个特定的环境，请以“What I like about where I live”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，描述你的生活环境。‎ ‎1.要点：1）你生活在什么样的环境；‎ ‎2）你喜欢这个环境的什么；‎ ‎3）你对这个环境有何期望。‎ ‎2.要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎2）词数80左右。‎ What I like about where I live ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】What I like about where I live I live in a small and quiet city in Henan Province. Different from other cities, it has no skyscrapers or endless cars on the streets. People there are seldom late for their work and enjoy a slow and peaceful life. And that is what I like most about my city.‎ However, my city has her problems. She has no high speed train. I hope she will soon have high speed trains so that I can travel to other cities more easily! ‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 本文是一篇给材料作文，要求以“What I like about where I live”为题，根据所给出的要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，描述你的生活环境。本文时态以一般现在时为主要时态，人称主要为第一、第三人称。写作时首先要仔细阅读有关提示要点：1）你生活在什么样的环境；2）你喜欢这个环境的什么；3）你对这个环境有何期望。然后，根据要点提示，紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。注意使用高级词汇和句式，以提高文章的档次；可以穿插一些过渡性词语，尽量避免使用没有把握的单词和句子；不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；单词，词汇、句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一；最后必须要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。‎ ‎（三十一） 黑龙江省龙东地区 ‎32．话题作文：为了促进中小学生身心健康发展，我省自2018年3月1日起延迟中小学生到校时间，请你联系生活实际，谈谈对这一举措的看法。请以“My Opinions about the New Policy”为题，写一篇英语文章。‎ 提示:1.原来的学习生活 ‎2.延迟后的学习生活 ‎3.个人感受（看法）‎ 提示词：policy(政策)， the time of arriving at school ‎【答案】My Opinions about the New Policy As we know, there is a new policy about putting off the time of arriving at school in the morning in our province.‎ I remember I had to get up early on school days and sometimes felt sleepy in class. If I got up late, I needed to have a quick breakfast.‎ Now I don' t need to get up so early that I can have enough sleep. I can keep energetic in class. What's more, I can also make good use of this period of time Reading books and doing exercise are good choices.‎ In a word, the new policy is good for our life and study.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种时态，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：put off； get up ；in class.； make good use of ；be good for等；As we know ；Now ；What's more,；In a word等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。‎ ‎（三十二） 山东省菏泽市 ‎33．假如你是王宁，你的英国笔友Linda想了懈你的周末生活。请根据下面的内容提示，给Linda写一封电子邮件，告诉她你是如何度过上个周末的。内容提示：‎ ‎1.上周六上午，你和父母一起骑自行车去了一家草莓采摘观光园；‎ ‎2.听采摘观光园主人讲述自己的人生故事：16岁时一场车祸夺去了她的双腿，在 政府和家人的帮助下创建草莓采摘观光园，每年收入近百万元，吸引大量游客：‎ ‎3.和采摘观光园主人合影，在采摘观光园餐馆就餐；‎ ‎4.你的感受。‎ 要求：‎ ‎1．语言规范，语句通顺，内容充实；‎ ‎2．字数：不少于100词；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ 可能用到的词汇：Picking and Sightseeing Garden采摘观光园；strawberry草莓；‎ government地方政府；attract吸引；tourist游客 Dear Linda,‎ Thanks for your last email. ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours ‎ Wang Ning ‎【答案】Dear Linda，‎ Thanks for your last email．‎ Last Saturday morning， I went to a strawberry Picking and Sightseeing Garden with my parents． We rode bikes there because it was not far from my home． We listened to the story of the owner of the Picking and Sightseeing Garden． At the age of 16， he lost both of his legs because of a car accident． With the help of the government and her family， she set up the Picking and Sightseeing Garden．The annual income is close to one million yuan and it attracts a large number of tourists．‎ We also took photos with the owner and had lunch at the Picking and Sightseeing Garden．‎ It was a great weekend and I had a wonderful time．‎ Yours Wang Ning ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank for，last Saturday morning，ride bikes，far from，listen to，at the age of 16，because of，with the help of，set up，be close to，a large number of，have a wonderful time等。而We rode bikes to there because it was not far from my home/ At the age of 16，he lost both of his legs because of a car accident.两种因果关系句式结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。‎ ‎（三十三） 江苏省苏州市 ‎34．书面表达 现在，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国文化。假定你是苏华，你的加拿大笔友Ryan是一个中国迷，他想在中秋期间来中国看看。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，根据邮件内容及你的了解用英语回复。‎ To: suhua@ china.com From: ryan2003@canada.com Subject: Chinese culture Dear Su Hua,‎ How are you? I hope you are well. As a fan of Chinese culture, I’m thinking about going to China during the Mid-autumn Festival. Would you please tell me the following things?‎ ‎• How do you usually celebrate the Mid-autumn Festival?‎ ‎• Which city in China is most worth visiting? Why?‎ ‎• What is the best way to travel between cities in China?‎ ‎• What gift can I buy for my friends?‎ Please write back and tell me everything.‎ Best wishes,‎ Ryan 注意：1．词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；‎ ‎2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；‎ ‎3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。‎ Dear Ryan,‎ I’m glad to hear you’re coming to China. China is a country with a long history and rich culture. __________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ I hope my reply is of some help to you. Looking forward to seeing you in China.‎ All the best,‎ Su Hua ‎【答案】Possible version one:‎ Dear Ryan,‎ I’m glad to hear you’re coming to China. China is a country with a long history and rich culture.‎ The Mid-autumn Festival is a traditional festival in China. On that day, families get together and have a big dinner. We eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon. It’s great.‎ There’re many beautiful cities in China. Beijing is one of the best choices. It’s the capital of China and it has many famous sights like the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum After visiting Beijing, you can take a high-speed train to visit other cities. And you can buy Chinese knots or chopsticks for your friends.‎ I hope my reply is of some help to you. Looking forward to seeing you in China.‎ All the best,‎ Su Hua ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 这篇作文要求我们以苏华的身份给自己的加拿大笔友Ryan回复一封邮件。Ryan在他的邮件中说他想要了解中国的文化，尤其是中秋节的风俗。写作前，首先应仔细阅读Ryan的邮件，根据他邮件中的要求给他回复。通过仔细阅读分析可知，这篇短文中应主要包括以下内容：首先介绍中秋节的风俗；然后给Ryan推荐一个比较好的旅游城市以及最好的旅行方式；最后给他建议带什么礼物。根据这些主要内容，组织语言，连贯成文。需要注意的是英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，写作时不能逐词翻译，应从句子整体结构考虑，使用较常见的主谓宾或主系表结构，穿插使用并列句或复合句，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。选择适当的时态和人称，注意谓语动词的正确形式以及名词的单复数、形容词和副词的用法等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，语句通顺。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给笔友Ryan回复了电子邮件。这篇短文的特点如下：首先文章内容完整、充实，全面、清楚地回答了Ryan 的疑问。短文主要分为四段，每一段是一个话题，层次清晰，包括中秋节的习俗、推荐他去北京旅行、旅行方式以及给朋友带的礼物，最后表达了自己的祝愿。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态、第二人称为主，语法规范，语言得体。句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、复合句和一些高级句型。如There’re many beautiful cities in China. 、Beijing is one of the best choices. 、It’s the capital of China and it has many famous sights like the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum、After visiting Beijing, you can take a high-speed train to visit other cities.等等。‎ ‎（三十四）湖北省咸宁市 ‎35．短文写作 ‎78.“中国核潜艇之父”黄旭华院士，是央视王牌节目“开讲啦”开播以来最年长的演 讲者。上周五下午，全校师生观看完该视频后，都眼含热泪。‎ 为了学习英雄的先进事迹，请你根据提示内容，以 “Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes”为题，写一篇人物介绍。 写作要点：‎ ‎1. 他出生于富裕家庭，但为了祖国强盛，放弃成为一名医生的机会，学习建造核潜艇；‎ ‎2. 在当时条件艰苦的环境下，他专心于核潜艇的研究和建造；‎ ‎3. 为了保护国家安全，他曾隐姓埋名工作，30 年不为人所知，现虽年过 90 仍奋斗不止；‎ ‎4. 他的行为向我们诠释了什么是对国家和人民的热爱。‎ 写作要求：‎ ‎1. 文章不能出现真实的姓名和校名；‎ ‎2. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，必要时可作适当发挥；‎ ‎3. 词数 80 个以上，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。 参考词汇：‎ 核潜艇 nuke; 国家安全 national security; 隐姓埋名 conceal one’s identity Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about Huang Xuhua – the father of China’s nukes.‎ ‎ ‎ We were all inspired by his heroic deeds.‎ ‎【答案】Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about Huang Xuhua – the father of China’s nukes.‎ He was born in a rich family. In order to make our country stronger, he gave up the chance to be a ‎ doctor, but tried to learn how to make/build the nukes. Although the conditions were very hard at that time., he concentrated on studying the knowledge of making/ building the nukes.‎ To protect the national security, he used to conceal/concealed his identity. For about 30 years, he was unknown for others. And now he still keeps working hard even if he is over 90 years old.(And now he doesn’t stop working/struggling even if he is over90 years old)‎ His story explains to us what is the great love for the people and country.‎ We were all inspired by his heroic deeds ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 这是一篇给材料作文。根据要点提示，写一篇人物介绍。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般过去时态来写，人称为第三人称。所给出的写作要点比较具体，并给出了作文的开头和结尾，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写作中要用到的重点词组有：in order to为了, give up放弃, try to do sth.设法做某事, concentrate on doing sth.专心做某事 used to do sth过去常常做某事, be unknown for不为人所知。‎ ‎（三十五） 黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市 ‎36．习主席在十九大报告中提出要建设美丽中国、推进綠色发展、解决环境问题，足见习主席对环保的重视!作为新时代的中学生，如何响应习主席的号召，从“我”做起保护环境？请用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。‎ 要求:1.词数:80-100词。‎ ‎2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。‎ ‎3.要有复合句的表达。‎ ‎【答案】The environmental problems are very serious these days. In order to make our country more beautiful, we students should do something to protect the environment.‎ I think we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room. And when we brush our teeth, we’d better turn off the taps. Also, we should advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving and use reusable bags when shopping. Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference.‎ How important for us to protect the environment!‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【分析】‎ 高分句型：I think we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room.当我们离开房间时，我们应该关掉灯来省电。这里think后面跟的是一个宾语从句。‎ And when we brush our teeth, we’d better turn off the taps.当我们刷牙的时候，我们最好关掉水龙头。这里had better do sth.表示最好做某事。‎ ‎【详解】‎ 本文是一篇给材料作文。要求就习主席在十九大报告中提出要建设美丽中国、推进綠色发展、解决环境问题，作为新时代的中学生，如何响应习主席的号召，从“我”做起保护环境？写一篇英语短文，表达自己的想法。本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。在写作的时候，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；要使用自己有把握的句式、单词；词汇、句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一，这样会使文章更出色。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。‎ ‎（三十六） 山东临沂 ‎37．书面表达(计 亲爱的同学,在你三年的初中生活中, 总会与有些同学成为朋友。请以 “My Best Friend and I” 为题, 根据以下要求与提示, 用英语写一篇短文。‎ 要求:‎ ‎1. 如果你最好的朋友是女生,请用名字Mary; 如果是男生, 请用Jeff。短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。‎ ‎2. 不少于60词。‎ 提示:‎ I. Who is your best friend?‎ ‎2. How long have you been friends? And how did you become friends?‎ ‎3. How are you the same as and different from your best friend? And what do you like about him / her?‎ My Best Friend and I ‎【答案】My Best Friend and I ‎ We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friends Jeff.   We’ve been friends for three years. Three years ago, I was a new student in our class. I felt very lonely.‎ ‎ My English was very poor. Jeff often helped me learn English. With his help, I made much progress in English. So we became friends. Though we are both tall and thin, we are different. Jeff is more outgoing than me and he is good at playing soccer. But I’m quieter than him. I’m good at playing basketball. We often help each other. He is very kind and friendly. So we get on well with each other.‎ I hope he will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如so many good friends，graduate from school，feel very lonely，help sb. do sth.，in English，tall and thin，be good at，each other，get on well with，last forever等。而Though we are both tall and thin, we are different./ I hope he will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever.等多种从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。‎ ‎（三十七） 湖北省恩施州 ‎38．书面表达 ‎2009年3月至今,北京八达岭野生动物园发生了多起游客违反入园规则而导致的人员伤亡事件,这些悲剧发人深省。俗话说“没有规矩,不成方圆”,作为中学生,我们应该遵守哪些规则,请结合下图和要点提示,写一篇英语短文。‎ 要点提示：‎ ‎1.遵守交通规则;‎ ‎2.不插队;‎ ‎3.遵守入园规则;‎ ‎4.补充两点其他的规则。‎ 要求：‎ ‎1.文中必须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥使行文连贯;‎ ‎2.条理清晰,字迹工整,词数不少于80；‎ ‎3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。‎ 提示词汇: jump the queue (插队); fence (围栏)‎ ‎【答案】As students, what can we do to keep our daily life m order. In my opinion, we should behave as follows:‎ First, while walking or driving on the road, we should obey the traffic rules. Besides, do remember not to carve or draw anywhere during visiting places of interest. What's more, making a loud noise in public is also a kind of pollution. It is as harmful as littering and spitting everywhere. Last but not least, when we go to the zoo or other public places, we should do as we are required, for example, "Don't jump the queue".‎ Only when we behave well, can we live in a well-ordered society.‎ ‎【解析】写作分析：本文需要先仔细阅读背景材料，知道写作的目的，目的是要知道“没有规矩,不成方圆”，要懂得遵守规则，围绕这个目的，结合写作的要求发现本文需要正确写出中学生需要遵守的几条规则即可，在描述规则的时候可以恰当地使用祈使句，或者结合情态动词来实现想表达的效果，总体来说写作难度不大，最后要注意文章要得体连贯，注意句式的变化。‎ 写作亮点：首先，可以用一两句话陈述清楚写作的目的（keep our daily life in order），然后可以逐条写出需要遵守的规则。在一条一条罗列的 时候，可以恰当地借助一下词来表达逻辑关系，比如first，besides，what’s more，last but not least等，具体在写规则的时候要注意短语运用准确，例如obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则，visiting places of interest 参观名胜古迹，making a loud noise in public 在公共场合大声喧哗。此外，句式的灵活运用也是亮点，例如用到了as…as..同级比较的结构，在末段用到了only+从句，主句倒装的结构，这些结构的使用使得文章语言更加鲜活。最后，文章用一句话结尾，总结了全文，完成了写作任务。‎ ‎（三十八）黑龙江省绥化市 ‎39．写作 身为中学生，关爱儿童是我们应尽的义务。本周六我班将组织一次去儿童福利院（the children's home)看望儿童的活动。请你为本次活动制定计划，写一篇不少于80词的短文。‎ 内容包括：出发时间，集合地点，出行方式以及在儿童福利院的具体活动安排。‎ 提示词；tell stories, sing and dance, cheer up 要求：1.参考提示内容可适当发挥。‎ ‎2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。‎ ‎3.文中不得出现任何真实信息。（姓名、校名、地名等）‎ ‎【答案】We are going to the children's home to visit the children there this weekend. We’ll meet at the school gate at eight on Saturday morning. Then we’ll go there on our school bus. What should we do at the children's home? Here are our plans.‎ First, we'll take some gifts to them, such as colored pencils, books and some toys. Second at the children's home, we'll draw pictures with them, read stories to them and help with their lessons. Last, we'll have a party. We can sing and dance together. We can also play games with them and tell jokes to cheer them up.‎ I'm sure they'll enjoy the time with us.‎ ‎【解析】本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。‎ 点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定短语，为文章增色不少，如such as ，have a party ， play games，tell stories, sing and dance, cheer up等；First, Second，Last等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。‎ ‎（三十九）广西贺州市 ‎40．（题文）假设你是Susan,在家里你的父母总是对你有很多要求,有时你是否感到厌烦?你是怎样解决的?请你根据下列表格提示用英语写一篇短文。‎ 父母的要求 每天打扫房间；不能玩电脑游戏；晚上10点前必须睡觉……‎ 你的看法 虽太严厉，但理解他们……‎ 你的解决方式 与父母多交流，为父母做些家务……‎ 要求:1.文章必须包括表格中所给提示内容,可以展开思路,自由地适当发挥。‎ ‎2.不能出现真实的校名、人名和其它真实信息。‎ ‎3.词数80词右。前两句已经给出,不计入词数。‎ ‎【答案】My name is Susan. There are too many rules in my family. I have to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play computer games in my free time. I can't go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. I communicate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I often help them do housework. These are my good ways to get on well with them.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 本文属于材料作文，要表达对父母过多的要求的看法以及解决方案。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。‎ ‎【亮点说明】‎ 这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如there be，be allowed to，free time，be strict with，communicate with，as much as possible，share ... with，get on well with等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：‎ 认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。‎ 构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。‎ 初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。‎ 修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。‎ ‎（四十） 湖北省黄石市 ‎41．假设你是李华，你的朋友刘明在学习、生活等方面遇到了一些问题和困难，所以他经常感到焦虑和郁闷。请你根据以下内容给他发一封电子邮件，帮助他克服焦虑情绪，轻松、快乐地学习和生活。‎ 内容包括：1. 每个人都会有苦恼、焦虑的时候；‎ ‎ 2. 一定要告诉别人你的烦恼；‎ ‎ 3. 遇到任何困难时，与同学交流和老师、家长及时沟通；‎ ‎ 4. 可就如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活等适当发挥。‎ 作文要求：1. 不得照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；‎ ‎ 2. 语句连贯，计数80个左右。作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：焦虑的 anxious 与……沟通 communicate with 变得轻松 get relaxed ‎ ‎ 解决问题 solve problems ‎ Dear Liu Ming, ‎ ‎ Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes._______________ ‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours ‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Liu Ming,‎ Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes. It’s all right to tell others when you are anxious. It’s good to communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents when you are in trouble. Thus, you can solve the problems from study or life easily. ‎ Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed.‎ Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems.‎ Please do remember: you’re not alone. No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end. ‎ ‎ Yours ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如feel worried or sad，all right，It’s good to do，communicate with，in trouble，solve the problems，listen to，take part in，outdoor activities，try to do，no matter，in the end等。而It’s good to communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents when you are in trouble./ No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.等多种复杂从句结构和Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed.‎ ‎/Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems.等非谓语动词结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。‎ ‎（四十一） 湖北省黄冈市 ‎42．书面表达 美丽中国,美丽长江。黄冈是长江边一座美丽的城市。假如你是黄冈某中学的一名中学生李明,请你以“美丽的黄冈”为话題,向你的英国笔友Tom介绍一下你美丽的家乡——黄冈。‎ 要点提示：1.黄冈位于长江之边,大别山之南；‎ ‎2.黄冈历史悠久,名人辈出；‎ ‎3.黄冈风景迷人,乡村秀美;‎ ‎4.人人参与,从小事做起,黄冈人正在努力地保护黄冈的自然环境;‎ ‎5.邀请Tom来中国,欣赏黄冈更美好的绿水青山、蓝天白云。‎ 写作要求：1.词数90左右(短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数);‎ ‎2.根据要点提示,可以适当发挥;‎ ‎3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。‎ 参考词汇:lie(位于); Dabie mountains; plant; clean up; clear river and green mountains ‎ Dear Tom,‎ Thanks for your last letter. You asked me about my hometown, now let me tell you. ___________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours, ‎ Li Ming ‎【答案】Dear Tom,‎ Thanks for your last letter. You asked me about my hometown. now let me tell you.‎ My hometown is Huanggang. It lies by the Yangtze River and at the southern foot of Dabie Mountains.‎ It's a beautiful city with a long history. A number of famous people come from our city, such as Li siguang, Li shizhen, Wen Yiduo and so on. There are lots of beautiful mountains, rivers and lakes. They are so fascinating that thousands of tourists come to visit Huanggang every year. You can also see beautiful villages everywhere. We are proud of our hometown.‎ Now the people in Huanggang are trying to protect the natural environment. We plant trees as many as possible every year. We stop factories from throwing rubbish into the rivers. Volunteers go to the mountains, forests, parks and streets to clean them up on the weekends. Everyone is playing a role in making our city more and more beautiful. We are taking action!‎ Tom, would you like to come to Huanggang? You can see clear rivers and green mountains as well as blue skies and white cloud. I believe you will fall in love with our city and have a wonderful time. Looking forward to your visit!‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours,‎ Li Ming ‎【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，以“美丽的黄冈”为话題,向我的英国笔友Tom介绍一下我美丽的家乡——黄冈。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，二，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My hometown ‎ is……，It lies……，There are……，We are proud of……，Would you like to……？You can……，I believe……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。‎ 点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了黄冈的地理位置，接下来介绍黄冈的历史、风景和环保情况，最后邀请Tom来中国,欣赏黄冈更美好的绿水青山、蓝天白云。此处ask sb about sth, a number of, be proud of, as…as possible, play a role in doing sth, fall in love with, have a wonderful time等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。‎ ‎（四十二） 陕西省 ‎43．书面表达 假如你是李华,上周日你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana,请根据表格内容,写一篇短文。‎ 活动 上午 讲故事，唱歌，……‎ 中午 煮面（cook noodles），休息（have a rest），……‎ 下午 玩游戏，看动画片（watch cartoons）……‎ 感受 ‎……‎ 要求:1.参考表格内容,可适当发挥;‎ ‎2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;‎ ‎3.文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);‎ ‎4.词数:不少于70词。(开头已给出但不计入总词数。)‎ Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.‎ In the morning, I told her many funny stories first. Then we sang and danced happily together. I also ‎ taught her to speak a few simple English words and she learned well. At noon, I cooked noodles with tomatoes and eggs. She said they were delicious. I was very glad that she enjoyed the lunch. Then we had a rest. In the afternoon, we played games together. After that, we watched cartoons until my parents came back. I felt tired but happy.‎ ‎【解析】写作分析：这篇作文是要求写一份日常活动的描述。描述一天的行为活动。首先要注意的就是时态，写作背景基于上周日，所以全文要使用一般过去时，其次要注意各个短语的正确表达方式，最后不能忘记适当表达自己的感受。‎ 写作亮点：善于分段，可以用首段进行概括性描述，阐明背景（my parents were not at home）。第二段可以进一步开始细节描述。涉及到的短语有told her many funny stories，sang and danced happily，taught her to speak a few simple English words，cooked noodles，had a rest等等，使用短语的时候也有亮点，能够通过副词happily或者介词短语with tomatoes and eggs让动词短语的含义更加丰富。文章最后收尾简洁，用一句话点出了自己的感受，使得文章结构完整。‎ ‎（四十三）江西 ‎44．假如国外中学生来你校进行为期一周的交流学习,期间计划参加一项中国传统文化的主题活动,为此向你们征求活动方案(plan)请你根据下面表格中的信息提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你提供的活动方案,内容包括:茶或者民乐介绍,活动安排以及与之相关的理由。‎ 要求:1.从表格中任选一个主题,合理安排活动;‎ ‎2.短文条理清楚,行文连贯,内容可适当发挥;‎ ‎3.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;‎ ‎4.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。‎ Chinese Culture Introduction Schedule Reasons Tea Past and present Time:______‎ Places: tea farm, tea house Activities:‎ ‎1. tea processing ‎2. a tea art performance ‎…‎ Folk Music Music pieces and traditional instruments Time:_______‎ Places: music room, school hall Activities:‎ ‎1. take musical instrument classes ‎2. attend a folk music concert ‎…‎ Hello, friends. I've got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture. First of all, I'd like to introduce ___________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ Hope you will have a good time.‎ ‎【答案】Hello, friends. I've got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture. First of all, I'd like to introduce tea. It has a long history. It is said that Shen Nong discovered it as a drink. Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China. So we will have some interesting activities about it for you.‎ On Saturday morning, you are going to visit a big farm where you can learn about tea processing. On Saturday afternoon, you are going to a tea house after dinner where you can watch a tea art performance.‎ Why do we plan a visit to a tea house for you? Because you can lean a lot more about tea culture there. You will see a young lady in a Chinese traditional dress who shows you how a cup of tea is made with tea sets, You can enjoy it and relax yourselves while listening to pieces of traditional folk music.‎ Hope you will have a good time.‎ ‎【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如help sb. do，about Chinese culture，I'd like to，one of the most popular drinks，be going to，after dinner，a lot more，be made with，listen to，have a good time等。而It is said that Shen Nong discovered it as a drink. Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China./ You will see a young lady in a Chinese traditional dress who shows you how a cup of tea is made with tea sets,/ You can enjoy it and relax yourselves while listening to pieces of traditional folk music.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。‎ 点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。‎ ‎（四十四） 天津市 ‎45．书面表达 ‎86.请你根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Li Hua”为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍发生在你班同学李华身上的一件事。‎ ‎（1）上周五放学后李华乘公交车回家，看到有人在吃橘子，并把橘皮扔在车上。‎ ‎（2）李华把橘皮捡起，放进垃圾桶。‎ ‎（3）乘客用手机拍了照片，发布到网上。‎ ‎（4）老师知道后表扬了李华，李华说这是他应该做的。‎ ‎（5）你觉得 参考词汇：果皮peel 垃圾桶dustbin 发布post 表扬praise 要求：‎ ‎（1）词数：80-100个。‎ ‎（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。‎ The Story of Li Hua Last Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school. ‎ ‎_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】The Story of Li Hua Last Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school. After school last Friday, Li Hua took a bus home and saw someone eating oranges and throwing orange peel on the bus.So he picked it up and put it into the dustbin. The passenger on the bus took photos of Li Hua with their mobile phones and and posted them online. After knowing it, the teacher praised Li Hua and encouraged others to learn from him.I think Li Hua did a good deed. It is impolite to throw litter in public places.‎ ‎【解析】本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。‎ 点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定短语，为文章增色不少，如take a bus；put··· into ；take photos of； encourage to do sth;；learn from等； and ;so 和固定句型It is +形容词+to do sth等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。‎ ‎（四十五） 湖南省常德市 ‎46．基础写作 假设你是Amy，根据第二节（回答问题）材料，请用英文向市图书馆经理写一封80词以上的邮件，告诉他你丢失手机的事，如果他找到手机的话请他归还给你。‎ 注意：1. 内容包括第二节问题答案的所有信息（顺序可调整）；2.不得出现校名和人名等真实信息。‎ ‎【答案】Dear manager,‎ I am Amy.I lost my phone at the City Library on the afternoon of May 16.It is red.I attached my name on the phone.I want to get it back because I want to call my friends..If you find it ,you can call me at 0736-7891180.I will thank you a lot.‎ Yours,‎ Amy ‎【解析】这是一篇材料作文，以艾米的身份给市图书馆经理写一封80词以上的邮件，告诉他丢失手机的事，以及归还手机的方式。人称为第一人称，时态为一般过去时和一般现在时。描述丢手机的事情要用一般过去时，想拿回手机以及归还手机的方式用一般现在时。内容包括第二节问题答案的所有信息，邮件中要写明丢手机的时间和地点，手机的颜色，急需找回手机的原因，还要说明手机上有自己的名字，最后说明归还手机的办法。可适当调整写作顺序。‎ ‎（四十六） 湖北省宣昌市 ‎47．书面表达：‎ 为了更好地开展八年级学生的研学旅行( study travel)‎ ‎，学校现面向全年级征集活动意向。假如你是李华，请谈谈你建议的时间和地点并陈述理由，简要介绍打算开展的活动。‎ 要求：‎ ‎（1）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；‎ ‎（2）词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear leaders,‎ I am Li Hua from Class, Grade 8. __________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ We can discuss the details(细节)later.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear leaders,‎ I am Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 8. Here is my advice about our study travel.‎ I suggest going to Wufeng Houhe Forest Park. It is a beautiful park with green water and ‎ mountains. There are many different kinds of plants, birds and other animals. We can get closer to the nature. I think June is the best time to get there. Because there is not too much rain at this time of year and the weather in the forest park is much cooler.‎ We will have lots of activities, such as climbing the mountains and studying about plants. I'm sure the travel will be both pleasant and educational We can discuss the details(细节) later.‎ Yours Li Hua ‎【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如from Class 3, Grade 8，suggest doing，Wufeng Houhe Forest Park，with green water and ‎ mountains，different kinds of，get closer to the nature，too much，at this time，in the forest park，lots of，such as等。而There are many different kinds of plants, birds and other animals./ Because there is not too much rain at this time of year and the weather in the forest park is much cooler.等there be句式和从句结构的运用，既使短文内容丰富，又使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。‎ 点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。‎ ‎（四十七） 重庆市 ‎48．书面表达。‎ 假如你是李华，你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。‎ 要求：‎ ‎1．80—120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;‎ ‎2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。‎ 参考要点：‎ ‎1．活动情况简介(时间、内容……);‎ ‎2．遇到的困难(如：缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……)；‎ ‎3．请求帮助的事项。‎ Dear Nick,‎ How’s everything going?‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Nick,‎ How’s everything going?‎ Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I’m very interested in it. There are many different activation in the festival such as reading good English books. sharing good stories and so on. It’s a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don’t have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?‎ I expect to hear from you soon.‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如be interested in，different activation，in the festival，such as，and so on，western cultures，for example，want to do，be good at，have trouble in doing，hear from等。而First, I don’t have enough books./ Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading.等表示顺序句式的运用，既使短文的层次清晰，又丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。‎ 点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。‎ ‎（四十八） 江苏省连云港市 ‎49．书面表达 ‎76．积极锻炼是非常重要的，为此，某英文报开展了一次关于初中生段炼情况的调查活动。请你根据下列图表和相关文字提示,以“Exercising is important!”为题，用英语写一篇短文。‎ 要点 具体内容 调查数据 每天锻炼的时间 不经常锻炼的原因 锻炼的意义 有益身体健康;保持思维敏锐;变得自信快乐。‎ 你的建议 就如何更好地开展锻炼，提出你的建议(至少两点)。‎ 注意：(1)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;‎ ‎(2)词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;‎ ‎(3)短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。‎ ‎(4)参考词汇:敏锐的sharp Exercising is important!‎ Recently, we have done a survey about students’ exercising. According to the survey, ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】Exercising is important!‎ Recenly, we have done a survey about students’ exereising, Aocording to the survey, 32% of the students spend over one hour every day doing exercise, while 68% of them spend less than one hour. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, 46% of them have too much homework, so they have no time to do exercise. Secondly, 29% of them are not good a exercise. Thirdly, 25% of them are not interested in it.‎ As we all know, exercising is god for our health, which keeps our minds sharp and makes us confident and happy.‎ In my opinion, we should keep a balance between our study and exercising, Besids, we should develop a good habit of doing exercise. (104 words)‎ ‎【解析】这是一篇图表，关于初中生段炼情况的调查活动。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。‎ ‎（四十九） 甘肃省白银市 ‎50．“读万卷书、行万里路”,旅行是学习的最好方式之一。请以 "Travelling" 为题,根据以下思维导图的提示,写一篇短文,发表你的看法。‎ 注意:1.要点齐全,适当发挥;‎ ‎2.从思维导图 Sayings部分选择恰当的格言合理利用在短文中;‎ ‎3.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯,书写规范;‎ ‎4.词数:80-100词左右;‎ ‎5.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其它任何个人相关信息。‎ ‎【答案】Travelling Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. Furthermore, if you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology and history of the places you visit. While travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.‎ ‎【解析】本文是一篇给材料作文。要求以"Travelling" 为题,根据所给出的思维导图的提示写一篇短文，发表你的看法。本文时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要为第二人称。写作中要根据所给出的要点，联系思维导图的内容，适当发挥想象，然后用英语把这些想象的内容表达出来。注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。‎ ‎（五十） 四川省乐山市 ‎51．现在，戴眼镜的学生越来越多；为此，国家把每年 6 月 6 日定为爱眼日。请你结合自己的体会，就如何爱护眼睛，给校报英语栏目写一篇短文。内容包括：‎ ‎1. 吃有益于眼睛的食物，如：胡萝卜、鸡蛋等；‎ ‎2. 多做眼保健操，长时间用眼后可看看远方；‎ ‎3. 养成良好的用眼习惯，如：不躺着玩手机或看书等。‎ 注意：1.词数 80 词左右；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6 every year. _____________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6 every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows to the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health.‎ First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax. Also, it’s helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have a good eye habit. Don’t read books or use a cell phone in bed.‎ In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy.‎ ‎【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如more and more，National Eye Care Day，every year，as we all know，try our best，be good for，such as，do more eye exercises，be helpful to，look far away，from time to time，make sure，have a good eye habit，in bed，in a word等。而First,/ Second,/ Finally,等语句的运用，不仅使习作思路清晰，层次分明；而且丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。‎ 点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。‎ ‎（五十一） 湖南省郴州市 ‎52．书面表达 假如你是李华，上周六上午，你们班全体同学在特殊教育学校做了一次志愿者活动。请根据下表中提供的信息，用英语给你的笔友 Sandy写一封信。‎ What You See What You Do What You Feel ‎1.School: clean, tidy ‎2. Students:‎ ‎◆blind, deaf ‎◆speak/read/write, difficult follow teacher, carefully ‎1.paly games learn paper cutting ‎2. give books, snacks, toys ‎……‎ 要求：‎ ‎1.文中须包含要点提示中的所有信息(不要逐字翻译)，并适当发挥；‎ ‎2.词数：80词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；‎ ‎3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。‎ Dear Sandy,‎ Last Saturday morning, our class went to the Special Education School to have a volunteer activity. ______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Do you have anything special to tell me? I’m looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity to the special school. My classmates and I took a lot of presents to them,such as books,snacks and toys. The school is clean and tidy.Some students are blind.Others are deaf.Some students can’t speak or read or write.It is difficult for them to do everyday things.But they followed the teacher to do things carefully.After arriving there,some of us began playing games with them. Some of us taught them to learn paper cutting .We also performed wonderful programs，such as singing, dancing. We also asked them to join us and they were very happy. All of us were happy because we did something good to others. In my opinion, we should spend more time helping them. Helping others is Chinese people’s virtue.‎ ‎【解析】这是一篇图表，要求给笔友写一封信，来介绍上周在特殊教育学校做了一次志愿者活动。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。‎ ‎（五十二） 山东省枣庄市 ‎53． 书面表达 把书面表达答案写在答题卡第Ⅱ卷第七节的横线上。‎ Use the following information to write a paragraph about bees.‎ ‎●Be as busy learning all their subjects as bees are busy gathering honey ‎●They have sharp stings(刺) to harm them and protect themselves.‎ ‎●Wise and busy ‎●No gains ‎●Does its own work ‎●Driven from the hive to be stopped from eating the honey before winter comes ‎●Join together to build cells of wax（蜡质房子） for their honey ‎●How busy they are always ‎●Don't work ‎●That have six sides and are all of one shape and size ‎●A house called a hive ‎●One queen Bees live in.. They are... There is,. in each hive. They a.. Each bee.‎ They Bees live in… They are… There is… in each hive. They all… Each bee… They build cells… It’s pleasant to see… But drones… They are… Children shouldn’t touch bees… No pains… Shouldn’t children…‎ ‎【答案】Bees live in a house called a hive. They are wise and busy. There is one queen in each hive. They all join together to build cells of wax(蜡质房子) for their honey. Each bee does its own work. They build cells that have six sides and are all of one shape and size. It's pleasant to see how busy they are always, But drones don't work. They are driven from the hive to be stopped from eating the honey before winter comes. Children shouldn't touch bees because they have sharp stings(刺) to harm them and protect themselves. No pains, no gains. Shouldn't children be as busy learning all their subjects as bees are busy gathering honey?‎ ‎【解析】这是一篇写勤劳的蜜蜂的文章。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第三人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。‎ ‎（五十三） 江苏省宿迁市 ‎54．“你养我长大，我陪你变老。”父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天是父亲节，是我们向爸爸表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。‎ ‎1．给我生命，一直照顾我成长；‎ ‎2．努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件；‎ ‎3．拥有爱心，教我学会…‎ ‎4．今天，我要为您……(自主发挥，至少两点)‎ 注意事项：‎ ‎1．词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎2．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。‎ You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth.‎ ‎【答案】You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth.‎ You give me life and take care of me all the time, when I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me. In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education you always work hard from morning to evening every day. You are also a man who has a heart full of love.‎ You are ready to help people in need. It is you who teach me to be a kind person. In the past, I never said “I love you” to you. Today is Father’s Day. I want to say it to you loudly. I will study harder to get better results.‎ I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.‎ ‎【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如raise me up，in your life，take care of ，all the time，patient enough to help me，and encourage me，in ‎ order to，live a pleasant life，work hard，from morning to evening，full of love，in need，in the past，get better results等。而In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education you always work hard from morning to evening every day. / You are also a man who has a heart full of love./ I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.等多种非谓语动词结构和从句句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。‎ 点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。‎ ‎（五十四） 浙江省舟山市 ‎55．假设你是李华。上周六，你陪同来自美国结对学校的中学生Peter体验中国文化。请根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文向校刊English Journey投稿，介绍本次活动内容并分享感受。‎ Activities Feelings ‎◆make zongzi ‎…‎ ‎◆visit a tea museum ‎◆learn Chinese characters 注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中的所有内容，并表达感受。‎ ‎（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。‎ ‎（3）词数：80-100。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。‎ 短文首句：Last Saturday, I took Peter, a student from America, to experience some Chinese cultures.‎ ‎【答案】Last Saturday, I took Peter, a student from America, to experience some Chine cultures. Everything he experienced that day is a great attraction to him.‎ In the morning, Peter and I went to visit a tea museum, where he learnt a lot about Chinese tea. After that, I took him home and taught him to make zongzi. Although it was a bit difficult, he still enjoyed it. In the afternoon, we had a Chinese class, learning the history of Chinese characters. He also tried to write some characters with a Chinese brush, and even lost himself in it.‎ Peter kept saying “Amazing!” all the way, which makes me really proud of our rich cultures.‎ ‎【解析】英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。‎ ‎（五十五） 浙江省金华 书面表达 ‎76．在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日，请你从所给的卡片中任选一张，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍该节日。‎ 注意：①发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息，并适当发挥；②文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；③词数80～100；④文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ ‎【答案】Ladies and gentlemen, ‎ Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals the Spring Festival.‎ The Spring Festival falls in January February. It is Chinese New Year and also the biggest day of year.So people come back home from different places and get together for a big dinner. Many people stay up late to welcome the new year,hoping they will have a bright new start. ‎ During the festival, people visit their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck for the new year, Children can often get hongbao from their elders. Do you think it interesting?‎ That’s all. Thanks for listening ‎【解析】这是一篇材料作文，根据卡片中的相关信息介绍一下中国的传统节日。所提供的卡片中列举了中国的两个传统节日：春节和中秋节，可以任意选择一个去写作，主要从时间、相关活动和寓意三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第三人称。注意发言稿中必须包含卡片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。‎ ‎【高分句型一】‎ Many people stay up late to welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start. 许多人熬夜迎接新年，希望他们有一个光明的开端。‎ 动词不定式to welcome the new year用作目的状语，分词短语hoping they will have a bright new start.用作伴随状语。‎ ‎【高分句型二】‎ Children can often get hongbao from their elders. 孩子们通常可以从长辈那里得到红包。此句写出了春节的传统习俗，也是孩子们最开心的事情之一。get sth. from从……得到某物。‎ ‎（五十六） 山东省泰安市 ‎57．中央电视台《经典咏流传》节目的播出，再次激发了人们对经典文学作品的阅读热情。读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。请根据以下要点提示，以“Growing up with Reading”为题写一篇英语短文介绍你曾经读过的一本书或—首诗，并建议大家多读书，读好书。‎ 要点提示：‎ 读书的重要性 ‎1. 获取知识，开阔眼界；‎ ‎2. 提升自我，增强自信……‎ 读过的一本书或 一首诗 ‎1. 作品内容简介；‎ ‎2. 读书感悟及对自己的影响。‎ 多读书，读好书 ‎1. 利用闲暇时间多读书，养成读书的好习惯；‎ ‎2. 多读经典文学作品……‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。‎ ‎3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。‎ 参考词汇：classic 经典作品； open up one’s eyes 开阔眼界；improve oneself 提升自我； be more confident 更自信；responsibility 责任；cooperation 合作。‎ Growing up with Reading Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】Growing up with Reading Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident . Our study can be improved if we read more good books.‎ These days I am reading a book whose title is Jane Eyre, which attracts me a lot. The book's writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in 1816.She had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was self-confident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.‎ ‎【解析】这是一篇图表，要求介绍自己读过的一本书。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一，三人称，一般现在时态和过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。‎ ‎（五十七） 浙江省义乌市 ‎58．你校英语社团正在开展主题为“ How do students find study partners？”的讨论，为此你采访了一些学生，请你根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文进行交流，并说明你自己的方式及理由。‎ 方式 理由 部分学生 使用网络 方便找到学伴 及时得到帮助 部分学生 参加社团 面对面分享经验 共同解决问题 你 ‎······‎ ‎······‎ 注意：（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；‎ ‎（2）你的理由至少两条；‎ ‎（3）词数：80-100；‎ ‎（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：学伴 study partner 方便的convenient 短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how students find study partners.‎ ‎【答案】I have recently done a survey about how students find study partners.‎ Some students find study partners through the Internet. They believe it’s convenient to find partners to study with online. Besides, they can get help from study partners whenever necessary. Some students prefer to join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face. What’s more, they think working out problems together helps learn more easily.‎ As for me, I’d like to get study partners by going to summer camp because I can learn something new while having fun. Also, it’s a good way to learn how to get on well with others.‎ ‎ （98 words）‎ ‎【解析】1. 本题为采访记录。题目中给出了部分学生如何找到学习伙伴的方式和理由。在写作中要用上这些提示。‎ ‎2. 根据自己的经验，写出自己的方式及理由。‎ ‎3.人称用第一人称来写。时态用一般现在时。‎ ‎4. 写作时要注意语句通顺、合乎逻辑。‎ 亮点分析：本文写作合理、语句通顺。在文中使用了Besides，What’s more，As for me等短语，使文章衔接自然。句子They believe it’s convenient to find……的使用，增加了文章的亮点。还有so that的使用，使文章如行云流水。本文为上等作文。‎ ‎（五十八） 浙江绍兴 书面表达 ‎76.你校英语社团正在开展主题为“ How do students find study partners？”的讨论，为此你采访了一些学生，请你根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文进行交流，并说明你自己的方式及理由。‎ 注意:（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；‎ ‎（2）你的理由至少两条；‎ ‎（3）词数:80-100；‎ ‎（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇:学伴 study partner方便的convenient 短文首句: I have recently done a survey about how students find study partners.‎ ‎【答案】I have recently＇done a survey about how students find study partners.‎ ‎ Some students find study partners through the Internet. They believe it＇s convenient to find partners to study with online. Besides， they can get help from study partners whenever necessary. Some students Prefer to Join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face. What＇s more， they think working out problems together helps learn more easily.‎ ‎ As for me， I＇d like to get study partners by going to summer camp because I can learn something new while having fun. Also， it＇s a good way to learn how to get on well with others.‎ ‎【解析】这篇作文给出的材料是，学校英语社团关于How do students find study partners这个话题的讨论，要求我们用英语来介绍自己对学生们的一个采访，题目中用表格的形式给我们呈现了不同学生们的不同方式，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，并在最后说明自己的方式以及理由，根据要求，自己的理由至少有两条。审题可知，这篇短文的主要内容应包括以下几点：首先要介绍这个调查活动，这句话在题目中已经给出；接下来我们来介绍两种不同的方式以及理由；最后阐述自己的方式及理由。所以短文可以分成三段来叙述。时态应该是一般现在时态为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称复数为主。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇、句型和短语，写完整的句子。句式结构以主谓宾和主系表为主，辅以并列句和复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章意思连贯。‎ 点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息。短文共分成三部分，第一部分是题目中给出的一句概括的句子，点明了文章的主题。第二部分中作者介绍了不同学生们寻找学伴的不同方式以及他们的理由；最后作者介绍了自己的方式及理由。分段叙述，使文章结构清晰，有条理。其次短文使用了恰当的英语表达方式，句式符合英语的表达习惯，语言地道、得体。文章以一般现在时态为主，第二段使用了第三人称叙述，最后一段使用第一人称，语法规范、准确。最后短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They believe it＇s convenient to find partners to study with online中使用了宾语从句，和非谓语动词作主语的句型；再如Some students Prefer to Join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face中使用了目的状语从句；再如I＇d like to get study partners by going to summer camp because I can learn something new while having fun.中原因状语从句等等。同时文章中使用了恰当的连接成分，如Besides, What’s more, As for me, Also等等，使文章意思连贯、表达流畅。‎ ‎（五十九） 山东省德州市 ‎60．树立自我保护意识，健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课。下面是某地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年编写的《青少年自我保护健康成长所手册》的部分内容。作为一名中学生，写一篇文章，内容包括：①陈树你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的；②补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。‎ 要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；‎ ‎2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；‎ ‎3.80~100词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.‎ First, I always obey the traffic rules ‎ ‎ ‎ In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.‎ ‎【答案】Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.‎ First, I always obey the traffic rules and I never run the red light. When the traffic light is red, I won’t go until it turns green. I always cross the zebra walk because it’s safe. Second, I often eat healthily and safely. It’s important to eat more fruit and vegetables. Eating too much fast food will do harm to my body. Third, I never meet strangers alone, especially friends who I make on the Internet. At the same time if we are true friends, we should help each other.‎ What’s more, I’d like to give you some advice. Now summer is coming, it’s dangerous for us to swim alone, especially in deep lakes or river. So don’t do that.‎ In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.‎ ‎【解析】1. 认真读表格，弄明白表格的内容。交通规则：禁止闯红灯、要走斑马线。关于食物：多吃蔬菜和水果、禁止吃垃圾食品。关于交朋友：禁止单独见陌生人、互相帮助。‎ ‎2. 用简单明了的英语把这些提示内容写完整。‎ ‎3. 要补充你认为重要的其他一项。‎ ‎4. 人称用第一人来写。时态用一般现在时。‎ 亮点说明：‎ ‎1. 本文书写的内容完整、条理清楚。‎ ‎2. 在文中使用了First，Second，Third等词汇，使文章层次分明。易于理解。‎ ‎3. 作者所加的一条很好，防溺水，是当今安全隐患最大的。同时还运用了句型It’s dangerous for us to do sth. 使文章增色不少。因此本文为上等之作。‎ ‎（六十）山东省聊城市 ‎61．（题文）书面表达 假如你要竞选你班的体育委员，请你用英语进行竞选演讲。演讲的主要内容包括：‎ ‎1．自己喜欢体育，身体健康；‎ ‎2．擅长球类运动，尤其是足球和篮球；‎ ‎3．可以传授运动技艺，助大家比赛取得最佳成绩。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数：80左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．演讲内容中不得出现真实的学校和个人名字；‎ ‎4．演讲的开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ I want to be the PE monitor. _____________________________‎ ‎__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】I want to be the PE monitor. I enjoy sport, and I can run very fast. I’m really fit and healthy. Just watch me in the playground between lessons! I play most ball games well. But I’m really good at football, and I play basketball in the school team. Because I have a lot of good playing skills. I usually get the best score in every match. I can teach you some if you like. Choose me for the PE monitor and you can get the best score too!‎ ‎【解析】这是一篇要求为了竞选你班的体育委员来介绍自己。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。‎ ‎（六十一） 山东省济宁地区 ‎62．写作 某英文网站的“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为“ A time when I made someone happy”，请你写一篇英文稿件，内容需包括以下要点:‎ ‎1. Who was the person you made happy?‎ ‎2. When was it?‎ ‎3. What did you say or do?‎ ‎4. Why did it make him/her happy?‎ ‎5. How did you feel at that moment?‎ 注意：1．词数：100左右（题目不计入总词数）。‎ ‎2.文中不得出现可能透考生真实身份的任何信息。‎ ‎【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.‎ In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.‎ ‎【解析】写作分析：这是一篇给定标题的材料作文，需要逐条完成要点问题的回答，描述一次自己让别人开心快乐的经历，是一篇记叙文，首先要读懂5个问题，其次要用恰当的语言和衔接手段把这五个问题的回答联系在一起，变成一篇短文，同时也要注意在描述过去的故事的时候要正确运用过去时态。‎ 写作亮点：既然这是一篇记叙文，就应该完整地呈现故事，需要加上必要的背景，指明时间（Last summer），地点（in rural area），简要概括事件（teach children English），这是文章首句的点睛之笔，信息量丰富。短语和固定搭配的正确使用也为这篇文章增色不少，例如“adjust to…”（调整以适应…），“as time went by”（随着时间的流逝），“made great progress”（取得巨大进步），“keep on learning”（继续学习），“In a word”（总而言之）等等短语使用正确。在收尾部分表达了作者积极的人生态度，表示如果还有机会自己还乐于参与，这样使得这篇文章结构完整，表意更加清晰。‎ ‎（六十二） 湖北省武汉市 ‎63．书面表达 假如你是李明,本周日由你组织国际交换生去the Dream city 游玩。请用英语拟一份口头通知.‎ 内容要点如下:‎ ‎1.集合时间和地点:上午九点, theDreamcity入口处;‎ ‎2.观看楚剧,学习剪纸,制作陶土作品;‎ ‎3.自由活动一小时, 可游玩、拍照等,五点乘地铁返校;‎ ‎4.天气炎热,着轻便装;‎ ‎5.请补充一-至两点个人的想法或建议.‎ 注意:‎ ‎1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;‎ ‎2.词数: 60-80;‎ ‎3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译 ‎4-开头已给出,不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇: entrance n.入口处 Chu Opera楚剧 clay piece陶土作品 Hello,everyone! We are going to the Dream City this Sunday ‎【答案】Hello, everyone! We are going to the Dream City this Saturday. Here are our plans that everyone needs to know. First, we will meet at the entrance of the Dream City at 9:00 a.m. Then, we are going to appreciate Chu Opera, learn paper-cutting and make clay piece. After that, you will be free for your own activities, such as playing around and taking photos. Remember that you’re supposed to return to school at 5:00p.m. By the way, you’d better wear light clothes because of the hot weather. Hope you can enjoy yourselves.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 写作分析：这篇作文需要写一份通知，要求是写出去游玩的集合时间和地点，写主要活动：观看楚剧,学习剪纸,制作陶土作品，自由活动一小时, 可游玩、拍照等,五点乘地铁返校。还需要简单描写天气，天气炎热，着轻便装，为了使行文连贯需要增添适当的细节。‎ 写作亮点：首先开门见山要说明这是一则通知，是人人需要了解的，写出了写作的目的（Here are our plans that everyone needs to know.），然后运用了一些词语使得文章逻辑性很强，如 First, then, after that。在描述活动的时候短语运用准确，appreciate Chu Opera（欣赏楚剧），learn paper-cutting（学习剪纸），make clay piece（制作陶土作品），be supposed to（应该做…），By the way（顺便说一下）。句式的使用也有多样性，例如用到了祈使句Remember that…，最后有简单的祝福语，使得这则通知更加完整，完成了题目要求的写作任务。‎ ‎（六十三） 黑龙江省龙东地区 ‎64．为了绿化环境,打造花园城市，你校将组织学生去北山公园植树。请你以学生会的名义写一则通知。要求同学们明天上午8点在学校门口集合，乘坐校车一起前往；穿好校服；自备午餐；不要迟到。‎ Notice All the students, ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Students' Union ‎【答案】Notice All the students,‎ In order to make our city more beautiful, we are going to plant trees in Beishan Park, We'll meet at the school gate at 8: 00 tomorrow morning and take the school bus there together. Please wear your uniforms and take your lunch. You must be on time.‎ Students’ Union ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 本文是一则通知，应包含题目所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：In order to；plant trees ；at the school gate ；take the school bus；on time.等；采用祈使句，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。‎ ‎（六十四） 黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市 ‎65．你校定于6月30日去远足。请你以学生会的名义写一个通知。(30-50词)‎ 通知内容:1.早晨6:30在学校门口集合。‎ ‎2.穿校服、运动鞋。‎ ‎3.学校为大家准备水和午餐。‎ ‎4.请准时参加。‎ ‎【答案】Notice All the students,‎ We'll go hiking on June 30 and we'll meet at the school gate at 6: 30 in the morning. Please wear our school uniforms and sports shoes. Our school will prepare water and lunch for us. Please be on time ‎ Students' Union ‎【解析】‎ ‎【分析】‎ 高分句型：We'll go hiking on June 30 and we'll meet at the school gate at 6: 30 in the morning.我们将在6月30日去徒步旅行，早上6:30在学校门口集合。这里go hiking表示不徒步旅行。‎ Please be on time.请准时。句子无主语，是一个祈使句，以动词原形开头。‎ ‎【详解】‎ 这是一则通知。根据题目要求可知时态主要用一般将来时，人称主要为第一人称。内容包括：1.早晨6:30在学校门口集合。2.穿校服、运动鞋。3.学校为大家准备水和午餐。4.请准时参加。在写作时，首先要认真审题，看清题目中的要求，注意理顺要点，防止漏写。注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，注意不要出现语法错误。‎ ‎（六十五） 四川省广安市 ‎66． 书面表达 假设下周你所在的班将开展为期一周的研学活动。请根据下面的提示用英语写一则通知告知全班同学。‎ 阳光农场之旅 活动时间 一周 活动地点 阳光农场 活动内容 ‎1.帮助清理农场垃圾,搞好农场卫生;‎ ‎2.学习种菜、植树;‎ ‎3.野餐,采摘水果(苹果,梨……)‎ 安全 tips 不要到河里游泳,不要单独行动。‎ 要求:1.字迹工整,书写规范,包含全部要点,适当发挥;‎ ‎2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称;‎ ‎3.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;‎ ‎4.请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上相应的位置。‎ 参考词汇: rubbish(垃圾) clear away(清理) Sunshine Farm(阳光农场)‎ Hello, everyone,‎ May I have your attention, please?‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ That's all Thank you!‎ ‎【答案】Hello, everyone,‎ May I have your attention, please?‎ Next week our class are going to have a journey to Sunshine Farm. The journey will last for one week. On the farm we're going to do some cleaning and help clear away rubbish at first. Then, we'll learn how to plant trees and grow vegetables. During the week, we will have a picnic and help the farmers pick fruits such as apples and pears. For our safety, we mustn't go swimming in the river and we should keep together. Nobody is allowed to leave the class group and go alone.‎ Wish you a happy journey!‎ That’s all. Thank you!‎ ‎【解析】写作分析：这则作文是要求写一份通知，告知同学们即将开展的为期一周的研学活动，需要阐明活动的时间、地点、内容，以及相关的注意事项，写作难度不大，讨论即将发生的事情可以借助一般将来时，行文注意前后连贯，结构完整即可。‎ 写作亮点：首先要点明主题“下周要去做什么”，用到了“have a journey to…”（去…旅行）这个短语。其次就针对这次旅行做出较为细致的描述，描述时间，描述即将进行的事件，提到了“do some cleaning”（帮助清扫），“help clear away rubbish”（帮助清除垃圾），plant trees（种树）、“grow vegetables”（种植蔬菜），“have a picnic”（去野餐），“help the farmers pick fruits”（帮助农民采摘水果），“be allowed to do…”（被允许去做…），其中情态动词must的用法准确，we mustn't go swimming in the river 意为“我们禁止去河里游泳”，mustn’t表示“禁止”。结尾处有祝福语“Wish you a happy journey!”，总体来说短语使用准确，时态正确，结构完整，有相关细节的补充，行文连贯，完成了既定的写作任务。‎ ‎（六十六） 四川省广元市 ‎67‎ ‎．假设下周你所在的班将开展为期一周的研学活动。请根据下面的提示用英语写一则通知告知全班同学。‎ 阳光农场之旅 活动时间 一周 活动地点 阳光农场 活动内容 ‎1.帮助清理农场垃圾,搞好农场卫生;‎ ‎2.学习种菜、植树;‎ ‎3.野餐,采摘水果(苹果,梨……)‎ 安全 tips 不要到河里游泳,不要单独行动。‎ 要求:1.字迹工整,书写规范,包含全部要点,适当发挥;‎ ‎2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称;‎ ‎3.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;‎ ‎4.请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上相应的位置。‎ 参考词汇: rubbish(垃圾) clear away(清理) Sunshine Farm(阳光农场)‎ Hello, everyone,‎ May I have your attention, please?‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ That's all Thank you!‎ ‎【答案】Hello, everyone,‎ May I have your attention, please?‎ Next week our class are going to have a journey to Sunshine Farm. The journey will last for one week. On the farm we're going to do some cleaning and help clear away rubbish at first. Then, we'll learn how to plant trees and grow vegetables. During the week, we will have a picnic and help the farmers pick fruits such ‎ as apples and pears. For our safety, we mustn't go swimming in the river and we should keep together. Nobody is allowed to leave the class group and go alone.‎ Wish you a happy journey!‎ That’s all. Thank you!‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【分析】‎ 写作分析：这篇写作需要写一则通知，主题是关于下周将开展为期一周的研学活动，需要写清楚活动时间、活动地点、活动内容和安全提示。需要注意的是短语的正确表达，适当加入一些细节使得文章结构完整，语言连贯得体。‎ ‎【详解】‎ 写作亮点：这篇写作的开头和结尾已经给出，于是需要注意正文内容书写的准确性，首先应说明写这则通知的背景“Next week our class are going to have a journey to Sunshine Farm.”（下周我们班将去阳光农场进行游玩），要注意描述未来将要发生的事情需要使用一般将来时，具体的相关活动叙述需要注意短语的正确表达，例如do some cleaning做些清扫工作，help clear away rubbish帮忙清除垃圾，plant trees植树，grow vegetables种植蔬菜，have a picnic去野营，help the farmers pick fruits帮助农民采摘水果，go swimming in the river在河里游泳，leave the class group离开班集体，文章中也使用了一些精彩的句式，如we mustn't…我们禁止…，Nobody is allowed to…没有人被允许去做…等。最后结尾一段有祝福语Wish you a happy journey!祝你们度过一段美好的旅途！总体来说写作内容详实，结构完整，完成了既定的写作任务。‎ ‎（六十七） 四川南充市 ‎68．书面表达 假设你是李华,你的美国笔友 Bill 来邮件询问你平时体育锻炼及今年中考体育考试情况,‎ 请你根据下面提示,给 Bill 回封英文邮件。‎ 提示:1．谈谈 今年中考体育考试分值提高到 60 分的意义(已给出)及体育锻炼的重要性;‎ ‎2． 你过去是如何进行体育锻炼的;3． 你将来有什么新的锻炼计划。‎ 要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;‎ ‎2． 必须包含所给提示,并做适当发挥;‎ ‎3．文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;‎ ‎4．词数:80 -100( 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数) 。‎ Dear Bill,‎ Thanks for your last e-mail. I’m glad to tell you that our scores of P. E. add up to 60 at the Senior High School Entrance Examination,which encourages us to take an active part in exercise. ‎ Look forward to your e-mail.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Bill,‎ Thanks for your last e-mail. I’m glad to tell you that our scores of P. E. add up to 60 at the Senior High School Entrance Examination,which encourages us to take an active part in exercise. As you know,my favorite subject is P. E. I think doing sports is good for both my health and study. I did very well in the exam,too.‎ In the past,I practiced carefully in each P. E. class,learning to play basketball,run and so on. On weekends I usually played ping-pong with my friends.‎ However,I can’t swim. In the coming summer vacation,I’ll learn it. During senior high school,I plan to join the swimming club. Can you give me more advice?‎ Look forward to your e-mail.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 本文是一封书信，内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。‎ ‎。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如Thanks for ···；take an active part in；be good for；both ···and···；do well in；Look forward to等；As you know,；In the past, •••；However等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文 ‎（六十八） 甘肃省兰州市 ‎69．书面表达 假设你是李华，今天正逢端午节，你的英国笔友Jack对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下内容提示，给他写一封回信。‎ ‎1.中国的传统节日之一，已有2000多年的历史（the Dragon Boat Festival; one of the Chinese traditional festivals; two thousand years of history）；‎ ‎2.为了纪念著名诗人屈原（honor the great poet Qu Yuan）；‎ ‎3.中国南方有赛龙舟的习俗（Dragon Boat races）；‎ ‎4.家人团聚听懂粽子和其他美食（eat Zongzi and other delicious food）；‎ ‎5.有三天假期，可以外出旅游（a 3 day holiday）。‎ 要求：1.80词左右，书信格式；‎ ‎2.内容合理，要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。‎ 注意：不得出现学校，姓名等个人信息（除所给身份外）。‎ ‎【答案】Dear Jack,‎ How’s it going? I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. it is one of the Chinese traditional festivals which has about two thousand years of history. The festival is celebrated to honor the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day, people often get together with their family to eat Zongzi and other delicious food. In southern parts of China, people often have the Dagon Boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we also have a 3-day holiday during the festival. So we can have a short journey to relax ourselves. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is and I like it very much.‎ Best wishes.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 这是一篇材料作文，根据相关信息介绍一下中国的传统节日端午节的有关情况。时态为一般现在时，注意写作时必须包含所有要点提示，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1.认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想。2. 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络。3. 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。4. 最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。‎ ‎（六十九） 湖南省衡阳市 ‎70．书面表达。‎ 假如你是刘伟，你在英国的笔友Jim对中国的传统节日很感兴趣，他来信询问有关情况。请你给他回一封电子邮件，简单介绍中国的传统节日。今天是端午节，请你重点介绍中国人一般是如何过端午节的。‎ 注意：1. 80~100词左右。‎ ‎2.可以结合自己的情况适当增加细节，以便行文连贯。‎ ‎3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Jim,‎ I’m glad to receive your e-mail. ‎ What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festival? Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Liu Wei ‎【答案】Dear Jim,‎ I am glad to receive your e-mail.The Dragon Boat Festival ,also called the Duanwu Festival,is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calender.People always eat rice dumplings and watch dragon boat races to celebrate it.‎ The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes.It’s very popular.‎ The rice dumpling is made of rice,meat and so on.You can eat different kinds of rice dumplings.They are very delicious .And Dragon Boat Festival is for Qu Yuan.He is an honest minister who is said to have drown himself in the river.‎ Overall,the Dragon Boat Festival is very interesting!‎ What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festival?Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Liu Wei ‎【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如be glad to，the Dragon Boat Festival，according to，the Chinese calender，dragon boat races，in the southern places，be made of，and so on，different kinds of，in the river，looking forward to等。而The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes./ He is an honest minister who is said to have drown himself in the river.等定语从句的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。‎ 点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。‎ ‎（七十） 内蒙古包头市 ‎71．（题文）书面表达 假设你是李华,请给你们的美籍教师Bob写一封电子邮件,向他简要介绍你校即将举办的英语文化节( English Culture Festival),邀请他参加本次活动,并请他在节目最后做一个关于如何学好英语的讲座。‎ 邮件还应包括以下内容:‎ ‎1.活动时间:本周五下午14:30-17:30;‎ ‎2.活动地点:报告厅( Lecture Hall);‎ ‎3.活动内容:学生演唱英文歌曲…‎ 注意:1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;‎ ‎3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。‎ Dear Bob,‎ How is it going?‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Bob,‎ How is it going?‎ An English Culture Festival will be held in our school. All of us students do hope that you could come and join us.‎ The activity will begin in the Lecture Hall at 14: 30 this Friday ant last about 3 hours. We've prepared many programs for it, for example, English songs. What's more, some students will perform plays in English.‎ As you know, many students in our school have difficulty in learning English well. So when the performance finishes, it would be very nice if you could give a talk and provide us with some practical advice.‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours,‎ Li hua ‎【解析】‎ 这是一篇给材料作文。要求写一封电子邮件邀请你的美籍老师Bob来参加你校即将举办的英语文化节活动，并请他在节目最后做一个关于如何学好英语的讲座。邮件还应包括以下内容:1.活动时间:本周五下午14:30-17:30;2.活动地点:报告厅( Lecture Hall);3活动内容:学生演唱英文歌曲…。根据所给的材料内容可知本文时态为一般现在时和一般将来时，人称主要为第一人称。在写作时，要涵盖材料中所提到的所有内容要点，要理顺要点，防止漏写。同时要注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。要使用自己有把握的句式、单词，词汇，句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。‎ 点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可运用适当的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。‎ ‎（七十一） 浙江省衢州市 书面表达 ‎71．假设你是Li Hua，以下是你的美国笔友Alex发给你的一封电子邮件，谢你根据该邮件内容给Alex回一封邮件。‎ 要求：①考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件；②邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；③字数90—110。‎ ‎【答案】‎ From Li Hua To Alex Subject Can’t wait to meet you!‎ Hi Alex Thanks for your last letter, and I can’t tell you how excited I am now!‎ I plan to fly to America on July 10 and stay there for about three weeks.‎ I will take an English course to improve my spoken English. If possible, I hope to visit some American families to experience their life and learn more about American culture. Also I’d like to take trips to Hollywood and Disneyland. That must be really interesting. Of course I need to buy some presents for my family and friends. Do you have any suggestions?‎ Can’t wait to meet you!‎ Yours, ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】写作分析：这篇写作的体裁是信件，需要写一封回信。写作之前需要正确阅读原来信件中的内容，才能明白需要完成什么样的写作任务。通过读信，发现Alex得知Li Hua要早七月来洛杉矶，他想知道Li Hua到达的时间、停留的时间以及想在美国做的事情。写作难度不大，但需要注意书信的格式以及使得文章结构完整。‎ 写作亮点：‎ 回信一开始需要表达对收到信件的感谢（Thanks for your last letter），表达自己对于旅途的期待，然后需要按照顺序描述自己的计划。增添的细节是“I will take an English course to improve my spoken English.”（我将要上一次英语课程来提高自己的口语。），在这个前提下，表达了自己希望在美国做的事情。对于自己想要去的地方也进行了陈述，但表述也不止于此，还提到了去玩之后还想买一些礼物，这样的做法使得全文连贯得体。最后再次表达了自己的迫切之情（Can’t wait to meet you!），总体来说文章语言连贯、结构完整。‎ ‎（七十二） 江苏省无锡市 假设你名叫张华，是“2018无锡马拉松”组委会的一名工作人员。近日，外联络部转发给你一位牙买加选手的电子邮件，并附上了组委会的处理意见。请根据邮件内容及处理意见给他回复。‎ Dear sir/madam,‎ I'm Alfred from Jamaica. I took part in 2018 Wuxi Marathon on March 25 and I got a silver medal. I didn't realize you had got my name wrong until I showed the medal to my friends. My family name is Morrison, with double 'r'. However, there's only one 'r' on the medal. How could this happen?! :-(‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Alfred MoRRison 处理意见：‎ ‎1.重制奖牌，6月25日前寄出；‎ ‎2.提供一张免费机票作为补偿(compensation),两年内可从世界任意地点飞往上海；‎ ‎3. 旧奖牌须收回。‎ 注意事项：‎ ‎1.邮件内容须根据处理意见自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；‎ ‎2.词数在80个左右，邮件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；‎ ‎3. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。‎ ‎【答案】Dear Morrison:‎ ‎ It is true that we have got your name wrong. I am sorry for making such a mistake.‎ ‎ We have decided to have made a new model for you after discussing it. It will be sent to you before June 25th. Meanwhile, we will offer you a free air ticket as compensation. You can fly to Shanghai from anywhere over the world within two years. But the old model must be taken back. If you have anything else, please contact with us anytime.‎ Thank you for supporting our work and wish you a good trip!‎ Yours sincerely,‎ Zhang Hua ‎【解析】这是一篇材料作文，以“2018无锡马拉松”组委会工作人员张华的名义给牙买加选手回复一封电子邮件，注意书信的格式。首先要认真阅读所提供的电子邮件，掌握其书信内容：来自牙买加的艾尔弗雷德在2018年无锡马拉松比赛获得了银牌，但奖牌上的名字“Morrison”漏写一个“r”，质疑组委会怎么会出现这种情况。在写作中要结合组委会的处理意见予以回复。首先要对所犯的错误表示道歉，然后结合三点处理意见逐一回复，最后要感谢对方对工作的支持并祝旅行愉快。在写作中，要注意有两处用到被动语态来表达：奖牌于6月25日前寄出（一般将来时的被动语态），旧奖牌须收回（含有情态动词的被动语态）。‎ ‎（七十三） 广东省广州市 ‎74．书面表达 你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题。‎ 请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。‎ Ben's problems Your advice and reasons 朋友少，感觉孤单 ‎1.参加学校社团(club)---结识更多朋友 ‎2.?(请你补充)‎ 英语单词难记 ‎1.多阅读英语故事、新闻一在运用中学单词 ‎2.?(请你补充)‎ Dear Ben,‎ I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that…‎ ‎…‎ Good luck with everything!‎ Li Hua 注意：‎ ‎(1)回信应包括所有要点；‎ ‎(2)词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出， 不计入词数)；‎ ‎(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。‎ ‎【答案】Dear Ben,‎ I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. Besides, you’ d better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. On the other hand, you found it difficult to remember English words. Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way. In addition, if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day, it will be easier for you to remember more words. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.‎ Good luck with everything!‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以初一新生Ben“遇到的问题”为话题，结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述“问题”并给出“建议”。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。‎ 写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中felt lonely，because of , in this way, make more friends，besides, be friendly to, on the other hand, in addition, find these suggestions useful 等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处使用了宾语从句、定语从句、动名词作主语等句式，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。‎ ‎（七十四） 浙江省杭州市 ‎75．书面表达 假定你是李平(Tel:1361234567),家住滨海市人民路1号。你在美国旅行期间不慎遗失钱包,曾向宾馆询问。以下是宾馆的答复邮件,请你阅读后进行回复,词数80左右。‎ From: Mr. Smith, hotel manager Hi Li Ping,‎ Thank you for your email about your lost wallet.‎ Please send me some more information. When did you stay in our hotel and what room were you in? Please describe your wallet. What was in it? Send me your address and phone number.‎ All the best，‎ Mr. Smith To Mr. Smith Subject: Lost wallet Dear Mr. Smith,‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ ‎_______________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Ping ‎【答案】Dear Mr. smith,‎ Thank you so much for your reply. I stayed in your hotel on July 6, in Room 106, and I remember having left my new black wallet on the table. My ID card, two credit cards, as well as a 100-dollar bill, are in my wallet. Would you be kind enough to send me the wallet to No. I Renmin Road, Binhai, China by mail ‎ if you find it? Please call me on my phone number 1361234567 if needed.‎ Thanks again. (80词)‎ Yours,‎ Li Ping ‎【解析】本文是书信类文章，要求根据已有的邮件写一封回信，信的开头和结尾已经给出。因为要求是根据邮件进行回复，所以考生需要对来信的内容很好的审核，每个问题都需要回复。作文结构为：感谢回复-清晰回答相关问题-提出归还请求-再次感谢。‎ 写作时一定要注意信件的格式，行文要连贯，表达要清楚；同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；要使用自己有把握的句式、单词，词汇、句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求；检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误等。‎ ‎（七十五） 浙江省 ‎76．假定你是李蕾，请你对美国朋友Amy的邮件进行回复。你可以根据邮件内容作适当发挥；邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；词数：80-100；短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。‎ From: amycali5000@aeim.cup Subject: school project Hi there!‎ ‎ How is it going? Haven’t heard from you for a long time.‎ ‎ We are dong a project at school about how different teenagers in the world have fun. I’d really like you to help me if you can! So, can you tell me:‎ ‎ ·what things you do to have a good time?‎ ‎ ·why you think having fun is important?‎ ‎ If you can think of anything else to write, please do! In return, I’ll send you some great pictures of me and my friends in California.‎ ‎ Thanks very much, and write soon!‎ Amy From: amycali5000@aeim.cup Subject: school project Hi, Amy!‎ ‎ Thanks for your email. Sorry I haven’t written sooner. Anyway, you want to know how we have fun here.‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Li Lei ‎【答案】Hi, Amy!‎ Thanks for your email. Sorry I haven't written sooner. You want to know how we have fun here in China, anyway, we teenagers have different ways to enjoy ourselves, like playing sports, playing video games, and watching movies or TV, etc.‎ As a basketball fan since childhood, the most interesting thing for me is playing basketball with my friends after a day's study in the classroom. We almost play every day, competing, talking and laughing, making it the most enjoyable and relaxing moment. Besides, I often watch basketball games on TV. A close game between two teams always make me excited and sometimes wild with joy. I think it's helpful for both the body and mind.‎ Expecting your great pictures!‎ ‎【解析】本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。‎ 点睛：这封邮件使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be heard from；have fun enjoy ourselves；between ··· and；make me excited 和 both ··· and等；almost；Besides等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。‎ ‎（七十六） 黑龙江省龙东地区 ‎77．图示作文：仔细观察下列三幅图片,展开合理想象,然后写一篇短文。‎ 要求：‎ ‎1.话题作文或图示作文任选其一。‎ ‎2.词数在80~100之间。‎ ‎3.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。‎ ‎【答案】It was Monday yesterday, Li Bing went right home after school. While he was doing his homework, he felt some drops of rain. After a while, it rained more and more heavily. He looked at the clock, it was only 4: 00 p.m.. His mother was still at work at that time. He was afraid she would get wet. So he put on his raincoat and rain boots, then went out to the bus stop with another pair of rain boots and umbrella. Though he felt cold in such rainy and windy weather, he was very happy. What a good boy!‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种时态，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。‎ ‎【点睛】‎ 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：after school.；more and more； at that time ；put on等；While；After a while；. So； then ；Though的运用使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。‎ ‎（七十七） 河北省 ‎78．请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。‎ 提示：（1）What are the man and the woman doing?‎ ‎（2）What should you do when you see people litter like this? Why?‎ 要求：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。‎ ‎（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。‎ ‎（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。‎ 参考词汇：throw, environment, civilized(文明的 I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is_______________‎ ‎_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing his rubbish in the public place.The other woman is stopping him and telling him to put it into the dustbin.The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter like this, we should act like the woman.The environment should be protected by everybody.We should be civilized citizens.‎ ‎【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如in the picture，in the public place，the other woman，put it into the dustbin，like this。而I can see a man and a woman in the picture./ We should protect it./ We should be civilized citizens.等多种情态动词句式it is important for everyone to protect them.的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。‎ 点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。‎ ‎（七十八） 四川省凉山州 ‎79．书面表达 每个人生活中都要面对各种各样的困难。该怎样缓解自己的压力呢?请你以Less Pressure, Better life为题，根据下表内容写一篇演讲稿。‎ Stress 人们会因困难觉得失望，疲惫或者忧伤，承受着巨大的压力。‎ Ways to relax 改变你的想法。‎ 想一想你最喜欢的人或事。‎ 而不是想那些麻烦。‎ 你还可以这样做。‎ 听音乐、唱歌、锻炼等，这些都能让你高兴起来。‎ 寻求帮助，和父母、老师或朋友多沟通。‎ My points 耐心一点。其实困难也许并不可怕，压力可能并不严重。说不定谁能帮到你，也说不定等等就好了。相信我们的生活会更美好。‎ 要求：1.语言表达准确、连贯、通顺；2.短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。3.词数80左右。文章开头、结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Ladies and gentlemen,‎ Thank you for your coming today. I'm very glad that all of you are full of hope for the future. And yes, everyone has to face difficulties in his life. ‎ ‎ ‎ That’s all. Thank you.‎ ‎【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,‎ Thank you for your coming today. I'm very glad that all of you are full of hope for the future. And yes, everyone has to face difficulties in his life.‎ Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. But how to solve the problem? You should change your mind. First, you can think about exciting things and persons instead of worries. Second, you can listen to music ,sing or do exercise to cheer yourself up.Third, I think a conversation with parents , teachers or friends is helpful. Finally be patient. In fact, the difficulties may not be terrible, the pressure may not be serious. Maybe someone can help you, or maybe just wait. Believe that our lives will be better.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 这是一篇给材料作文。要求以Less Pressure, Better life为题，写一篇演讲稿。本文所给出的要点比较具体，所以我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点准确表达出来。写作时要注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致的问题。动笔前要认真阅读材料，同时注意理顺要点，防止漏写，可以适当发挥。上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型以便使文章显得更有档次；特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。‎ ‎（七十九） 山东省滨州 ‎80．书面表达 某校正在开展“走进新时代，争当合格中学生”的演讲比赛，请以“We act, we improve” 为主题，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈中学生除了学习课本知识之外，还应该做些什么？ 演讲稿应包括以下内容：‎ ‎1.学会自立，诚实友善，举止文明；‎ ‎2.培养习惯，发展兴趣，不断创新；‎ ‎3.关心他人，和谐相处，懂得感恩； 4. ……‎ 要求：‎ ‎1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；‎ ‎2.文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名；‎ ‎3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加 2－3 分；‎ ‎4.词数：80 词左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。‎ We act, we improve Ladies and gentlemen,‎ We have entered a new era. As students, it’s our duty to study hard. But to be a qualified middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.‎ ‎【答案】We act, we improve Ladies and gentlemen,‎ We have entered a new era. As students, it’s our duty to study hard. But to be a qualified middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.‎ First, we should learn to be independent and honest. We’re supposed to be friendly to others and behave politely in public. Second, we should have good habits. Habits play an important role in our life. We’d better develop our interests and the ability to create. Third, we should care more about others and be thankful to all the people who have helped us. Value the time we spend with our family and friends in our daily life. Last but not least, I think we should exercise more to keep healthy.‎ In a word, the more we act, the better we will improve.‎ ‎【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，以“We act，we improve”为主题，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈中学生除了学习课本知识之外，还应该做些什么？结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I think……，First, we usually learn to……，Second, we should……，We must not……等句式的应用。写作中注意多种句式交替运用，不要漏掉任何一个写作要点，注意叙述顺序符合逻辑关系。 可能用到的词组：learn to do sth., be supposed to do, be friendly to sb., play an important role in, had better, the ability to create, care more about等等。‎ 高分句型： ‎ ‎1. We should care more about others and be thankful to all the people who have helped us. 我们应该更加关心别人，感谢所有帮助过我们的人。‎ care more about更加关心，be thankful to对……感恩，who have helped us.为定语从句，修饰先行词the people。‎ ‎2. In a word, the more we act, the better we will improve. 总之，我们行动越多，我们的提高就越好。‎ 两个比较级的句子叠加，表示“越……越……”。‎ ‎（八十） 浙江省金华、丽水 ‎81．在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日，请你从所给的卡片中任选一张，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍该节日。‎ 注意：①发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息，并适当发挥；②文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；③词数80～100；④文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Ladies and gentlemen,‎ Welcome to the Chinese culture tour.‎ That’s all. Thanks for listening.‎ ‎【答案】Ladies and gentlemen，‎ Welcome to the Chinese culture tour． Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals-the MidAutumn Festival． The Mid Autumn Festival usually falls in Septermber or October when the moon appears the biggest and the brightest in the year． ‎ During the festival， Chinese people sit around the table with their family members and enjoy mooncakes as well as the beautiful moon． People believe that the round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of being together． When seeing them， people will miss their family members far away． At the same time． they will express wishes and hopes for them． Does it sound interesting？ That's all． Thanks for listening．‎ ‎【解析】写作分析：‎ 首先要明白写作目的是在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日，写作要求是选择一个卡片进行书写即可。需要介绍节日的名称、具体的时间、相关的活动以及其背后的含义，注意适当增添细节使行文更加连贯。‎ 写作亮点：‎ 高分句型一:‎ The Mid Autumn Festival usually falls in Septermber or October when the moon appears the biggest and the brightest in the year．中秋节通常是在九月到十月之间，这时月亮是一年中的最大和最亮的时候。when引导时间状语从句。‎ 高分句型二:‎ People believe that the round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of being together． 人们相信圆形的月饼和满月是团聚的象征，that引导宾语从句；symbols of …的象征。‎ 高分句型三：‎ During the festival， Chinese people sit around the table with their family members and enjoy mooncakes as well as the beautiful moon． People believe that the round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of being together． ‎ 高分句型四：When seeing them， people will miss their family members far away． At the same time, they will express wishes and hopes for them. Does it sound interesting？（介绍如何过中秋节）That's all. Thanks for listening．‎ 点评:能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务 ‎（八十一） 湖北省孝感市 ‎82．书面表达 本周一是端午节，你校外教Tony对中国文化很感兴趣，你陪他去槐荫公园观看了龙舟比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇日记。‎ 写作要点：‎ ‎1.现场情况。人多拥挤，16支龙舟队竞争激烈，人们欢呼，队员们闭队合作，最终“勇气队”获胜。‎ ‎2.赛后活动：我给Tony介绍端午节，下午带他参加有关端午节的其它活动，如……‎ ‎3.感想：Tony……，我……‎ 写作要求：‎ ‎1.短文内容必须包括所有要点、语句通顺，条理清晰；‎ ‎2.省略号处须作适当发挥(1-2句即可)；‎ ‎3.100词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。‎ June 18th Today is the Dragon Boat Festival. ‎ ‎【答案】Today is the Dragon Boat Festival For the reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture. I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this ‎ morning When we arrived, it was crowded. There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river. During the race, the dragon boat teams competed with each other, while people on each bank cheered up. Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere. At last, the Courage Team won.‎ After the competition, I introduced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival. We went to learn how to make zongzi and admire a picture exhibition.‎ At the end of the day, tired as we were, we felt excited. Tony though our traditional Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud of my great motherland.‎ ‎【解析】‎ ‎【详解】‎ 试题分析：本书面表达以“端午节”为话题的日记。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般过去时态，用第一人称来表达。注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。‎ 写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练、要点齐全。文中invite sb.to do, during the race, compete with, cheere up, at last, both…and…; at the end of the day, be proud of等词汇的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如：运用了there be句型；定语从句、宾语从句、时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。‎ ‎（八十二）四川省成都市 ‎83．书面表达请直接在答题卡上写作。‎ 假如你是图中女孩，你与家人于4月29日共度周日。请根据图中所示写一篇英文日记，讲述你当天所见和所做之事。‎ 注意：1.日记应包含图中所有信息 ‎2.日记中须写出当天的一些感受 ‎3.日记应格式正确,语句通顺,句式多样 ‎4词数:100左右。‎ 参考词汇:城堡 castle螃蟹crab ‎【答案】Sunny Sunday,‎ April 29(th)‎ Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying sea birds. a boat sailed itself in the distance. What a beautiful scene! Dressed in swimming suit, I swam in the blue and clear sea. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I managed to make a sand castle with tools. It looked so true to life that a crab even wanted to live in it.‎ What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.‎ ‎【解析】‎ 假如你是图中女孩，你与家人于4月29日共度周日。请根据图中所示写一篇英文日记，讲述你当天所见和所做之事。根据图片提示，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。‎ ‎（八十三） 浙江宁波 ‎84．今年5月11日，你校组织了一次社会实践活动，部分学生选择去了红星农场（见导图一），其余学生选择去了科技博物馆（见导图二）。请根据你所选择的实践活动写一篇英语日记，记录当天的经历和感受。‎ 导图一 导图二 注意：(1)日记必须包括你所选择导图的所有要点，并适当发挥；‎ ‎(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；‎ ‎(3)词数：80 -100。日记格式及首句己给出，不计入总词数。‎ Friday, May 11th Today I had a school trip.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎【答案】Possible version 1:‎ Friday. May 11th Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.‎ The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!‎ I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future!‎ ‎(98 words)‎ Possible version 2:‎ Friday, May 11th Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to the Science Museum by subway at 7 :00.‎ As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them. Before leaving, we bought some gifts for our friends.‎ I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again!‎ ‎（99 words）‎ ‎【解析】写作分析：‎ 首先要确定文章的体裁，这是一篇日记，这就决定了文章的人称。其次要看到要求是“根据你所选择的实践活动”‎ 进行写作，所以要在两个导图中挑选一个进行描述，不需要都写。在完全明白题目含义后就要根据导图中的要点（包括人物、交通方式、感受、活动）进行作文，使用恰当的语句进行连接、保证作文连贯得体即可。‎ 写作亮点：‎ 本文首先用首段点明了前往的地点，参与的实践活动的名称，补充介绍了天气。第二段介绍了在农场的活动，有相关细节的补充，如“took a walk around the farm”。对于“喂鸡”这一活动也进行了较为细致的描写“When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends.”文章还重视简单句、并列句、复杂句的交替使用，还在第二段末尾运用了感叹句，使得文章句式变化多样。在最后一段通常可以表达自己的综合感受和对下次活动的期待，这样的文章就能够结构完整，细节丰富，连贯得体了。‎