高中英语短文改错练习课件 12页

短文改错\n假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。\n（一）OnedayLiMingcaughtalittlebird.Hetieditwiththepieceofthreadandplayedithappily.Atthattime，heseesalittlegirlcryingbytheroadsides.Apolicemansawher，cameoverandaskedherhowshewascryingandwhereherhomewas.Whenhelearnedaboutthatthegirlhadgotlostandhewaslookingforhermother，hedecidedtoleadthegirlbackhome.SeethisLiMingthoughtthelittlebirdalsohaditsmotherandheshouldsetthelittlebirdfreelysothatitcouldbewithitsmotheragain.ThenLiMinguntiedthethreadbutthelittlebirdflewtothebluesky.\n（二）OneeveningafterworkJohndroveawayhissecretaryhomebecauseshefailstostarthercar.Notwanttobotherhiswife，Maureen，hedecidednottomentionittoher.Laterthatnight，JohnandMaureenwasdrivingouttoeatwhenJohnspottedahighheeledshoehidunderthepassengerseat.Pointingtoanythingoutofthepassengerwindowtodistracthiswife，hepickeduptheshoeandtosseditoutofherwindow.Theyarrivedintherestaurantashorttimelater.Whentheywereabouttogetoutofcar，Maureenenquired，“John，haveyouseenmyothershoes？”\n（三）IbringRosehomefiveyearsago.MyneighborMrs.Blackfellinlovewithherimmediateshesawher.Shewassuchlovelydog,afterall.RosealsoseemedtolikeMrs.Black.Twoyearsago,however,Mrs.Blackgotcancer.Havingbeentreatinginhospital,shedecidedtoreceivetreatmentathome.SincemyhusbandandIwerebusyinourwork,weseldomwenttoseeher.Threemonthsago,Mrs.Blackdied.Tooursurprised,herhusbandcametothanktousforkeepingRoseoneday.Hesaidinthepastseveralmonths,RosewenttoaccompanyhiswifeeverydaybeforemyhusbandandIwenttowork.Withshearound,hiswifefeltsowarmandwasn'tinsomuchpain.Ineverknewthat.ThatRosedidwasreallyheartwarming.\n（四）Longlongago，therelivedthemanwhowassolazythatnojobwasfitofhim.Inordertomakealivingheonedaywenttoaneighborofhimforhelp.Theneighboradvisedhimworkasacemeterycaretakerasitwasthemosteasiestjobonecouldfindintheworld.Thelazymanisdelightedandsoonbecameacemeterycaretaker.Buttoeverybody'ssurprisingheresignedhisjobthreedaysbeforehegotit.“It'sunfair.”Hesaidtotheneighborangry.InthecemeteryalltheothersarelyingstillwhileIamtheonlyonewhohadtostand.\n（五）MygrandfatherandIenjoyfishing.OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake.Wetookoursfishingpolesandheadedforthelake.Assoonaswearrived,sowedroppedthelinesintothewater.Beforewaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently.Iwantedtogiveup,andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittlelonger.Finally,therewereasuddenpullatthepoleandfishwascaught.Withinthenextfewminute,mygrandfatheralsocaughtafish.Felthungry,webuiltafirebythelakeandbarbecuedthefish.Itwasdelicious.\n（六）DearMing，Itwasverynicetohearfromyouforalongtime.I'mgladtolearnthatyou'vebeensettleddowninBostonandaregettingusedtothelocalwaysoflife.Asyouknow，I'mstillburiedwithbooksatschoolyouaresofamiliarwith.WhatmaysurpriseyouarethatI'mgoingtotheUSthisJulyinasummercamp!SurelyI'mexpectinglotsofsightseeingtours,partiesandanotherexcitingthings.WemustdefinitelymeetwhenI'mover.Asisplanning,I'mcomingtoBostonaroundthe15th，andIwonderifyou'llfreethensowecouldchataboutthegoodolddays.Hopetoseeyousoon.Yours，XiaoLei\n（七）Thisisastorytoldbymyfather:WhenIwasboy,themostexcitingthingwaswhentocelebratetheSpringFestival.Mygrandmawasthebestcookerintheworldbutcouldmakethemostdeliciousdishes.Once,Ijustcouldn'twaitfortheSpringFestivaldinner.AsIwasabouttakeapiecefromacookedduck,IsawGrandmainthekitchenlookingme.Shakeherhead,shesaid,“Itisn'tagoodtimetodothat,dear.”Iapologizeandcontrolledmeatthebesttillthedinnerstarted.Youknow,thatwasadinnerwehadwaitedforseveralmonth.\n（八）MyfriendDickwassevenyearsold,andhersisterKatherinewasfive.Onedaytheirmothertakethemtotheiraunt'stoplaywhileshewenttothecitybuysomenewclothes.Theyplayedforahour,andthentheiraunttookDickintothekitchen.Shegavehimanicelycakeandaknifeandsaid,“Dick,cutthiscakeinhalf,andgiveoneofthepiecetoyoursister.Butrememberingtodoitlikeagentleman.”“Howdogentlemendoit？”Dickasked.“Theyalwaysgivethebiggeronepiecetotheotherperson，”answeredhisaunt.Dickthoughtupthisforafewseconds.Thenhetookthecaketohissisterbutsaidtoher,“Cutthiscakeinhalf,Katherine.”\n（九）RecentlyIreadanarticleinamagazine.Itwasofamotherwhowasworriedabouthisson justbecauseofhealwayskepthishairlong.Themotherthoughtthatwasnotright，butthesonfelttherewasnothingunusuallyaboutit.Differentgenerationshavedifferentopinionsonthesamething.Thatiswhatismeaningby“thegenerationgap”．Wecanseetheminourdailylives.Mostofourparentslikelisteningtooldsongwhileyoungpeoplepreferpopsongs.Everytimemyfatherfindsmelistentorockmusic，healwaysshouted，“Shutitoff.It'sawful！”Howcanwedealthegenerationgap？\n（十）Mysparetimeisfullofinterestedactivities.IreadallkindsofbooksinthereadingroomwheneverIamfree.Ilearnmuchinthelibrarythaninclassinthisway.Meanwhile,Iparticipatedinmanysportsactivities,ofthatmyfavoriteisvolleyball.Ioftenplayvolleyballaftertheschool.Sportsandgameskeepmehealthyandenergeticenoughtogetacrossavarietyofdifficulties.SometimeIgoinforsocialpracticewithmyclassmatesoutsideschool.Thus,Icangainmuchsocialexperiences.Out-of-classactivitiesarequitenecessaryforourstudents.Throughtheseactivitieswecanlearnmanythingscannotbelearnedinclass.