高中英语讲义 短文改错专题复习教案 新人教版 教案 19页

[复习讲义]短文改错专题NMET短文改错的解题基本思路应该是：一．以句为单位，找行中错误，每行必有一个判断（错词、多词、少词和正确），而判断的依据一定是上下文，最小单位是一个完整的句子。二．以篇为单位，找句中错误。许多时候，就某一行或某一句单独而言常常难以判断其是否正确，错误何在，而必须以全篇为一整体才可对该句，进而对该行作出判断。具体解题过程中，应该注意把握九个一致问题：一．时态一致短文中谓语动词的时态与上下文，特定语言环境及该句的时间状语是否保持了呼应与一致。例1．       Myfavoritesportisfootball.Iwasamemberofourfootballteam.(NMET’98)全文都是一般现在时，此句中was虽然与上下问不一致，应改为am。例2．       Irememberedherwordsandcalmdown.(NMET’2000) 此处为一描述过去事件的语境，应与前文remembered保持一致，须改为calmed。例3．       Today,itismucheasiertobehealthythanitisinthepast.(NMET’93)第一个is与时间状语today保持一致，地第二个is则应改为was,使之与其时间状语inthepast一致。二．主谓一致 谓语动词在人称和数上是否与主语保持一致。例4．Nowmypictureandtheprizeishanginginthelibrary.      (NMET’2000) 主语为AandB时，谓语动词一般为复数，应改为are。例5．Thenewboyorgirlinschoolquicklybecomeoneofthe  classafterafew\ngames.(NMET’93)主语为AorB时，应由靠近谓语的主语来决定谓语的单复数，become应改为becomes.例6．Playfootballnotonlymakesusgrowuptallandstrong… (NMET’98)  此处与例4，例5不同，谓语动词makes与上下文保持一致，为正确的用法，而play须改Playing才可与此处其它部分一致。三．平行一致notonly…butalso…,either…or…,neither…nor…以及and,but,or等并列连词或词组连接的结构可称为平行结构。在平行结构中，词性时态等形式须保持前后一致。例7．Playingfootballnotonlymakes…butalsogiveusasense offairplayandteamspirit.(NMET’98)依据平行一致原则，此处give应与前文makes保持一致，改为gives.       例8．Itwasverykindofthemtomeetmeattherailwaystation  anddrovemetotheirhome.(NMET’96)此句中的drove应与前文tomeet保持平行，故改为drive。四．数的一致     名词的数须与其修饰语保持一致例9．Westudyquiteafewsubject,suchasmaths,    Chinese…(NMET’97)quiteafew只修饰复数名词，保持一致,subject应改为subjects.例10．They…askedmelotsofquestion.(NMET’96)与lotsof保持一致的只能是复数名词，应改为questions.五．主饰一致    句中的主要词（中心词）应与其修饰词间保持一致。  除了例9，例10外，还有\n例11．…sothatI’llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject.(NMET2001)  all若修饰可数名词时，其后名词应为复数。subject该为subjects。例12．Shesaidthatsheandmyschoolmateallwishedme  success.(NMET2000) all修饰的主语部分应是三者以上，故schoolmate应为schoolmates.例13．Unfortunate,therearetoomanypeople…(NMET’99)   Unfortunate应作状语，修饰整个句子，此时应为副词unfortunately才可保持一致。例14．I’msurewe’llhaveawonderfullytimetogether.(NMET’95)修饰名词，应为awonderfultime.六．指代一致   用于指代的各类代词应在数、格、性上与上下文保持一致。例15．TheSmithsdidhisbesttomakemefeelathome.  (NEMT’96)TheSmiths为一复数概念，故指代词也应为第三人称复数their.例16．IliveinBeijing,whereisthecapitalofChina.(NMET’97) 此处应为作主语的关系代词which.例17．AndIcan’tforgetthefoodyoucookedforI.(NMET’95) 此处I应作介词的宾语，故改为me才可保持一致。七．语态一致    句中谓语动词或非谓语动词应与上下文语态保持一致。例18．Booksmaybekeepforfourweeks.(NEMT’94)\n  与其主语Books相对应，此处应为被动语态，故keep应改为kept。八．搭配一致    句中的固定搭配应保持完整并与上下文一致。例19．IfeltsonervousasIshooklikealeaf.(NMET’2000)后    跟从句，保持一致须用so…that结构这一固定搭配。as改为that.例20．Ilookforwardtohearfromyousoon.(NMET’97)   lookforwardto中to是介词，其后应为动名词hearing。例21．Butitdidn’tmatterthatIwouldwinornot.(NMET’2000) 与其后ornot保持一致时应用whether。例22．Ihaveneitherbrothersnorsisters---inanyotherwords,Iamanonlychild.(NMET2001) inanyotherwords意为“换言之”，应为inotherwords。九．逻辑一致  这是一种隐蔽性较强且年年必考的错误，检查时应通篇考虑，重点在连词、代词，肯定与否定，及相对应的动词如come与go等。例23．Shewassmilingbutnoddingatme.(NMET’2000) 上下文看，应为She---myEnglishteacher微笑且点头鼓励我，but应为and。例24．Nowsomeoneathomereadsinstead.(NMET’99) 从上文可知，因为无电视可看，人人都只好读书，someone改为everyone或everybody.\n例25．Andtheymustnotbreaktherulestoooftenifwewantto winthegame.(NMET’98)通读全文，都是用第一人称，这时突然用到they,显然不一致，应改为we.   [实战演练一]⑴MostfamiliesinChinahopedtheirsinglechildrenwill76．_______haveahappyfuture,sotheyareverystrictintheirchildren.77．_______Sodoteachersinschools!Manychildrenaregivensomuch78．_______homeworkthattheyhavehardlyanysparetimehavesports.79．_______Thechildrenareforbiddentodoanythingbuttostudy.No80．_______wondersomanychildrenaretiredoflessons.Someeven81．_______attackorkillhisparentsandteachers!Ibelievemanypeople82．_______alreadyreadthiskindofnewsinnewspapersormagazines.83．_______Shouldn’twedrawlessonfromtheaccidents?Nowour84．_______governmentismakingoutaplantosolvetheeducationproblems.85．_______⑵Nowadays,almosteveryfamilyhasTVset,andalmost76．_______everyonelikeswatchingTV.TVhasbecomepartofourlives.77．_______TVhasmanyadvantages,forexample,itinformsusthe78．_______latestnewswhichishappeningintheworld;itcanopenour79．_______eyes,enlargeourknowledgeandalsohelpustoseemore80．_______abouttheworlD．But,italsohassomedisadvantages.People81．______\nwastetoomuchtimeinwatchingTVandhisnormallife82．_______andworkareaffecteD．Tothechildrenwhotheyspendtoo83．_______muchtimeinwatchingTV,itcandoharmfultotheirsight84．_______andhealthy.SoweshouldcontrolthetimeofwatchingTV.85．_______⑶AfewmonthsafterreturningtheUSfromGermany,Itook76._______partinacollegecourseinFrench.SinceIhavelearned77._______tosayGermanwellinGermany,Ithoughtitmightbe78.______interestedtobeginstudyinganotherlanguage.Atthe79._______firstclass,theteacheraskedustodoapronunciation80._______exerciseinithewouldsayawordortwoinFrench,and81._______eachstudentwoulddotheirbesttocopy.Whenhegotto82._______me,hekepthavingmetosaymorewords,andI83.______finallyaskedhimwhy.“Ifinditgreatfun,”sheexplained84._______it.“In25yearsofteachingatschool,it’sthefirsttime85._______I’veheardanAmericanspeakFrenchwithaGermanaccent.”⑷TheHuaiheRiverhasbeenseriouspolluted.Dayandnigh76._______　　　　millionsoftonsofwastewaterisbeingpoureddowntofrom77._______　　　　hundredsoffactories.Thewastewaterisharmful.Atpresent　　　78._______　　　　thereisnofishinit.Theriverwatercannotbedrunk.Peoplein79._______　　　　eitherbankhavetodigwellstotakedrinkingwater.TheHuaihe　　80._______　　　Riverissuchdirtyandpoisonousthatpeopledon’tdareswim　　81._______　　　　init.Somethingmustbedonetostoppingthepollution.The　82._______　　　　governmentandthepeopleneartherivermusttrytoclearwater83._______　　　　assoonaspossible.Nowspecialattentionhaspaidtothe84._______　　　　pollutionbythegovernmentandmorescientists.Thepollution85._______　　　　\nwillbepreventedinthenearfuture.⑸DearAbby,Howareyou?TodayI’vegotawonderfulnewstotellyou.76._______IhaveofferedascholarshipatauniversityinAustraliaformy77._______furthereducation.Onehundredandtwentystudentstookexam78._______forit,butonlyafewwaschosenandIwasoneofthem.However,79._______myparentsarenothappyaboutit.Theyarestrongagainstme80._______goingthere.Theysayitistoofarawaythattheywillnotseeme81._______forawholeyearandtheyareafraidofIwillfeellonely.They82._______can’timagineagirlsoyounglivealone.Theyadvisemetostudy83._______inthecapitalinstead.ThenI’llbeabletocontinuelivingwith84._______them.HowcanIpersuadethemtoacceptthefactIhavegrownup?85._______Bestwishes,Jane⑹Aperson’sagenolongertellsyousomethingabout76.________hissocialposition,marriageorhealthy.There’snolonger,77.________aparticularyearwhichonegoestoschoolorgoesto78.________workorgetsmarriedorstartafamily.Thesocialclock79.________thatkeptusontimeandtolduswhengotoschool,get80.________ajob,orstopworkingisn’tasstrongasitwasusedtobe.81.________Itdoesn’tsurpriseustoheara28-year-olduniversity82.________presidentora35-year-oldgrandmother,or70-year-old83.________manwhohasbecomeafatherforthefirsttime.Whatwe84.________allknow,public’sideasarechangingnowadays.85.________⑺Itisdifficultforparentstoteachyourchildrentoberesponsible76.________\n(有责任的)forhousework,butwithoneofthefollowedsuggestions,77.________youreallycangetyourchildrenhelpyouathome.Ifyougiveyour78.________childrentheimpressionwhichtheycanneverdoanythingquiteright,79.________thentheywillregardthemselvesunfitorunablepersons.Unlessthey80.________believetheycansucceed,theywillneverbecometotallyindependence.81.________Don’talwaysscoldandgivelotsofpraiseinstead.Talkabout82.________whatthey’vedoneright,butaboutwhattheyhaven’tdone.Ifyour83.________childrencompleteadifficulttask,reward(酬劳)himwithaSunday84.________triporaballgameofDad.85.________⑻BeforeIwenttoseniormiddleschool,somepeoplestold76._______me.“Alifeofseniormiddleschoolisunforgettable.”77._______WhileIfirstenteredmyseniormiddleschool,everything78._______seemedunpleasant.Faceallthestrangethingsaroundme,79._______Ioftenmissmyoldfriendsandclassmates.Ididn’twant80._______totalkothersormakefriendswithothers.Littlebylittle,my81._______schoolrecordwentfrombadtoworse,especiallymy82._______maths.Icouldn’tevenpasstheexam.Ilosttheheartand83._______missedthehappytimesalldaylong.Itoldme,“Idon’t84._______belongtoit.Idon’tlikethelifehere.”85._______⑼TomandDickarenextdoorneighbourwhowork76.________inthesameofficesotheywalkedtogethertoandfrom77.________office.Somedayastheywerewalkinghometogetherit78.________suddenstartedtorain.Tomquicklyopenedhisumbrella79.________andsaid,“Mywifesurelyhasforesight(预见).Shesaid80.________onthismorningitwouldrainandtoldmetocarrymy81.________\numbrellawithme.”Dicksmiledandwalkedtohim,said,82.________“Mywifehasevengreatforesight.Shetoldmenotto83.________carryanumbrellaandassheknewyouwouldcertainly84.________havewithyou.”85.________⑽DearSirorMadam,Iseeyouradvertisementinastudentmagazineand76.______I’minterestingtoknowmoreaboutyourdivingcourses.77.______Firstofall,IshouldexplainthatalthoughIcanswimI’m78.______notveryconfidentinthewater.Butyoumentionedyour79.______advertisementthatyourinstructorsarefullqualified(称职),80.______soIbelievethey’llabletoteachsomeonelikemetodive.81.______Ihaveoneweek’sholidayinthethreeweekofJune82.______andwouldliketoknowthatifthere’sacourserunningat83.______thattime.Howmuchdoesaweek’scourseworth?Finally,84.______ifIdecidetogoahead,arethereanyspecialequipmentI85.______needtobuyoriseverythingprovidedbyyourcompany?Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.Sincerelyyours,Tom⑾DearXiaohua,ItisfourdayssinceMotheracceptedtheoperation.76._______Sheisfeelingmuchmorebetter.Thedoctorstoldme77._______theoperationwassuccessful,butbecauseheroldage78._______shehadtostayinhospitalforothertwoweeks.The79._______doctorsalsosayitwasquitenecessaryforherto80._______\ndoso.Weexpecttogetafullreportintwoandthree81._______days.Pleasetellthegoodnewstotherestoffamily82._______assoonaspossible.Youneedn’ttocomehere.I’m83._______abletolookafterMotherbymyself.You’dbetter84._______sendflowerstoMother.Shewillfeelhappily.85._______Yours,Xiaohui⑿FootballismostpopulargameinEngland:onehasonly76._______togotooneoftheimportantmatchtoseethis.Richand77._______poor,youngandold,onecanseethemallthere,shoutand78._______cheeringforonesideortheother.Oneofthesurprised79._______thingsaboutfootballinEnglandtoastrangeristhegreat80._______knowledgeofthegamewhichstillthesmallestboyseems81._______tohaveit.Hecantellyouthenamesofthepl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