《初中英语写作》PPT课件 10页

ParagraphWritingMuZhonghuaNo.39MiddleSchool\nLearningTarget(学习目标)Wearelearninghowtowriteaparagraphtoshowideas.paragraph?段落YaoMing,thecenteroftheChineseNationalMen’sBasketballTeam,servedtheHustonRocketsinthe2002NBA.The2.26m,120kgcenterbecomesthefirstonetocomefromaforeignteam.YaoMingwasborninShanghaiinSeptember,1980.HismotherwasacenterandcaptainoftheChineseNationalWomen’sTeam.Hisfatherplayedbasketball,too.SportanalystBillWaltonsaid,“YaoMinghasthepotentialthecapabilityofchangingthefutureofbasketball.”\nSuccessCriteria(目标达成要求)□1.Icanwriteastrongtopicsentence.2.Icanwritethreedetailsentences.□□3.Icanwriteaclosingsentence.4.Icanusewordsorphrasestomaketheideasmoreclear.□5.Icancheckmygrammar,spellingandpunctuation(,.!…)afterwriting.□G/NG-GoodN-needsimprovement\nParagraphWritingdetailsentence1detailsentence2detailsentence3closingsentencetopicsentencebodybeginningending\nGroupworkTask1:Underlinethetopicsentence.Task2:*Addtransitionalwordsorphrasesfordetailsentences.(添加过渡语)*Writeaclosingsentence.Alotofpeoplethinkitisgoodtokeepanimalsinzoos.____zoosareplaceforpeopletoseemanydifferentkindofanimalsfromallovertheword.Withoutzoos,mostofthepeoplewouldneverseetigers,lions,elephants…….____zooslookaftertheanimalsverywell.Theanimalsarealwaysgivenfoodandcleanedregularly.____zoosprotecttheanimalswell.Theyofferthemsafeplacestolivein.______________.\nWordWall—TransitionalWords(过渡语）表示层次detail1detail2detail3表示总结closingfirst,firstly,firstofall,tobegin(start)with,second，secondly,then,next,afterthat,besides,what’smorethird,thirdly,finally,lastly,atlast，intheendinaword,inshort,asaresult\nGroupworkTask3:Rereadtheparagraphformistakesandcorrectthem.Alotofpeoplethinkitisgoodtokeepanimalsinzoos.____zoosareplaceforpeopletoseemanydifferentkindofanimalsfromallovertheword.Withoutzoos,mostofthepeoplewouldneverseetigers,lions,elephants…….____zooslookaftertheanimalsverywell.Theanimalsarealwaysgivenfoodandcleanedregularly.____zoosprotecttheanimalswell.Theyofferthemsafeplacestolivein.______________.\nWriting请写一个段落列举至少三种保持健康的方式。要求使用过渡语以及topic,detail,closingsentences\nParagraphWriting________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________请写一个段落列举至少三种保持健康的方式。要求使用过渡语以及topic,detail,closingsentences\nShowTime