上海中考真题范文初中英语作文 10页

上海中考英语备考训练上海中考英语备考训练：写作一，一等文要求，1,结构三段式：第一段：简单明了，开门见山。如我们想表达小强很强壮，直接说XQisextremelystrong.观点明确，一句足矣。第二段：分析为什么他强壮。A.每天吃10顿饭，Hehastenmealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。B.每天运动2小时，Hedoesexercise2hoursaday详举做了什么运动。第三段：结论，与第一段呼应，但不能完全照，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,HowstrongandrobustXQis!Ihopetobehimoneday!2,内容和要点:话题topic必须符合题意，提示的要点必须写全，一个都不能漏写。确定主题、要点是要发表观点，还是举出例子。如果有具体提示，写作就等于翻译，把提示内容变换句式翻译到位，全面切题。如果没有提示，自已提炼，找到主题，跟主旨无关的话不要写。3,逻辑合理：递进：first,second,third,finally,tobeginwith,firstofall,inaddition,what'smore,moreover,ontheonehand,ontheotherhand,thelastbutnottheleast。转折：but,yet,however,asfarasIamconcerned,inthemeantime总结：inaword,allinall,inconclusion4,语法和亮点：单词拼读和语法必须准确，不可以有错误。在此基础上，用几个有难度的词汇，编几个高级的句型。一般词汇和简单句型要限量用，不可占字太多。二，三段十句话：1,三段布局：高考作文题型多样，有命题作文和材料作文。材料作文是根据给出的书面材料，按要求作文。话题主要三方面：学生学习生活，学生日常生活，社会热点现象。无论哪种文体：记叙文、议论文，夹叙夹议文，应用文、说明文、图片描述文都可以用三段法：引入，具体，结尾。记叙文：A.背景介绍：时间、地点、人物、事件。B.故事发展经过结果。C.结局和感受。议论文：A.发表观点。B.论据理由。C.结论呼应论点。图片文：A.描述图片内容，提炼观点。B.论据理由。C.结论呼应论点。日记写法同一般记叙文或议论文。通知，书信，演讲稿在引入部分写话题，意图，主题；在具体部分写活动要求，具体内容，观点陈述；在结尾部分写活动时间、地点、联系方式、结语、总结、希望或号召。2,十句成篇：Passage1,1)Topic话题2)Thesis论点Passage2,10/10\n上海中考英语备考训练1)Transition过渡句2)Argument1论据110/10\n上海中考英语备考训练1)Detail1论据1的支持句2)Argument2论据23)Detail2论据2的支持句4)Argument3论据35)Detail3论据3的支持句Passage36)Conclusion总结以上为议论文的三段十句结构。根据具体情况可调整加减。其它文体在此基础上略作修改即可。三，具体各类题型写法：1,描述图片类：P1图片描述，图片主旨。P2过渡句加论据和支持句。视字数调整论据和支持句个数。P3总结。2,夹叙夹议文：写法1,P1话题记叙或描述。P2观点或感想，写2个论据和2个支持句。P3总结。写法2,P1话题和观点。P2事件起因、经过、结果以证明论点。P3总结说明事件，再次证明话题和论点。写法3,P1回忆记述事件。P2感受、观点。P3总结。3,两主旨议论文：有时需要写两个主旨，如第一个为什么喜欢读书，另一个喜欢读什么书。或第一个水为什么珍贵，另一个怎么节约水。可以分成两大部分写：P1话题、一个论据和支持句。P2过渡句、另一个论据和支持句。P3总结4,建议型议论文：写法1,倾向建议：提出一个问题，简单说明该问题，并针对此问题给出多个建议：P1写信目的，一个问题。P2针对这个问题若干建议。P3总结希望。写法2,问题建议并重：提出两个问题，然后给出相应的两条建议：P1写信目的。P2提两个问题并说明。P3针对两问题给两建议。写法3,倾向于问题：提出一个问题，详细阐述问题并分析原因，结尾给出一个建议。P1写信目的。P2提出一个问题，原因及危害等。P3建议、总结。5,说明文和纯事实新闻报导：同纯记叙文，不涉及议论，只将起因、经过、结果写清即可。重事实轻情义。四，写作四步骤：1,审题：主题，体裁，人称，时态，内容要点。在试卷中画出要点。2,框架：打草稿：一定要打草稿，正式写作再梳理锤炼。3,成文：一要凝练，二要变化。使用过渡词、从句、不同句型和词组搭配。4,检查：内容要点，语法错误。名词查单复数和冠词，动词查时态语态和主谓一致。变换句式：不用过于简单的结构。总之：认真审题，提炼要点；紧扣主题，扩词成句；表述准确，连句成文；通篇检查，确保无误。五，英文文章开头有两种可以选择：1,每段开头空两格，四或五个字符，段落之间不空行。标题和文章问不用空行。2,每段开头顶格写，段落之间空行。标题和文章问不用空行。两种都可以，但是空格与不空格不能混用，第一种用的比较多。上海中考英语写作训练：真题范文10/10\n上海中考英语备考训练2018VI.Writing（作文）（共20分）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic"Myprogress以进步了”为题，写一信不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）你在生活或导习中一定取得过不少进步，比如生活枝能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成。请选取其中一个方面，结合自身经历，谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的。（注意:文文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly（以下表达仅供参考）usedtodo/be…trymybesttodo…makeprogressin（doing）…MyProgressIusedtobepoorinEnglish,especiallyinspeakingEnglishasIwastooshytoopenmymouth.ThingshavebeenchangedsinceIhadanewEnglishteacherwhowasverykindandtoldmethecorrectwaytolearnEnglish.Withhisencouragement,Igainedconfidenceandbegantospeakalittle.Inthemeantime,IspentmoretimeinEnglishlearningandtrymybesttoimprovemyEnglish.IlistenedtoEnglishbroadcastingandimitatedthepronunciation.IalsowenttoEnglishCornertopracticemyspokenEnglishwithforeignerseverySunday.Stepbystep,IhavemadesubstantialprogressinlearningEnglish.NotonlycanIreadEnglishnovelsnow,butalsoIcanspeakEnglishfluently.Asaproverbsays,“Nothingisdifficultifyouputyourheartinit."I'myprogress.2017VII.Writing（作文）（共20分）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“There'salwayshope（以常怀希望”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）面临困惑的时候、经历变化的时候、感觉挫败的时候、遭遇逆境的时候……来自内心的坚持、他人的帮助、社会的关爱和科技的发展等，总能让人常怀希望。请选取一个方面谈谈你的理解（可结合自身或他人的经历）。Thefollowingisforreferenceonly（以下表达仅供参考）getoutofdifficultygive…ahandneverlosehopeThere'sAlwaysHopeDifficultiesandfailuresareunavoidableinourlives,However,Ibelievetherealwayshopeaslongasyoudon'tgiveup.IusedtobepoorinEnglish.Thegrammar,thevocabulary,thepronunciationandwritingwerecontinuouslytorturingme.Ialmostlostmyheartandthoughtaboutgivingup.Luckily,Imetagoodteacherwhowassokindthathespenthourshelpingmetocorrectmymistakesandteachingmeexcellentmethods.Healwaysgavemegenerouspraiseforanyminorprogressofmine.Withhisencouragement,Igainedconfidenceandtriedmybesttoovercomeallthedifficulties.Daybyday,Ihavemadesubstantialprogress.NotonlycanIreadEnglishnovelsnow,butalsoIcanspeakEnglishfluently.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway."Nomatterho、difficultthingsseemtobe,let'scherishhopeandnevergiveup.2016Writing（作文）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic『mready"（以我准备好了”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）你对明天一定有着美好的憧憬.为此，你已经做好了哪方面的准备？请结合你的经历或特长等，选取一个角度具体谈谈你是如何做准备的.（independentbegoodatresponsibletakepartinhardworkingithelpsmeto…I'mReadyWhenIwasyoung,mymotherusuallyreadbooksformeassoonasshehadtime.IwasattractedbythefascinatingworldofstoriessoImadeadeterminationtobecomeawriter.Toachievethedream,Ihavebeendoingmybestallthetime.Firstofall,IpaygreatattentiontomyCompositionclasses.Furthermore,Ijoinschoolwritinggroupandtakepartinwritingcontest,which10/10\n上海中考英语备考训练makesmepracticealotinwriting.Lastbutnottheleast,Ikeepconnectionwithafamouswriterwhohelpsmetoimprovemywritingabilitysubstantially.Allinall,throughhardworkingIamgoodatwritingnow.HowhappyIwillbewhenmybooksthatwillenrichchildren'slifearepublishedsomeday!Ihopemydreamwillcometrue.I'mready.I'mreadyIalwayssaytomyself:"I'mready!"beforeacompetitionoraspeech,thoughitseemsthatIwillneverbereadyforthemabsolutely."Iamready!",whichmakesmesoconfidentthatIcanpayallofmyattentiontowhatIdoefficiently.Ofcourse,asasayingsays:Practicemakesperfect.Essentialpreparationisnecessary.Weshouldmakeeveryefforttoprepareforwhatwedo.Saytoourselves:'I'm「eadditwillhelpusplayourbestcard!2015Writing（作文）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Iwanttoinvent（以我想要发明"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）（注意：1、在答题纸上将题目补充完整。2、短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.以下表达仅供参考）Itcanbeusedto11willbeexciting/necessary/helpfulto…IWanttoInventaFamilyRobotDoctorIwanttoinventafamilyrobotdoctorbecauseitisveryhelpfultous.Firstofall,afamilyrobotcancure川nessesforpeopleathomeimmediatelyafteryoufeelsickorgethurt,whichisveryconvenientandefficient,especiallyinemergencysituations.What'smoreaaknow,nowadayshospitalsarealwaysoccupiedbypatientswhoareanxioustobetakencareassoonaspossible,sofamilyrobotdoctorscanreducethepressureofhospitalandalleviatethepatients'aiLastbutnottheleast,withthehelpofarobotdoctor,peoplecangetdulyadviceforhealthydietandliveabetterlife.Inaword,afamilyrobotdoctorissubstantiallyusefulforoursociety.Inordertoachievemydreamofinventingafamilyrobotdoctor,Iwilldomybestandlearnhard.IWantToInventAFamilyDoctorRobotIwanttoinventafamilydoctorrobot,whichcanbeusedtocurethe川nesswithoutgoingoutoftheirhome.AsfarasI'mconcerned,itwillbeextremelyhelpfulandusefulbecauseofthefollowingreasons:First,youcanseethedoctorimmediatelyathomewhenyoufeelsickorgethurt.Itcansaveusalotoftime,especiallyinemergencysituations.Furthermore,hospitalstodayarealwaysfilledwithpatients,noteveryonecanbetakengoodcareof.However,withthehelpofourrobotdoctors,youcantalktoyourpersonaldoctoronetoonewheneveryouwant.Inshort,familydoctorrobotscanmakegreatcontributiontooursociety.IwanttoinventatimemachineAsastudentwhoisexperiencingunprecedentedmodernlifenowadays,Iwouldratherlearnaboutthehistoryandthefuturelifeofhumanbeingfromarealexperiencethanlearnfromatextbook.That'swhyifIcanworkasagreatinventor,inventingatimemachinewillbemyfirstchoice.ThemostimportantusageofmytimemachinewillbevisitingoneofbestschoolsinTangDynasty.Asweallknow,TangDynastyisfamousforitsopen-mindededucation.Therefore,whenIvisittheschooloftheancientcity,Icannotonlytrydifferentwaysofstudyingbutcommunicatewithpeoplefrom10/10\n上海中考英语备考训练differentcountriesaswell.Usingatimemachineisthemostvividwaytolearnhistoryasitisbotharecordofmankindandamirrorofpast,Iamlookingforwardtothedaywhenmytimemachinecomesout..2014.Writing（作文）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Thistimenextyear'以明年此时”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）你是否想象过，明年此时，你的生活会发生怎样的变化？你对自己或他人有怎样的期待？你能为此做些什么？）Thefollowingsentencepatternsareforreferenceonly.（以下句型仅供参考）Ihopeto/Ihopethat...PerhapsIwill...Itwillbeexciting/necessary/terribleto...ThisTimeNextYearItisexcitingtoimaginewhatIwillbethistimenextyear.LifeischangeableandIwillbedifferent.First,I'llbeaseniorstudentnextyear.IreallyhopeIcanachieireaimandattendmyfavoritehighschool.Furthermore,IwillgetmanynewfriendswithwhomIwillspendmypreciousmoments.PerhapsIcantakepartinasummercampabroadasmyEnglishwillbegoodenoughtocommunicatewithforeigners.Ofcourse,torealizethewishes,hardworkingisstillnecessaryforme.Finally,itishightimethatIshouldhelpmymotherwithmorehousework.Anyway,Iwillbebetter,kinderandmorediligentthistimenextyear.Letmelookforwardtoit.ThistimenextyearIt'sexcitingtoimaginewhatthehappylifewillbelike.Atthistimenextyear,Iwillbeaseniorhighstudent,andIwillmakealotofnewfriends.IhopetobemoreindependentsothatperhapsIwillbetakingpartinasummercampabroadtoimprovemyspokenEnglish.AlsoIwillhelpmyparentsdohouseworkinordertoknowhowtotakecareofmyselfwhenIamalone.Lifewillbetotallydifferent,butI'mreallylookingforwardtoit.ThistimenextyearLifeischangeable,andthat'swhyeveryonelongsforthefuture,whichisfullofchallengeaswellashope.PerhapsIwillhaveachievedmygoalthistimenextyear,studyinginaseniorhighschool.Despitethat,diligencewillbestillneededtomakemyselfgofurtherinEnglish.Basically,itisimportanttoconcentrateinclassandtakenotescarefully.Then,IwillbenefitfromreadingEnglishbooks.Whatismore,goingabroadisofgreatuseinimprovingmyoralEnglish.OnlyinthiswaycanIprogressinEnglishendlessly.MakeplansandgoforwhatIwant.AndIbelievewhenthechallengeiscoming,thehopeisalsoaroundthecorner.2013Writing（作文）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Howtoprotectmyself（如何保护自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示：自我保护是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。请谈谈你在生活中怎样进行自我保护（合结合生活中的某一个情景或具体事例，如：面对灾难如何自救，如何预防受骗或侵害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等）。Phrasesforreference；以下短语仅供参考）：Ask-forhelpcalmdownindangerprevent...FromHowtoProtectMyselfLifeisprecious.ProtectingmyselfisthemostimportantthingtodowhenIamindanger.Thenifanearthquakehitsmycity,whatcanIdotoprotectmyself?Firstofall,Imustcalmdown10/10\n上海中考英语备考训练aspanicisofnohelp.Second,Ishouldtrytorunoutinsteadofhidinginabuilding.TakingliftisprohibitedduringanearthquakeandwhatIcanonlydoiswalkingdownstairs.Inthemeantime,Ishouldbeawareofthefallingobjectstoavoidbeinghit.Finally,ifIstillhavedifficultiesinescapingIcancryoutandaskothersforhelp.Inconclusion,whenadisastercomesIshouldcalmmyselfdownandmanagetosurvive.HowtoprotectmyselfAsastudent,Ithinkitimportantformetoprotectmyselffromdangeroussituations.Firstofall,Imustcalmdownassoonaspossible,forpanickingisofnohelp.Then,asisknowtoall,calling119immediatelyisthemosteffectivewaytosavemyself.Awellasthat,itisbesttotakethestairsinsteadofelevators.Inconclusion,withpositiveattitudeandsufficientpreparations,Iwillbeabletoprotectmyselffromfires.HowtoprotectmyselfEveryoneinmyfamilywasawakedbytheunusualshaking.Thefirstwordthatcametomymindwasearthquake.WhenIlookedoutsideofthewindow,Ifoundeveryonerunninghereandthere,andIcouldheartheshoutingfromtheneighbors.DespitethefactthatIwasindanger,Itoldmyselftocalmdownandthinkaboutthewaystoprotectmyselfinanearthquake.Ishouldgetoutsideinsteadofhidinginsidethebuilding.Icouldntheliftbutwalkdownstairs.NosoonerhadIgotoutsidethanIaskedthepoliceforhelp.AndIshouldalwaysbeawareoftheunexpecteddropoverhead.Followingtheseways,Imanagedtopreventmyselffrombeinghurt,andsurvivedtheearthquake.Ibelievethattheseareusefulwaystoprotectmyselfinanearthquake.2012Writing（作文）：Writealetterinatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信）SupposeyouareJoe.YourfriendBettyisupsetaboutacomingexamforshecarestoomuchabouttheresult.Whatdoyouthink?Trytoofferhersomeadvice.假如你是Joe,你的好朋友Betty因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。请给她写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。）May1,2018DearBetty,Regretknowingthatyouareespeciallyanxiousaboutthecomingexam.IfullyunderstandyouasIwasonceinthesamesituation.Iwouldliketogiveyousomeadvice.First,pleasebreathedeeplywhenyoufeelworried,whichcanhelpyoucalmdown.Second,trytosparesometimetotakepartinrecreationalactivitiessuchaswalking,runningorchattingwithfriends.Thiscanalleviatethepressureandrefillyouwithenoughenergy.Third,consultyourteacheraboutyourproblemsandtrytopreparetheexamefficiently.Inaword,anxietyisofnohelp,letusfocusontheprocessinsteadoftheresult.Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,JoeKnowingthatyoucaretoomuchabouttheresult,Iamquiteworried.Actually,itisnousebeingupsetdespitetheimportanceoftheresult.Therearesomeeffectivewaystocalmdown.Aboveall,keepingremindingyourselftostayinpeaceisthemosthelpful.Besides,itwillhelpyoutorelaxifyousparesometimeforrecreationalactivitieslikesports.Finally,10/10\n上海中考英语备考训练talktoyourparentsandfriends,whoarealwaysreadytocomfortyou.AsissaidbySteveJobs,“thejourneyisthereward."Iamsureyouwillgetthroughthissituation.2011Writing（作文）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"I'mamemberof（以我是••…的一员”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格子”提示：你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的一员，或者作为家庭，班级，社区额的一员，写出你的经历，感受等。UsethefollowingpointsasareferenceAreyougladtobeamemberof?Whatdoyoudoinit?Howdoyoufeelassuchamember?I'maMemberofaReadingClubIamgladtobeamemberofareadingclubbecausereadingismyhobbyandtakingpartintheclub'sactivrtiesggeaiisDleasure.Intheclub,themembersreadtogetherandshareopinionsaboutbookseveryweekend.Sometimeswegotomountains,riversorparkstohaveoutdoorreadingmeeting,whichbringsusrelaxationsandexercises.Wealsoinvitefamouswriterstomakespeechesabouttheirworks,fromwhomwelearnhowtowrite.Beingamemberoftheclub,Ifeelveryhappy.AfterIjoinedtheclub,notonlyhaveIreadmanyexcellentbooks,butalsoIhavemadeafewgoodfriendswhohavethesameinterestswithme.Asanoldsayinggoes."Readingmakespeoplemoreintelligent."Thereadingcluenrichesmylifeandbenefitmealot.IamamemberofreadingclubWhenIwasonlyalittlegirl,Itookupreadingasmyhobby.NowI'mamemberofareadingclub.I'mverygladaboutit.Allofthemembersshareourownbookswitheachother.Evenifwereadthebooksfrommorningtillnight,wenevergettiredofreading.Weenjoyourselvesallthetime.Inmyopinion,readingistothemindwhatexerciseistothebody.Tobesuchamembermakesmylifemoreandmorecolorful.2010Writing（作文）：Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic'I'mproudofmyself.（以我为自己感到自豪”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分）Usethefollowingpointsisareference.（以下内容仅供参考）Whatkindofpersonareyou?Whatmakesyouproudofyourself?（Giveanexample/examples.）Whyareyouproudofyourself?I'mproudofmyselfIusedtobequietgirlandspeakalittleinmyclass.Iwanttochangemycharacterandbecomeabitoutgoing.HowcanIbegin?Igotanideaofsettingupareadingclubformyschool.Ontheonehand,Icanspeakmoreandbeactivethroughthework,ontheotherhand,Icandosomethingbenefittingmyclassmates.Asanoldsayinggoes,“ActionismoreimportantthanFdest,Isummonedsomeclassmateswhotakeupreadingashobbylikemetogether.Second,Iaskmyteacherforhelpandpreparedaschedulefortheclub.Third,wehadatrialreadingmeetingtoseehowweshouldgoon.Stepbystep,areadingclubwassetupinmyschool,wherewecanreadtogetherandgetnewfriend.Duringtheexperience,mycharacterhasbeenchangedalot.Iovercamemyshynessandbecamebravetospeak.10/10\n上海中考英语备考训练IamproudofmyselfbecausenotonlycanIspeakinpublicnow,butalsoIsetupareadingclubformyschool.2009IX.Writing（（乍文）:Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool以"我也为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.以下内容仅供参考）Whatdoyouwanttodoforyourschool?Whydoyouwanttodoit?Howareyougoingtodoit?IWanttoDoSomethingforMySchoolIlovemyschool.Ilovemyteachersandclassmates.Iwanttosetupareadingclubformyschool.Ilikereading,sodomanystudentsinmyschool.Ifwehaveareadingclub,wecanreadtogetherandshareideasaboutbooks.Wecanalsohavereadingactivitiessuchasreadingmeetingorspeechcontestwhichcanenrichourschoollife.Then,howamIgoingtobegin?First,Iwillsummonsomeclassmateswiththesameinterestandaskmyteacherforhelp.Second,Iwillmakeascheduleandlisttheactivitieswhichwemayhavefordiscussion.Third,wecantryholdingareadingmeetingintheclubandgetsomeexperiencefromit.Anyway,throughhardworking,thereadingclubwillbesetupstepbystep.Iwillbeproudofmyselfformycontributiontotheschool.2008X.Writing作文）:Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“AStoryaboutMyParent（s）”以（爸爸/妈妈的故事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文）AstoryaboutmyparentMymotherisakeyboardoperator.Sheisverykindanddiligent.Shegetsupearlytocookforthefamilyeverymorningandoftenworkslateatnight.OneSunday,mymothertookmeandoneofmyfriendstoDisneyland.Tiredandhungry,wewerelookingforarestaurantafterhavingsomeentertainmentsatnoon.Whilewechildrenwererestinginourseats,mymotherstoodinalongline.Finallywegotfoodandateeagerlybutmymotherhadnothingtoeatbecausethelimitationofquantitiesonlyallowedhertobuytwomeals.Withsweatsrunningdownherface,shesmiledandsaid:"I'mnothungry.”Iwasdeeplymovedbyheraction.Motheralwaystakescareofmelikethis.Herselflesslovealwayslightsupmywaylikeabeacon.2007X.Writing作文）：Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“ThingsIHatetoDo（以我不喜欢……为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.Whatarethethingsthatyouhatetodo?Whatdoyouhatedoingmost?Why?（Giveatleasttworeasons.）ThingsIHatetoDoMostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.Forexample,Ihatetoeatfish,whichmymothersaysisgoodtohealth.Ihatetogetupearly.Ihatetohaveclassesatweekend.ThethingIhatedoingmostistakingclassesatweekend.Firstofall,Ihavealreadyfivedaysaweekatschool,Idon'tknowwhyIcanrHaXhavearestandmyselfatweekends.What'smore,myparentsmustpayalargeamountofmoneyfortheclasses.Howfunitisiftheyusethemoneyfortakingmetravelling!Finally,takingclassesatweekendmakesmetiredsothatIoftensleepinclassesonMonday.Ihopemyparentschangetheirideaandgivememorefreetime.10/10\n上海中考英语备考训练2006XI.Writing（写话）：Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“IHaveaDream'.（以我有一个梦想”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Sentencepatternsforreference（以下句型仅供参考）♦♦♦♦♦♦♦♦Mydreamistobe…/todo…,/togojoy/•like/prefer…Tomakemydreamcometrue,I,Ifmydreamcomestrue,…IHaveaDreamWhenIwasveryyoung,mymotheralwaysreadbooksforme.Iusedtobedeeplyattachedbytheastonishingstories.Atthattime,Ihadadream.Iwanttobeawriterforchildren.Tomakemydreamcometrue,Ihavebeenkeepingwritingdiaryandreadingalargequantitiesofbooks,whichmakesmemasterthebasicskillsofwriting.Inthemeantime,IjoinawritingclubwhereIcansharemyworkswithothersandexchangeopinionsaboutwriting.Thelastbutnottheleast,Ikeepconnectionwithafamouswriter,whooftengiveshisadviceforme.Throughmyhardworking,mywritingabilityhasbeenimprovedsubstantially.Ifmydreamcomestrue,Iwillpaymoreattentiontochildren'slifeinordertowritetheirfavoritebooks.Iamlookingforwardtothatday.2005Writing（写话）：Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Growingpainsandgains”.Thepicturesbelowareforyourreferenceonly.（以成长的烦恼与欢乐”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）GrowingpainsandgainsEveryone'slifeshapsanddowns.Wealllavepainsandgainsingrowing2004Writing（写话）：（共10分）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“LeavingSchool”以（毕业时分”为题写话。词数不少于60个，标点符号不占格）:Suggestedpoints:oldschoollife,teacher（s）andschoolmate（s）,futureplanLeavingSchoolInafewdays,IwillgraduatefrommyjuniormiddleschoolwhereIhavestudiesforthreeyears.Atthismoment,Iamfilledwithallsortsoffeelingswithhappiness,anxietyandenvisionalltogether.IamhappyformygraduationandlookforwardtomyseniorhighschoollifewhileIamreluctanttoapartfrommyoldteachersandschoolmates.IamoverwhelmedwithlongingforthoseinnocentdayswhichIspentwithmyfriendsinthepastyears.IwillneverforgetmyEnglishteacher.ItishimwhogavemeencouragementthatmademegainconfidenceinlearningEnglish.Itishimwhoalwayssparedhourstohelpmecorrectmymistakes.Inthefuture,Iwillworkharderandtrymybesttohavebetterperformance.Iwillgetnewfriendsandcherishfriendship.Anyway,beingkinder,betterandmorediligentismypurpose.10/10