初中英语写作[1]new 14页

(一)你在学校学习生活了三年，在即将毕业离校前，请选择下列英文校规中的两项发表你的看法，说明你是否赞同并阐述原因，80词左右。Schoolrules:wearschooluniforms,noteatintheclassroom,docleaningthreetimeseveryday,doeyeexerciseandmorningexercise,notbelateforschoolorclass.范文：Asfortheschoolrules,Iagreetomostofthem,whicharenecessary,butdisagreewithafewunreasonableones.Forinstance,Ithinkit’sgoodforschoolchildrentodoeyeexerciseandmorningexerciseeveryday.Someofmyclassmatesdon’tliketodoso.Butweshouldnotonlystudyhard,butalsokeepfit.Soweshouldkeepdoingthem.Weareexpectedtowearschooluniformsonschooldays.Idon’tlikeit.Differentpeoplehavedifferentpersonalities.Ifwecouldwearourownclothes,wewouldfeelbetter.Ihopeallthestudentscanenjoytheirschoollife.（二）你班以“告别陋习，走向文明”为主题进行了一次综合实践活动。通过活动，同学们收获很大，尤其是李华同学进步最快，请你根据表格内容写一篇关于李华的60-80词的短文。过去表现现在表现经常与别人吵架与别人相处融洽乱扔垃圾爱护环境沉溺于电脑游戏积极参加各种活动不认真听课、作业不按时完成学习努力、乐于助人英文提示词：makeprogress,usedto,spend…on,seldom,changealot,takeanactivepartin.\n范文:LiHuaismyclassmates.Hehasmadegreatprogressduringthesedays.Inthepast,heusedtoquarrelwithothersandthrowrubbisheverywhere.Hespentlotsofmoneyonclothesandplayedcomputergamesquiteoften.Heneverlistenedtotheteacherscarefullyinclass.Heseldomfinishedhishomeworkontime.Butnowhehaschangedalot.Heisgettingonwellwithus.Hekeepshisdeskcleanandneverthrowsrubbishabout.Hetakesanactivepartinallkindsofactivities.Henotonlyworkshardathislessons,butisalsoreadytohelpothers.Wealllovehim.（三）假设你们班要进行一次野外旅游（fieldtrip）,你作为班长，要对此活动进行计划安排，并向全班通知。请根据以下内容要求（具体内容自定），拟一份80个词左右的通知。开头和结尾已写出，不计入总词数。（1）出游时间和地点；（2）出游注意事项（3-5项）（3）出游注意事项（2-3项）AnAnnouncement(通知)Now,class,pleasebequiet,Ihaveanannouncementtomake.That`sall.Thankyou范文：AnAnnouncement(通知)Now,class,pleasebequiet,Ihaveanannouncementtomake.\nOnSaturdayourclassisgoingtohaveafieldtrip.InthemorningwearegoingtohiketoBahaoMountains.Ataboutnoon,Wearegoingtohaveapicnicatthetopofthemountain.Afterlunchyoumayplaygamesdrawpictures,haveadancingparty,anythingyoulike.3:30isthetimeforustocomeback.Pleasegettoourschoolgateat7:00onSaturdaymorning.Besuretotakesomefoodanddrinkingwaterwithyou,butdon’ttaketoomanythings.That'sall.Thankyou.方法点拨：这是一篇应用文：通知，内容三方面很明确，按题目要求的1、2、3、分层来写，2中可考虑inthemorning下午干什么。注意用将来时begoingto和will（四）根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。（信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信内）假如你叫李琳，是英国中学生露西的好友，你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据她来信的内容写一封回信。针对她的困惑，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些建议，告诉她应该做什么，不应该做什么。DearLiPing,ThesedaysTomCruise,thefilmstar,alwayscomesintomymind.Ithinkofhimnightandday.Ijustsitinmyroomandwatchvideosofhisfilmsagainandagain.I’vewrittenhundredsofletterstohimandsente-mailstohisfanclub,butallIgetbackareonlyphotoswithhisnamesonthem.IdreamthatsomedayI’llmeethimandthathe’llfeelthesamewayaboutme.Idon’twanttolearnmylessonsanymore,andI’llhavefinalexamsnextmonth.I’mthinkingofrunningawaytoHollywood(好莱坞)tomeethim.Canyouhelpmewiththeproblem?Yours,LucyHiLucy，Nicetohearfromyou.Yours,LilingHiLucy,NicetohearfromyouEveryonehashisfavoritestarsandthere’snothingwrongwiththat.Iunderstandyou.ButIdon’tthinkwhatyoudoisrightsinceyouareastudent.You’dbetterreadmoreinterestingbooksandhavemoresportsinyourfreetime.StopwritingtohimandwatchinghisfilmsYoumayalsotellyourproblemtoyourparentsandteachers.I’msurethey’llhelpyou.RunningawaytoHollywoodisawrongidea.Workhardonyourlessonsandgetreadyfortheexams.Yourfutureisinyourhands.Yours,LiLing方法点拨：\n（1）认真读回信（2）根据信的内容提建议，如①看一些有趣的书②做一些运动③告诉父母（3）注意用should,may㈤书面表达。（共15分）根据要求写一篇60-80词的日记。内容包括：1.2007年6月26日，周一，晴；2.早上去公园参加劳动，帮助清洁工人（dustman）清除垃圾;3.虽然很累，但看到清洁的公园，心情很好；4.以后要经常劳动，为人民休息的场所尽一分力。（注意：文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。格式已给出，不计入总词数。）Monday,June26th,2007Sunny范文：Monday,June26th,2007SunnyIwenttoaparktoworkwiththedustmentherethismorning.Ihelpedthemtocleanuptherubbishthere.Iworkedveryhard.Afterwork,Ifeltverytired.ThoughIwastired,IwashappywhileIsawtheparkwascleanagain.IthinkIshallgotoworkthereagaininthefuture.IamsureIwilldomybesttomaketheparkagoodplaceforpeopletorestafteraday’swork.方法点拨⑴审题：记叙文、日记。⑵定格式：日记一般要写日期及天气。年、月、日、星期几写在第一行的左上角，天气写在第一行的右上角。表达天气常用的形容词有：fine/clear（晴），rainy（雨），snowy（雾），windy（风），cloudy（多云）等。⑶定要点：①日期，天气；②事情发生的时间；③去公园参加劳动④帮助清洁工（dustman）清除垃圾⑤虽然很累，但看到清洁的公园，心情很好⑥.以后要经常劳动，为人民休息的场所尽一分力。⑷定人称：第一人称⑸定时态：一般过去时⑹定顺序：按时间顺序组织写作（六）\n最近，《英语周报》以“你心目中的好教师是什么样子的？”“一名受欢迎的老师应该有什么样的特点？”为题展开调查和讨论，结果如下41%Befun52%Befair69%Bepatientandhelpful86%Canplaydifferentroles(角色)请根据调查比例提示，结合你自己的观点，围绕这个主题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。Firstlyateachershouldbeabletoplaydifferentrolesinschool.Hecancareaboutuslikeamother.Hecangiveusknowledgelikeatutor.Andhecanplaygamesanddiscussproblemswithuslikeafriend.Secondly,ateachershouldbepatientandhelpful.Whenweareintrouble,hecanalwayshelpuspatiently.Thirdly,ateachershouldbefair.Heshouldhavethesameruleforeverybody.Noonecanbreakthem.Fourthly,ateachershouldbefun.Hecanmakehisclassinterestingandmakeuslaugh.写作方法点拨：⑴审题，题目已给出What’smyfavoriteteacherlike?Why⑵由比例可知一个好老师：①应该扮演不同的角色，父母、老师、朋友②应该有耐心和帮助人③对每个人都公平④有趣、给学生带来快乐⑶注意should,can⑷可用Firstly,secondly,thirdly使条理清晰、（七）假如你叫王斌，今天该你给大家作报告，你将要和大家谈的话题是英语，内容主要是谈英语的重要性以及怎样学好英语。请根据表格里提供的信息，将你的报告编写成短文。要求：1.意思连贯，符合逻辑；2.不少于80词（不含已给出的开头和结尾）。ImportanceHowtolearnEnglishwell?BeusefulThemostwidelyspokenThe2008OlympicsRemembermanywordsDomorelistening,speaking…Nevergiveup\nHello,everyone!TodayI’mgoingto…That'sall.Thankyou!范文：Hello,everyone!TodayI’mgoingtotalkaboutEnglish.Englishisuseful.It’sthemostwidelyspokenlanguageintheworldandit’swidelyusedforinternationalbusiness.The2008OlympicswillbeheldinBeijing.IfwelearnEnglishwell,wecandomorethings.TolearnEnglishwell,IthinkwehavetorememberasmanyEnglishwordsaspossible.Wealsoneedtodomorelistening,speaking,readingandwriting.WeshouldtalkwithothersinEnglish.Ifwenevergiveup,I’msurewe’lllearnEnglishwell.That'sall.Thankyou!㈧话题作文（15分）爱护大自然，保护环境，是我们每个公民的职责，请谈谈你应该怎样做。要点：⑴字迹工整，卷面整洁。⑵语句通顺，内容完整，⑶60-80词。英文提示词：protecttheenvironment,spitinpublic,keep…cleanandtidy,throw…into,collect…forrecycling,rubbish,dustbin.范文：It’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.First,weneedtoremembernottospitinpublic.Second,weshouldkeepourcitycleanandtidy.Third,weshouldnotonlythrowrubbishintodustbin,butalsocollectpaper,plastics,bottlesandcansforrecycling.Inaworld,weallneedtodoourbesttomaketheworldbetter,aswellasourhome.㈨\n以“MyHobby”为题介绍一项你的兴趣或爱好，80词左右。要点：1.你的兴趣或爱好有哪些？哪一项是你最喜爱的？为什么？2.你何时开始这项兴趣或爱好？是怎样开始的？到现在已有多长时间？1.讲述这项爱好给你带来的乐趣或收获。英文提示词：suchas,interesting,becomeinterestedin,inone’ssparetime,learnmuchaboutsth.from…MyHobby范文：Ihaveanumberofhobbies,suchastravelingandplayingtheviolin,butIenjoycollectingstampsmost,forit’ssointeresting.WhenIfiveyearsold,Ibecamequiteinterestedincolorfulstamps.Fromthenon,Ihavebeencollectingthem.NowI’vecollectedmorethan800stamps.Inmysparetime,Ioftenshowthemtomyfriendsandtellinterestingstoriesaboutthem.Allmyfriendslikemystamps,fromwhichI’veLearnedsomuchabouthistory,culture,artandscience.Ievenexchangestampswithmypenpalsabroad.Inthisway,wegettoknoweachotherbetter.InthefutureI’llhaveashowforthekidsandtellthemhowfantasticstampcollectingis.㈩请以“Iwanttobea/an……”为题写一篇短文，词数60-80词.内容必须包括提示中的三项要求，请不要使用真实姓名和所在学校名称。提示：⑴Whatdoyouwanttobe?⑵Whydoyouwanttobea/an…?⑶Howcanyoumakeitcometrue?本文是一篇记叙文，根据所提示的三项内容，把内容自然过渡即可成文。IwanttobeaninventorManypeoplewanttomaketheirnewideasandwishescometrue.Theywanttoinventsomenewthingsfortheworld.I’moneofthem.Ijustwanttobeaninventor.Invitationscanchangetheworld,Theycanbringfunandhappiness.NowI’mstillamiddleschoolstudent.Imusttrymybesttoworkhardatmylessonsandlearnwhatmyteachersteachus.Iwillusemyinventionstomakecontributionstoourcountry.（十一）\n某英语杂志社“中学生专栏”在举办英语征文比赛。请你根据下表所列的内容要点，用英语以“Learntosmile”为题写一篇短文，参加比赛。学会对自己微笑1．生活中会有不愉快的事，如考试不及格（请再举一个例子）；2．使你自信；3．击败你的人有时是你自己。学会对他人微笑使人与人更亲近微笑是一种语言人人都能懂1.词数60-80.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.英文提示词：failinanexam,bemisunderstoodbysb.,learntosmile,bringbackyourconfidence(自信)，bebeaten(打败)bysb.3.短文须包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。LearntosmileSmileisanattitudetowardslife.范文LearntosmileSmileisanattitudetowardslife.Inyourlife,theremightbesomethingunpleasant.Forexample,youmightfailinanexam;oryoucouldbemisunderstoodbyyourfriends.Theseunpleasantthingsmaymakeyousad.Thenwhatwillyoudo?Whynotlearntosmile?Smilingtoyourselfcanbringbackyourconfidence.Sometimes,thegreatestenemyisyourself;thatistosay,youmightbebeatenbyyourself.Also,weshouldlearntosmiletoothers.Itwillhelpustogetclosertoothers.So,smileisthemostwidelyacceptedlanguage.（十二）根据中文提示，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于80词的短文。提示：上周五，你们班就2008年奥运会后的感想开了\n班会。同学们都说出了各自的想法。你有何想法？说出理由。注意：⑴请用第一人称。⑵请不要写出真实的姓名和所在学校。（十三）书面表达。（A题5分，B题10分，共15分）A．假如你是二中九年级三班学生，名叫刘华。5月30日不小心在操场上丢了一本图书馆藏书，书名“星星与月亮”。请你以刘华的名义写一则大约30个词的寻物启事。B．请你根据下列图表写一份明天要去郊游的活动计划和要求。词数60-70个。TimeActivitiesRequirements7：00a.m.在校门口集中不要迟到7：30a.m骑自行车出发遵守交通规则9：00a.m爬附近的山穿结实的鞋12：00a.m在山顶上野炊携带饮料和食物2：00p.m.在山脚下集中回家（十四）书面表达。(共15分）请以FarfromtheNetBars为题写一篇短文，奉劝有些同学别再沉溺于网吧。词数在80个左右。要点如下：1.上网浪费时间和金钱，荒废学业；2.上网时间太长对身体的危害；3.网上不健康的东西不利于我们健康成长。FarfromtheNetBars\n（十五）在一次英语班会上，老师请同学们以“ProudofMySchool”为主题发言。请根据下面的提示写一篇发言稿。词数要求在80-100词之间。文中不得出现真实的人名、地名。Remembertowriteclearly!提示：⑴Whatdoesyourschoollike?⑵Whatfundoyouhaveatschool?⑶Whatdoyoulikeaboutyourschool?\n发言稿可根据三个问题来展开。⑴Whatdoesyourschoollike?可以谈一下:Howmanystudentsandteachersarethere?Whatabouttheplaygroundandthelibrary?Aretheremanytreesandflowers?⑵Whatfundoyouhaveatschool?Theclassesareinteresting.Whatdothestudentsdoafterclass?⑶Whatdoyoulikeaboutyourschool?Aretheteacherskindtoyou?Doyougetonwellwithyourclassmates?Areyouhappy?范文:ProudofMySchoolMyschoolisverybigwithseveralbulidings.Thereare2,000studentsinmyschool.Wehaveabigplaygroundwithlotsoftreesaroundit.Therearealotofflowerseverywhere.Wehavealotoffunatschool.Afterclassweplaygamesanddolotsofsportslikeplayingbasketball,football,andtabletennis.Sometimeswehaveclassmeetings.Theyareveryinteresting.Ilovemyschoolbecauseit’slikeabigfamily.Theteachersinmyschoolareaskindtousasourparents.Ifeelproudofmyschoolbecauseitisoneofthebestschoolsinmyheart.（十六）某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提示以“TheChangesinMyHometown”为题，用英语写一篇90词左右的短文。注意：⑴文中不能出现具体的人名、地名，否则扣分。⑵标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。⑶生词：环境；environmen污染pollution；方便convenient\n过去1.生活贫困，房屋破旧。2.污染严重，垃圾满地。3.交通不便，游客很少。现在1.生活：住房宽敞、明亮；许多人有自己的汽车。2.环境：山更绿，水更清，天更蓝。3.旅游：每年有成千上万的来自世界各地的游客。将来请你展望家乡的未来。TheChangesinMyHometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall.___________________________________TheChangesinMyHometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall.Peoplelivedapoorlife.Thehouseswereoldandsmall.Pollutionwasveryserious,andtherewasrubbisheverywhere.Thetrafficwasnotconvenient,sofewvisitorscamehere.Nowgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Theenvironmenthasbecomemorebeautiful.Themountainshaveturnedgreener,theriverscleanerandtheskybluer.Therearetrees,flowersandgrasseverywhere.Peopleliveabetterlife.Theirhousesarelargeandbright.Manypeoplehavetheirowncars.I’msuremyhometownwillbecomebetteramdbetterinthefuture.解析：⑴审题：题目已给出，认真读注意和表格。⑵要点明确：过去，现在和将来，按表格中内容来写即可。⑶注意时态：过去时，现在时和将来时书面表达\n内容解读：1.书面表达的形式多种多样，但注意分为三类：看图作文，应用文和提示作文。2.应用文包括英文通知、启事、便条、日记、贺卡和E-mail等形式。看图作文可以是一幅，也可是多幅图；提示作文经常是给出英文或汉语提示，提示可以是文字，也可以是图表。能力解读：1.应用文，要求能够掌握常见种类的写作技巧。2.看图作文，要能够根据图画和词语提示，明确考查意图，弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，完整表达意思。3.提示作文，要能够根据提示写出意思连贯，符合逻辑的短文。要掌握记叙文、说明文和夹叙夹议文的写作方法技巧。4.能够运用常用词汇，基本句式和语法知识，按要求写出规范的句子，表达自己的思想命题趋势：书面表达在中考中是应用文必考题，分值在15分左右，注意考查学生综合运用英语的能力。测试的题型主要有应用文，看图作文和提示作文测试内容常常与学生的生活密切相关，也可能是环保或社会焦点。总之，近几年来，“看图作文”较多，但提示作文有增加趋势。写作前：句子的成分：1.主语2.谓语3.宾语4.定语5.状语6.表语词性：1.名词2.代词3.冠词和数词4.动词5.形容词6.副词7.介词8.连词五种基本句型1.主语+不及物动词：S+V2.主语+及物动词+宾语：S+V+O3.主语+系动词+表语：S+V+P4.主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语\n1.主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语补足语：S+V（及物）+O+OC….句子种类：1.陈述句2.祈使句3.感叹句疑问句：1.一般疑问句2.特殊疑问句3.选择疑问句4.反意疑问句句子的结构：1.简单句2.并列句3.复合句时态：1.一般现在时2.一般过去时3.现在进行时4.过去进行时5.一般将来时6.现在完成时温馨小提示：别忘了先自己用脑、用心、动手用功去写哦！→还要学习范文哦!!→必要时可背诵范文材料为写作积累语言知识！！！