A request for help高中英语市级优质课课件 20页

ArequestforhelpHowtowriteanEnglishletter?No.1\nStepI:WarmingupandleadinginDoyouliketraveling?\nStepII:Pre-writingtask1:Readtheletterandanswerthequestions1）Whoistheletterfrom?(WangZhidong)2）Whoistheletterto(SunbeamTravelAgency)3）Howdoesthewriteropenhisletter?(DearsirorMadam)4）Howdoesthewriterendhisletter?(Bestwishes)\n2Paragraph2:StepII:Pre-readingtask2:ReadtheletteragainandchoseaExpressesthewriter’sthanks.bExplainswhothewriterisandwhathewants.cSuggesthowthewritercanbereached.dGivedetailsoftherequest.dStatethetopicoftheletter.1Paragraph1:3Paragraph3:4Paragraph4:5Paragraph5:ebdca\nStepII:Pre-readingTask3:summarizetheletter1.Para1Beginning:StatingthetopicoftheletterIamwritingtoaskforyourhelpwith...Iamwritingtoaskforinformationabout...IamLiYan,astudentfromGuangmingMiddleschool.\nStepII:Pre-readingPara2Body:MakingpoliterequestsMymotheraskedmetowritetoyouforinformationandaskyouforhelp...Wewouldliketoknowabout...Couldyourecommendagoodthree-starhotelandarrangeroomsforus?Wewouldalsoappreciateinformationaboutplacesof...Iwouldliketoknowabout...Couldyouplease...Iwouldbehappy/gladifyoucould...Iwouldappreciateitifyoucould...Iwonderifyoucould...\nPara3.Ending:Expressingthanks•Thanksinadvanceforyourkindattention•Yourkindhelpwillbemuchappreciated.•Iamverythankfulforyourhelp.StepII:Pre-reading\nTask4:Reading＆discussion假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教MsJenkins写信，请他帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。StepIII:While-writing\n1.WhomdoesLiHuawriteto?(MsJenkins)2.Whydoeshewritethisletter?(请他帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式format）3.Whatisthemainideaofeachparagraph?Para1:Self-introdution＆thetopic.Para2:Myrequestandthecontext.Para3:Mywish.StepIII:While-writing\nStepIII:While-writingTask5:Writealettersomerulesaboutwritingintheexams写作基本步骤：1.仔细审题，列举大纲。２．围绕要点，写出句子。３．添加过渡，确保连贯。４．先求正确，再求灵活。５．认真眷写，卷面整洁。影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素:1.语篇信息是否完整2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。3.是否使用高级词汇4.是否使用复杂句5.卷面整洁,书写工整\nStepIII:While-writingClearstructure:※ConnectingWordsandPhrases：※Sentencestructure:A．（Beginning）开头常用句式 (自我介绍和写信背景以及目的)1.IamLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentfrom...2.MynameisLiHua,a16－year－oldgirlwhohasbeenstudyingin...schoolofChina.3.Now,Iamwritingtoaskforyourhelpwithmyresume.4.Iamwritingtoturntoyouforyourhelp.firstly，firstofall,then，next,besides,what’smore,inaddition,…\nB.(Body)第二段常用句式及短语（事情的来龙去脉及我的请求）1)Iamplaningtotakeapart-timejob,soIwouldliketo...2)Iplantoapplyforapart-timejob,so...3)ThisisthefirsttimethatIhave...so...4)Iwouldappreciateitifyoucould...5)improvemyvocabularyandgrammarStepIII:While-writing\nC.(Ending)结尾常用句式，(提出你的希望并表达祝福)1)Ihopeyoucanagreewithme.2)I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.3)I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.StepIII:While-writing\nyouhave15minutstowriteyourdraftyourletterStepIII:While-writing\nStepIV:Post-writing：Task6:Edityourcompositiononyourown【自评】：1.要点是否齐全；2.时态、语态是否正确；3.主谓是否一致（尤其是第三人称单数的动词形式)；4.标点及大小写是否正确。\n【互评】：1．结构是否合理？要点是否齐全？2．是否有精彩词句?(如有,请用波浪线划出）3．是否有中式英文？是否有可改善的字、词、句?(如有，如时态、语态、主谓一致、行文逻辑、词性等，请用直线划出.）4．卷面是否整洁？字迹是否工整Task6:EdityourcompositionseachotherStepIV:Post-writing：\nStepIV:Post-writing：apossibleversion范文：DearMsJenkins,IamLiHua,IamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthecomingsummervacationandIalsowantyoutodomeafavor.Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,Iamplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalcompany.Ihavealreadyfinishedmyjobapplicationandpersonalresume.ButthisisthefirsttimethatIhavewrittenanapplicationandthepersonalsresume,soIdon’tevenknowiftherearesomethingtopayattentionto.So,I’mwritingyoutheletter,hopingyoucangivemesomehelp.Iwillbeverygratefulifyoucanhelpme.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.AndI’dbereallythankful.Yours,LiHua\nstepV:Format英文书信格式1.信头。包括写信人的地址和日期,通常放在信笺的右上角（也有人放在左上角，如本文），顺序是先写地址，后写日期，地址和日期的写法都要符合英语的表达习惯。写地址应由小到大：门牌号码、街名、城(县)名、省(市)名、国名。这与汉语的习惯完全相反。两种写法：①月、日、年（如March8,2017）；②日、月、年（如8thMarch,2017）。2.称呼。英文信里的称呼一般以Dear...或Mydear...开头。4.结束语。在熟悉的人之间常用Sincerelyyours/Yourssincerely；在不太熟悉而应该客气的人之间常用Trulyyours/Yourstruly；在亲密的亲友之间常用Yoursaffectionately/Affectionatelyyours/Yours等等。3.正文。它是书信的主体部分，是写信人给收信人要谈论或陈述的内容。正文要求文字简明达意，层次分明，所述内容全面。5.签名。在结束语的下方是签名先手写出再打出来。除对熟悉或亲密的人以外，签名必须写全名。\n1.反思本节课的收获与不足；2.润色自己的作文，总结和掌握英文书信的写作步骤和技巧。StepⅥ.Assignment\nThankyou!