高中英语写好建议信课件 52页

----Howtowritealetterforadvice\n,\n1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2建议信有可能是写给个人�就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点�也可能是写给某个组织和机构�就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3建议信要写出写信的原因�建议的内容�提出建议的理由�提出的理由要入情入理�语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。\n建议信写作的注意事项�a�这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。b�这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。\n篇章结构及内容�首段�表明写作意图。陈述事由�简单介绍自己�注意语气。主体段落�应该首先肯定对方的优点�然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉�而不是提建议。结尾段�对提出的建议进行总结�要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。注意事项�语言要委婉、礼貌�顾及对方感受。\nA�(照应材料,表明写作意图)1�AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2�Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3�Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-----5.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.\nB.body1.first�firstly�secondly…�then�afterthat�intheend�finally�Meanwhile,what’smore���2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…3.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.6.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoucan…\nC.1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.5.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.\n假如你叫孙军�是恩施高中的学生�要给市长写一封信�反映学校门前交通拥挤现象�包括以下要点�问题建议学校和一所小学毗邻�对着政府应采取措施,大街�高峰期交通繁忙�加如修天桥等。之孩子小,家长接送。交通更拥挤�学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。参考词汇:穿行threadone’sway天桥overpass\n养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的�但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例�谈谈如何审题�思考的问题样题分析第几人称��person�第一人称文章的题材是什么�一封信要写的文章主题是什么(topic)建议政府采取措施舒缓交通拥挤的状况怎样安排信息点的顺序�说理逻辑性(order)\n动作是什么时候发生的(when)�(时态)一般现在时\n\nDearBob,veyouI'mgladtoreceirletteraskingformyadviceonhowto(引出主题).Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.(此三句不同的句式提出建议)Asto,Isuggest(有时根据需要具体到某一反面).Inaddition,(其他建议).I'msure(预测可能的结果�给对方以行动的信心和决心).(表达愿望).I'mlookingforwardto\nSincerelyyours,\nDear____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto_____,andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion(以我拙见),youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_____.Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou.Yours,\n问题建议,,\n,standnextto…primary…face/befacedwith…themainstreet…推荐句型�Therebe+并列句There’saprimaryschoolnearourschool,andbothschoolsfacethemainstreet.非谓语结构Ourschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschool,facedwith/facingthemainstreet.Standingnexttoaprimaryschool,ourschoolisfacedwith/facesthemainstreet.\n将介词短语提前�全倒装�Nexttoaprimaryschoolstands/lies/isourschool,facedwith/facingamainstreet.小建议可将standnextto替换为高级词汇/短语belocatednextto(near/beside/by)border/adjoinvt.\nbeadjacentto与…毗邻在…对面beoppositeto\n•…..traffic….duringtherushhoursThetrafficisbusyduringtherushhours.Duringtherushhours,thereisalotoftraffic.so….that…Duringtherushhours,therearesomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroadthat…with结构\nWithsomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroad,…\n小建议“高峰期”可意译:atpeaktime�alargecurrentofcarsandpeople“交通繁忙”可译为:trafficjamcongestion交通堵塞bechokeupwith\nbecrammedwith被…堵塞/塞满\n,,send…to…,fetch….,,which….Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.….Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,makingthetrafficheavier.\n加之孩子小�家长接送�交通更拥挤What’smore,…pickup….make….Tomakethingsworse/what’sworse,manyparentscomingtopickuptheirchildrenmakethestreetmorecrowded.Inaddition/Additionally,manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.What’smore,parentsoftenattendtheirkidstoschool,resultinginmoreserioustrafficjams.Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheir\nso….that….=too…toThechildrenaresoyoungthatparentshavetosendthemtoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakes/makingthetrafficheavier.小建议makingthetrafficheavier可意译为�makingthesituationmoreserious.making可替换为�causing,leadingto,resultingin“send…fetch…”可替换为短语�pickup\nthreadone’swaywhendoingItis+adj.for…todo….Itisdangerousforthestudentstothreadtheirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad.\n小建议灵活运用其它的短语进行意译�1.Studentsareriskingtheirlivestothreadtheirwayamongcars.2.Someareexposedtodangerwhencrossingtheocean/seaofcars.适当增加形容词和副词�itisextremelydangerous�itisofgreat/tremendousdanger\n,�suggest/suggestion,takesteps/measures/actiontodo…suchas简单句Isuggestthatthegovernmentshouldtakestepssuchasbuildinganoverpass.表语从句Mysuggestionisthatthegovernmentshould…固定句型Itishightimethat…(虚拟语气)Itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuilding…\n小建议A.适当添加一些意思�过渡句�1.Inordertoreleasethestressoftrafficproblems,…2.Aimedatsolvingtheseproblems,thegovernmentshould3.Seeingthesematters,neverwillIstopurgingourgovernmenttotakesomemeasures.Forthesakeofimprovingthequalityoftraffic,itissignificanttobuild…B.语义的意译•Thegovernmentshouldpaymoreattentiontoitandtrytosolveit.C.添加形容词和副词Istronglysuggest…,active/effectivemeasures\n.但要注意�篇章的连贯性A.AsaconsequenceB.AccordingtothephenomenonstatedaboveC.WhenitcomestotrafficjamsD.WhatmakesthingsworseisthatNexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facingamainstreet.___________C.,it’scrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour._______________D.childrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.___________A.,it’sofgreatdangerforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic._________________B.,itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass.\n\n\n\n\n\n1优点�考生能灵活地处理各个信息点�大量运用非谓语�介词短语�从句�连词等来提亮句子�使得文章更彰显个性和语言功底。\n2优点�考生的书面整洁�字体美观�运用therebe句型�介词短语�从句�非谓语�套用句式等来提亮句子�使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。\n3优点�考生运用倒装句�so…that句式�精彩的表达以及虚拟语气等来提亮句子�使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。\n4优点�该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇等来提亮句子�使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底蕴。\n\n5\n6\nCongestionn.,,\n\n\nDear____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto_____,andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion(依我拙见),youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_____.Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou.Yours,\nDearBob,veyouI'mgladtoreceirletteraskingformyadviceonhowto(引出主题).Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.(此三句不同的句式提出建议)Asto,Isuggest(有时根据需要具体到某一反面).Inaddition,(其他建议).I'msure(预测可能的结果�给对方以行动的信心和决心).(表达愿望).I'mlookingforwardto\nSincerelyyours,\n假定你是李华�你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点�⑴参加中文学习班�⑵看中文书刊、电视�⑶学唱中文歌曲�⑷交中国朋友。注意�可适当增加细节�以使行文连贯�开头语已给出。DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._________________________________________________\nBestwishes,\nBestwishes,LiHuaDearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.