小学英语小升初专项复习：书面表达 8页

小学英语小升初专项复习：书面表达 一、仿照范例，任选一张图片写话。至少写 5 句话。 1.仿照范例，任选一张图片写话。至少写 5 句话。 例：This is a monkey. Her name is Lily. She is two. She likes bananas. I like her very much. 二、印度女孩 Linda 要来厦门旅游，请你写一写她一周的计划安排。 2.印度女孩 Linda 要来厦门旅游，请你写一写她一周的计划安排 Linda's Plans Days Activities Monday visit Xiamen University Tuesday go to Xiaodeng Village Wednesda y play on the beach Thursday go shopping on Zhongshan Road Friday visit Gulangyu Islet Saturday eat snacks and seafood Sunday ride a bicycle around the city Linda will visit Xiamen University on Monday. She will…… 三、书面表达 3.Will you share your experiences（经历）with Baymax? 从 6 年前初入校园，到今天即将小学 毕业，你有什么变化吗? 请以“Then and Now”为题，跟 Baymax 分享一下你的成长经历。（不 少于 6 句话） Then and Now The questions may help you. 1) What were you like before? What are you like now? 2) What was your hobby before? What is your hobby now? 3) …… 4.请模仿对 Tom 的介绍，根据下图人物的信息，介绍 Tingting。 Tom is eleven years old. He's from Sydney, Australia. He can speak English. He likes football, reading, swimming and singing songs. Name: Tingting Age: 13 City: Hong Kong, China Language: Chinese and English Hobby: drawing, playing chess, collecting stamps 5.请选用方框里的单词写一篇小短文，题目是“My New Room”。（不少于 5 句话） In on under behind ne ar 6.遵守交通规则非常重要，Bobby 不知道过马路时应遵守哪些交通规则，假设你是 Bobby 的 朋友，请告诉他在过马路时要注意什么。 要求：语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。词数 40 左右，可适当发挥。 7.同学们，请看下面的图片，试着写几句话吧！（不少于 40 个单词） 8.根据表格信息的提示，以“My Cousin”为题，写一篇小短文。 要求：以表格信息为主，可适当增减，不少于 40 个单词；条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清楚、 规范。 Name Sarah Age 14 Country the US Hometown New York Hobbies reading writing Hero Andersen Dream travel around the world Favourite book The Little Mermaid My Cousin I have a cousin.…… 9.图中的人物正在做什么呢? 请根据图片提示，写一篇短文，要求不少于 5 句话。 答案解析部分 一、仿照范例，任选一张图片写话。至少写 5 句话。 1.【答案】 This is a cat. Her name is Mimi. She is four. She likes fish. I like her very much. 【考点】看图写话 【解析】【分析】这是一篇仿照范例看图写句子的作文，首先确定图片内容：这是一只猫， 接着介绍她的名字，她的年龄，她喜欢的东西，最后表达作者的感情， like her very much， 用一般现在时。 【点评】考查看图写作，首先要仔细观察所给范例，确定所需要写的内容和细节，其次按照 要求进行描述，描述必须清楚全面，符合要求。 二、印度女孩 Linda 要来厦门旅游，请你写一写她一周的计划安排。 2.【答案】 Linda will visit Xiamen University on Monday. She will go to Xiaodeng Village on Tuesday. She will play on the beach on Wednesday. She will go shopping on Zhongshan Road on Thursday. She will visit Gulangyu Islet on Friday. She will eat snacks and seafood on Saturday. She will ride a bicycle around the city on Sunday. 【考点】应用文 【解析】【分析】本文是根据表格提示进行写作，内容简单，把相应的内容用英语表达出来 即可。短文用第三人称单数，一般将来时；注意词汇的选择，句型的运用。 从周一到周日具体将要干的事情，用一般将来时 will+动词原形结构表达： 下周一将去参观厦门大学。visit Xiamen University。周二去小灯村 go to Xiaodeng Village， 周三在海滩玩 play on the beach ，周四去购物 go shopping，周五去参观鼓浪屿 visit Gulangyu Islet，周六吃零食和海鲜，周日环城骑自行车 ride a bicycle around the city。 【点评】本题考查写作，根据提示选择正确时态，熟练使用相关的短语、单词和句型等，语 法正确，句子结构合理。 三、书面表达 3.【答案】 Then and Now I was thin before, but now I'm strong. I had short hair before, but now I have long hair. I liked pink before, but now I don't like pink. I liked bananas before, but now I don't like bananas. I didn't like winter before, but now I like winter. I liked swimming before, but now I like playing badminton. 【考点】命题作文 【解析】【分析】本文是根据题目“那时和现在”进行写作，内容简单，把相应的内容用英语 表达出来，用第一人称单数，一般过去时和一般现在时；注意词汇的选择，句型的运用。 用一般过去时和一般现在进行对比 身体：以前瘦 thin，现在强壮 strong；头发： 以前 short hair， long hair；喜欢的颜色：以 前 liked pink before,现在 I don't like pink；喜欢的水果：以前 liked bananas before, 现在 I don't like bananas； 喜欢的季节： 以前 didn't like winter before,现在 I like winter； 喜欢的运动：以 前 liked swimming before, 现在 I like playing badminton. 【点评】本题考查写作，根据题目选择正确时态，两种时态对比进行。熟练使用相关的短语、 单词和句型等，语法正确，句子结构合理。 4.【答案】 Tingting is thirteen years old. She's from Hong Kong, China. She can speak Chinese and English. She likes drawing, playing chess and collecting stamps. 【考点】看图写话 【解析】【分析】这是一篇仿照范例看图写句子的作文，首先确定图片内容：介绍婷婷的情 况，先介绍她的年龄 thirteen years old，来自的地方 Hong Kong, China，讲的语言 speak Chinese and English，喜欢干的事情 drawing, playing chess and collecting stamps，用一般现在时第三人 称单数。 【点评】考查看图写作，首先要仔细观察所给范例，确定所需要写的内容和细节，其次按照 要求进行描述，描述必须清楚全面，符合要求。 5.【答案】 My New Room Look! This is my new room. There is a bed, a desk, a closet and a shelf in it. There are two end tables near the bed. There is a computer on the desk. My football is behind the door. Oh, look! My cat is under the bed. My new room is nice and clean. I like it. 【考点】命题作文 【解析】【分析】本文是根据题目“My New Room ”进行写作，内容简单，用合适的介词，把 相应的内容用英语表达出来即可。短文用 there be 结构描述，一般现在时；注意词汇的选择， 句型的运用。 从以下几个方面进行写作： （1）介绍我的房间。new room。 （2）具体介绍房间里的东西。a bed, a desk, a closet and a shelf， two end tables， a computer， football is behind the door， cat is under the bed。 （3）表达感情。nice and clean，like it. 【点评】本题考查写作，根据提示选择正确时态，用 there be 结构描述，注意 be 动词的用法。 6.【答案】 Hello, Bobby. Let me tell you how to cross the road. If the traffic light is red or yellow, you can't cross the road. You should stop and wait. The green traffic light means "go", and you can go across the road. You should always ride on the right side of the road. Don't be against the traffic rules. 【考点】应用文 【解析】【分析】本文是给朋友 Bobby 介绍交通规则，内容简单，把相应的内容用英语表达 出来即可。短文用第二人称，一般现在时；注意词汇的选择及情态动词的使用。 从以下几个方面进行写作： （1）首先打招呼，然后用祈使句告诉他怎么过马路。Hello, Bobby. Let me tell you…… （2）具体介绍交通规则。红灯或黄灯 red or yellow，can't cross the road，should stop and wait，路 灯 green traffic light ，go， can go across the road，ride on the right side of the road。 （3）最后提醒不能违反交通规则，Don't be against the traffic rules. 【点评】本题考查写作，根据提示选择正确时态，熟练使用相关的短语、单词和句型等，语 法正确，句子结构合理。 7.【答案】 It is summer now. Today is a fine day. I am on the beach with my family and friend. Look! My father is fishing. My mother is telling a story to my brother. I am making a sand castle with my friend. A woman is sitting on a high chair. Two girls are playing on the seashore. A boy is swimming in the sea. What a happy day! 【考点】看图写话 【解析】【分析】这是一篇看图写句子的作文，时态用一般现在时和现在进行时。首先介绍 现在是夏天了 summer now， 天气很好 a fine day，跟家人和朋友在海滩 on the beach， 然后 具体介绍每个人正在干的事情，用个现在进行时，最后表达心情 happy。文章用简短的几句 话介绍了图片内容，符合题目要求，是一篇不错的范文。 【点评】考查看图写作，首先要仔细观察所给图片，确定所需要写的内容和细节，其次按照 要求进行描述，描述必须清楚全面，符合要求。 8.【答案】 My Cousin I have a cousin. Her name is Sarah. She is fourteen. She is from the US. Her hometown is New York. She likes reading and writing. She likes Andersen very much. Her favourite book is The Little Mermaid. She wants to travel around the world. 【考点】命题作文 【解析】【分析】本文是根据题目“我的表妹”进行写作，内容简单，把相应的内容用英语表 达出来即可。短文主要用单数第三人称，一般现在时；注意词汇的选择，句型的运用。 从以下几个方面进行写作： （1）介绍“我”有一个表妹及她的名字，年龄，国籍及家乡。cousin，fourteen，US，New York。 （2）具体介绍她喜欢干的事情，喜欢的英雄及最喜欢的书。likes reading and writing， likes Andersen， The Little Mermaid （3）表达她的梦想。wants to travel around the world。 【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关的短语、单词和句型等，注意词的 搭配，时态的把 握，人称的使用等细节问题，语言表达准确精炼。 9.【答案】 It's Sunday today. Mr. Black and his students are in the park. Look! He is reading newspapers under the tree. Sarah and Toby are listening to music beside him. Mike is eating an ice cream. Lily is riding a bike. Angel is drawing a picture. Jim is flying a kite. Dave is playing football. They are having a good time. 【考点】看图写话 【解析】【分析】本文是看图写短文，内容简单，把相应的内容用英语表达出来即可。短文 主要用第三人称，现在进行时；注意词汇的选择，句型的运用。 从以下几个方面进行写作： （1）介绍时间、任务与地点。Sunday，Mr. Black and his students are in the park. （2）具体介绍人们正在干的事情。reading newspapers ，listening to music, eating an ice cream， riding a bike， drawing a picture，flying a kite，playing football。 （3）表达人们的心情。having a good time 【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关的短语、单词和句型等，注意词的 搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题，语言表达准确精炼。