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2012年：假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：1.参加英语角的益处；2.坚持写英语日记的作用；3・英文阅读网站(EnjoyReading)对你的帮助。注意：1.词数：120-150；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Asahighschoolstudent,IEnglishaveryimportantsubject.Inordertolearnitwell,Englishclass,,mealot.IntheEnglishcorner,Imeetmanyfriends,・Besides,sometimes,someforeignersaregladtojoinus.,myoralEnglishimprovedalot.Ialso・IkeepondoingittheseyearsanditishelpfultomyEnglish・Asasayinggoes,practicemakesperfect.bypracticewillwemakemoreprogress・Finally,somegoodEnglishstudywebsitesmyimprovement.Throughthesewebsites,1canreadsomeclassicEnglishpassages,poemsandstories.Whafsmore,Icanlearnsomelearningskillsandmethodologies,・Allinall,everyroadleadstoRoma,butIbelievehardworkpaysoff.【命题透视】今年的写作难度平稳，秉承了“让学生有话说”的原则，学生写起来并不觉得无话可说，但是要想写好并不是很容易。首先必须要有逻辑性，这三个要点必须条理清楚地都列出来；其次里面的某些词句和句型要表达正确，运用恰当的句型，而且注意衔接词的使用。只有这样，才能写出流畅地道的文章。一•句式提升1.我认为英语是一门重要的学科。consider句式・其它的表达形式(把…看作/认为…)consider的其它用法：2.除了英语课，我积极参加英语角和其它的一些英语课外活动，这让我受益匪浅。定语从句式非谓语句式3・我遇到了很多和我有共同兴趣、爱好的朋友。定语从句式4.通过和他们交谈，我的口语提高了很多。by句式Only+by句式5•我也发现写英语日记是很有用的。\n6•而且，我能学到一些学习技巧和方法，这些都在我的学习过程中起着重要的作用。而且的表达形式定语从句式二.过渡语除此之外正如一句谚语所说的最后而且总之英语写作十字真经：研习、背诵、默写、互译、模仿教师点拨：认真模仿之后才有自我的升华！B写作提升篇在校园的学习生活中，同学之间既是竞争对手，也是一起学习、互相帮助的伙伴。请结合自身经历，谈谈你认为在学习中是竞争还是合作起更大的作用？教师参考答案：A范文Asahighschoolstudent,IconsiderEnglishaveryimportantsubjectInordertolearnitwell,apartfromEnglishclass，ItookanactivepartinEnglishcornerandotherafter-classEnglishactivities,whichbenefitmealo仁IntheEnglishcorner,Imeetmanyfriends,whosharethesameinterestwithme.Besides,sometimes,someforeignersaregladtojoinus.Bytalkingwiththem,myoralEnglishimprovedalotIalsofinditusefultokeepEnglishdiaries.IkeepondoingittheseyearsanditishelpfultomyEnglish*Asasayinggoes,practicemakesperfectOnlybypracticewillwemakemoreprogress.Finally,somegoodEnglishstudywebsitescontributealottomyimprovement.Throughthesewebsites,IcanreadsomeclassicEnglishpassages,poemsandstories.What'smore,Icanlearnsomelearningskillsandmethodologies,whichplayanimportantpartinmystudyprocess.Allinall,everyroadleadstoRoma,butIbelievehardworkpaysoff.一•句式提升LIconsiderEnglishaveryimportantsubjecttake/vievv/see/regard/lookon/referto/thinkof--tobe/as\nconsiderdoing考虑…considersbtohavedone—・adjconsiderate体贴的，考虑周到的；nconsideration考虑prepconsidering鉴于，考虑到2.,apartfromEnglishclass,ItookanactivepartinEnglishcornerandotherafter-classEnglishactivities,whichbenefitmealot>•benefitingmealot.3.Imeetmanyfriends,whosharethesameinterestwithme.4.Bytalkingwiththem,myoralEnglishimprovedalot.OnlybytalkingwiththemdidmyoralEnglishimprovedalot5.1alsofinditusefultokeepEnglishdiaries*类似用法的词：think/make/feel/consider™6.Whafsmore,Icanlearnsomelearningskillsandmethodologies,whichplayanimportantpartinmystudyprocess.而且的表达形式：what'smore/besides/moreover/furthermore/inaddition…二.过渡语除此之外whafsmore/besides/moreover/furthermore/inaddition™正如一句谚语所说的Asasayinggoes最后finally/intheend/atlast而且whafsmore/besides/moreover/furthermore/inaddition™‘总之allinall/inconclusion/inbrief/inshort/inaworld/inanutshell/toconcludeB篇EversinceIwaslittle,Ihavealwayslovedcompetitionandteamwork.WhenIreachedhighschool,IcouldthinkofnothingbetterthancompetingintheScienceOlympiadteamandcombiningmypassionforlearningwithmydesiretocompete.However,Isoonrealizedthatitwasmuchmorethanateam.Itwasafamily.TheeldersnotonlyinspiredmebyrelatingsciencetolifebutalsomentoredmethroughthedifficulttransitiontohighschooLInmyfirstcompetitionIendedupwithadisappointingscore.Aseniorcameuptomeandtoldmetherewasalwaysanotherchance.Icamebacknextyearandwontwomedals.Thisyear,Iwaschosentobethevicepresidentandnowitismyturntodirecttheyoungerstudentstowardsscience.Iwouldarguethatteamworkismoreimportantthancompetition*