高中漫画作文写作指导ppt课件 30页

叙述并分析漫画所反映的问题，并谈谈你的看法眼科ophthalmology\nWritingGuidance(Cartoons)StructureContentLanguage3Criteria:\nThebetterbeginning?Thepictureitselfmatters!\n1.Read&Describe眼科ophthalmology5W1H\nDescribethepicturewhowhatwherehow/whyAsisdepictedinthispicture,fourchildrenaresittingoutsidetheophthalmologydepartmentandeatinganapple.Thefourchildrenallhavethesameeyeproblemduetotoomuchexposuretotheelectronicproducts,suchasiPad,iPhone,andsoforth,whichastonisheseventhedoctors.\nLet’sPracticewhenwherewhowhatwhyhow\nUsefulSentencePatternsAsisvividlyshowninthepicture…Aswecanseefromthepicture/Ascanbeseenfromthepicture,when…Thisisanextremelyironicpicturedepicting….Inthemiddleofthepicturestandsa…Thepictureaboveshowsvividlywhat…is.Theabovepicturetellsasatiricalstory.A…Thevividandthought-provoking(发人深思的)cartoonironicallyshowsthat…\nLet’sPracticeAsisvividlyshowninthepicture,awaiterisdealingwithatypicalChinesemealafterithasbeenfinished,wearinganembarrassedexpression.Acompleteduckandfisharebeingdumpedasleftovers.ThepictureaboveshowsvividlywhataChineseWasteis.Thewaiterinthemiddleofthepictureispouringawholedishoffishintoahugegarbagebinwithasadexpressionandtremblingarms.Behindhimexistsawell-decoratedtablewithauneatenduckandanunopenedwine.\nAgoodbeginningishalfdone.Whatisthenextstep?\nWhydoesthecartoonistdrawsuchacartoon?Becausehewantstodrawattentiontothephenomenonwhichcommonlyoccursinsociety.2.___________thepictureInterpret\nWhatdoesthispicturewanttotellus?眼科ophthalmology\nUsefulSentencePatternsAfterseeingthepicture,Icannothelpfallingintodeepthought.Ithinkwhatthepicturerevealsisasocialphenomenonthat…Itseemsveryridiculousthat…However,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.Thereisnodoubtthatthepicturereveals…whichiscommonamongmanyChinesecitizens,eventhe…The…inthepictureisnotalone.Itisatypicalexampleof…\nUsefulSentencePatternsThephenomenonof…isn’trarethesedays.Itpresentstheconflictbetween…and…ThepictureistheexactreflectionofacommonphenomenoninChina,whichis…Thissatiricalcartoonindicatesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamong…Atfirstglance,itmocksthe…butaftersomethinking,it’seasytoseethat…\nAddorreviseyourinterpretation眼科ophthalmology\nThepictureistheexactreflectionofacommonphenomenoninChina.Themajorityofchildrennowhaveaccesstovarietiesofhi-techdevices,whichleadstoarapidincreaseinthenumberofshort-sightedchildren.\nLet’sPractice\nThispictureleftussomefoodforthought.Nowadays,somanypeoplearecompletelyunconsciousofhowhardtheseresourcescome,andalwaystakeitforgrantedaslongasenoughmoneyispaid.\nLet’sPractice\nThereisnodoubtthatthepicturerevealsanunpleasantandselfishbehaviour,whichisatypicalexampleofunqualifiedpublicmoralvalues.\nWhatdo“opinions”involve?3.Giveyouropinions\nWhydoesthisparticularphenomenonneedourattention?(Theimportance/Theimpact)Whydoyouthinkthisphenomenonoccur?(Reasons)Whatareyoursuggestions?(Solutions)3.Giveyouropinions\nTheimportance/TheimpactReasonsSolutions\nUsefulTransitionalSentencesEmphasizeimportance:Judgingfromthepictures,I’dliketoexpressmypointofviewthat…hasagreatimpacton…Itisknowntoallthat…anditwillinfluencethechildren’scharactersandvaluesof…Chinaisanationwhichlaysgreatemphasison…,so…Frommyperspective,parents’interference/involvementmayserveasanobstacletochildren’s……notonlybringsgreaterrisksof…,butalsodoesharmto…Inmyopinion,itisunderstandablethat…,butitmayresultin…\nUsefulTransitionalSentencesAnalyzereasons:Asfarasthecausesareconcerned,itis…thatistoblamefor…Frommypointofview,itis…thatresultsinthephenomenon.AsfarasI’mconcerned,this…isveryshort-sightedbecause…Asforthereasons,…\nUsefulTransitionalSentencesProvidesolutions:AsfarasIamconcerned,thistrendshouldbeputtoanend…Frommyperspective,wecangetridofsuchtroublebyactingonthestepsasfollows.Toeffectivelyeasetheproblem,Isuggestthat…Effortsfrom….aredesperatelyneededtostopsuchatrend.Itishightimethatwetookactiontogetridof….Itisupto…tohelp….\nRemember:TopicsentencesSupportingsentences3.Giveyouropinions\nLet’senjoy2excellentpiecesofwritingfromyourclassmates\nEndingToputitinanutshell,weshouldpayattentionto…Allinall,thekeyto…liesin....Idohopethat…Thoughoureconomyis…,weshouldstillbearinmindthat…Withourjointefforts/Aslongas…,Iamsurethatsuch….willbeeliminatedIbelievewiththe…,…willbecreated…Whatthepictureshowsisreallyworthyofourconcern.Forboth…and…,moreemphasisshouldbelaidon…\nReviewStructureContentLanguageDescribethepictureInterpretthepictureGiveyouropinionsEnding5W1H(beobservant)Themoralofthecartoonimportance,reasons,solutionsToconcludeorraisehopeSeetheWorksheet\nAssignmentsReviseyourwritingintermsofthestructure,thecontentandthelanguage.