初中英语中考作文指导 12页

幻灯片1中考英语作文8个话题•一、介绍人（自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等）•二、介绍地点•三、校园生活（旅游等）（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等）•四、课外生活•五、假期安排（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等）（计划、过去经历等）•六、节假日活动七、环境、健康（志愿者活动、过去经历）（环保、疾病、食品健康等）•八、个人观点建议（提建议、劝告等）幻灯片2用适当的连词连接文段•MynameisTorn.Iam15yearsold.myappearances,IamtallIwearglasses.mypersonalities,Iamshyfriendly.•Ihaveahappyfamily.Thereare3peopleinmyfamily.•Ihavelotsofhobbies.,Ienjoysingingcollectingstamps.•Now,IstudyinClass9Grade3,BayiHighSchooLMyfavoritesubjectismath.，IamintestedinEnglish,Chinese^physics•IlivefarfromschoolIusuallygetupat6:00andgotoschoolbysubway.•,Ihaveabusywonderfullife.幻灯片3用适当的连词连接文段Asfor•MynameisTom.Iam15yearsold.myappearances,IamtallIwearglasses*mypersonalities,Iamshyfriendly.•Ihaveahappyfamily.Thereare3peopleinmyfamily.•Ihavelotsofhobbies.Jenjoysingingcollectingstamps.•Now,IstudyinClass，Grade3,BayiHighSchooLMyfavoritesubjectismath.,IaminterestedinEnglish,Chinese,physics•IlivefarfromschoolIusuallygetupat6:00andgotoschoolbysubway.•,Ihaveabusywonderfullife.andAsforbutForexamplebutalsonotonlyBesidesandsoonsoInawordbut幻灯片4写作指导Let'sgoforit!\n幻灯片5温馨提示：请你根据自己的不同程度来巩固本课件的内容。全体同学一定要学习前面3张幻灯片及标题中上水平同学最好连同例子一起学习英语基础和水平较好的同学请试试从36张幻灯开始。幻灯片6basicstructure（基本结构的安排）幻灯片7Let'sgoforit!bearMr.Know,I9mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.IwanttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First,someofusaren"tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthen计，ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.SolotsofusdorfthaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What，smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven"tmcetbeforeinthepassage.Idon"tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan"tunderstandthemainidea,letalone（更不用说）answerthequestionsaboutthem.ButthemostcHfficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyouverymuch.Writetomesoon.（thebeginning）thebody（正文）Mary（theending）幻灯片8basicrules（写作考试规则）search（审）list（列）add（加：开头和结尾）connect（连）beautiful（美：谚语/例子）幻灯片9帧血風\n幻灯片10审（search）健廉很重要。农学习和工作的压力目趙增丸的今夭，会休息的人才会有健廉的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康俎织写一篇宪整的调查掖告,并提倡大家进行假目休阿。travelvisitfriendsorparentsstayathomework幻灯片11列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。•如何度假•调查报告•倡议假日休闲visitfriendsorparentstravelstayathomework幻灯片12列(list)•Alotofpeopletravel.•Somepeoplestayathome.•Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.•Afewpeoplework.•Enjoyyourvacation.幻灯片13加(add)•加首尾，使结构完整。•可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.(thebeginning)•Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.(theending)幻灯片14连(connect)•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.\n•Accordingto汁"alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.幻灯片15Writingskills(“写”的技巧)方法一:善用词汇甚至善用高级词汇幻灯片16Whichisbetter?他们在海滩上听音乐。ATheylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.幻灯片17Whichisbetter?我希望你能帮助我。AIwishyoucanhelpme.BVmlookingforwardtoyourhelp.幻灯片18Whichisbetter?他们很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.幻灯片19Whichisbetter?最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。AHisdogwassavedatlast.Hewasverysurprised.BTohissurprise,hisdogwassavedatlast.幻灯片20我认为学英语很有趣。AIthinklearningEnglishisinteresting.BIfinditreallyfuntolearnEnglish.\n我们应该保护环境。AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt'sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.幻灯片21Writingskills(“写"的技巧)方法二:活用多种句型幻灯片22她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung・Shecan"tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan,tcarrythe—DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…幻灯片23Writingskills(“写”的技巧)方法三:妙用关联词幻灯片24关联词(connectionwords)1•表示并列或递进：and,aswellas,both…and,what，smorenotonly-butalso,neither・・・nor2.表示选择：or,either---or3.表示转折：but,however,although\though,afterall,anyway4•表示因果：because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresuIt5•表示条件:if,unless6•表示对比：instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand-••ontheotherhand7•表示解释：forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth8•表示顺序：tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9•表示强调：also,besides,especially,actually,infact10•表示结论：allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort幻灯片25LefstryThough\AIthough•Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.•Hedidrftgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert.•Welikedoingkindsofsportsswimming,runningandhiking.•,hestoodup.Thenhegotout.,hewentback.hesmiled.\ninsteadlikeFirstFinally\AtlastNext幻灯片26连(connect)美(beautify)•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.•Accordingtoit#alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.幻灯片27美(beautify)Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingto汁.mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.幻灯片28美(beautify)Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays・Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.nComeandenjoyyourvacation.PeoplewhorelaxwellworkwellAndtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.Proverb(谚语)/saying幻灯片29加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和"ending”,多用后者。锻炼对学生有好处\nItisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise...Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy/Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise.幻灯片30加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和"ending”,多用后者。集中注意力于学习Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains/Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies...幻灯片31加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning"和”ending",多用后者。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.幻灯片32Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.2.DoastheRomansdo.熟能生巧。三思而后行。3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。\n2.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。3.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败是成功之母。幻灯片33Enjoysomeproverbs7.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.9.AllroadsleadtoRome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.覆水难收。一天一个苹果，医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。活到老，学到老。幻灯片34Writingskills（“写”的技巧）方法四:妙用引文和例子（多用于“thebody"）幻灯片35加例子青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.幻灯片36加例子在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchaswashingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.\n幻灯片37结尾：提出倡议或号召幻灯片38Let's…bo汁now!/Don"tdoitagain!Asstudents,weshouldstartfromourselves.Don'twait.Joinusnow!Starttojoinusnow!Don'tputitoff!Becomeavolunteertoday!Howamazing!Ican"twait!Saveanimals!SaveOurselves!Saveourplanet!Don'thesitate（犹豫）.Itwillbegreatfun!幻灯片39知己知彼，学范文幻灯片40Let'sgoforit!First,someofusaren"tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringtKing.Andthenit"ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon"thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What"smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaventmetbeforeinthepassage.Idon'tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan"tunderstandthemainidea,letalone（更不用说）answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.幻灯片41Yourturntogoforit!（试填一填）DearMary,Iheardyoudidn'tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.5IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant.,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,"Practicemakesperfect/',itisnecessaryforyou\ntolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill.,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.Yours•••幻灯片42Yourturntogoforit!（check）DearMary,Iheardyoudidn，tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Tobeginwith5IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant.,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish・Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.",itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill.,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.ThenOfcourseInfactYours•••幻灯片43It'syourturn!（请分析以下的文章）TheLifeasaGrade9StudentHowtimeflies!NowI’minGradeNine.ActuallyIfeelthelifeisquitedifferentfromit\nusedtobe.NowVmasbusyasabee.There'salotofhomeworkandexams.TheonlyfeelingIhaveis:ThelifeasaGradeNinestudentisverybusyandchallenging!!There"sanoldsaying:Hewhofailstoplanplanstofail.Idon'twanttofail,soIcreateaplanforthefollowingdays.SincenothingisdifficultifIputmyheartintoit,IwillchangemyattitudetowardsmathsandphysicswhichIampooratnow.I’IIspendtheresttimeefficiently.Asthere"snoelevatortosuccess,VIItrymybesttodoeverythingstepbystep!IbelievethatIcandoit!幻灯片44Yourturntogoforit!Connectionwords：Goodwords:Goodsentences：幻灯片45It'syourturn!（练练笔）随着人口的增多，人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住，而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变成了耕地；新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地；许多动物遭到猎杀所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们人类的朋友，我们有责任去保护他们，而不是伤害或猎杀它们。请相4居上述内容写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。要求：1•语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整；2•提示的内容要全部用上。幻灯片46Let'sHelpOurFriendsWiththeincreasingpopulation,humannecdsmoreplacestoliveinandmorefoodtoeat・Asaresult,wechangetheforestsintofarmland.Ifeelpityfortheanimals.Moreandmorenewcitiesandroadsarebui11onanimalhabitat.Alotofanimalsarekilledbecauseoftheirtastymeatorbeautifulfur.Thereusedtobelotsofanimals,butnowmoreandmoreanimalsbecomeendangeredbecauseofourcrazyandsillybehavior.Eorexample,thereareonly2500manateesinIhoUSAnow.Doyouwanttoseethesegentleandshyanimalsdisappear?Doyouwantourchildrenonlytoseemodelanimalsinthefuture?Don，tyouthinkanimalsareourlovelyfriends?1knowyouransweris"No”•Soit'sourdutytoprotecttheminsteadofhurtingorkillingthem.Don"tputitoff!Let'stryourbesttohelpourfriendstoday!幻灯片47Yourturntogoforit!Connectionwords:Goodwords:Goodsentences：\n幻灯片48