高中英语写作常见错误句子解析课件 35页

书面表达常见错句分析\nAims:1.Toknowthecommonmistakesthatyoualwaysmakeinyourwriting.2.Tofindthereasonwhyyoumakethemistakes.3.Tolearnhowtoavoidthesamemistakes\n研究表明，多数同学在写作上的主要欠缺不是系统的写作理论和方法，而是最基本的单句写作能力。next\nProblemsinwritingsinglesentences单句写作过程中存在的问题\nProblemsinwritingsinglesentences1.TheChinglishexpression2.SubjectandVerbDisagreement3.Misuseofthewordsforms4.MisuseoftheTenseandVoice5.Missingofessentialpartsofthesentence6.Misuseofwords5\n1、TheChinglishExpressionManisiron,andfoodissteel.infrontoftheflowersandunderthemoonMybodyisgood.Wecollegestudentsarethesonsofthesky.Peopletakefoodasheaven.6\nBreadisthestaffoflife.Staybyfloweringshrubsorunderthepuremoon.\n2、SubjectandVerbDisagreementMysistergotothecinemaatleastonceaweek.Tomwithhistwobrothersaregoingtothecountry.HesavedenoughmoneytobuytheworksofShakespearewhichhethoughtwasworthbuying.8\n3、MisuseofthewordsformsHewasveryhappiness.Hewashitbyacarwhenheacrossthestreet.Allthepeoplearelikemusicverymuch.9\n4、MisuseoftheTenseandVoice在一般的阐述中，作文的时态应该定位在现在的时间。除了阐述过去或将来发生的事情。Theharderyouwillpractice,thegreaterprogressyouwillmake.We’regoingtodivideintofourgroups.Thisfishwascaughtwherethewaterdidn’tpollute.10\n5、MissingofessentialpartsofthesentenceThere’snobuscomestoouruniversity.Jennyoftenlateforschool.thatis/was缺主语缺谓语11\nIhaveseenthefilmseveraltimes,butIstillliketosee.Isthisuniversitywhereyoustudiedthreeyearsago.theoneit(缺宾语)(缺表语)12\n6、MisuseofWords1)中学毕业后，他参加了工作。Aftergraduationfromhighschoolhetookpartinwork.(误)Aftergraduationfromhighschoolhegotajob.（正）2)我们劝他休息，但他就是不听。Wepersuadedhimtotakearest,buthejustwouldn’tlisten.advised13\n3)中国电影很受新加坡人的欢迎。TheChinesefilmsarewelcomedbythepeopleinSingapore.popularwith14\nSolutionstotheseproblems解决方案\n正确连接分句1.Thebookwasinteresting,Ireaditrapidly.Thebookwasinteresting,andIreaditrapidly.2.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,theboysmoppedthefloor.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,andtheboysmoppedthefloor.\n避免误置修饰语3.AttheageofsixmyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglish.MyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglishwhenIwassix.4.Ialmostgotgoodmarksineverysubject.Igotgoodmarksinalmosteverysubject.\n注意逻辑主语5.Tobewell-informed,readingnewspaperisagoodhabit.Tobewell-informed,weshouldreadnewspapereveryday.6.Comingoutoftheclassroom,myheartwasbeatingveryfast.Comingoutoftheclassroom,Ifeltmyheartbeatingveryfast.\n避免指代不清7.Sheaskedhersisterwhyshewasn’tinvitedtotheparty.Sheaskedwhyhersisterwasn’tinvitedtotheparty.Sheaskedhersister,“Whywasn’tIinvitedtotheparty?”\n避免人称代词混淆8.Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andyougotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andwegotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.\n避免重复9.Inmyopinion,Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.Inmyopinion,weshouldaskthemforadvice.Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.\n尽量避免汉语干扰10.Thebooksinourlibraryaregettingmoreandmore.Therearemoreandmorebooksinourlibrary.Thenumberofbooksinourlibraryisgettingbiggerandbigger.\n11.DuringstayinginBeijing,Ivisitedalotofplacesofinterest.DuringmystayinBeijing,I…WhilestayinginBeijing,I…\n12.Thereisamanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.Ayoungmanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.Thereisamanwhowantstoseeyoudownstairs.\n13.Iwillnotforgetmydearfriendsforever.Iwillneverforgetmydearfriends.\n14.Theywillcometovisityouwhenyouareconvenient.Theywillcometovisityouwhenitisconvenienttoyou.Theywillcometovisityouatyourconvenience.\n注意时态一致15.Iwentshoppingyesterday.Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket.Peoplearecarryingbasketsortakingcarts.IstruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsIneed.WhenIfinishedmyshoppingIamsotired.\n注意时态一致Iwentshoppingyesterday.Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket.Peoplewerecarryingbasketsortakingcarts.IstruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsIneeded.WhenIfinishedmyshopping,Iwassotired.\n“Therebe”StructureWrongSentences：Therearemanypeopleliketogotothemovies.Therearedifferentkindsofvegetablescanbeboughtonthemarketbypeople.whothat29\nBecause---structureWrongSentences：Therealreasontoourfailureisnotfartoseek.Thereasonforthisisbecausesomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard.forthat30\nWriteashortparagraphabout:Lackofsleep(睡眠不足的原因，危害）Wearebusyreviewingourlessonsanddoingexercisesallthetime.Everyeveningweworktillverylate.Wedon’thaveenoughtimeforsleep.I’mafraidlackofsleepwilldoharmtoourhealth.随堂练习\nSummary正确连接分句避免误置修饰语注意逻辑主语避免指代不清尽量避免汉语干扰注意时态一致\nTHANKYOU!\n文明的社会里关爱无处不在。以一只小猫照顾一只生病的小鸭为例。Thereareconcernandcareeverywhereinacivilizedsociety.Taketheexampleofacatlookingafterasickduck.Concernandcarecanbefoundeverywhereinacivilizedsociety.Taketheexampleofacatlookingafterasickduck.34\n由于我们亲眼目睹了这些伟大的成就，所以我们更为我们的祖国感到骄傲。Nowthatwehaveseenthesegreatachievementswithourowneyes,wefeelmoreproudthaneverofourcountry.35