高中英语 复习书面表达作文课件 浙教 17页

高中英语复习书面表达作文课件Citylifeorcountrylife\n人们经常讨论乡村生活和城市生活，一些人喜欢乡村生活而另一人则喜欢城市生活。请你以LivingintheCountryortheCity为题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文。乡村生活：空气清新、生活恬静。城市生活：交通便捷、购物方便。我喜欢的生活和理由。注意：词数100-120，文章的题目和开头已给出（不计词数）。LivingintheCountryorintheCityPeopleareforevertalkingaboutlivinginthecountryandinthecity.文体与时态。抓要点规定内容开放内容审题\n明晰结构（分段）,考虑连接(1)乡村生活：空气清新、生活恬静。(2)城市生活：交通便捷、购物方便。(3)我喜欢的生活和理由(1.2….)。1.(Tobeginwith)MoreoverInadditionAdditionallyFurthermore2.Foronething,Foranother3.Inthefirstplace,Inthesecondplace4.First(ly)Second(ly)Finally段落间连接过渡词Onthecontrary;however;…段落间连接过渡词PersonallyTobehonestTobefrankAsfarasIamconcerned…段落内连接规划\n表达喜欢的用语---likeprefertoliveinpreferlivinginenjoylivingin…bewillingto…wouldrather…befondof…beattractedby…befascinatedby…避免单一表达\n表达观点的基本用语---Somethink…othersthink…believe….feel…claim…state…stressinsist…maintain…避免单一\n表达规定内容---空气清新、生活恬静Theairisfresh/clean.Lifeisquiet/peaceful.…enjoygentleway/paceofliving交通便捷、购物方便It’seasytogoaround/hereandthere.Peoplecangofromoneplacetoanotherwithoutmuchdifficulty.Peoplecanbuyanythingtheywant.Shoppingisconvenient准确灵活\n语义不充分不连贯Somepeopleliketoliveinthecountry.Theairisfreshandclean.Moreover,Lifeisquietandpeaceful.Others,however,prefertoliveinthecity.Theycangofromoneplacetoanotherwithoutmuchdifficulty.Inaddition,shoppingismuchmoreconvenient.下面段落有什么问题？\n要点适当拓展---添枝加叶1.Theairisfresh.Obviously,theairthereismuchfresherthanthatinthecity.Theyclaimthattheairthereisfresherasthereislesspollution.Theythinkthattheairthereisfreshersothattheycanrelaxthemselvesbothphysicallyandmentally.2.Lifeisquietandpeaceful.Theyinsistthatlifeisquietandpeaceful,whichisbeneficialforgoodhealth.\n尝试适当拓展以下要点It’seasytogoaround.Theyfeelit’seasytogoaroundas….Theybelievethatit’seasytogoaroundsothat…Theyclaimthatit’seasytogoaround,which…Theycanbuyanythingtheywant.Theythink(…)theycanbuyanythingtheywant…Haveatry\n表达开放部分---learnmoresocialskills(gettingalongwithdifferentkindsofpeople)broadenourviews(…)makemylifemorecolorful(…)receivemedicalcaremoreeasily(…)getbettereducation(…)…brainstormideas富有思想精选能表达好且出彩的两到三点\n抄写字迹清楚，卷面零涂改。不用改正液、透明胶带。注意大小写，注意分段。不超边框，不随意换行。\n课堂小结审题规划表达相同语义表达规定部分内容表达开放部分内容抄写抓要点段落和连接避免单一准确灵活，适当拓展富有思想，精选要点卷面整洁清楚\nassignmentWritethepassageoutandcopyitdownasneatlyandclearlyaspossible.\n段落组织1、写好主题句。Personally,Iamfascinatedbycitylife.2、围绕主题句展开2或3点。两点连接词用：?三点用：first(firstly),second(secondly),finally(mostimportantly)3、精选两点或三点理由。总—分1---分2…\nThanksforyourattention\n\n9、静夜四无邻，荒居旧业贫。。2021/11/182021/11/18Thursday,November18,202110、雨中黄叶树，灯下白头人。。2021/11/182021/11/182021/11/1811/18/20217:08:13PM11、以我独沈久，愧君相见频。。2021/11/182021/11/182021/11/18Nov-2118-Nov-2112、故人江海别，几度隔山川。。2021/11/182021/11/182021/11/18Thursday,November18,202113、乍见翻疑梦，相悲各问年。。2021/11/182021/11/182021/11/182021/11/1811/18/202114、他乡生白发，旧国见青山。。18十一月20212021/11/182021/11/182021/11/1815、比不了得就不比，得不到的就不要。。。十一月212021/11/182021/11/182021/11/1811/18/202116、行动出成果，工作出财富。。2021/11/182021/11/1818November202117、做前，能够环视四周；做时，你只能或者最好沿着以脚为起点的射线向前。。2021/11/182021/11/182021/11/182021/11/189、没有失败，只有暂时停止成功！。2021/11/182021/11/18Thursday,November18,202110、很多事情努力了未必有结果，但是不努力却什么改变也没有。。2021/11/182021/11/182021/11/1811/18/20217:08:13PM11、成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。。2021/11/182021/11/182021/11/18Nov-2118-Nov-2112、世间成事，不求其绝对圆满，留一份不足，可得无限完美。。2021/11/182021/11/182021/11/18Thursday,November18,202113、不知香积寺，数里入云峰。。2021/11/182021/11/182021/11/182021/11/1811/18/202114、意志坚强的人能把世界放在手中像泥块一样任意揉捏。18十一月20212021/11/182021/11/182021/11/1815、楚塞三湘接，荆门九派通。。。十一月212021/11/182021/11/182021/11/1811/18/202116、少年十五二十时，步行夺得胡马骑。。2021/11/182021/11/1818November202117、空山新雨后，天气晚来秋。。2021/11/182021/11/182021/11/182021/11/189、杨柳散和风，青山澹吾虑。。2021/11/182021/11/18Thursday,November18,202110、阅读一切好书如同和过去最杰出的人谈话。2021/11/182021/11/182021/11/1811/18/20217:08:13PM11、越是没有本领的就越加自命不凡。2021/11/182021/11/182021/11/18Nov-2118-Nov-2112、越是无能的人，越喜欢挑剔别人的错儿。2021/11/182021/11/182021/11/18Thursday,November18,202113、知人者智，自知者明。胜人者有力，自胜者强。2021/11/182021/11/182021/11/182021/11/1811/18/202114、意志坚强的人能把世界放在手中像泥块一样任意揉捏。18十一月20212021/11/182021/11/182021/11/1815、最具挑战性的挑战莫过于提升自我。。十一月212021/11/182021/11/182021/11/1811/18/202116、业余生活要有意义，不要越轨。2021/11/182021/11/1818November202117、一个人即使已登上顶峰，也仍要自强不息。2021/11/182021/11/182021/11/182021/11/18MOMODAPOWERPOINTLoremipsumdolorsitamet,consecteturadipiscingelit.Fusceidurnablandit,eleifendnullaac,fringillapurus.Nullaiaculistemporfelisutcursus.感谢您的下载观看专家告诉