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中考英语写作\n语法和句型初中写作中的常见错误\n1、结构错误Therehassomedifferentideasabout…Therearesomedifferentideasabout…正：Therebe…\n2.误用句型结构误：Whenamiddleschoolstudent,hisparentswereverystrictwithhim.正：Whenhewasamiddleschoolstudent,hisparentswereverystrictwithhim.\n3.符号错误Therearemanyboybandsaroundtheworld.SuchasSuperJuniorM,FeiLunHai,Flowerandsoon.正：Therearemanyboybandsaroundtheworld,suchas,SuperJuniorM,FeiLunHai,Flowerandsoon.\n4.缺少动词我累了。——I'mtired.误IhappyIcancometoBeijingZoo.正IamhappyIcancometoBeijingZoo.误Theapplescheap.I'lltakesome.正Theapplesarecheap.I'lltakesome.\n5.缺少介词、冠词等误Becauseheavyrainwecan'tholdthesportsmeeting.正Becauseoftheheavyrainwecan'tholdthesportsmeeting.\n6.代词的误用误ImotherandIwenttotheshoptobuyapresentforIfather.正MymotherandIwenttotheshoptobuyapresentformyfather.\n7.句子不完整误Manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetintocollege.Forexample,myfriendinhighschool.（这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。）正Manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetintocollege,forexample,myfriendinhighschool.\n8.前后不一致所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。误Whenonehaveknowledge,hecandowhathewanttodo.（人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。）剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。正Whenonehasknowledge,hecandowhathewants（todo）\n9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误误WhenIgettothestationthetrainleave.正WhenIgottothestationthetrainhadleft.\n10.词性误用．Weallknowthatfailisthemotherofsucceed.Weallknowthatfailureisthemotherofsuccess.\nsuccesssuccessfulsuccessfullysucceed\nHegotsuccess.Hewassuccessful.Hediditsuccessfully.Hesucceeded.\nMakeourcitygreenerisimportant.Makingourcitygreenerisimportant.\n人们可以通过因特网获得信息。PeoplecanbytheInternettogetinformation.PeoplecangetinformationthroughtheInternet.\n11．词语赘用词语赘用就是在文章中使用了多余的字（uselesswords），或用了大词（bigwords），雅词（elegantwords），形成了废话（deadword），使文章组织不严密，内容模糊不清。\nIPhoneisabrand-new,cool,modern,entertaining,smarthightech.2-3个形容词足矣！切记用and连接。\nPeoplewhoareinBeijingareworkinghardforthe2008Olympics.PeopleinBeijingareworkinghardforthe2008Olympics.\n查字典lookupadictionary看词性看例句\n12.文化差异\n百里挑一oneinahundredoneinathousand\n黄头发yellowhairblond\n白头发whitehairgreyhair\nWhite-collarBlackteaBrownsugarGreenhouseBluemood白领红茶红糖温室忧郁的情绪\n具雷人版本\n语雷版IcallLioldbig.toyear25.Myhomefourmouthpeople:papa,mama,IandDD.Pleasecometoeatandsleepwithme.Fromseeyouoneeye,Iloveyou.Youreyesclose,Idie;Youreyesopen,Icomebackalive.Youreyescloseandopenagainandagain,Idieagainandagain.\n帮TA挑挑错！！\n1.Wehavecomputerclassoneweekatime.Ihavecomputerclassonceaweek.英语中表达频率次数时:一次once,两次twice从三次开始用threetimes...2.Gointomyschool,youcanseemanyflowers.Goingintomyschool,youcanseemanyflowers.这里使用动名词going做主语,go这个动作由后面的you发出.\n3.Therehave100books.Thereare100books.表示某个地方有什么,一般使用Therebe的存在句型.4.Istudythereveryhappy.Istudythereveryhappily.Study是个动词,表示动作的程度要使用副词,不可以用形容词happy.\n5.Iusuallyswimmingthere.Iusuallyswimthere.-ing结尾的动名词不可以单独做句子的谓语.6.Iforgetsaidthis,ourschoolwallbesidehasmanytrees.Bytheway,therearemanyflowersbesideourschoolwall.这个句子的表达和语法上都有问题.如果单从中文意思来看,大家都明白他在说什么,但是要是让外教来批改,估计他会无尽的苦恼了.所以我们在不失句子原意的基础上,使用正确的语法.该句子的表达应该为:\n7.Severalhoursafter,hewassurprised.Severalhourslater,hewassurprised.使用after时,不能放在时间表达语的后面.8.Hehadtoaskedtheotherone.Hehadtoasktheotherone.“Havetodosomething”是固定用法,不定式后用动词原形.\n9.Hethoughthespeakwell.Hethoughthespokewell.这个句子属于语法时态的不一致.10.Mr.LiiscomefromBeijing.Mr.LiisfromBeijing.一个英语句子中不能有两个谓语动词.\n11.Hewasveryhardly.HelikesstudyingChinese.Hestudiesveryhard..HelikesstudyingChinese.首先要区分hard和hardly.虽然两个都可以做副词,但在意思上有很大的区别.Heworksveryhard.他工作很努力Hehardlyworks.他几乎不工作.这个两个表达相差很大.其次,be动词后面不能使用副词.12.Thisfilmisverygood-looking.Thisfilmisveryinteresting.这是一个完全中文式的英语句子.good-looking一般用来形容人物的.\n13.Itisverygoodtofamilylook.Itisfitforfamilytoenjoy.又是一个中文式的句子14.Ithinkwecan’tliveInternet.Ithinkwecan’trelyonInternet.学生想要表达的是不要过分依赖因特网.\n15.Peopleusethenettosendthemailshasthemostpeople.Mostpeopleusethenettosendthemails.这是一个要表达比例的英语句子.学生在这里做了一个中文句子的”强行”翻译.16.Ihaveafuturedream.Ihaveadreamaboutfuture.Future在这里不可以直接修饰dream.\n17.Itcanhelpmetowalkonmyliferoad.Itcanhelpmetowalkonmylife’sjourney.“人生路”中的“路”是抽象的含义，不可用“road”来表达。18.Ithinkeverythingmustbechangealot.Ithinkeverythingkeepsonchanging.不细心看这个句子,我完全不了解他想表达什么.但从上下文来推测,我想他想表达世事在变化的意思.\n19.IjustwonderwhatdoesmyfuturelikeandwhatshouldIdo.IjustwonderwhatmyfuturelikesandwhatIshoulddo.宾语从句要使用正常语序.20.ButIsingingnotverywell.ButIdon’tsingverywell.动名词不可以单独做谓语动词使用.一般现在时的句子表否定,如果是实意动词需要有do来帮忙.\n21.Tom’smumdidn’tcarehim.Tom’smumdidn’tcareabouthim.Care是个不及物的动词，不可以直接加宾语。22.Almoststudentsusethecomputernotstudy.Mostofthestudentsusethecomputernottostudy.一个句子中间只能有一个谓语动词。\n23.Sendmailismostofpeopleliketodointhenet.Mostofpeoplelikesendingmailintheinternet.这是一个中文式表达的句子。24.WhenIwasverysmall.WhenIwasalittlechild.Small用来形容人的体型和物品体积。这里要表达的“小孩子”的意思。