高中英语写好建议信课件上课讲义 30页

高中英语写好建议信课件\nOurdistrictiswell-knownforpaper-cuttingandthepeopleareveryskilledatit.---1.skillofworkersAtthemomentthesepeopledonothaveanywheretodisplaythevarietyandskilloftheircraftsmanship.---2.noothergalleryIftheskillislost,theremaybenorecordofit.---3.theremaybenorecord1、2、3点强调建艺术馆的必要性Thegallerywouldprovidethemwithanopportunitytopreservethisskill.---4.preservetheskillIfyouweretoallowthemtodisplaytheirexpertisehere,Ibelievewecouldmakeourdistrictfamousandencouragemoretouriststocomehere.---5.famous&moretourists4、5点强调建艺术馆的益处\nSamplewriting2DearCommitteeMembers,Iwishtomakeasuggestionaboutthekindofartworkthatshouldgointoournewgallery.AsIhavecarefullyresearchedthesubjectandhavehadmanydiscussionswithresidentsinourdistrict,Ibelievemysuggestionwillbepopularwithmostpeople.Ihavediscoveredthatwehavemanyfineartistsinourdistrict.Wehavemanypainters,bothmodernandtraditional,somesculptorsandafewexcellentpotters.Wealsohaveagroupofpeoplewhomeetregularlytopractisetraditionalfolkart.Atpresent,noneofthesegroupshaveaplacetodisplaytheirwork.Thegallerywouldprovidesuchaplaceandwouldhelppeopleinthedistricttolearnmoreaboutourartists.Ibelieveagalleryoflocalartcraftwouldencouragetheartistsandwouldalsomakeothersproudofourlocaltalent.Idohopeyouwillconsidermysuggestion.Yoursfaithfully,\n一、篇章结构及内容（一）首段：表明写作意图。简洁、精炼。（二）主体段落：1.要点全面：包括给出的（和要求扩展的）建议内容和理由。2.条理清晰：要点清晰，顺序合理，之间要有连接词或过渡语；理由充分，与建议内容之间有必然的因果关系。3.合情合理：建议内容要入情入理，有合理性和说服力。4.礼貌得体：语言要委婉礼貌，使人易于接受，不能写成批评、命令或投诉信。（三）尾段：希望对方接受建议，并能对其有所帮助。二、时态：多用一般现在时和一般将来时。\n常用套语A．建议信开头常用句式1.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof…2.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.3.Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.4.Iwishtomakeasuggestionabout…\nB.表达建议（body）1.first,firstofall,firstly，secondly…then,afterthat,intheend,finally;Meanwhile,what’smore/besides/moreover…Consequently/therefore,asaconsequence/asaresult...2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…3.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthatyou(should)…4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewiseto…6.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyou(should)…7.Itwouldbeagoodideaifyoucould…\nC.建议信结尾常用句式1.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/practical/useful/helpful/beneficial.2.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.\n假如你叫孙军，是恩施高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：参考词汇:穿行threadone’sway天桥overpass问题建议学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。\n第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题样题分析第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？(order)动作是什么时候发生的？(时态)(when)第一人称建议信建议原因建议内容说理逻辑性一般现在时\n适当运用模板\nDearBob,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto(引出主题).Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.(此四句不同的句式提出建议)Asto,Isuggest(有时根据需要具体到某一反面).Inaddition,(其他建议).I'msure(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).I'mlookingforwardto(表达愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHua\n第二步：搜索相关词组或句型问题建议1.学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；2.加之孩子小,家长接送，交通更拥挤；3.学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。\n学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街standnextto…primary…face/befacedwith…themainstreet…Ourschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschool,facedwiththemainstreet.推荐句型：非谓语结构Standing/Locatednexttoaprimaryschool,ourschoolisfacedwith/facesthemainstreet.Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facedwith/facingamainstreet.倒装\nIt’scrammedwithcarsduringtherushhours.高峰期交通繁忙…..traffic….duringtherushhoursDuringtherushhours,therearesomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroadthat…Duringtherushhours,thereisalotoftraffic.so….that…with结构Withsomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroad,…\n加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤send…to…,fetch….,非谓语结构….Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,makingthesituationmoreserious.,which….\n加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤What’smore,…pickup….make….Tomakethingsworse/what’sworse,manyparentscomingtopickuptheirchildrenmakethestreetmorecrowded.Inaddition/Additionally/What’smore,parentsoftenattendtheirkidstoschool,resultinginmoreserioustrafficjams.Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.\n学生过街在车辆中穿行危险threadone’sway，whendoingItisdangerousforthestudentstothreadtheirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad.固定句型Itis+adj.for…todo….\nStudentsareriskingtheirlivestothreadtheirwayamongcars.润色小建议2.Someareexposedtodangerwhencrossingtheocean/seaofcars.灵活运用其它的短语进行意译：适当增加形容词和副词：itisextremelydangerous，itisofgreatdanger\n政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。suggest/suggestion,takesteps/measures/actiontodo…suchasMysuggestionisthatthegovernmentshould…表语从句固定句型Itishightimethat…(虚拟语气)Itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuilding…Isuggestthatthegovernmentshouldtakemeasuressuchasbuildinganoverpass.简单句\n1.Inordertoreleasethestressoftrafficproblems,…润色小建议2.Aimedatsolvingtheseproblems,thegovernmentshould…A.适当添加一些意思（过渡句）3.Seeingthesematters,neverwillIstopurgingourgovernmenttotakesomemeasures.Forthesakeofimprovingthequalityoftraffic,itissignificanttobuild…B.添加形容词和副词Istronglysuggest…,active/effectivemeasures\n第三步.连句成文但要注意：篇章的连贯性Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facingamainstreet.___________,it’scrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour._______________childrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.___________,it’sofgreatdangerforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic._________________,itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass.A.AsaconsequenceB.AccordingtothephenomenonstatedaboveC.WhenitcomestotrafficjamsD.WhatmakesthingsworseisthatA.C.D.B.\n反面范例\n反面范例\n反面范例\n不推荐字体\n优秀作文范例优点：运用therebe句型，介词短语，从句，非谓语，套用句式等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。\n优秀作文范例优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底蕴。\n假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：⑴参加中文学习班；⑵看中文书刊、电视；⑶学唱中文歌曲；⑷交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua\nDearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHua\n此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢