初中英语作文写作课件 40页

Writing\n\nLet’swatchthevideo\nIt’sveryimportantandhelpfultoknowhowtodescribeaperson!\n本节课的学习任务:写一篇描述人的外貌(look)、性格（characters）、爱好（hobbies）的文章\nDescribeapersonwithaword.\nshorttall\nthinfat\nbeautifulugly\nfriendlyfunny\nsmartoutgoing\nDescribeapersonwithasentence.\nSheisashortwoman.Heisaverytallman.\nHeistallandthin.Heisshortandheavy.\nShehaslongstraighthair.Shehasshortcurlyhair.\nHelikesdriving.\nHelikessingingwhenheishappy.\nShelikesexercisingeverymorning.\nWordcollection:\nPKWhoisthebest?\n描述外貌的单词：描述穿着的短语：shorttallthinstrongsickhandsomebeautifuluglyfatheavyofmediumheightofmediumbuildgood-lookingnicewearaT-shirtwearapairofjeansweararedsweaterwearabluedresswearapairofglasses\n描述性格的单词：描述爱好的短语：kindfriendlyoutgoingcutelazysmartshypolitequietstrictseriouslikereadinglikeplayingbasketballlikedancinglikesinginglikedrawinglikehelpingothers\nsentencecollection:\nHernameisAlice.Sheis16yearsold.Sheisofmediumheightandmediumbuild.Shehasshortcurlyhair.Sheisalwaysfriendlyandhelpful.Sheisalittleshy.Shelikesreadingandswimming.\nWritesomethingaboutthisboy.提示词：mediumheightandmediumbuild，blackhair;wearshortsandaT-shirt;outgoing,likerunning\nWhatdoeshelooklike?namefavoritefoodlookthingshelikescharacteragethingshelikestodofavoriteclasseshobbycontents\nExercise\nNameLinTaoAge15Looktall，thin，blackhair,wearshortsandaT-shirtFavoritefoodhamburgers，friedchickenFavoriteclassesscience,art,PEThingshelikeslittleanimalsThingshelikestodoplaywithhisgoodfriends,helpothersCharacter(性格)kind-hearted,politeWritingtask:根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友林涛，80个左右的单词。\n写作步骤1)审题2)列纲3)连句4)修饰句子组织文章5)检查纠错（定体裁、人称、格式、时态）（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子）（适当运用承上启下的过渡词,使文章更完整更精炼）（字数、内容要点、主谓一致、习惯用法、单词拼写、大小写及标点符号）（用单词、短语列出内容要点）\nLet’ssharesomecompositions.\nLinTaoismypenpal.Heis15yearold.Heistallandthin.HehaveblackhairandhelikewearsshortsandT-shirts.Helookingverycute.Heverymuchlikeshamburgersandfriedchicken.yearshaslikeswearinglooksHelikeshamburgersandfriedchickenbest.Helikeshamburgersandfriedchickenverymuch.\nHisfavoriteclassesisscience,artandP.E.Helikeslittleanimals.Heoftenplayswithhisgoodfriendsatschoolandhelpothers.Heisverypoliteandkind-hearted.Heisagoodboy.Iverylikehim.Ilikehimverymuch.arehelps\nLinTaoismypenpal.Heis15yearsold.Heistallandthin.HehasblackhairandhelikeswearingshortsandT-shirts.Helooksverycute.Helikeshamburgersandfriedchickenbest.Hisfavoriteclassesarescience,artandP.E.Helikeslittleanimals.Heoftenplayswithhisgoodfriendsatschoolandhelpsothers.Heisverypoliteandkind-hearted.Heisagoodboy.Ilikehimverymuch.\nWhoisthebestdoctor?PK\nPair-correction:Exchangeyourcompositionwithyourpartnerandcorrectthemistakeswithyourredpen.\nWriteyourcompositionsagainafterthecorrections.Later,handinyourcompositionstome.\nLet’senjoyanothercomposition.\nMyEnglishteacherIhavemetmanyexcellentteachersinschool.OneofthemismyEnglishteacher.HernameisMsLi.Sheis35yearsold.Sheistallandbeautifulwithlongcurlyhair.Inherfreetime,shelikesreading,singinganddancing.Shealsoenjoysplayingsports.Intheschool,whenweaskherquestions,sheisalwaysverypatient.Everytimewehavetrouble,sheisveryfriendlytohelpus.Sheisagoodteacher.Sheislikenotonlyourfriendbutalsoourmother.\nHomeworkWriteashortpassageaboutyourbestfriend.\nThankYou!