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SummaryWriting\n阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Weshouldn’tjudgeapersonbytheirappearancebutwedo.Infact,theexpertssaythatwhenwemeetsomeoneforthefirsttimewemakeadecisionaboutwhatthatpersonislikeinthreeseconds.Butwhatdowelookat?Oneofthemostimportantthingsisclothes,butitisn'tthebrandofclothesthatpeoplewearthatisimportant.Theimportantthingistoweartherightclothesfortheoccasion.Schoolshavealwaysunderstoodthisandalotofthemasktheirstudentstowearauniform.Why?Alotofteachersthinkauniformmakesstudentsfeelthattheyarepartoftheirschoolandthattheiruniformhelpsthemtobeseriousabouttheirstudies.Teacherssaythatuniformscanhelpinotherwaystoo.Ifallthestudentswearuniforms,theycan'tjudgeeachotherbecauseoftheirclothes.Italsoavoidsargumentsaboutwhoorwhatisfashionable.However,itisnotonlyschoolsthatwantpeopletodressinacertainway.Weallhavefixedideasaboutwhatthepeopleinacertainprofessionshouldwear.Ifwevisitadoctor,weexpecttoseerespectableclothesunderthedoctor’swhitecoat.Whenwegointoabankweexpectthestafftowearsuitsordresses.Policeofficerswearuniformstodetercrimebyestablishingavisiblepresencewhileonpatrol,tomakethemselveseasilyidentifiabletonon-policeofficersortheircolleagueswhorequireassistance,andtoquicklyidentifyeachotheratcrimescenesforeaseofcoordination.Infact,alotofcompanieshavedresscodesfortheirstaffbecausetheyknowthatthecustomersexpecttoseethemdressedincertaintypesofclothes.Butcanourclothesreallytellpeoplewhatwearelike?Maybenot,buttheycanshowourattitudetowhatwearedoingatthemoment.Whenpeopleseeusintherightclothes,theythinkweareseriousaboutwhatwearedoing.Furthermore,ifweareclean,smartandpolite,peoplewillhaveconfidenceinus.Para.1Para.3Para.2Para.4\nWhatisaSummary?Ashortenedpassage(60words)RetainthekeypointsoftheoriginaloneArestatementinyourownwordsAreadablecontinuouswhole\nOriginalPassageSummary\nReadingforStructureHowmanypartscanwedividethepassage?Para1：Part1→argumentpara2:evidence/examplepara3:evidence/examplePart2supportingpara4:Part3→conclusion\nHowtoGetKeyPoints?3.1.:topicsentence2.:topicsentence+examplessupportingideasFindCombineSummarize\nReadforKeyPointsPara.1Weshouldn’tjudgeapersonbytheirappearancebutwedo.Infact,theexpertssaythatwhenwemeetsomeoneforthefirsttimewemakeadecisionaboutwhatthatpersonislikeinthreeseconds.Butwhatdowelookat?Oneofthemostimportantthingsisclothes,butitisn'tthebrandofclothesthatpeoplewearthatisimportant.Theimportantthingistoweartherightclothesfortheoccasion.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Point1\nReadforKeyPointsPara.2Schoolshavealwaysunderstoodthisandalotofthemasktheirstudentstowearauniform.Why?Alotofteachersthinkauniformmakesstudentsfeelthattheyarepartoftheirschoolandthattheiruniformhelpsthemtobeseriousabouttheirstudies.Teacherssaythatuniformscanhelpinotherwaystoo.Ifallthestudentswearuniforms,theycan'tjudgeeachotherbecauseoftheirclothes.Italsoavoidsargumentsaboutwhoorwhatisfashionable._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Point2\nReadforKeyPointsPara.3However,itisnotonlyschoolsthatwantpeopletodressinacertainway.Weallhavefixedideasaboutwhatthepeopleinacertainprofessionshouldwear.Ifwevisitadoctor,weexpecttoseerespectableclothesunderthedoctor’swhitecoat.Whenwegointoabankweexpectthestafftowearsuitsordresses.Policeofficerswearuniformstodetercrimebyestablishingavisiblepresencewhileonpatrol,tomakethemselveseasilyidentifiabletonon-policeofficersortheircolleagueswhorequireassistance,andtoquicklyidentifyeachotheratcrimescenesforeaseofcoordination.Infact,alotofcompanieshavedresscodesfortheirstaffbecausetheyknowthatthecustomersexpecttoseethemdressedincertaintypesofclothes.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Point3______________________________________________________________________________________\nReadforKeyPointsPara.4Butcanourclothesreallytellpeoplewhatwearelike?Maybenot,buttheycanshowourattitudetowhatwearedoingatthemoment.Whenpeopleseeusintherightclothes,theythinkweareseriousaboutwhatwearedoing.Furthermore,ifweareclean,smartandpolite,peoplewillhaveconfidenceinus._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Point4\nListtheKeyPointsPara.Keypoints1Butwhatdowelookat?Oneofthemostimportantthingsisclothes.Theimportantthingistoweartherightclothesfortheoccasion.2Schoolsasktheirstudentstowearauniform.Why?Alotofteachersthinkauniformmakesstudentsfeelthattheyarepartoftheirschoolandthattheiruniformhelpsthemtobeseriousabouttheirstudies.Teacherssaythatuniformscanhelpinotherwaystoo.3However,itisnotonlyschoolsthatwantpeopletodressinacertainway.…visitadoctor…gointoabank…Policeofficers…alotofcompanies…4…buttheycanshowourattitudetowhatwearedoingatthemoment..Furthermore,peoplewillhaveconfidenceinus.\nParaphrase(sayorwriteinadifferentway)Alexlikesplayingfootballandhelikesbasketball,too.→Alexlikesplayingnotonlyfootballbutalsobasketball.NotonlydoesAlexlikeplayingfoortballbutalsobasketball.NotonlyisAlexfondoffootballbutalso...Inadditiontofootball,Alexlovesplaying.........\nHowtoParaphrase?2.usesynonyms(同义)3.summarizeexamples(概括)5.combinesentences(并句)4.sometimeschangethevoice(语态)1.changethesentencestructure(句型)\nListtheKeyPointsPara.Keypoints1Butwhatdowelookat?Oneofthemostimportantthingsisclothes.Theimportantthingistoweartherightclothesfortheoccasion.2Schoolsasktheirstudentstowearauniform.Why?Alotofteachersthinkauniformmakesstudentsfeelthattheyarepartoftheirschoolandthattheiruniformhelpsthemtobeseriousabouttheirstudies.Teacherssaythatuniformscanhelpinotherwaystoo.3However,itisnotonlyschoolsthatwantpeopletodressinacertainway.…visitadoctor…gointoabank…Policeofficers…alotofcompanies…4…buttheycanshowourattitudetowhatwearedoingatthemoment..Furthermore,peoplewillhaveconfidenceinus.\nParaphraseKeyPointsKeypoint1Butwhatdowelookat?Oneofthemostimportantthingsisclothes.Theimportantthingistoweartherightclothesfortheoccasion.Paraphrase1.Wearingtherightclothesisimportantbecausepeoplelookatourclothes.2.Wearingtherightclothesfortheoccasionisimportantifwewanttoleavegoodfirstimpressions.3.Wearingproperclothesisimportantforfirstimpressions.\nParaphraseKeyPointsKeypoint2Schoolsasktheirstudentstowearauniform.Why?Alotofteachersthinkauniformmakesstudentsfeelthattheyarepartoftheirschoolandthattheiruniformhelpsthemtobeseriousabouttheirstudies.Teacherssaythatuniformscanhelpinotherwaystoo.Paraphrase1.Schoolsaskstudentstowearauniformbecauseithelpstheminmanyways,suchasbeingseriousabouttheirstudy.2.Studentsarerequiredtowearauniformbecauseitbenefitsinvariousways,suchasbeingseriousabouttheirstudy.\nParaphraseKeyPointsKeypoint3However,itisnotonlyschoolsthatwantpeopletodressinacertainway.…visitadoctor…gointoabank…Policeofficers…alotofcompanies…Paraphrase1.However,notonlyschoolsbutalsoplacessuchashospitals,banks,policestationsandsomecompanieswantpeopletodressinacertainway.2.Besidesstudents,otherpeoplewhoworkforhospitals,banks,policestationsandsomecompaniesarealsosupposedtowearuniformsbecauseofconvenience.\nParaphraseKeyPointsKeypoint4…buttheycanshowourattitudetowhatwearedoingatthemoment..Furthermore,peoplewillhaveconfidenceinus.Paraphrase1.Ourclothescanshowourattitudeandmakepeoplehaveconfidenceinus.2.Ourclothesrepresentourattitudeandhelpuswintrustfromothers.\nHowtoConnect?but,yet,however,though,...aswellas,inadditionto,notonly...butalso,togetherwith,besides,moreover,futhermore,...thus,therefore，asaresult,consequently,...meanwhile,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,contrastwith,...firstly/secondly/finally/...because(of),dueto,inviewof,onaccountof,...forexample/instance,suchas,andsooninshort,inconclusion,inaword,allinall...…\nConnectKeyPointsPoint1Wearingproperclothesisimportantforfirstimpressions.Point2Schoolsaskstudentstowearauniformbecauseithelpstheminmanyways,suchasbeingseriousabouttheirstudy.Point3Besidesschools,otherplaces,likehospitals,banks,policestationsandsomecompaniesalsowanttheirstafftowearuniformsbecauseofconvenience.Point4Ourclothesrepresentourattitudeandhelpuswintrustfromothers.Forexample,Inconclusion,\nWriteandEditWearingproperclothesisimportantforpeople’sfirstimpressions.(要点1)Forexample,Schoolsaskstudentstowearauniformbecauseitbenefitstheminvariousways.(要点2)Besidesschools,otherplaces,likehospitals,banks,policestationsandsomecompaniesalsowanttheirstafftodressinuniformsbecauseofconvenienceandseriousness.(要点3)Inconclusion,ourclothescanshowourattitudeandwinconfidencefromothers.(要点4)(67词)\nHowtoWriteaGoodSummary?connectthekeypointswithproperwords;1.read2.paraphrase3.connect4.writereadtwoorthreetimestofindthekeypoints;rewritethekeypoints;writeadraftandeditit.\nHomeworkFinishwritingthesummaryandpolishit.ReadthepassageonA4ofthenewspaper(7)andwriteasummary,payingattentiontotheprocuduresofwritingasummary.