演示文稿高中英语写作课件 16页

EnglishwritingCarol\nTopicOnlineShopping\n随着网络的迅速发展普及，越来越多的人倾向于网上购物。请根据下表写一篇短文，介绍网上购物的利与弊。优点缺点方便、足不出户不能试穿或试用……………………注意：1.开头已给出，不计入总字数。2.可适当增加细节，使行文流畅。3.100字左右。WiththedevelopmentofInternet，____________________________________________________________________________\nAgoodcompositionOrganizationContentLanguageStep1设疑自探\nIntroduction(topic)Body(explainingideas)Conclusion\n随着网络的迅速发展普及，越来越多的人倾向于网上购物。请根据下表写一篇短文，介绍网上购物的利与弊。优点缺点方便、足不出户不能试穿或试用……………………注意：1.开头已给出，不计入总字数。2.可适当增加细节，使行文流畅。3.100字左右。WiththedevelopmentofInternet，____________________________________________________________________________IntroductionBody\nPart1:Part2:Part3:时态?Learntoorganizeintroductiontoyourtopicadvantages/disadvantagesyouropinion一般现在时\nAgoodcompositionOrganizationContentLanguage\n随着网络的迅速发展普及，人们的购物方式发生了很大的变化。请根据下表写一篇短文，介绍网上购物的利与弊。优点缺点方便、足不出户不能试穿或试用……………………注意：1.开头已给出，不计入总字数。2.可适当增加细节，使行文流畅。3.100字左右。WiththedevelopmentofInternet，_____________________________________________________________________\nStep2解疑合探1(5points)advantagesdisadvantagesG1G3G2G4Pleasediscussingroupsandlist2-3writingpointsofeachpartinEnglish.\nStep2解疑合探2(25points)Discussingroupsandtrytofinishthecompositionin10minutes.WiththedevelopmentofInternet,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________\nStep2解疑合探2(25points)Youmayusethesewordsandexpressions:网购：onlineshopping倾向做某事:tendtodosth.好处:benefit(s)商品：goods/commodity试穿/用：trythegoods假货：fakesYoumayusethesetransitionalwords:Foronething,…Firstly/Tobeginwith,…Secondly/What’smore,…However/Foranother,…Inaddition,…Furthermore,…Inmyopinion,/AsfarasIcansee,/Frommypointofview,/…\nStep2解疑合探2(25points)Presentation（展示）Pleasepasteupyourcompositionsontheblackboard.展示组G1G2G3G4\nStep2解疑合探2(25points)Evaluation（评价）评价要求：声音洪亮，吐字清晰；补充讲解，要点全面；注意：非评价组认真听，可随时补充，质疑，给本组增加分数。\nStep3质疑再探WhataretheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofInternet?Inrecentyears,theInternethasbeengainingitspopularityatanamazingrate.SomepeoplesuggestthattheInternetbringsusalotofbenefits.Butontheotherhand,manypeoplewhostronglyadvocatethatitsdrawbacksshouldnotbeignored..ThosewhofavortheInternethavemanyreasonsasfollows.Inthefirstplace,theInternetbringsusgreatconvenienceandefficiency.Forexample,wecansendE-mailstoourfriendsinothercountriesinafewminutes.Inthesecondplace,wecanmakefriendswithpeoplefromallpartsoftheworld.Itovercomesthegeographicalbarriersandmakestheworldsmaller.However,theothersideofthecoinvoicesitsstrongopposition,sayingthattheInternethasmanyweaknesses.Foronething,itcaneasilyleadtopsychologicalproblems.Foranother,thereisasharpriseinthenumberofcybercrimes.Formypart,IcompletelyagreewiththelatterviewthattheInternethasmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages.SomethingshouldbedoneassoonaspossibletoprotectpeoplefromthenegativeeffectsoftheInternet.\nHomework:Finishyourcompositionandwriteitonyourexercisebook.