高中英语写作基础训练ppt课件 30页

EnjoywritinginEnglish!写作基础训练张香玲\nStep1.Sentence-makingWatchthemovieandtrytokeepthemainideainyourmind.\npickup/return/loser/earpayback/foolish/donatemoney/house/studyhard/workhard/makemoneyTask1Sentence-making\nTask2Toanalysetheelementsofsentences(分析句子成分)Thelittlepig’sfatherdidn’tstudyhard.Thelittlepigpickeduptenyuan.Thehouseofthepigsissmall.Theteacherofthelittlepigaskedhisstudentstodonatesomemoney.Thelittlepigreturnedthemoneytotheloser.\n五个基本句型1）主语+谓语动词2）主语+谓语动词+表语3）主语+谓语动词+宾语4）主语+谓语动词+宾语+宾补5）主语+谓语动词+间宾+直宾请观察:（1）_____+____是英语句子必不可少的两要素；（2）_______在前,_______在后（3）______有人称，数，时态和语态的变化。主语谓语主语谓语谓语\nStep2Joinupsentences方法一连接词（First,second,then...finally,what’smore,however...)方法二连词（when,since,because,although...）Wecangodowntownanddosomeshopping.__________,wecanpayavisittosomeplacesofinterest.__________,wecantakearestincafes.\nPractice1请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的连词或连接词。XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet___________heheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.HeadvisedthatIhireacar____________Icouldtravelfreelyinthecity.3.___________heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.whensothatAssoonas\n5.Doyouagreewithmyarrangement?________,dowritetomesoon.4.Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends.___________,Isaved$80.5.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth.___________,itmaymakeusfat.AsaresultWhat’sworse\n*Thegirlismyclassmate.*Thegirlwonthefirstprize.Step2JoinupsentencesThegirlwhowonthefirstprizeismyclassmate.Practice2\n（2）*Istayedathomethisweekend.*Ididn’tgoshoppingwithmyfriends.Step2JoinupsentencesIstayedathomeinsteadofgoingshoppingthisweekend.\n（3）*Todayismybirthday.*Myfriendsgavemealotofpresents.*IreceivedtheUniversityadmissiontoady*HowhappyIamtoday!Step2JoinupsentencesTodayismybirthdayandmyfriendsgavemealotofpresents.What'smore,IreceivedtheUniversityadmissiontoady.HowhappyIam!\nEnglishisimportantintoday'sworld.Therearemanyreasonsforit.First,Englishiswidelyusedintheworld.Secondly,wecangetveryimportantinformationinEnglish.Thirdly,Englishisalsousedatinternationalmeetings.Inaword,wecannotlivewellwithoutEnglishtoday.Step3Listenandretell.\nStep4Passagestructure主题主题“总——分——总”式展开\n①我经常在课后时间去参观博物馆和微机室，或到画室画画。②自从学生减负以来，我的生活变得有趣多了。③晚上，我也有时间看电视和读报了。④总的说来，我对现在的生活非常满意。⑤再也不用熬夜了，我经常10点左右就去睡了。Step5Organization(组句成篇)Correctorder:②①③⑤④\nSincereducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuchmoreinteresting.Ioftenvisitmuseumsandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesinmysparetime.Intheevening,IalsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnewspapers.Inolongerstayuplate;onthecontrary,Igotobedatabout10pm.Inshort,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.\nStep6综合仿写请你给《中国日报》写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。原因：1、家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，他们不得不在家赚钱养家。2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿让她们上学。3、部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。看法：1、每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。2、全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。\n评分原则Clearidea5Correctgrammar5Completepassage5Beautifullanguage5Beautifulhandwriting5Step7Markforyourdeskmate\nNowinthecountryareas,therearemanychildrenoutofschool.Mostfamiliesarepoorandcan’taffordtheireducation.Theyhavetostayathomeandmakemoney.Someparentsthinkdaughtersneedn’tgotoschool.Theydon’tletthemgotoschool.Somechildrenarenotinterestedintheirstudiesandwouldn’tliketogotoschool.Allthechildrenincludinggirlsshouldbeeducated.Thewholesocietyshouldpayattentiontoit.They’llplayanimportantpartinthefutureofourcountry.\nHowtodoagoodwriting?准备充足的相关词汇。把内容要点用简单的句子翻译出来。按照一定的逻辑顺序整理各句内容，常用的文章结构多为“总分式”。运用连词联句成篇。最后，用漂亮的书法把文章写出来！Step8Summary\nTHANKYOU!Goodbye!\nonawintermorning,becoveredwith,makeasnowman,throwsnowballsTask6:Lookatthepictureandwriteastory\nWhatwillhappenlater?\nLiMing,falldown,bebadlyhurt,can’tstandup,takehimtohospital\nTask2:WriteatelephonemessageTELEPHONEMESSAGEFrom:_______________To:______________Date:_______________Time:_____________Message:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________HuWei\nTask3:WriteaNoteofAskingforLeaveANoteofAskingforLeaveDecember15th,2004DearMiss____,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LingMing\nAnoteaskingforsickleaveDearMissLiu,I’msorrytotellyouthatI’mnotfeelingwelltoday.Ihaveabadcold,andthedoctortoldmetostayinbedfortwodays,soIcan’tgotoschooltoday,IhopeIwillbebettertomorrowandbebacktoschoolsoonThankyou.Yours_______1111\nDearMissLiu,I’msorrytotellyouthatI’mnotfeelingwelltoday.Ihaveabadcold,andthedoctortoldmetostayinbedfortwodays,soIcan’tgotoschooltoday,IhopeIwillbebettertomorrowandbebacktoschoolsoonThankyou.Yours_______Anoteaskingforsickleave\nJune25DearMrWu,I’msorrythatIcan’tgotoschooltoday.IhadanaccidentyesterdaywhileIwasplayingvolleyball.Ifelldownandbrokemyrightleg.Mycousintookmetohospital.ThedoctorsaidthatIhadtorestmylegforafewdays.NowI’mwritingtoyoutoaskforsickleave.RoseLee\nTask4:Writealetter15RenmingRoadJinhua,321000Dcecmber22th,2004DearWangLin,Thankyouforyourletter.Imissallofyouverymuch.HowIwishtoseeyouallsoon!But……———————————————————————————————Yours,LiMing\nTask5:WriteadiaryFriday,December28th,2004SunnyI’msogladtoseemyteachersandfriendagain.。……_____________________________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