初中英语作文讲解 33页

初中英语作文高分秘诀1.动笔之前，认真审题《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。2.围绕中心，拟定提纲书面表达评分原则有四条：（1）内容要点；（2）运用词汇和结构的数量；（3）运用语法结构和词汇的准确性；（4）上下文的连贯性。由此可见，要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。书面表达，内容广泛，题材多样，要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记，要写清年、月、日和天气情况；如果是书信，则要注意书信的格式，注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。3.语言通顺，表达准确(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。(3)．注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。1)语态、时态要准确无误。2)主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。3)注意人称代词的宾格形式。4)注意冠词用法，例如：Heisanhoneststudent.中的an不能写成a。5)注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive,believe,fourteen,forty,ninth,restaurant等。标点符号特别注意汉英的不同，例如：汉语英语A.句号。.B.省略号………C.顿号、无(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：1)外表特征：tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,ordinary-looking等。2)服饰颜色：red,yellow,blue,white,green,brown,black等。3)内心境界：glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interested等。4)感情描写：love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等。5)动作描写：come,go,get,have,take,bring,fetch等。33\n(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：1)表示并列关系的过渡词：and,aswellas,or…2)表示转折关系的过渡词：but,yet,however…3)表示时间关系的过渡词：first,second,third,andthen,finally,after,before,afterafewdays,atlast,atthattime,later,inthepast,immediately,inthemeanwhile,when,while,then,afterthat…4)表示空间关系的过渡词：near(to),far(from),inthefrontof,beside,behind,beyond,above,below,totheright,totheleft,ononeside,ontheothersideof,outside…5)表示比较关系的过渡词：inthesameway,justlike,justas…6)表示对照关系的过渡词：but,still,yet,however,ontheotherhand,inspiteof,eventhough…7)表示递进关系的过渡词：also,and,then,too,inaddition,moreover,again…8)表示因果关系的过渡词：because,since,then,thus,otherwise,so,therefore,asaresult…9)表示解释说明的过渡词：forexample,infact,inthiscase,for,actually…10)表示强调的过渡词：infact,indeed,necessarily,certainly,withoutanydoubt,truly,mostimportant…11)表示目的的过渡词：forthisreason,forthispurpose,sothat,inorderthat,soasto,inorderto,…12)表示列举的过渡词：forexample,suchas…13)表示总结性的过渡词：inconclusion,finally,atlast,inbrief,ashasbeenstated,inaword,ingeneral,inall,inaword,generallyspeaking…4.不会表达，另辟蹊径中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。(1)迂回而行当汉语词义不会用英语表达时，可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展思路，然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。(2)小词大用汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅，但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用：take,have,get,make,come,go,do,see,show,happy,nice,kind,help等。(3)借花献佛有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过题，记忆犹新，那么就可信手拈来，为我所用。5.锦上添花，量力而行如果你还有时间和精力，想把书面表达写得更好，那么，请注意以下几点：(1)句型多样化，不要I（We）……到底，使人觉得乏味。(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句。(3)进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句。(4)适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词。33\n(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感。(6)适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。(7)上下句子紧接时，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以节省篇幅。6.书写工整，卷面整洁字迹要清晰，让阅卷人看得清楚，不可字迹潦草，难以辨认，要保持卷面的整洁。7.写完之后，勿忘检查中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：(1)格式是否有错。(2)拼写有无错误。(3)语言是否用错。(4)时态、语态错误。(5)标点错误。(6)人称是否用错。【注意】此时不宜在卷面上作较大的改动，以免顾此失彼，影响全局。总之，只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧，合理分配时间，在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文，得到令人满意的考分。(一)掌握技巧：　　(1)注意篇章结构，合理布局　　开始部分(openingparagraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。　　正文部分(Bodyparagraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。　　结尾部分(concludingparagraphs)——对全文的总结和概括。　　要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。　　(2)确定主题句　　主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现　　在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。　　写主题句应注意以下几点：　　①33\n归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点　　②提炼出一句具有概括性的话　　③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。　　(二)巧用连接词　　要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词　　表示罗列增加　　First,second,third,　　First,then/next,afterthat/next,finally　　Foronething…foranother…,　　On(the)onehand…ontheotherhand,　　Besides/what’smore/inaddition/furthermore/moreover/another/also,　　Especially/Inparticular,　　表示时间顺序　　now,atpresent,recently,　　after,afterwards,afterthat,afterawhile,inafewdays,　　atfirst,inthebeginning,tobeginwith,　　later,next,finally,　　immediately,soon,suddenly,allofasudden,atthatmoment,assoonas,themoment　　formnowon,fromthenon,　　atthesametime,meanwhile,　　till,not…until,before,after,when,while,asduring,　　表示解释说明　　now,inaddition,forexample,forinstance,inthiscase,33\nmoreover　　furthermore,infact,actually　　表示转折关系　　but,however,while,though,or,otherwise,onthecontrary,ontheother　　hand,incontrast,despite,inspiteof,eventhough,except(for),instead,of　　course,afterall,　　表示并列关系　　or,and,also,too,notonly…butalso,aswellas,both…and,either…or,neither　　…nor　　表示因果关系　　because,becauseof,since,nowthat,as,thanksto…,dueto…,therefore,asa　　result(of),otherwise,so…that,such…that　　表示条件关系　　as(so)longas,onconditionthat,if,unless　　表示让步关系　　though,although,as,evenif,eventhough,whether…or…,however,whoever,　　whatever,whichever,wherever,whenever,nomatterhow(who,what,which,where,when,　　whom)　　表示举例　　forexample,forinstance,suchas…,take…forexample　　表示比较　　besimilarto,similarly,thesameas,incontrast,comparedwith(to)…justlike,　　just33\nas,　　表示目的　　forthisreason,,forthispurpose,sothat,inorderto,soasto,　　表示强调　　indeed,infact,surely,certainly,nodoubt,withoutanydoubt,truly,　　obviously,aboveall,　　表示概括归纳　　inaword,inshort,inbrief,onthewhole,generallyspeaking,inmyopinion,asfar　　asIknow,Asweallknow,ashasbeenstated,asIhaveshown,finally,atlast,in1考生列举出解决问题的多种途径:1.问题现状2.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)Inrecentdays,wehavetofaceIproblem-----A,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.First,------------(说明A的现状).Second,---------------(举例进一步说明现状)ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,---------------(解决方法一).Foranother-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally,Ibelievethat-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently,I'mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause--------------(带来的好处).2.观点型作文：要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。     1.有一些人认为。。。 2.另一些人认为。。。3.我的看法。。。     The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some eople say A is heir favorite. They hold their view for the reason of②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover,④---------------(理由三).     While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).     From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that⑨----------------原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice . 33\n    2) 给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点     Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一). For example, they think②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them③-----------------(为他们带来的好处). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing,⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二). Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).3.作文的框架asisshown/indicated/illustratedbythefigure/percentagein　the　table(graph/picture/pie/chart),___作文题目的议题_____hasbeenonrise/decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadilyrising/decreasingfrom______in_______to______in_____.Fromthesharp/markeddecline/riseinthechart,itgoeswithoutsayingthat________.There　are　at　least　two　good　reasonsaccountingfor______.On　the　one　hand,________.On　the　other　hand,　_______isdue　to　the　fact　that________.　In　addition,________isresponsible　for_______.　Maybe　there　are　some　other　reasonsto　show________.　But　it　is　generally　believed　that　the　above　mentioned　reasons　are　commonlyconvincing.　　As　far　as　I　am　concerned,　Iholdthepointofviewthat_______.　　I　am　sure　my　opinion　is　both　sound　and　well-grounded.1：投诉信Dear_______,Iam.(自我介绍)IfeelbadtotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatIhavetomakeacomplaintabout_______.Thereasonformydissatisfactionis______________(总体介绍).Inthefirstplace,_________________________(抱怨的第一个方面).Inaddition,____________________________(抱怨的第二个方面).Underthesecircumstances,Ifindit___(感觉)to____________________________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).33\nIappreciateitverymuchifyoucould_______________________(提出建议和请求),preferably__________(进一步的要求),andIwouldliketohavethismattersettledby______(设定解决事情最后期限).ThankyouforyourconsiderationandIwillbelookingforwardtoyourreply.YourssincerelyLiMing2：询问信Dear______,Iam_________________________(自我介绍).Iamwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregarding_______.(要询问的内容)Firstofall,whatare_________________________________?(第一个问题)Secondly,whenwill________________________________?(第二个问题)Thirdly,is_________________?(第三个问题)Iwouldalsoliketoinquire_________________________________(将最重要的问题单独成段).Couldyoubesokindastosendmesomerelevantbookletsontheabove-mentionedaspects?Thankyouforyoukindness,andyourpromptattentiontothisletterwillbehighlyappreciated.YourssincerelyLiMing3：请求信Dear___________,Iamwritingtoformallyrequestto___________(请求的内容)Thereasonfor______________isthat______________________________（给出原因）.I________,soI___________________________________(给出细节)Iwouldalsoliketorequest________________________(提出进一步的要求).IamsorryforanyinconvenienceIhavecaused.33\nThankyouforyourattentiontotheserequests.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,donothesitatetocontactmeat____________(电话号码).Ilookforwardtoafavorablereply.YourssincerelyLiMing初中英语写作范文集锦 [一]围绕：学校让学生打扫厕所和学校不让学生打扫厕所两种情况。写一不少于80个词的主题为“孩子的独立教育”英语作文。　　给出词：onlychild，moraleducation　　nowadaysinchina，manystudentsaretheonlychildintheirfamily.theyaretheappleoftheirparents’eyesoreventheirgranparents’，sotheyarefreeofanyhouseworkormeniallabor.andmoraleducationisnomorethansomebookishthing.studentsarelargelydependentontheirparentsandteachers.　　toeducatethemtobeindependent，themosteffectivewayistoletthemexperienceontheirown.therefore，theyarebettertobegiventheopportunitytogetsometrainatschool-tocleanthewashingroom，whichcanberegardedaspartofthemoraleducation.范文：关于国庆节的英语作文　　例1　　NationalDayiscoming，andwecanhaveaseven-day.MyfamilyaregoingtoHainan.It’sagoodseasidecity.Wearestayingthereforaweek.Wearegoingtothebeachandgoingswimminginthesea.We’revisitingTianyaHaijiao，WanquanRiverandmanyotherbeautifulplaces.Ithinkwe’llhaveagoodtimethere.33\n　　国庆节来了，我有七天的假期。我们一家去海南。那是一个美丽的海滨城市。我们在那里待上一个星期。我们去沙滩，还在海里游泳。我们游览“天涯海角”，菀泉河还有别的许多好地方。我想我们在那里会玩得很开心。　　例2NationalDayHolidays　　Iwenttomycousin’shouseonthefirstdayoftheholidaysandgotapieceofgoodnewsthathiswifewaspregnant；Shesaidshe’sworryingaboutgettingfat，butonherfacetherewasaunconcealablepleasureofconceivingababy.Mycousintoldmethathe’lleducatehischildinasevereway，withafuturefather’smatureness.I’mhappyforthem.：）　　Yesterday，ourresearchschool’ssoccerteamhadamatchwiththegraduatestudentsfromthedepartmentofinternationalbusiness.Itwasalmostaclosegameinthefirsthalf，butweseemedlackingofvigorinthesecondhalf，so，welostthegame.　　HalfoftheNationalDayholidayshavepassedby……lifestillgoeswithgoodandbadtimes.范文：中学生该不该上网（2）　　最近你们学校要举行一次“中学生该不该上网”的讨论。你是赞成者之一，认为我们不应该因噎废食。请根据下表内容写一篇发言篇。　　要求：字数100词左右注意：不要逐句翻译。益处1.看国内外新闻，获取信息。2.发e-mail，打电话。3.上网络学校，阅读各种书籍，自学外语。4.欣赏音乐，观看体育比赛，玩棋牌等游戏，网上购物，丰富我们的生活。5.提高我们操作电脑的能力33\n注意事项1．不要沉湎于（begivento）上网以免影响生活和学习。2．不要上不健康的网站。　　参考范文：　　Inmyopinion，theInternetishelpfulratherthanharmfulassomeoneelsethinks.Asisknowntoall，theInternetisplayingamoreandmoreimportantpartinourdailylife.OntheInternet，wecanreadnewsathomeandfromabroadandgetasmuchinformationaswecan.Wecansende-mailsormakephonecallstoourfamilyaswellastoourfriends.Wecanalsoattendthenetschool，readmanybooksandeventeachourselvesEnglish.Wecanalsoenjoymusic，watchmatchesandplaycomputergamesontheInternet.Wecanevendoshoppingonline.Besides，wecanimproveourabilitytooperatethecomputer.　　ButweshouldnotbegiventotheInternet，orwe'llgetourlifeandstudydestroyed.Besides，weshouldkeepofftheharmfulwebsites.Anyhow，thisdoesn'tpreventtheInternetbecomingourfriend.Wecan'tthrowawaytheapplebecauseofthecore，canwe？范文：我的同学MyClassmate（3）　　请以“MyClassmate”为标题写一篇记叙文　　要求：1、主题明确，语言流畅，思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。　　思路点拨：　　写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述，所叙述的内容要交代清楚，条理清晰，重点突出，主次分明，详略得当。　　这篇文章也是记叙文，主人公应该用第三人称，时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索，以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料，反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理，有真实感，叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行，同时加以点评。　　参考范文MyClassmate33\n　　LiuKaiismyclassmate.Heisagoodstudentandalwaysreadytohelpothers.　　Onedayonhiswaytoschool，hesawalittlegirlcrossingtheroad.Acarwascomingtowardsherquicklyandthegirlwastoofrightenedtomove.Thecarnearlyhither.JustthenLiuKairusheduptoherandcaughtherbythearm.Thelittlegirlwassaved.Shetoldhimwhereshelived，andhetookherhome.WhenLiuKaihurriedintotheclassroom，theteacherhadalreadybegunhislesson.Hetoldtheteacherwhyhewaslate.Hewasthenpraisedforwhathehaddone.初中英语写作范文集锦 [二]范文：介绍学生学习情况　　Itismyhonortoshowyouaround，andnowIwillintroducesomethingaboutourstudy.　　Atpresentwelearnnotonlyfromthetextbookbutalsofromoptionalcourses.Wecanstudywhatweareinterestedin.Inthisway，wecandevelopourselvesindifferentaspects.AndwecanalsostudyontheInternet.范文：Apianoplayer　　WhatdoIwanttodowhenI’molder？Someonewantstobeadoctor.Someonewantstobeabasketballplayerbecausetheyaregoodatsport.Someonewantstobeawriterandtomakethewriting.Someonewantstobeateacherbecausetheyliketeachingchildren.　　IlikeplayingthepianoandIgoodatit.SoIwanttobecomeapianoplayer.Playthepianoisveryinteresting.Andyoucanlearnsomethingofmusic.Pianocanmakeyoulikemusic.Alotofmusicianandsingerareloveplayingpiano.　　IplaythepianowhenI’mtenyearsold.NowI’mingrandfive.IhopewhenI’msixteenyearsold，Icanbecomegrandeight.I’llbeharderandhardertopractise.　　Becomeapianoplayisahardjob.ButIbelieveIcandoit.范文：mydreamplace33\n　　Thewintervacationpassedquickly.Inthosedays，Ihavedonesomethings.Playing，doinghomeworkandsoon.SometimesIhelpedmymotherdoingsomehousework.Shethankedtome.　　Though，Iwasproudofmyself.IalsowentovermyEnglishlearning.IthinkIhaveknownmorethanbefore.Inthenewterm，Iwillstudyhard.范文：ThethingthatI'llneverforget　　Howtimeflies！I’mfifteenyearsnow.Duringthelongtime，therewasonethingthatIwillneverforget.　　TheSpringFestivalisourtraditionalfestival.DuringtheSpringFestival，peopleusuallyvisittheirfriendsandrelatives.WhenIwas9yearsold，myfamilytookthebustomygrandparents’tosay“HappyNewYear”tothem.　　Inthebus，Ihadagoodseat.At7：30，thebuscametoavillage.Awomangotonwithababyinherarms.Atthattime，therewasnoseat.Butshemustlookafterherbabycarefully.Shehadtostandnexttome.Iwantedtostandupandlethersitdown，butIwasafraidofhearingtheotherpeoplesay“Thatgirlwanttobepraised.”Ilookedaround.Mostpeoplewerelookingoutofthewindowsandsomeweresleeping.Suddenly，alittleboybehindme，stoodupandmaderoomforthewoman.Shesaid“Thankyouverymuch”withabigsmile.Theboysmiled，too.WhenItoldmycousinaboutitafterthat，hesaid“Thechildisthefatherofaman.”I’mveryashamed.Whycould’tIdothesamethingasthelittleboydid？　　FromthatIlearnthatweshoulddoourbesttohelppeoplewhoneedhelp.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontohelpingothers，theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful！范文：怎样学习英语HowtostudyEnglish？　　作文一：　　StudyEnglish，YoudoneedtouseEnglishwithspeakerswhoarenotteachersofEnglish.Thisisn'teasy，sinceeveryonefeelsconstrainedspeakingEnglishwithfriendswithwhomit33\nwouldbenaturaltouseasharedmothertongue.JoininganEnglishClubisagoodideaandjoiningaclubwithaninternationalmembership（whereEnglishisinuseatleastsomeofthetime）is，formanypeople，evenbetter.Ifnothinglikethisisaccessible，youmightconsiderwhatwouldbeinvolvedingettingsomethinggoing.　　你需要常常和英语教师以外的人士用英语交谈。这当然很不容易，因为与母语相同的人自由交谈时，彼此若用英语交谈总会觉得很不自在。亦可参加英语俱乐部或国际会员的俱乐部（至少有时使用英语沟通），这样对很多人而言更有益。如果没有合适的社团可加入，也不妨考虑任何足以提高英语能力的机会。　　作文二：　　TherearefourkeypointstostudyEnglish：listening，speaking，readingandwriting.　　Firstly，weshouldbebravetotalkwithothersinEnglish.Bydoingthis，wecanimproveoretalkingandlisteningskill.　　Secondly，weshouldtrytolistentoallkindsofEnglishprogrammesasmuchaspossible.Inthisway，wecangraduallyimproveourpronunciation.　　Thirdly，weshouldoftenreadEnglishbooks.Whenwecomeacrossanewword.Weshouldguessitsmeaningthroughthecontestfirst.thenlookitupinthedictionarytohaveacheck.Ithin，itisagoodwayofreading.　　Fourthly，weshouldpracticeourwritingskills.Wheneverwehaveanyidea，weshouldgetthepenandwriteitdownatonce.ItisveryimportanttoavoidwritinginChinesewayandusingtheChinesegrammar.　　Aslongaswelisten，speak，readandwritemore，wearesuretomakeremarkableprogress！初中英语写作范文集锦 [三]范文：介绍学生学习情况　　Itismyhonortoshowyouaround，andnowIwillintroducesomethingaboutourstudy.33\n　　Atpresentwelearnnotonlyfromthetextbookbutalsofromoptionalcourses.Wecanstudywhatweareinterestedin.Inthisway，wecandevelopourselvesindifferentaspects.AndwecanalsostudyontheInternet.范文：风Wind　　Eachseasonhaswind.Thewarmwindinspring，thehotwindinsummer，thegoldwindinautumnandcoldwindinwinterareallcalledwind，buttheirtempersarequitedifferent.　　Whenspringcomes，warmwindwakesupeverything；manyflowerscomeout.Itcanbringusjoy.　　Inhotsummer，thesweatsrolldownfromourchecks.Everythingneedswind，butwindoftenhideandseekwithus.　　Autumncomes.Coolwindblowsyellowleavesdown.Thecornisripeandallthefieldsbecomeyellow.Thefarmersarebusygettingincrops.Itcanbringusthehappinessofharvest.　　Incoldwinter，coldwindblowssohardthateveryonecanhardlyopenhiseyes　　Wind，wewelcomeyou，needyou，butsometimeshateyou.Willyoupleaseobeyusanddogoodthingsforus.范文：找妈妈LookingforMum　　OnedayLiMingcaughtalittlebird.Hetieditwithapieceofthreadandplayedwithithappily.Atthattime，hesawalittlegirlcryingbytheroadside.Apolicemansawher，cameoverandaskedherwhyshewascryingandwhereherhouseis.Whenhelearnedthatgirlhadgotlostandshewasthenlookingforhermother，hedecidedtoleadthegirltobebackhome.　　SeeingthisLiMingthoughtthelittlebirdalsohaditsmotherandheshouldsetthelittlebirdfreesothatitcouldbewithitsmotheragain.ThenLiMinguntiedthethreadandreturnedthelittlebirdtothebluesky.33\n范文：能源Energy　　Asweallknowweneedenergyinourdailylife.Therearemanykindsofenergy.Wecangetourenergyfromfood.Theenergyinfoodcomesfromsunlightwhichhelpsplantsgrow.Plantsstoreupenergyfromthesun，muchofourfoodcomesfromplants.Someofourfoodcomesfromanimals，butanimalsdependonplantsforfoodtoo.范文：英语作文自我介绍Tointroducemyself　　Hello，everyone！　　MynameisWinnie.I'ma15yearsoldgirl.IliveinthebeautifulcityofRizhao.　　I'manactive，lovelyandclevergirl.Intheschool，myfavouritesubjectismaths.Perhapssomeonethinksit'sdifficulttostudywell.ButIlikeit.Ibelivethatifyoutryyourbest，everythingcanbedonewell.　　Ialsolikesportsverymuch.Suchas，running，volleyballandsoon.　　I'mkind-hearted.Ifyouneedhelp，pleasecometome.　　Ihopewecanbegoodfriends！　　OK.Thisisme.Asunnygirl.初中英语写作范文集锦 [四]范文：给父亲的信　　Directions：youhavedecidedtostartjoggingnextmonth，butyouhaven'tgotanysuitableshoestowear.Nowyouarewritingalettertoyourfatheraskinghimtosendyousomeextramoneysothatyoucanbuttheshoes.inyouletter，youwillinclude：　　*yourhardwork；　　*HowyoureadaboutjogginginyourEnglishtextbook；　　*Theadvantagesofjogging；33\n　　*THeneedforapairfoqualityshoes；　　*Thepriceoftheshoesyouplantobuy；　　*THetimeyouneedthemoney；　　*YourappreciationforhishelpDeardad,　　IamwritingtoyouforhelpwhichIhavecometoadesperateneed.YouknowIalwayswanttobehealthyandingeatshape，soIcanpaymoreattentiontoteacher'sinstruction.Yesterday，Iwenttolibraryandreadsomebooksaboutjogging.IthinkIneedagoodjoggingshoesformyexercise.Ibelieveastrongbodycanenhancemystudyasdescribedbyourtextbook.　　Ihavefoundacheappriceofapairofjoggingshoeswhichcostonly$500nearbyschool.Daddy，youwillhelpmebuythispair，wont'you？Theonsalemaynotlastforlong.Pleasesendmoneyassoonaspossible，soIcanstartmyjoggingrightaway.Iknowyouwillfulfillmydreamandexpectmyendeavor.IpromiseIwilldomybestonmystudyandexercise.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Takecareandwishyouhappiness.　　Yoursbelovedson.范文：考试Examination　　Someonesaysexaminationcanhelpusgooverourlessonsintimeandaftertheexaminationwecanfindhowwearegettingonwithourstudies.Butwearealwayshavingtoomanyexaminationsandtheyarealsotoodifficultforustogetthrough.Ifindsomeofushavelostinterestinlearninglessons.Besides，itisharmfultoourhealthaswehardlyhaveanytimetogoinforsports.Ithinkthepresentsystemofmeasurementshouldbeimproved.范文：什么是成功的秘诀WhatIstheSecretofSuccess　　Myfatherisanengineer.Heworksveryhard.33\n　　OnceIaskedmyfatherwhatthesecretofsuccesswas.Hedidn'tsayaword，butwroteafewwordsonapieceofpaperandhandedittome.Ilookedatthepaper，itwaswritten：A=X+Y+Z.　　“Whatdoesitmean？”Iasked.　　“Ameanssuccess，”explainedmyfather.“Xmeanshard，Ymeansgoodways，andZmeansyoumuststoptalkingandstarttowork.”　　That'sright.Fromthenon，Itriedmybesttobebetter.范文：通知Notice　　ThesportsmeetingwhichwastotakeplacethisSaturdayhastobeputoffbecauseoftheheavyrairithesedays.AllstudentsarerequiredtocometoschoolonSaturdaymorningasusual，buttherewillbenoclassthatafternoon.Weatherpermitting，thesportsmeetingwillbeheldnextSaturdaymorning. Membersoftheschoolping-pongteammustcometothePing-pongHallat4：30thisSaturdayafternoon.Ping-pongstarsfromWuhanwillcomeandgivespecialtrainingandcoachingthen.OfficeofPhysicalEducation10thApril，2005初中英语写作范文集锦 [五]范文：一次体育课APELesson　　下面是某节体育课的有关情况，请你据此写一篇日记。　　1．时间：5月28日，星期一，下午。　　2．天气：阴。　　3．项目：跳远（jump）。　　4．过程：　　（1）打上课铃时就在操场集合；　　（2）做准备活动（warming—upexercises）；33\n　　（3）听老师讲解并示范；　　（4）我因心情紧张而失败；　　（5）不灰心，反复练习；　　（6）终于跳过了3米。　　5．体会：只要有恒心（perseverance）就一定能成功。　　注意：　　1．内容必须包括所有要点，但不能逐点翻译。　　2．日记格式要正确。　　3．词数100左右。APELesson　　May28th Monday                                   Cloudy　　ThisafternoonwehadaPElesson. Ourteachertaughtustopractisethelongjump.Whenthebellrang，wegatheredontheplayground. Afterwarming-upexercises，theteachertoldusthewayoflongjumpandshowedushowtodoit. Thenwefollowedtheteacherandpractisedoneafteranother. Sooncamemyturn，butIfeltahitnervous.ThoughIfailedthefirsttime，yetIdidn'tlosemyheart.Ikeptonpractising.AtlastIwasabletojumpover3meters.　　FromthislessonIcametoseethatonewillsucceedifhehasperseverance.范文：写给母亲的感谢信MydearestMother，　　Themother'sdayiscomingandIwouldliketosay“Happymother'sday”inthisletter.Iloveyouandthankyousomuchforeverythingyoudidforme. Thisday，Iwillstayawayandcan'tgiveyoumyappreciationathome.IknowIwillwatchmyself，sodon'tworryaboutme.Iamdoingverywellonmystudy.Myschoolmatesandteachersareallverynice.ThoughIcan'tbeathome，Ihopeyouhaveawonderfulmother'sday.33\n　　Love，Yourson^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Dearmother：　　IamwritingtoexpressmydeepestthankstoyouinMother'sDay，dearmother，youdevote allofyourenergyandbloodtoour.youdonothaveanycomplaintaboutmybrotherandi.Youloveourthoughvariousdifferentapproachessuchasstudy，workandlife，consquently，ourheldonthebeliefthatthemotherisonlylover.pleaseacceptourappreciateagain　　I hopethatyouhavehappinesseveryday.^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Mum：　　Suchissons'nature，Ireallydonotknowhowtoexpressmythankstoyou.However，Icanimagine，ontheday18yearsago，whenyougavebirthtome，whatacomplexfeelingyouhad.Inthepastfewyears，everydayyoustrugglemeupinthemorningandpreparebreakfastforme，thenintheafternoon，youalwayswelcomeyouronlysonwithdeliciousfoodsafteraday’shardwork.Nowyoursonhasbeen18andwillgotouniversitysoon，likeabirdisleavingitsparents.Nevertheless，yourfootprintsonmyheartwill nevereverfade and——Iloveyoumum！范文：介绍校内配套设施　　Iamverygladtoshowyouaround. 　　Asyoucansee，myschoolisverysmall.Ithasonlyonebuildingwhichisbuiltlikearing.Ithasfourfloorsinall.Onthe'firstflooraretheofficesofleaders.Theclassroomsandtheofficesofteachersareontheotherthreefloors.Onthesecondfloor，thereisareadingroom.Infrontofthebuildingistheplayground.初中英语写作范文集锦 [六]范文：少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲Ayoungidler,anoldbeggar　　33\n“少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲”，请你谈谈对此的想法并如何行动。　　AlmosteveryoneknowsthefamousChinesesaying：Ayoungidler，anoldbeggar.Throughouthistory，wehaveseenmanycasesinwhichthissayinghasagainandagainprovedtobetrue.　　Itgoeswithoutsayingthattheyouthisthebesttimeoflife，duringwhichone'smentalandphysicalstatesareattheirpeaks.Ittakesrelativelylesstimeandpainstolearnoracceptnewthingsinaworldfullofchangesandrapiddevelopments.Inaddition，oneislesslikelytobeundergreatpressurefromcareer，familyandhealthproblemswhenyoung.Therefore，afreshmindplusenormousenergywillensuresuccessindifferentaspectsoflife.　　Ofcourse，weallknow：nopains，nogains.Ifwedon'tmakeeveryefforttomakegooduseoftheadvantagesyouthbringsus，itisimpossibletoachieveanygoals.Asstudents，weshouldnowtryourbesttolearnallthesubjectswellsothatwecanbewellpreparedforthechallengesthatwewillfaceinthefuture.范文：寒假生活Wonderfullifeinwinterholiday　　FromthesixteenthofJanuarytotheseventhofFebruaryisourWinterHoliday.IthinkeverybodydidalotofthingsintheWinterHoliday.ButIdidn't.LetyoutolistentomystoryofWinterHoliday.　　Ispendalotoftimeonthehomework…EverydayinmyWinterHoliday，Ialwaysgotuplate.ThenIlistenedtothetape，itwasnineo'clock.ThenIatebreakfastandthenIdidmyhomeworkduringthedaytime！I’mnotveryslowbutthehomeworkwastooheavy！　　I'munluckyontheplayingtoo.IplayedfirecrackerbutIhurtmyfingerwiththefire.I'mcarelesstokindlethefirecracker，soI'mveryunlucky.　　Istillunluckyonmyfriend'sparty.Inthemorning，IwantedtogetupearlybutIwokeupat10：50.Aftertenminutes，thepartywouldstart！SoIonlyeatapieceofbreadthenIgotomyfriend’shome！AndIstayathishomeforalongtimewhenIcamehome.Mymotherandfatherwereveryangryandtheyscoldedme！33\n　　I'mworriedandfeelunluckyonmyweigh.Lastterm，Iwas48kilogrambutnowIam51kilogram！Imusttodobanting！　　Butmostimportant，IhavegonetoShanghaiOceanAquarium，IwanttogothereverymuchbecauseIwanttoseethehorse，themonkey…inthesea.NowI'vedoneit.ItisabrightdotinmyWinterHoliday.范文：我家的小狗MyLittleDog　　Lastyear，myfriendgavemealittledog.Iwasfondofhimverymuch.IlikedtoplaywithhimafterschoolandhelikedtofollowmewhereverIwent.IwasverygladthatIhada“bodyguard”。　　LastwinterIwasverybusywithmylessonsandcamehomeverylateeveryday.However，nomatterhowlateIwenthome，mydogusedtostandatacomernearmyschoolwaitingforme.WhenIpassedthere，hebarkedtwoorthreetimesthenrantowardsme.Itseemedthathewascallingme.　　Mydognotonly，tookgoodcareofme，butalsowasrespoasibleathome.Whenstrangerscametomyhouse，hebarkedatthembutnothurtthem.Whatalovelydogheis！范文：我的储蓄罐MyCollecting-tin　　Ihavealotoflittlehandiwork，butthefavoriteoneismycollecting-tin.　　Itisalittlemanmadeofchina.Hewearsaredhatandapairofbigglasses.Hisblueclothesareverynice.Hehasarednosebandnobigeyeslikestarsonhisface.Hisbigandroundbodyisveryfunny.　　Becauseofthiscollecting-fin，Ihavelearnedhowtosavemoney.WhenIwasalittleboy，Ialwaysputcoinsaway，thenIdroppedthemintohisroundbody.Sometimeshecan“eat”plentyofcoinsatatime，Hebecomesheavierandheavierdayafterday.初中英语写作范文集锦 [七]33\n范文：我的外籍老师OurForeignTeacher　　MsJerryisaforeignteacher.ShecomesfromAmerica.Sheisthirty-oneyearsold.Shehasfairhair，whiteskinandgrayeyes.Sheistallandslim.Shelooksverykind.Andinfact，sheiskindindeed.　　MsJerryisagoodteacher.Althoughsheonlycomestoourschooltwiceaweek，sheisveryresponsibletoherworkandstrictwithherstudents.Once，shewasill，butshewentongivinguslessons.Whenwelearnedthis，wealllistenedtoherevenmoreattentivelythanusual.　　MsJerryteachesusEnglishwithgreatenthusiasm：“Eachlessonshewillbringusnewpictures，newstories，newgamesandnewsongs.Herclassisalwaysfullofhappylaughterandmerrysongs.　　MsJerryissuchagoodteacherthatallofusloveandrespecther.范文：参观博物馆GoingtotheMuseums　　Duringalongvacation，Iusuallyliketogotoseetheexhibitsinoneofagreatmanymuseums.Suchastheartmuseum，thehistorymuseum，themuseumofnaturalhistory，andthemuseumofscienceandtechnology.　　Manywonderfulthingsarecaredforinmuseums.Therearepaintings，potteries，sculptures，costumes，swords，ancientanimalbonesandplants，stuffedanimals，antiquesteamlocomotives，andmanyothers.Itisalwaysagoodreviewofhistorytovisitthosemuseums.范文：寄信MailingaLetter　　Alllargecitiesaroundtheworldhavemanypostofficeslocatedthroughoutthecity，andeventhesmallestvillagehasatleastonepostalstation.Youmaygotoapostofficetomailaletter.33\n　　However，therearemailboxeslocatedoneverysecondorthirdcornerinallcitiesandtowns. Anyletterorsmallpackagehavingsufficientpostagemaybedroppedinanyofthesemailboxes.　　Ifapersonwishesalettertobedeliveredmorequicklytotheaddress，hemaybuyaspecialdeliverystampanddeliveryismadedirectlybythemessengerinsteadofbytheregularcarrier.范文：神奇的贝壳TheMagicShell　　AtthebeachIfoundamagicshell，soIbroughtithomeinmypail；andIkeptituponmytopbookshelfrightunderthepicturewhale.　　Andnow，wheneverIwishIwerebacktherebytheshiningsea，Iholdtheshellupclosetomyear，tillitbringsthebeachtome：allthehushingsoundandtherushingsoundoftheseashorewindsandwavesarecaughtinmyshellthatIbroughthome.范文：旅游事业WaystoImprovechina'stourism　　【要求】　　要求：旅游事业对我国具有举足轻重的作用。请以WaystoImproveChina＇sTourism为题为我国旅游事业的发展提几点建议。（提示：扩大宣传，改善旅游设施，提高服务质量……）　　【范文】　　WaystoImprovechina＇stourism　　Tourismisnowbecomingamajorindustrythroughouttheworld.However，tourisminChinaisnotasdevelopedasitshouldbe.Ifthefollowingisdone，China＇stourismwilldefinitelybeimproved.　　First，ourplacesofinterestshouldbebetteradvertisedthroughouttheworldtoattractmoretourists.Second，facilitiesshouldbeprovidedtoensurethattouristsenjoytheirtrip.Finally，thequalityofserviceshouldbeimproved.33\n　　Don＇ttellpeopletheirideasarebadunlessyou＇vegotagoodone.初中英语写作范文集锦 [八]范文：模范学生AModelStudent　　Doyoumindbeingcalledabadstudent？Ofcoursenot.SofarasIknow，everybodyintendstobe（become）amodelstudent.　　However，tobeamodelstudentisbynomeansaneasything.　　First，hemustdohisbesttoobtainknowledge.Amanwithoutsufficientknowledgewillnotsucceed.　　Secondly，hemustremembertoimprovehishealth.Onlyastrongmancandogreattasks.　　Thirdly，heshouldreceivemoraleducation.Ifhisconductisnotgood，noonewillconsidermakingfriendswithhim.范文：通电话APhoneCall　　IwastiredwithpreparingfortheJointCollegeEntranceExaminationtheotherevening.Andhavingbeenaloneforseveralhours，Iwaseagertohavesomeonetochatwithmeaboutanythingbutexaminations.SoItelephonedmybestfriendMary，whowasalsobusypreparingforthejointentranceexamination.　　Onthetelephone，ItoldherthatImissedherverymuch.AndIinvitedhertohaveacupofcoffeewithmeinacoffeehousenearherhome.Buttomysurprise，shedeclinedandsaidthatshehadtodevoteallhertimetoherstudies.Hearingthis，Icoulddonothingbuthangupaftersaying“Sorry”toher.Disappointedanddiscouraged，Iturnedbacktomydeskandreluctantlyburiedmyselfagaininmybooks.范文：春天来了Springiscomingon　　Winterhasgone，andspringiscomingon.33\n　　Watchingtheicemelting，Iknowthewholeearthisbeingrejuvenatedfromthewinter.Avarietyofflowerscomeouttoshowtheirbeautyandbringusfragrance.Itisafeastforoureyesandsouls.Theyellowgrasssuddenlyturngreen.Theyoungleavesgrowonthebranches.Theswallowsflybackhomewiththegreetingofspring.　　Everythingiscomingtolife.Feelingthewarmsunshine，enjoyingthebeautifulscenery，listeningtothewonderfulmusic，drinkingthenewtea，mymoodisperfectandIhavenothingelsetodesire.Springisthemostfantasticseasonintheyear.Itmeanssomuchtotheotherthreeseasons.范文：一个特殊的女孩Aspecialgirl　　Thereisaspecialgirl.Whyisshespecial？Firstlyshelookslikeaboysoherclassmatesalwayscallhera“hoyden”.Maybethey’rerightbecauseshealsohasthesamehobbiesastheboys.Shelikesplayingsoccer，basketball，tabletennis，badminton，computergamesandsoon.Ifsomeonebothershershewillfeelannoyedandevenfightagainsthim.　　Secondlysheisalovelygirl.Sheloveslifeverymuch.Youmayseehersmilingallthetime.Shelikesmakingfriendswithothers.Shelikesmakingjokeswiththem，too.Shelikessingingbutsheisnotgoodatit.Shelikesdancing，butsheisnotgoodatit，either.　　Thirdly，sheisasentimentalgirl.Shelikestalkingtobirdsandflowers.Shelikestalkingtoherself，too.Whenshe’swatchingTV，shewillcryoveratouchingscene.Sometimessheismovedtocryalldayandallnight.　　Lastlyshe’safantasticgirl.Shehaslotsofdreams.Shealwaysdreamsofherfuturesuchasherjobwhenshegrowsup.Shewantstobeascientistbecausescientistsinventthingsthatarehelpfulforourlives.ShewantstobeaTVhostessbecauseshehasbeautifulvoiceandshealsowantstobe…　　That’swhyIsaidshe’sspecial.Doyouwanttoknowher？IfyoucankeepthesecretIcantellyouwhosheis.Thespecialgirlisme.33\n范文：我的生日Mybirthday　　MybirthdayisonMarch23th，Icelebrateiteveryyearwithmyfamilyandmyfriends.　　Everyyear，Iholdalittlebirthdaypartyandinvitemyfriends.Wechatandplayalotofgamestogether.ThebestpartofitisthatIlovethebirthdaycakeandthegiftsIgetfrommyparentsandmyfriends.Ialsogetsomemoneyonmybirthday.IcanbuywhatIwantwiththemoney.　　Ihavegreatfunonmybirthdays，butontheotherhand，IalsounderstandthatIamoneyearolderaftereachbirthdayandthatmeansIshouldbemoreresponsibleformyselfandIshouldalsomyself-aware.Ishouldunderstandmorethingsandbelessignorant！　　Fianlly，Ishouldbethankfulformyparents，Iknowtheyhavedonetheirbestinraisingmeup.范文：成人教育的发展ABoominAdulteducation　　Directions：Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicABoominAdultEducation.Youshouldwritenolessthan150wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline（giveninChinese）below：　　1.现在许多成年人都利用业余时间去大学或夜校读书　　2.出现这种成人教育热的原因是……　　范文：　　ABoominAdultEducation　　EveryTuesdayandFridayeveningseesMissLi，myneighborandasecretaryinacompanyrushhomeafterahardday’swork，gulpdownhermealsandthenhurryouttocatchthebusforherEnglishclass.MissLi’scaseisnotunique，andnowmoreandmorecityadultsspendtheirleisuretimetryingtoimprovethemselvesatschoolorcollege.33\n　　Thereareanumberofreasonsforpeopletogobackfortheireducation.Somepeople，likeMissLi，aredoingittoacquireanotherdegreeordiplomatoimpressthesociety.Tothemmoreknowledge，orrather，morecredentialsmeansmoreopportunitiesforbetterjobsandquickerpromotion.　　Otherpeople，especiallythosewhoarelaidofforoutofemploymentgotovocationalschooltopreparetoreturntothejobmarket.Theyareeagerfornewskillssothattheycanbequalifiedforthejobsinretailtrade，administration，educationandotherservicecategoriestowhichtheyarestrangebecausemostofthemwereblue-collarworkersinthefactory.　　TherearealsopeoplewhocometotakesuchcoursesasChinesetraditionalmedicine，painting，calligraphyandphotography.Astheirworkingweeksdeclinepeoplebegintohavetimetofulfilltheirolddreamoftheirheart’sdesire.　　Outofnecessityoroutofinterest，peoplegobacktoschoolforthecommongoal——toimprovethemselves，andthisboominadulteducation，inturn，helpstoraisetheintellectualstandardofthewholecountry.初中英语写作范文集锦 [九]范文：你喜欢哪种方式的旅行？WhichModeofTravelDoYoulike?　　Directions：ForthispartyouareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicWhichModeofTravelDoYoulike？Youshouldwritenolessthan150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline（giveninChinese）below：　　1.有的人喜欢参加旅行社旅游（packagetours）　　2.有的人喜欢自己独立行动（travellingonone’sown）　　3.比较这两种旅游方式，我喜欢的是……　　范文：　　Withthegeneralstandardoflivingimprovingandtheworkingweekbecomingshorter，moreandmorepeopleareabletomakeaholidaytriptoplacesofinterest.Whilemanyliketojoinpackagetoursfroconvenience，Iprefertotravelnmyown.33\n　　Iliketravellingonmayownnotonlybecauseitcostsmuchlessbutbecauseitgivesagreatdegreeofindependenceandfreedom.Travellingonmyown，I’mmyownboss；andcandecidewhentostartonmyway，wheretolingeralittlelongerandwhichspotcanbeskippedovertosaveenergyortimeforanotherspot.Icanalwaysadjustmyplan.Onthecontrary，inapackagetouryou’redeprivedofasmuchfreedomasinamilitarybase.Atthesoundofthewhistle，youhavetojumpupfromasoundsleepand，withheavy-liddedeyes，hurrytothegatheringplacewhereyouarecollectedandcountedtoboardacoach.Atthesightofthelittleflagwaving，youmustimmediatelytakeyourselfawayfromthescenesyouaremarvelingatandfollowtheguidewhosesoleinterestistocoverallspotsaccordingtohimstrictschedule，regardlessoftheweatheroryourhealthcondition.　　True，youmayencounterinconveniencesifyoutravelindividually，forinstance，gettingaccommodationsforthenightandfindingaplaceformeals.Butnothingcanbecomparedwiththefreedomwhichisvitaltoapersonwhotakesaholidaytripmainlytoescapefromconstraintsofhisroutinelife.范文：快乐的家AHappyFamily　　Ihaveahappyfamily.Althoughit’ssmall，it’sfulloflove.Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily，myfather，mymother，myeldersisterandmyself——weallloveeachother.　　Myfatherisadoctor.Heloveshiswork.Everydayheworksfromdawntodark.Inhissparetime，helikesreadingandwritingbooks.Mymotherisateacher.Sheisverystrictwithherstudentsbutkindtothem.Everydayshegoestoworkearly.Sheisnotonlyateacherbutalsoafiendofthestudents.　　Mysisterisashopkeeperandshehasbeenmarriedforseveralyears. I’mamiddleschoolstudents.Mywishistobeauniversitystudent.Andmyparentsoftenencouragemetoworkhard.Iwilltrymybesttorealizemydream.范文：全家福APhotoofMyFamily33\n　　Lookatthisphotographofmyfamily.Therearefivepeopleinit.Thetallestoneismyfather.Heisforty-eightyearsold.Mymotherisstandingbesidehim.Sheisnotasmyfather.Sheisthreeyearsyoungerthanmyfather.Sittinginfrontofthemaremygrandparents.Mygrandfatheristhatfatonewithapairofglasses.Mygrandmotherisasfatashe.Thislittleoneisme.I’msittingbetweenthem.　　Allofusloveoneanther.Ihaveahappyfamily.范文：快乐的一天AHappyDay　　TodayistheNationalDay.Itisourcountry＇sbirthday.Nowsheis56.Iamveryhappy.　　Todayintheafternoon，Igotothepark，peoplealllooksohappy.Someoneisdoingexercise，someoneissingingthenationsong.Alittlegirlcomestomeandsaystome，happyNationalDay.Iknowshelovesthecountry，butIloveher，too.Todayisahappyday.范文：最好的朋友MyBestFriend　　Ihaveabestfriend.　　Shehaslong，straight，blackhair，big，blackeyesandasmallnose.Sheisverythinandkind，sheiscute，too.HerEnglishandChineseisverygood.Sheishard-working.　　Herfavoriteseasonissummer，becauseit’shot，shecaneatice-cream.Shelikesplayingthepiano，readingbooksandsingingsongs.　　Who’sshe？Sheismybestfriend——SunMengqi.ShehasaverygoodEnglishname，too——Angle.初中英语写作范文集锦 [十]范文讲评：周末　　「要求」　　周末两天的休息对于平时忙于工作学习的人们来说是非常宝贵的。请你根据下列提纲写一篇短文。33\n　　周末对于人们来说意味着什么。　　每个人都有自己度周末的方式。　　我是怎样度周末的。　　「范文」　　Weekends　　Weekendstopeoplemeanthattheycanhaveatwo-daygoodrest.Forexample，peoplecangoouttoenjoythemselvesorgettogetherwithrelativesandfriendstotalkwitheachotherorwatchinterestingvideotapeswiththewholefamily.　　Everyonespendsweekendsinhisownway.Withintwodays，somepeoplecanrelaxthemselvesbylisteningtomusic，readingnovels，orwatchingfilms.Othersperhapsaremoreactivebyplayingbasketball，wimmingordancing.Differentpeoplehavedifferentrelaxations.　　Ioftenspendweekendswithmyfamilyormyfriends.Sometimesmyparentstakemeonavisittotheiroldfriends.SometimesIgotothelibrarytostudyorborrowsomebookstogainmuchknowledge.Ialsogotoseevariousexhibitiontobroadenmyvision.Anexcursiontoseashoreormountainresortsismyfavoritewayofspendingweekends.Weekendsarealwaysenjoyableforme.　　「评语」　　全文思路清晰，论述充分，语言流畅易懂。用词讲究，注意了词语搭配，没有重复、堆砌之感。范文讲评：节日出行　　「要求」　　和外国朋友交谈是文化生活中很重要的一部分，但是谈什么话题却要慎重考虑，因为各国风俗习惯不同，谈的东西要关涉到禁忌、兴趣。学校的英语角将要组织一次对外交流活动。请你以书面形式写一些可以作为谈话的材料。33\n　　「范文」　　HolidaysandOutings　　ItiscommoninEnglishtoaskpeopleabouttheirholidays.IntheWestmanyfamiliesgoawayonholidayduringthesummermonthsandsoitisveryusualtoaskaboutthis.Iftheholidayhasnotyettakenplace，thentheirholidayplanscanbetalkedabout.Andifitisalreadyover，thenwheretheywent，whethertheyenjoyeditandsooncanbediscussed.Similarquestionsareaskedbeforefestivalsandpubicholidays.　　ForeignerslivingandworkinginChinaoftenhavefrequentopportunitiesfortravel，eitheratweekendsorduringtheirholidayperiods，soquestionsonthistopiccanoftenleadtofruitfuldiscussions.Theymaybeparticularlyinterestedtohearcommentsonwhichplacesareworthvisitingandwhy，especiallyiftheseplacesarealittlelesswellknownandnotclearlydescribedinthetourguides.　　Takevacaticnandlongweekends.Neverletvacationtimeexpire.　　「评语」　　看完上文，可知这实际上是一篇讨论英语话题的文章。从这个角度来写“HolidaysandOutings”这个题目可谓不无新义。但是在与外国人交往时谈些什么都是一个很现实的问题。本文提供了这一范例。全篇也围这个问题来写，几乎每句话都是紧扣中心的。比如它始终突出了这是一个话题，就反复用“ask”、“discuss”、以及“comment”等词。范文讲评：介绍你的学校　　「要求」　　下周将有一批外宾来校参观，请你给外宾简要介绍你校的情况。内容包括三方面：　　校史和成绩。　　学校规模和主要设施。　　师生状况（词数100—120）。33\n　　「范文」　　AnIntroduction　　Ourschoolwasbuiltin1945andagreatnumberofstudentshavegraduatedfromit.Nowmanyofthemhavebecomescientists，professorsandengineers.Manystudentshavealsobecomeworkersandfarmersaftergraduation.Theyhaveachievedgreatsuccessinthedevelopmentofmodernindustryandagriculture.　　Ourschoolisakeymiddleschoolinourprovince.Ithasthirtyclasseswithover130students.Ourschoolhasasix-storeyedteachingbuilding，severallaboratoriesandalargeplayground.Lastyear，anewlibrarywasbuiltandithasmorethan1000copiesofbooks.　　Alltheteachersherearetryingtheirbesttodotheirworkwell.Everystudentsismakingfulluseofhistimetotrainhimselftobeaqualifiedstudent.　　「评语」　　文章简洁得体，结构鲜明，语言流畅，介绍具体。读后让人对学校概貌了然于胸。　　school还有学派的意思，另外“一群鱼”叫做aschooloffish.33