中考英语作文专题复习指导培训课件 34页

Writing中考作文指导\nLearningaims:学会作文审题，根据所给要点构建文章结构。2.能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连词成句。3.通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分等学会组句成篇。\n\nHowcanwewriteagoodcomposition(作文)?\n第一步：都要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition?(Haveadiscussion!)具体做法：用笔勾画\n假如你是王林。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(HelpingHandsClub)”将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封自荐信。姓名王林性别男本人特点身体健康；学习刻苦；乐于助人；与同学友好相处“爱心”表现（见图片）加入目的1.…2.…1.\n要求：1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；2.要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等；3.表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟；4.词数：70左右。\n第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏要点！\nWriteanOutlineIntroductionMainbodyConclusion{{Iwanttojoin…本人特点“爱心”表现加入目的看表格看表格看图自拟Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.可以用英文或中文姓名/性别易漏掉的要点！\n自荐信Whatwillyouwrite？王林Whoareyouinthisletter?人称:IWhat’syourpurpose?加入该俱乐部时态：一般现在时为主Thinking:\nDearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.I’dliketojointheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.Igetonwellwithmyclassmates.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.AndIcanalsodomoreforothers.扣分原因一词数不够！\nDearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.I’dliketojointheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.Igetonwellwithmyclassmates.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.AndIcanalsodomoreforothers.Introduction本人特点加入目的扣分原因二遗漏要点！\nWriteanOutlineIntroductionMainbodyConclusion{{Iamaboy…I’dliketojoin…本人特点“爱心”表加入目的Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.无法拿满分！\nDearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.I’dliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.IgetonwellwithmyclassmatesIfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.Besides,Icandomoreforothers.YoursWangLin少了两个重要部分，扣5-6分，只得9-10分！缺少“爱心”表现也缺少Conclusion\n“爱心”表现(examples)Picture1help…with…helpclassmateswithlessons我的Ioftenhelpclassmateswithlessons.看图\nPicture2help…cross…“爱心”表现(examples)看图helpoldpeoplecrosstheroadIhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroadonmywayhome.\nPicture3“爱心”表现(examples)看图givemyseatto…givemyseattopeopleinneedIoftengivemyseattopeopleinneedonabus.\n“爱心”表现(examples)看图Picture4cleanuptheparkhelpcleanuptheparkIoftenhelpcleanupthepark.\n“爱心”表现(examples)1.Ioftenhelpclassmateswithlessons.2.Ihelpoldpeoplecrosstheroadonmywayhome.3.Ioftengivemyseattopeopleinneedonabus.4.Ioftenhelpcleanupthepark.\nConclusionI’llbegladifIcanjointheclub.Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.\nDearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.I’dliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.IlikehelpingothersIgetonwellwithmyclassmates.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.Besides,Icandomoreforothers.YoursWangLinI’llbegladifIcanjointheclub.Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.andoftenhelpclassmateswiththeirlessons.Onmywayhome,Ioftenhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroad.Onabus,Ialwaysgivemyseattopeopleinneed.Sometimes,Ihelptocleanupthepark.不但要点完整了，词数也够了。\n写作：第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点第二步就是要列出写作提纲，根据段落整理写作要点。写作前：确定人称、时态写作后：？\nDearChairperson,Iamaboystudentfromclass1Grade9.I’dlikebeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardlyatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.andoftenhelpclassmateswiththeirlesson.Onmywayhome,Ioftenhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroad.Onabus,Ialwaysgavemyseattopeopleinneed.Sometimes,Ihelptocleanupthepark.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.Besides,hecandomoreforothers.I’llgladifIcanjointheclub.Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.YoursWangLinCtolessonsgiveIbe—1分其它六处错扣2分只得12分\n作文中应避免的几种常见语言错误：时态错误（扣分多，一个时态错误扣分在1分左右）。中国式的英语（不正确的英文表达会让整句不得分）。单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定要过关）。介词,代词，非谓语动词或形容词副词的不正确使用（对单词的词性要熟悉）。名词单复数（细心就可以避免的错）。\n写作：第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点第二步就是要列出写作提纲，根据段落整理写作要点。写作前：确定人称、时态写作后：检查\n另外作文中书写不规范，卷面不整洁也是要失分的（中考中有1—2分的卷面整洁分，这两分不能丢！）。解决方法：平时认真规范书写，少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。\nLet’spractice!\n你将代表学校参加扬州市中学生英语演讲比赛，演讲的题目是Learningtogetalongwithourparents.请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容要点如下。要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3）词数：100词左右（演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）4）不得使用真实姓名和校名等。现象经常跟父母发火，甚至几天不讲话原因1．父母过分关注分数2．我们……措施（不少于三点）1.我们应该和父母沟通2.我们……3.我们……\nLet’senjoyourowncompositions!\nSamplewritingGoodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen.Todaymytopicislearningtogetalongwithourparents.Thesedays,mostofusfeelitishardtogetalongwithourparents.Weeasilygetangryfornoreasonandevendon’ttalktothemfordays.Ithinkthecausesareasfollows.First,ourparentsonlycareaboutourmarksanditmakesusstressed.Second,weareunwillingtocommunicatewiththem.It’stimeforustochange.First，wecancommunicatewiththem,bysharingourjoysandworrieswiththem.Then,wecanhelpdosomehouseworktoshowourloveforthem.Finally,weshouldachieveabalancebetweenourschoolworkandhobbiessothattheywon’tfeelworriedaboutus.That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!\n抄组集连抓审作文组段成篇，加主题句审清题意，构建框架连词成句，变换句式抓住要点，列关键词Summary集句成段，添连接词抄写规范，避免错误\nHomeworkAfterclass,self-edityourowncompositions.\nSecretsoflearningEnglish:Practicemakesperfect.Hardworkleadstosuccess.\nThankyou!