初中英语作文课 36页

HowtoWriteBetter\nHuipuForeignLanguageSchoolisagoodplacetostudy.Itisbeautiful.Theteachersaregreat.Thestudentsherearehardworking.Connectives(连接语)anddifferencesareimportant.\n采分点满分可给分值1.内容充实，覆盖要点76-7描述所有信息，内容合理，丰富3-5描述了大部分信息，内容比较合理1-2描述了小部分信息，内容不合理0没有作答或描述内容与主题无关2.用词适切，语法正确，句型多样76-7用词适切，句型变化多样且有效，完全或基本没有语言错误3-5用词基本适切，句型较为单一，有少量语言错误但不影响理解1-2较多语言错误，一定程度上影响理解0有大量语言错误，影响了理解3.结构紧凑，意思连贯43-4行文连贯，连接词使用恰当，指代清晰1-2行文不够连贯，连接词使用不够恰当，指代不够清晰0没有连贯的意识4.书写规范，词数适宜22大小写，标点正确，词数达标，书写规范整洁1大小写，标点有部分错误，词数达标，书写尚可辨认0大小写，标点错误较多，语言应用不规范，词数严重不足，书写难以辨认2017年英语中考书面表达最新评分标准\nConnectives(连接语)\nMydog’snameisLucky--agoodnameforhim________Ifeelveryluckytohavehim.-----八上p14表原因：because\n--Wow,that’samazing!Whydidtheancientemperorsbuildthewall?--____________________wastoprotecttheirpartofthecountry.Asyoucansee,itisquitetallandwide.八（下）p50Themainreason表原因：Themainreasonisthat….\nWhydosomanyclimbersrisktheirlives?__________________________peoplewanttochallengethemselvesinthefaceofdiff-iculties.Thespiritoftheseclimbersshowsus….八（下）p51Oneofthemainreasonsisthat表原因：Oneofthemainreasonsisto…\nFormanytourists,thissmallislandinSouth-eastAsiaisawonderfulplacetotakeaholiday.____________,morethanthreequartersofthepopulationareChinese,soyoucanspeakPu-tonghuaallthetime.____________________SingaporeisanEnglish-speakingcountry,soitisalsoagoodplacetopracticeyourEnglish八（下）p70OntheonehandOntheotherhand表原因：Themainreasonisthat..Anotherreasonisthat....\n--YoumustbeexcitedaboutleavingforChina.--Yeah,butIamalittlenervous,too--Why?--Well,______________,Idon’tknowhowtousechopsticksverywellandIdon’tknowhowtobehaveatthedinnertable.九年级p144foronethingforanother(thing)另一方面表原因：\nFormanytourists,thissmallislandinSouth-eastAsiaisawonderfulplacetotakeaholiday.____________,morethanthreequartersofthepopulationareChinese,soyoucanspeakPu-tonghuaallthetime.____________________SingaporeisanEnglish-speakingcountry,soitisalsoagoodplacetopracticeyourEnglishForonething,…Foranother(thing)...表原因：and,besides,also,what’smore\n表原因：becauseThemainreasonisthat..Oneofthemainreasonsisthat..Ontheonehand,ontheotherhandAnotherreasonisthat…..Foronething,foranother(thing)And/Besides/Also/What’smore,…Ourschoolisagoodplacetostudy.Itisbeautiful.Therearemanygreatteachershere.Thestudentshereareveryhardworking.\nWhatdoyouthinkofyourbestfriend?Ithink_________________________Inmyopinion,___________________Inmyeyes,______________________Inmymind,______________________Inmyheart,______________________表观点:\n表结果:______________lifeintheschooliscolorful.Becauseof….,Withhis/herhelp,…….Thankstohim/her,……Asaresult,….Inthisway,….That’swhy….…wassohelpfulthatForthisreason,….._____________,manypeoplepraisehimasthemusicianwhohasgreatlyinfluencederhumusic.九年级p71Forthisreason,\nIsyourbestfriendthesameasyouordifferent?Giveexamples\nMybiggestchallengeislearninghowtobehaveatthedinnertable.Asyoucanimagine,thingsareverydifferentfromthewaytheyareathome.______________,you’renotsupposedtoputyourbreadonyourplate.You’resupposedtoputitonthetable!_________________________________you’renotsupposedtoeatanythingwithyourhandsexceptbread,notevenfruit.____________________ifyoudon’twantanymorefood,youshouldjustsay,“Thatwasdelicious.”_______,you’renotsupposetoputyourelbowsonthetable.I’mgraduallygettingusedtoit.Idon’tfindFrenchcustomssostrangeanymore.Forexample-----九年级p782bAlsoAnotherexampleisthatAnotherthingisthat\nThemoreIgettoknowaboutmyfriend,themoreIrealizewehavealotincommon/…………………wehavenothingincommon.Forexample,Anotherexampleisthat..Anotherthingisthat…Also/And/besides/What’smore,….举例子：\n表转折：but,…yet,…however,...\nWecaninfer(推断)thatthepassageaboveisabout_________________________________________.someonewhoisgoodatrecyclingThesentenceisusedto_________________.承上启下九年级p102\n九年级p62AnotherpopularideaisthatStonehengemightbeakindofcalendar.Thelargestoneswereputtogetherinacertainway.Onmidsummer’smorning,thesunshinesdirectlyintothecenterofthestones.Otherpeoplebelievethestoneshaveamedicalpurpose.Theythinkthestonescanpreventillnessandkeeppeoplehealthy.“Asyouwalkthere,youcanfeeltheenergyfromyourfeetmoveupyourbody,”saidonevisitor.Thepassageaboveisabout_________________________________________.\nHowever,manyAprilFool’sjokesmayendupbeingnotveryfunny......Wecaninfer(推断)thatthispassageisabout_____________________________________.Thepassageaboveisabout_____________________________________.九年级p94\nShouldteenagersbeaskedtomoveoutwhentheystartworking？InmanyWesterncountries,teenagersareallowedtomoveoutateighteen.Theirparentsbelievethattheyshouldbeeducatedtotakecareofthemselvesfromayoungage.___________,whentheystartworkingtheycanmanagetheirownlives._____________________________________________.Chineseparentsbelievethatitisbetterforchildrentolivewithparentswhocantakecareofthem.Buttheyoungshouldlookaftertheirparentsastheygotolder._________manyChineseadultscontinuetolivewiththeirparents.在空格处填入适当的连接语-----九年级p524b\nShouldteenagersbeaskedtomoveoutwhentheystartworking？InmanyWesterncountries,teenagersareallowedtomoveoutateighteen.Theirparentsbelievethattheyshouldbeeducatedtotakecareofthemselvesfromayoungage.___________,whentheystartworkingtheycanmanagetheirownlives.________________________________________________________________________________________Chineseparentsbelievethatitisbetterforchildrentolivewithparentswhocantakecareofthem.Buttheyoungshouldthenlookaftertheirparentsastheygotolder.____________manyChineseadultscontinuetolivewiththeirparents.ThiswayThatiswhyHowever,inmostAsiansocieties,itisnotcommonforteenagerstomoveout\nplacesShouldteenagersbeaskedtomoveoutwhentheystartworking?inmanywesterncountriesinmostAsian____________societies\n….Shetoldmetoworkhard.ShetoldmenottogiveupandshetoldmethewaystoimprovemyEnglish.……Makingdifferences:.….Shetoldmetoworkhard.SheencouragedmenottogiveupandshetaughtmethewaystoimprovemyEnglish.……\nplacesInmanywesterncountriesIn_______Asian____________TeenagersareallowedtomoveoutwhentheystartworkingOpinionsItisnotcommon…Itisbetterfor……areencouragedto..ReasonssocietiesmostThiswayThat’swhy当。。。时when…as…\nMakingdifferences:DifferentwordsDifferentsentencepatternsDifferentconnectives\nMakingdifferences:.….Shetoldmetoworkhard.SheencouragedmenottogiveupandshetaughtmethewaystoimprovemyEnglish.……...Shetoldmetheimportanceofworkinghard.SheencouragedmenottogiveupwhenImetdifficultiesandsheeventaughtmethewaystoimprovemyEnglish………Shetoldmetoworkhard.ShetoldmenottogiveupandShetoldmethewaystoimprovemyEnglish.……\nAsthetwo-childpolicycomes,manyparentsbegintothinkabouthavingasecondchild.Andwehadadiscussionaboutitinclassyesterday.Moststudentsthinkthatit’sbettertohavealittlebrotherorsister,becausetheyhaveapersontoplaywithandtheywon’tbelonelyanymore.Also,itwillbemoreconvenienttolookafterparentsinthefuture.Manygirlslovekidssomuchthattheyreallywanttohaveabrotherorsister.However,someofusdisagree.Intheireyes,havingabrotherorsisterissomethingtheycan’stand.Ontheonehand,pa-rentswillpaymoreattentiontothetinybaby.Ontheotherhand,theywillgetfewerandfewerchancestogooutwiththeirparents.Theythinkit’sunfairandit’sterriblewhenababyiscryingallnight.Inmyopinion,youcansharehappinessandsadnesswithyourbrotherorsister.Youtwowillbethebestfriendsintheworld.Howgreatitwillbewhenapersonisalwaystheretolisten!20Accordingtowhatwehavelearned,discusswhyitisgood.1)Connectives2)Makingdifferences\nAsthetwo-childpolicycomes,manyparentsbegintothinkabouthavingasecondchild.Andwehadadiscussionaboutitinclassyesterday.Moststudentsthinkthatit’sbettertohavealittlebrotherorsister,becausetheyhaveapersontoplaywithandtheywon’tbelonelyanymore.Also,itwillbemoreconvenienttolookafterparentsinthefuture.Manygirlslovekidssomuchthattheyreallywanttohaveabrotherorsister.However,someofusdisagree.Intheireyes,havingabrotherorsisterissomethingtheycan’stand.Ontheonehand,pa-rentswillpaymoreattentiontothetinybaby.Ontheotherhand,theywillgetfewerandfewerchancestogooutwiththeirparents.Theythinkit’sunfairandit’sterriblewhenababyiscryingallnight.Inmyopinion,youcansharehappinessandsadnesswithyourbrotherorsister.Youtwowillbethebestfriendsintheworld.Howgreatitwillbewhenapersonisalwaystheretolisten!20\nConnectives1.表观点：think,intheireyes,inmyopinion2.表原因because,also,ontheonehand,ontheotherhand,what’smore3.承上启下的句子however,someofusdisagree.MakingdifferencesDifferentconnectivesDifferentwordsDifferentsentencepatterns（用了哪些句式）so...that..,when,as,how!..\n______,ourschoolisagoodplacetostudy.Itisbeautiful.Theteachersaregreat.Thestudentsherearehardworking.Writeashortbutbeautifulpassage:(50字左右)1)Connectives2)Makingdifferences\nWhathavewelearnedtoday?Todaywehadaspecialclass.Welearnedalotintheclass.__________,theteachergreetedusinWarmly.Itmadeusinterestedinher.________,shetaughtustheimportantofusingconnectiveswhilewriting.Ithinkitwasveryuseful.________,sheshowedushowtomakedifferencesinourcompositions.Itreallymakesadifferencetous.__________,sheaskedtoenjoyagreatarticlefromherownstudentandshowedushowtobeautifyanarticlewhichisnotsoperfect.Iamsureeveryoneinourclasswillmakeprogressinwriting.FirstofallThenAfterthatFinally\nMoststudentswouldliketoliveinschool.Itiscon-venienttocommunicatewithclassmateanditisalsoagoodchancetolearnhowtolookafterthemselves.However,somestudentsdon’tliketoliveinschool.Theythinkhavingarestathomeisbetterthaninschool.Andtheycan’thavealongrelaxingtimewithfamilyiftheyliveinschool.IthinkIwouldliketoliveinschool.OneofthemainreasonsisthatIcancommunicatemorewithmyfamily.AndIcanalsosharetheproblemIhavewithmyatonce.Homework:1)Beautifythearticleaccordingtowhatwehavelearnedtoday.\n2.Writeashortbutbeautifulpassage.观点：Ourschoolisagoodplacetostudy.1.校园优美.2.有许多好老师.3.大部分学生勤奋好学.\nWhatisyourideaforthat?Inmyopinion/…,____________________.Why?(Giveonereason)_________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Makingdifferences:.\n随着二孩政策的出现，很多父母开始考虑再生一个孩子。为此，你们班进行了专题讨论。请你根据下面表格提示，把你们班的讨论结果整理成80-100词的英语短文。赞成反对有了弟弟（妹妹）以后不再孤单父母会把更多注意力放在弟弟（妹妹）身上以后照顾爸爸妈妈会更方便父母带自己外出旅游和玩耍的机会减少············我认为······