高中英语 书面表达基础训练教案 牛津版必修4 教案 7页

高一书面表达一.体裁：应用文（通知书信日记），图表或漫画，提纲式应用文格式要牢记。通知：呼语（Ladiesandgentlemen,Boysandgirls,Dearfriends）,开场白（pleasebequiet!Ihaveanannouncementtomake或Attentionplease!Ihavesomethingtotellyou）,正文，结束语（That’sall.Thankyou）图表或漫画（barchart柱状图、graph曲线图、piechart饼图、table表）：格局：Para.1:DescribethepicturePara.2:InterpretthepicturePara.3:Giveyouropinionsaboutthephenomenon提纲式：注意分段（三段式或四段式。观点表达题通常情况下要分三段来写。第一段介绍总体情况；第二段陈述不同的观点；第三段呈现个人观点。明确的分段让人一目了然。）要求：仔细审题理清要点防止遗漏连句成文（有效使用连词）查缺补漏（时态，语态，拼写等错误）卷面整洁。二．常见错误：1.叙述口吻不对2.时态把握不准3.断句不准，纠缠不清4.不能整体把握句子，瞻前不顾后5.标点符号使用不规范，乱用分号，随便点逗号。6．全篇一段层次不清。7．欠推敲小错不断.三.“观点对立型”的议论文及图画，图表类作文常备语句及模式开头，过度及结尾常备模式1.常用于开头的短语，句式(1).Recentlyourclasshasheldaheateddiscussionabout…..Opinionsaredividedonthismatter.(2).Differentpeopleholddifferentideas／opinions．Sbargues/holds/insists/believesthat...图画：Para.1:Describethepicture(1).Thepicturedescribevividlyakindofcommonphenomenon….(2).Asisdescribed/showninthepictureabove,….\n(3)Thepictureaboveshows….(4)Fromtheabovepicture,itcanbeseenthat..2.常用于中间段落的语句1.(1).Somepeopleagreeto…..,becausetheyusuallythinkthat...Inthemeantime,...Inaddition...(2). SomepeoplethinkthatAisrightbecause...(3). Somepeoplesuggest/saythat...Atthesametimetheypointoutthefactthat...What’smore...(4). SomepeoplepreferNO.One.IntheiropinionA...Inaddition...(5).1. Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdthatBisright.Theythink...2.(1).Butmanymorepeopledon’tagreewiththem.TheypreferB.Theysaythat...Thereasonisthat...(2).Onthecontrary,somepeopleholdthat...(3).SomepeoplethinkthatBisbetter.Itisclearthat...What’smore,...Also...图画：Para.2:Interpretthepicture(1).Itseemsveryridiculousthat….However,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.(2).Thepictureindicatesthat……Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenonthat…Reasons:1.thereasonforthephenomenonisthat…(1).Thereareseveralcausesfor…inthepicture.Firstofall,..secondly..thirdly.(2).Whatarethereasonsforit?Ononehand…,ontheotherhand….What’smore,(3).Therearesomemainreasonforit.Foronething…,foranotherthing…,inaddition,3.常用于结尾的短语，句式(1)Toconclude/Inconclusion/Inaword/inshort/generallyspeaking(2).From\nwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelyarriveat/draw/cometo/reachtheconclusionthat...(3)Insummary,itisimportant..(4)Obviously,ifwewantto...,itisnecessary..(5)It’sclearfromthepicturethat...(6)Thereisnodoubtthatattentionmustbepaid....4.个人观点表达常用句式(1).Inmyopinion/Personally/frommypointofview/Onmypart/Onapersonalnote../AsfarasIamconcerned,(2).Judgingfromwhathavebeenarguedabove,itis,therefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivestepsbetakento…(3).Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelieve..(4).FromwhereIstand,itistimethateffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblem.正确使用连词时间先后：first,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen,afterawhile转折关系：but,however,onthecontrary,nevertheless因果关系:because,since,as,nowthat,dueto,asaresultof,让步关系：though,although,evenif,eventhough,inspiteofthefactthat递进关系：what’smore,inaddition,furthermoreontheonehand…ontheotherhand,条件关系：if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat…表列举:forexample/instance,take…forexample,that’stosay,inotherwords,asfollows表总结：inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole,ashasbeenstated见解型:inmyopinion/view,intheopinionofme,personally,AsformePersonally,Onmypart,Onapersonalnote,AsfarasI’mconcerned\nC.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思,能增加文章的文采1.强调句：e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.2.倒装句：e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.3.省略句：e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.4.V-ing形式:e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreet5.with的复合结构：withahandbaginherhand6.定语从句：e.g.Inmyopinion,Internetcafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.7.各种名词性从句：e.g.That’swhatIshoulddo.Weshoulddoafavortowhoeverneedshelpatpresent.8.各种状语从句：e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Themomentwereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.Solongasweworkharderatourlessons,we’llcatchupsoonerorlater.D.怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.2.BothMaryandLucycanspeakChinese.(使用倒装句)MarycanspeakChinese,andsocanLucy..3.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.4.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.5.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（nomatterwhat状语从句）Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.6.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（祈使句+and…）\nStudyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.7.Asaresult,theplanwasafailure.(turnout)Theplanturnedouttobeafailure./Itturnedoutthattheplanwasafailure.8.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(themore…themore)Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.E.常用谚语(在议论文中): 1)Asapopularsayinggoes,“Everycoinhastwosides”. 2)Asaproverbsays,“Everythinghastwosides”.Ontheonehand,physicalexerciseisgoodforyourhealth.Ontheotherhand,ifyoudon’tdealwithitproperly,itwilldoharmtoyourhealth.Soweshouldlookatthematterfromtwosides. 3)Asaproverbsays,“Wherethereisawillthereisaway.”(有志者事竟成) 4)Asapopularsayinggoes,“Amanisknownbythecompanyhekeeps.”(观其交友,知其为人) 示范作文一：随着经济的发展，环境污染越来越严重，自然灾害接连不断地发生，严重威胁着人们的生活。对此，我们能做些什么以减轻对地球的污染呢？根据下列提示写一篇英语作文。1.公众应该接受环保教育，节电节水2.用环保购物袋取代塑料袋3.必须通过新的法律，控制工业污染问题Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,ourenvironmentisbeingpollutedmoreandmoreheavily.Naturaldisasterscontinuouslybrokeout,threateninghumanlifeseriously.Tomaketheearthabetterplaceforustoliveon,inmyopinion,weshoulddoasfollows:Firstofall,thepublicmustreceivetheeducationaboutprotectingenvironment.Theyshouldalsosaveelectricityandwaterindailylife.Besides,weshoulduseenvironment-friendlyshoppingbagsinsteadofplasticbags,whichwillleadtothe“whitepollution”.Moreimportantly,newlawsmustbepassedtoeffectivelycontrolindustrialpollution,whichisthemaincauseofenvironmentalpollution.\nOnlyinthiswaycanwehaveamorebeautifulearth.示范作文二暑假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法。请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。参考词汇：眼界——horizon（或view）待在家中优点：花费少，舒适方便外出旅游优点：增长见识，开阔眼界缺点：不能亲身了解外界缺点：花费多，旅途不便Thesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.Someareinfavorofstayingathome.Theythinkit’sbothconvenientandcomfortable.What’smore,theycansavemoneyforotherpurposes.Buttheywilllosethechanceofgettingtoknowtheoutsideworld.However,othersprefertogooutfortravelingsinceitcanincreasetheirknowledgeandbroadentheirhorizons.Buttheywillspendmoremoneyandmeetsomedifficultieswhiletraveling.Inmyopinion,itwouldbemuchbettertostayathome,forIcandowhatIlike,suchasreadingbooks,watchingTV,andhelpingmyparentswiththehousework.示范作文三.漫画式：Thepicturedescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamongsomedriversinourcountry.Inthepicture,adriveriscaughtbyapolicemanbecausehiscarhas“kissed”thewall.Hehasdrunksomuchthathecan’tstandnormally.Therearesomemainreasonsforit.Firstofall,manypeoplelacktheawarenessofsafety,whichisverydangerous.Inaddition,somepeopleignorethetrafficrules.Meanwhile,thegovernmentdon’tpunishitstrictly.AsfarasI’mconcerned,drunkdrivingisagreatdangerbothtooursocietyandtodrivers.It’stimewetooksomemeasurestoforbiddrinkingbeforedriving.Weshouldstrengthenthetrafficsecurityeducationtoraisepeople’sawareness\ntowardssafety.Inaddition,thegovernmentshouldmakestricterlawsaboutitandpunishdrunkdriversseverely.