初中英语写作课件 35页

一、题型与特点中考“书面表达”属于开放性的主观题，在命题中力求体现以下特点：①所选用的题材贴近考生生活和情感；②需要使用的语言材料是考生掌握的；③对字数的要求相对稳定（80左右）；④对语法不做过高要求；⑤通过文字说明或图画对考生所写内容进行限定，这类题型要求考生根据提示写出内容连贯、意思完整的短文。考生既要考虑人称、时态，还要考虑前后的联系，也给考生的发挥留下了很大的空间。\n典型病例名词的单复数问题主谓一致问题时态和语态问题Chinglish现象行文的逻辑性问题词类错用\n名词的单复数问题：1.Joyfoundtherewasmuchfishinthelake.2.Thewaterwassoclearthattheycouldseeallkindsoffish.3.Manyplaceareverydry.Joyfoundthereweremanyfishinthelake.Thewaterwassoclearthattheycouldseeallkindsoffishes.Manyplacesareverydry.\n时态和语态问题HermotherjumpedintothelakeandswimedtoJoy.AtlasthermothersavedJoy.Theywereallgotwet.2.Tom’smotherjumpedintothewater.Shesavesherdaughteratlast.3.OnTreePlantingDay,manytreesplantedinYonganPark.HermotherjumpedintothelakeandswamtoJoy.AtlasthermothersavedJoy.Theyallgotwet.OnTreePlantingDay,manytreeswereplantedinYonganPark.Tom’smotherjumpedintothewater.Shesavedherdaughteratlast.4.The29thOlympicGameswillholdinChina.The29thOlympicGameswillbeheldinChina.\n主谓一致问题1.Andnowmanyriversbecomesverydirty.2.Everythingaregoingverywell.3.DavidwithhislittlebrothergototheparkeverySunday.4.Thereareamanteacherandtwowomenteachersintheoffice.Andnowmanyriversbecomeverydirty.Everythingisgoingverywell.DavidwithhislittlebrothergoestotheparkeverySundayThereisamanteacherandtwowomenteachersintheoffice.\nChinglish现象1.LastSunday,Annwithhermotherandbrotherwenttoapark.Theparkwithalake.2.IandmyclassmatesbybustoDayangForeignLanguageSchool.LastSunday,Annwenttoaparkwithhermotherandbrother.Therewasalakeinthepark.MyclassmatesandItookabustoDayangForeignLanguageSchool.\n行文的逻辑性问题1.Atonce,shejumpedintothewatertosaveherdaughterwithhermother’shelp.2.Butshewasn’tcareful,sothatshefellintotheriver.Atonce,shejumpedintothewatertosaveherdaughter.Shewasn’tcareful,andshefellintotheriver.\n词类错用1.WhenIwassadly,Iplayedwithit.WhenIwashappily,Iplayedwithit.2.Allofusareexcitedinit.Becauseitcanmakewehappyandhealthy.WhenIwassad,Iplayedwithit.WhenIwashappy,Iplayedwithit.Allofusareexcitedaboutit.Becauseitcanmakeushappyandhealthy.\n请你当老师书面表达自行车在北京仍然受欢迎，骑车上学或上班都很方便。如今越来越多的人……这使得……。骑车既可以……，又可以……。那么你更喜欢哪种交通工具呢？为什么？\n请你当老师BicyclearestillpopularonthestreetsinBeijing.It’seasytobybikegotoschoolorgotowork.Nowmoreandmorepeopleplantobuycarsinsteadofbike.ButIthinkthatrunningcarsmakeairdirty.Itwasharmfultoourhealth.Ridingbicyclescanhelppeoplekeephealthy,andenergycanbesave.Becauseridingbikeswillalwaysmakemehappy,soIprefertogotoschoolbybike.Pleasereaditcarefully,thenfindthemistakesandcorrectthem.\nBicyclesarestillpopularonthestreetsinBeijing.It’seasytogotoschoolorgotoworkbybike.Nowmoreandmorepeopleplantobuycarsinsteadofbikes.ButIthinkthatrunningcarsmakesairdirty.Itisharmfultoourhealth.Ridingbicyclescanhelppeoplekeephealthy,andenergycanbesaved.Becauseridingbikeswillalwaysmakemehappy,Iprefertogotoschoolbybike.\nEnglishWriting英语书面表达训练写过去的事\n书面表达六步法\n书面表达六步法\n书面表达六步法一、审题确定基本要素:5W1H何时何地何人为何如何做了何事\n书面表达六步法二、抓要点确定主要行为Whathappened?\n书面表达六步法三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位Whodidwhat?\n书面表达六步法四、连句成文时间空间细节连贯呼应\n书面表达六步法五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误\n书面表达六步法六、誊写卷面不工整扣5分\nWriteashortpassagetalkingaboutfeelingswhenreceivingagift.Whatwasthegift?Whogaveittoyouandwhy?Howdidyoufeelwhenyouopenedit?(4)Didthepersonwhogaveitthinkcarefullyaboutit.Haveatry!\nYoumayusesomesentenceslikethefollowing:1.Mybest/worstgiftis…2.Igotitonmythirteenthbirthday.3.…gaveittome.4.Itmademe…5.Ihopemygiftis…\n书面表达经典示例假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。1、目击者应该准确报告事实；2、词数100左右；3、结尾已为你写好。_________________________________________AbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedapassingcarandtooktheoldmantothenearesthospital.LiHua\n附图1234\n一幅图，一要点时态直达语态到位介/副词紧随抓要点，配动词\n精彩范文赏析\n①At7:15a.m.onthemorningofFeb.8th,2000,IwasheadingeastonthesouthsideoftheParkRoad,takingmymorningwalkasusual.②IsawanoldmanontheothersideoftheroadoutsidethegateoftheCityPark.精彩范文赏析\n③Hewasjustcrossingthestreetwhenacaronthe3rdStreetmadeasuddenrightturnatthecrossing.精彩范文赏析\n④Thecarwassofastthattheoldmanevendidn’thavetimetododgeandthecarhittheelderlyhard.精彩范文赏析\n⑤Ithoughtthedriverwouldhavestoppedtohelp,butshedidn't.⑥Instead,shejustdroveoff,leavingtheoldmanstilllyingonthegroundinpain.精彩范文赏析\n⑦Fortunately,Inoteddownthedetails:itwasayellowcar,theplatenumberofwhichwasAC864,andthedriverwasayounglady.⑧Afterthat,Iwentovertocheckouttheoldman.精彩范文赏析\nAbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedapassingcarandtooktheoldmantothenearesthospital.LiHua精彩范文赏析\n小结审题，抓点造句，成文改错，誉写\n句子开头要大写，每句之后有标点；前句句末用逗号，后句开头用小写；前句句末用句号，后句开头要大写；记住书写须清楚，因为里面有分数；先草稿，后定稿，书写歌谣记牢靠。书写歌\nseeyou!