2019高中英语unit11themediasectionⅷ（自修课）writing—给报社写信教案（含解析） 4页

SectionⅧ(自修课)Writing——给报社写信一、写作要领本单元的写作要求是就某一社会问题写信给媒体陈述自己的观点和看法，此类信件一般遵循以下步骤和原则：1．首段：陈述事实，表明写作意图和反映的问题。2．主体段：写明要谈论或陈述的具体内容。要求文字简明达意，层次分明，字迹清楚。3．末段：表明自己的观点和态度并提出建议。二、增分佳句1．I’mwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...2．I’dliketosuggestthat...3．Itseemstomethat...4．Ibelieveitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...5．Ihopeyou’lltakemyadviceintoaccount.6．Inmyopinion...7．I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.8．Willyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?[题目要求]假设你是Sam，上周买了一本英汉词典，发现有质量以及服务问题，要求更换，但遇到麻烦，因此你想用英文给《二十一世纪英文报》报社编辑写信反映情况。词数100个左右。信中要点：1．书页缺少，印刷错误影响阅读理解。2．要求更换，但书店工作人员态度差，拒绝更换，否认质量问题。3．希望报社呼吁服务行业提高服务质量。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1．确定体裁：本文为书信；2．确定人称：本文主要人称应为第一人称；3．确定时态：叙述购物经历用一般过去时，表达观点用一般现在时。二、构思第一部分，向报社反映你去书店买字典的遭遇，表明你的意图。第二部分，介绍你在书店购物的经过和发现的问题。n第三部分，表达你的观点和看法，并提出合理的建议。第二步：核心词汇想周全1．complain_about　　　　　　　抱怨2．turn_down_one’s_request拒绝某人的请求3．It_is_clear_that很显然4．be_harmful_to对……有害5．be_of_low_quality质量差6．have_an_effect_on对……造成影响7．as_we_all_know众所周知8．call_for要求9．do_everything_we_can_to_do尽一切可能做某事10．protect_one’s_rights_and_interests保护某人的权利和利益11．look_forward_to盼望，期盼12．fail_to_achieve_the_standard没能达到标准第三步：由词扩句雏形现1．我写信是为表达对一家书店及其服务的抱怨。I_am_writing_to_complain_about_a_bookstore_and_its_service.2．到家后仔细读这本书，我发现缺少了好几页。(用状语从句翻译)After_I_reached_home_and_read_it_carefully,_I_found_several_pages_were_missing.3．那家书店的店员粗鲁地拒绝了我的请求。The_staff_of_the_bookstore_turned_down_my_request_rudely.4．无论店员怎么说，但字典的质量差而且服务不好是很明显的。No_matter_what_the_staff_says,_it_is_clear_that_the_dictionary_is_of_low_quality_and_the_service_is_worse.5．这已经影响了我，而且也会对其他顾客造成损害。It_has_had_an_effect_on_me_and_will_be_harmful_to_the_other_consumers.6．但是一些服务不能达到标准，而且店员素质需要提高。But_some_services_fail_to_achieve_the_standard_and_the_quality_of_the_staff_needs_to_be_improved.7．我们应当尽一切可能来维护消费者的权力和利益。We_should_do_everything_we_can_to_protect_the_consumers’_rights_and_interests.n8．我盼望着在你们的报纸上能看到更多的关于服务改善方面的文章。I_look_forward_to_reading_more_articles_about_improvement_of_service_in_your_newspaper.第四步：句式升级造亮点1．用分词作状语的句式改写句2Having_reached_home_and_read_it_carefully,_I_found_several_pages_were_missing.2．用which引导的非限制性定语从句连接句4和句5No_matter_what_the_staff_says,_it_is_clear_that_the_dictionary_is_of_low_quality_and_the_service_is_worse,_which_has_had_an_effect_on_me_and_will_be_harmful_to_the_other_consumers.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear_editor，I_am_writing_to_complain_about_a_bookstore_and_its_service._Last_week_I_bought_an_EnglishChinese_dictionary_in_a_bookstore_near_my_home._Having_reached_home_and_read_it_carefully,_I_found_several_pages_were_missing._So_I_went_to_the_bookstore_to_require_for_a_replacement._However,_the_staff_of_the_bookstore_turned_down_my_request_rudely.No_matter_what_the_staff_says,_it_is_clear_that_the_dictionary_is_of_low_quality_and_the_service_is_worse,_which_has_had_an_effect_on_me_and_will_be_harmful_to_other_consumers._As_we_all_know,_today’s_market_calls_for_better_service._But_some_services_fail_to_achieve_the_standard_and_the_quality_of_the_staff_needs_to_be_improved.We_should_do_everything_we_can_to_protect_the_consumers’_rights_and_interests.I_look_forward_to_reading_more_articles_about_improvement_of_service_in_your_newspaper.Yours_faithfully，SamInourcity,theunemploymentratewashighandsomepeoplewerelivinginpoverty.Somewereinheavydebtandlivedapainfullife.Theydemandedthatthegovernmentshouldanalysethecurrentsituationandmakesomesuitablereforms.nAftercarefulconsideration,thegovernmentannouncedthattheywouldattempttosolvetheproblem.Theysetupseveralcorporationswhichemployedpeoplewhowereoutofwork.Aftersometime,thecorporationsmadegreatprofit.Allthecitizenswereinfavourofthegovernment’saction.Theytookpositiveattitudetothegovernment.Aneditorfromthelocalnewspaperpublishedanarticlewhichreportedthewholeprocessoftheincident.Someofficialsmadegreatcontributionstoourcity.Weweredelightedtoconcludefromthismatterthatnothingisdifficultaslongasthegovernmentisresponsible.Weshouldshowrespectforourgovernmentandhavebeliefinit.在我们的城市里失业率很高，一些人生活在贫穷当中。一些人有繁重的债务，过着令人痛苦的生活。他们要求政府分析当前的情况并进行适当的改革。经过仔细的考虑之后，政府宣布他们将会尝试解决这一问题。他们成立了几家公司，这些公司雇用失去工作的人。一段时间之后，这些公司取得了巨大的利润。所有市民都赞同政府的行动。他们对政府持积极的态度。来自当地报纸的一名编辑发表了一篇文章，文章报道了这一事件的整个过程。一些官员对我们的城市做出了巨大的贡献。从这一事件我们很高兴地得出以下结论：只要我们的政府负责任，没有什么事情是困难的。我们应该尊重我们的政府并且对之有信心。