高中英语短文改错课件 公开课 38页

HowtodoProof-reading短文改错Class7Senior2MissZhou\nInoureverydaylives,ifwemakesomemistakes,weshouldcorrectthem,andthenwearestillagoodfellow.——ChairmanMao’swords\n怎么改？？？？Hissalaryispaidbyanhour.Lihuahitmeonahead.Healwayshasdinneratthetable.Theteachersaidtheearthranaroundthesun.\nIcangotohomenow.2.IlikehistoryofChina.3.IamfondatEnglish.theWrongword∧MissingwordofUnnecessaryword高考短文改错的考察方式\n下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每句不超过两个错误；2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；3.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。改错格式\n从错误比例上看，2：1：7或者1：1：8：多缺错一般以三种题型出现:增加,删除或修改。设问的角度有三个：词法、句法和行文逻辑。\n动词形，名词数．还要注意形和副．代词格，细领悟介词短语须关注．习惯用法要记住．冠词连词常光顾．ALimerick请先念一遍“咒语”吧复杂句子不放过.\n一、动词形1.动词的时态和语态错误.高考链接1：However,myfatherhadtoreturntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturday.(2011全国）flewGrowingupisnoteasy.Sometimesallthatisneedissomeonetorelyon.（2008全国）needed\n2.主谓不一致的错误.高考链接:Istayedthereforoneandahalfhoursandmadesurethatthegirlwereallright.(2009全国卷2)was\n3.非谓语动词错误高考链接:IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou.（2011新课标全国卷）buyingIwasreallydisappointingandabouttoleavewhenhewalkedoutofabuilding.(2011陕西卷)disappointed\n5.Heusedtogettingupearlytotakephysicalexercise.∨werelikesexcitinggetNotonlythestudentsbutalsotheteacherlikethefilm.2.Whentheycameheretomorrow,Iwillshowthem.3.TheyeagertoknoweverythingaboutChinaandaskedmelotsofquestions.4.Ifoundthegameexcitedandmydadexplainedtherules.practicecomePractice\n二、名词数指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。高考链接2：Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.（2011新课标全国卷）luggageInearlyJanuarythisyear,therateofUFOreportswassteady,aroundthreeperweeks.(2011辽宁卷）week\n1.Don’tlosehearts,you’llbesuccessfulintime.2.Ineedsomemoreinformations.3.Thesemachineslookthesame,buttheyareofdifferentkind.heartinformationkindspractice不可数名词progress,furniture,weather,fun,news,information,advice……Practice\n三、还要注意形和副１．形容词和副词的误用高考链接3：Whenshedroppedmeoff,Ipulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback.（2011浙江卷）slowly2．比较级和最高级的混用或误用.Thedoctorsaysheisrecoveringfastthanexpected.(2009陕西）faster\n还要注意形和副高考链接：Unfortunate,Ihadanaccidentandhitanother（2012浙江卷）UnfortunatelyWelivedinacomfortablydouble-roomwithabigbath.(2012陕西）comfortable\n1.Heaskedangryifwehadfinishedthework.2.Yes,itisclearlythatyourlifeinyourcountryisquitedifferentfrommine.3.Hisfatherlooksmuchmorehappiertoday.angrilyclear4.SoIgratefulacceptedtheoffer.gratefullypracticePractice\n四、代词格，细领悟3.it作形主、形宾、指代时有缺漏(make,find,think)或固定搭配.高考链接4：WiththehelpofKatia,aroommateofme…(2011重庆卷）mineItwasonlywhenwedidtheirchemistryprojecttogetherthatIbegantounderstand…(2010辽宁卷）Hefounddifficulttolearnmathwell.our∨it1.人称代词，反身代词，不定代词2.代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误.\n2.IwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.3.IalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.4.OnedayIwrotealittlestoryandshowedtomyteacher.myselfeverything∨itSomestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.theirpracticePractice\n五、介词短语须关注，习惯用法要记住．1.主要考查固定短语，固定介词的搭配。2.介词的多用，漏用和误用3.时间状语前有指示代词this,that或one,next,last等修饰时不用介词.eg.Hepaidavisittohisgrandfatheronthatafternoon\n五、介词短语须关注，习惯用法要记住．高考链接：Twoyearsbefore,ItravelledtoBrazilandIrentedforacar.(2012浙江卷)withIalsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotostakinginBeijing.\npracticeI’msuretheywilllaughtomeandseemeasafool.2.Atlastwereachedtothevillageatthefootofthehill.3.Whenayoungmanstartstoearnhisownliving,hecannolongerexpectotherstopayhisfood.4.Thegentlemaninsistedatmyreceivingthemoney.at∨foronPractice\n２．连词but，and，or,so和although的逻辑性用法错误．高考链接６：六、冠词连词常光顾Hewasrighthereinthefrontofme.(2011陕西卷）Iboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloor.１.冠词a,an和the的用法错误．and\nIcameintothelivingroomandsawoneofthemjustgothroughthekitchendoorbutturnonthelight.Hewillstaythereoneandtwodays.3.EverykindoftheChinesefoodisworthtrying.4.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrella.andoran\nThesmallerpieceisthatyouwant,right?Itisknowntousall,alleffortswillbepaid.Practicemakesperfect,thatisveryimportantforus.七、复杂句子不放过whatAswhich\n1.单词拼写不改.2.大小写不改.3.词序不改.4.标点符号不改.5.原意不改.Don'tforget!五不改原则\n实战演练\n考查目标1）识别错误并正确校正语篇的能力2）综合运用英语知识的能力3）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻辑的能力\n下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每句不超过两个错误；2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；3.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。改错格式\n解题步骤1.通读全文，掌握大意2.整句理解，上下兼顾3.复读全文，检查验证\n动词形，名词数．还要注意形和副．代词格，细领悟介词短语须关注．习惯用法要记住．冠词连词常光顾．ALimerick请先念一遍“咒语”吧复杂句子不放过\n再叮嘱几句：1.单词拼写不改.2.大小写不改.3.词序不改.4.标点符号不改.5.原意不改.解题步骤1.通读全文，掌握大意2.整句理解，上下兼顾3.复读全文，检查验证Don'tforget!五不改原则\nAtChristmasEve,JimwentwithhisfathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychooseabigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!Theyputtheminthecornerofthesittingroom.JimwascovereditwithalotofChristmaslight.Thesittingroomlookedreallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewasafireburninginthefireplace,buttheChristmastreelightswereshinningbrightly.Jimandhisparentssinginganddancinghappily.\nAtChristmasEve,Jimwentwithhis1._____fathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychoose2._____abigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!3._____Theyputtheminthecornerofthesitting4._________on_________chose_______tall_______it动词形介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟\nroom.Katewascovereditwithalotof5._____Christmaslight.Thesittingroomlooked6.____reallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewas7.________afireburninginthefireplace,buttheChistmas8.____treelightswasshinningbrightly.Jimandhis9.____parentssinginganddancinghappily.10.____＼was＼_______lights_____________beautiful_____andwere∧were动词形还要注意形和副动词形名词数冠词连词须关注\nIwasahighschoolstudentthen,fromthelow-incomefamily.SoIhavetosupportmyfamily.Myfirstonejobwastocleanthetablesinasmallrestaurant.Istillremembergoingthereearlyandfeltanxiousaboutthenewworld.IworkedharderbecauseIwasafraidoflosingthejob.Atnight,Iwassometimesverytiredtodomyhomework.ButIcametounderstandthatwasnoteasytoearnmoney,andthatknowledgescouldchangemylife.SowhatIlearnedfromthejob,inahardway,wasmuchmoreimportantaswhatIlearnedfromschool.ahadfeelinghardknowledgeittoothan∧And\n从错误比例上看，2：1：7或者1：1：8：多缺错一般以三种题型出现:增加,删除或修改。设问的角度有三个：词法、句法和行文逻辑。summary\nHewhomakesnomistakes，makesnothing．不犯错误的人必然一事无成。2.Byignorancewemistake,andbymistakeswelearn．吃一堑长一智。3.Astupidpersonalwaystriestojustifyhimselfforhismistakes;butawisemantrieshisbesttocorrecthiserrors.愚蠢的人总是为自己的错误辩护，聪明的人则力求改正。4.Don'tmakethesamemistaketwice.不要重复犯同样的错误。Proverbs\nGoodluckinyourcomingexam!