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实用标准文案环球雅思学科教师辅导教案（教师版）组长审核：学员编号：年级：高一课时数：学员姓名：辅导科目：英语学科教师：授课主题作文教学目的使学生掌握作文的解题技巧，帮助学生积累语料和句型教学重点作文授课日期及时段教学内容本节课分为五个环节：一、回顾上次课内容二、作文专练三、当堂练习四、课后小结五、课后作业文档大全\n实用标准文案一、回顾上次课内容二、作文专练英语作文8个话题•一、介绍人（自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等）•二、介绍地点　（旅游等）•三、校园生活　（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等）•四、课外生活（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等）•五、假期安排（计划、过去经历等）•六、节假日活动（志愿者活动、过去经历）•七、环境、健康（环保、疾病、食品健康等）•八、个人观点建议（提建议、劝告等）文档大全\n实用标准文案1.固定搭配　　lookforwardtodoing盼望做…　　keepondoing坚持做…　　dreamofdoing梦想做…　　can’thelpdoing情不自禁地做…　　keep/stop/preventsb.fromdoing阻止某人做…　　bebusy(in)doing   bebusywith+名词   忙于做…　　spendtime/money(in)doing  spendtime/moneyon+名词   花费时间做…　　havefun/haveagoodtime/enjoyoneselfdoing玩得开心havetrouble/haveproblem/havedifficulty(in)doing  或with+名词  做…有困难2.表示喜欢和感兴趣 like/lovedoingenjoydoingbefondofdoing喜欢做…bekeenonn/doing喜欢做…prefertodoAratherthandoB宁愿做A也不愿做Bbeinterestedindoing=show/takegreatinterestinn/doing 3. 努力做… trytodo努力做…tryone’sbesttodo=doone’sbesttodo竭尽全力做…makeeffortstodo=makeeveryefforttodo尽力做…sparenoefforttodo不遗余力的做…4.打算做…/计划做… intend/plantodo打算做…begoingtodo打算做…decidetodo决定做…determinetodo决定做…makeupone’smindtodo下定决心做…文档大全\n实用标准文案5.表示想/希望wanttodo=wouldliketodo想做…hopetodo希望做…expecttodo期待着做…wishtodo希望做…considerdoing考虑做…★写作步骤1.审题1）审主题2）审题材3）审人称，时态5）审要点（用笔画出来）6）审要求（字数，不能出现真实姓名等）2.分析要点用简明的英语写出要点3.列出写作提纲，并将要点扩展成句多用简单句，用有把握的复合句。4.组句成文，调整顺序连词—连贯自然，浑然一体，层次分明。☆三段式：1.开头（Introduction）2.正文（Mainbody）3.结尾（Conclusion）5.计划时间（20分钟），认真检查和修改检查：内容（要点）；语法（冠词，名词单复数，代词，动词时态，语态，三单，主谓一致）；单词拼写，大小写标点；词数。6.抄写书写清楚，规范，卷面整洁。2分卷面分文档大全\n实用标准文案1.就我的看法……；我认为……Inmyopinion,…=Tomymind,….=AsfarasIamconcerned,…=Iamoftheopinionthat….2.随着人口的增加……   Withtheincrease/growthofthepopulation,…随着科技的进步……   Withtheadvanceofscienceandtechnology,…3.……是必要的Itisnecessary(forsb.)todo/that………是重要的Itisimportant(forsb.)todo/that………是适当的Itisproper(forsb.)todo/that………是紧急的Itisurgent(forsb.)todo/that…4.花费 spend…onsth./（in）doingsth.…5.how引导的感叹句6.状语从句A)如果你不……，你就会……   Ifyoudon't...,you'll...B)如此……，以至于……    so…that…7.宾语从句我认为，…… /我认为……不  Ithink/Idon'tthinkthat…我想知道是否……           Iwonderwhether…8.Since+S+过去式,S+现在完成式.句型1：There＋be＋主语＋地点状语／时间状语句型2：How＋adj．／adv．＋主语＋谓语！Whata／an＋adj．＋n．＋主语＋谓语！句型3：．．．not．．．until．．．句型4：比较级＋and＋比较级句型5：the＋比较级，the＋比较级文档大全\n实用标准文案让我们来练练手吧！围绕“环境污染”这一话题，写一篇不少于100词的文章。Let’sprotectourenvironment!　Nowadays,pollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreseriousandtheenvironmentisgettingworse.Moreandmoretreesarecutdown.Asaresult,alotofrichlandhaschangedintodesert.Therearetoomanycars,busesandtrucks.Theygiveoffalotofwastegasesandmaketheairdirty.Somefactoriespourwastewaterintorivers.Thewatersmellsterrible.Thereisalotofloudnoisearoundus,too.Itmakesitimpossibleforustoworkandsleepwell.Wemustdosomethingtostopsuchpollutionandprotectourenvironment.Firstly,weshouldplantmanytreestokeepwater.Secondly,wecanrideabikeorwalktoschool.Thirdly,weshouldn’tthrowthedirtywaterintotheriver.Fourthly,wecanaskmorepeopletojoinus.　　Let’sprotectourenvironmenttogether!三、当堂练习以“如何保持健康”为话题，写一篇不少于100词的文章。文档大全\n实用标准文案Howtokeephealthy?Itisimpotranttohaveahealthybody.Buthowtokeephealthy?Ihavesomeideas.Firstly,weshouldeathealthyfood.Weshouldeatalotofvegetablesandfruit.Weshoulddrinkmilkeveryday,too.Secondly,weshouldexercisealot.Weshoulddosportseveryday.Thirdly,weshouldbeinagoodmood.Everydayweshouldthinkaboutactiveandexcitingthings.Andweshouldforgetbadthings.Ifwewanttohaveagoodmood,weshouldbekindandfriendlytoeveryonearoundus.Justdolikethisthenwewillhaveahealthybody.请根据下面的中文提示，写一篇100词左右的短文。手机变得越来越普及，很多人都拥有手机。手机越来越有用，它对人的帮助很大。我们可以用手机做很多事情，比如可以打电话、听音乐、可以玩游戏、当闹钟，可以看时间，还可以发送信息和拍照、录像等等。短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Mobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.Manypeoplehavethem.Theyareveryuseful.Theyhelpusalot.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Butasstudentswemustn’ttakethemobilephonestoschool,becauseitbreaksatschoolrules.Mobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.Manypeoplehavethem.Theyarevery文档大全\n实用标准文案useful.Theyhelpusalot.Wecandomanythingswithourcellphones.First,wecancallourfriendsandtalkwiththemoverthephoneanytimeandanywhere.Second,wecanalsowriteandsendmessagestoourfriends.It’scheapandfast.Third,wecanuseourmobilephonetolistentomusicorplaysomegames.Fourth,youcanuseyourmobilephonetotakephotos.Finally,theycanalsotellusthetimeandwakeusupinthemorning.Butasstudentswemustn’ttakethemobilephonestoschool,becauseitbreaksatschoolrules.四、课堂小结五、课后作业天浩，看看下面的范文或句子，找出你能用到的句子，并记住它们！BicycleBikeisacommonandpopulartraffictoolinChina.Almosteveryoneownsabike.Ihaveablackbike.Ithasbeenagoodfriendofmine.Bicycleridinghasmanyadvantages.Firstly,it'sconvenienttogotoschoolorgotoworkbybike．Secondly,itcanhelppeopletokeephealthy.Ifyougotoworkbyridingabicycleinsteadofdrivingortakingabus,youcanhaveabetterchanceofgettingenoughexerciseyouneedeveryday.Thirdly,bicyclingisalsogoodforourenvironment.Itislessnoisyanddoesn’tpollutetheair.Bikeshavemanybenefitsforus.Soweshouldoftenrideabiketogoout.有关爱好的句子文档大全\n实用标准文案Myhobbyiscollectingstamps,becauseIthinkthestampsareverybeautiful.Itcanmakemegrowasaperson,developmyinterestsandhelpmelearnskills.IbegantocollectstampswhenIwas10yearsold.Ilovemyhobby.www.xkb1.com有关友谊的句子IhavemanyfriendsbecauseIlikemakingfriendswithothers.Idon’tcareiftheyarerich.Ithinkthatfriendsareimportanttome.Theymakemefeelhappyandwarm.WhenIneedhelp,Iwillaskthemforhelp.Infact,wecanlearnfromeachotherandhelpeachother.有关提建议的句子假如你叫Diana,是一位杂志的知心姐姐。有一天你接到一封请求建议的来信,信的内容如下,请回一封信,说说你的想法。来信:DearDiana,I’vegotaSaturdayjobinlibrary.Lastweek,Iwasdoingmyhomeworkathelibraryinsteadoftidyinguptheshelves.Isawsomeonefrommyschoolcomeintothelibraryandstealabook.Theproblemis,hesawmedoingmyhomeworkinsteadofmyjob.Hesaid,“Ifyoutellanyone,I’lltelleveryonewhatyouweredoingwrong!”WhatIshoulddo?Yours,Kate回信范文:DearKate,Ohdear!You’vemadetwomistakes.First,youweredoingyourhomeworkinsteadoftidyingupshelves;second,youdidn’tstopyourschoolmatefromstealingthebook.Ithinkyoushouldtellthetruthtothelibrarianandsaysorrytohim(her).Youmustletothersknowthatyou’retrulysorry.Bestwishes!新课标第一网Yours,Diana有关英雄的范文TherearemanyheroesinChina.MyfavouriteheroisDrNormanBethune.HewasborninCanada.ButhegavehislifetohelpingtheChinesepeople.Heisstillrememberedtoday.Iamproudof文档大全\n实用标准文案him.有关节日的范文SpringFestivalisoneofthemostimportantfestivalsinChina.MostpeoplestartcelebratinginNewYear’sEve.Thefamiliesgettogetherandhaveabigmeal.TheMid-autumnDayisanothertraditionalfestivalinChina.Peoplevisittheirrelations.Sometimestheygotraveling.Atnight,theyhavesomemooncakesandfruitintheopenair.Theytalkandlaughandspendawonderfulnighttogether.InDragonBoatFestival,weeatZongziandwatchthedragonboatsmatches.有关假期和假期计划的范文Winterholidayiscoming.IamgoingtospendafewdaysinHongKong.I’lldosomeshoppingthere.I’llfinishmyhomeworkandreadsomebooks.I’llalsohelpmyparentswithsomehousework,suchascookingmealsandcleaning.I’msureI’llhaveagoodtimeduringthesummerholiday.有关旅游和景点介绍的作文Chinaisagreatcountry.ItscapitalisBeijing.YoucangotherebyairanditonlytakesonehourtogettherefromGuangzhou.IfyouwanttogotravelinginBeijing,youcanvisittheGreatWallandBeihaiPark.Ifyouwanttogoshopping,youcangotoWangfujing.IthinkthebesttimetovisitBeijingisautumn,becausetheweatherisniceatthattime.测试题第一部分：基础知识运用(共两节，满分45分)从A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。1．(2013·江苏南京四校调研)TherearerecordsabouttheDiaoyuIslandsin________bookpublishedduringtheruleofYongLe(1403－1424)in________MingDynasty.A．a;/　　　B．the;/C．a;theD．the;a答案：C　考查冠词。句意：在明朝永乐年间(1403—1424)出版的一本书中有关于钓鱼岛的记载。第一空，不定冠词a表示泛指；第二空，表示朝代的名词前要用定冠词the。2．(2013·浙江金华六校联考)Thepriceofbeer________50centsto2perliterduringthesummerseason.A．rangedinB．rangedfromC．rangedofD．rangedat答案：B　rangedfrom...to意为“在……范围内变化”，range在此表示变化的幅度。文档大全\n实用标准文案3．(2013·唐山一模)InNewZealand,peopleliveinthehouseswiththeirdoors________north.A．facedB．faceC．facingD．toface答案：C　在with复合结构中，doors与facenorth之间是主谓关系，应用现在分词形式。4．(2013·山东日照调研)Shewasnot________frightened;infact,shewasnearlyfrightenedtodeath.A．abitB．atallC．alittleD．much答案：C　notabit和notatall都是“一点也不”的意思。根据语境，应该用notalittle，意思是“很，非常”。5．(2013·保定一调)Ican't________whathashappenedtothevegetables,fortheywerefreshlypickedthismorning.A．lookoutB．takeoutC．workoutD．figureout答案：D　句意：我不明白这些蔬菜怎么了，因为早上摘的时候还是新鲜的。figureout“理解，明白”；lookout“当心，小心，向外看”；workout“算出”；takeout“取出”。6．Ifyoukeepdrivingsofast,you'll________inhospitalsoonerorlater.A．roundupB．endupC．turnupD．sendup答案：B　句意：“如果你继续开快车，早晚有一天你会住进医院。”“endup＋介词短语/动名词”，表示“以……方式结束”。7．(2013·江西六校第二次联考)________thenortheastcoastofthesea,wecouldfindtheforestwasonfireontheisland________thecoast.A．On;onB．Off;offC．On;offD．Off;on答案：C　onthecoastof...“在……的海岸上”；offthecoast“在离海岸不远处”。8．(2013·江西三校联考)Itwasrainingheavily.LittleMaryfeltcold，soshestood________tohermother.A．closeB．closelyC．closedD．closing答案：A　考查副词词义用法。应用副词来修饰动词stood，close作副词，为具体含义表示“紧紧地”；closely作副词，为抽象含义，表示“密切地”。根据句意选A。9．(2013·陕西五校第一次模考)________Iadmitthatthereareproblems,Idon'tagreethattheycannotbesolved.A．WhileB．WhenC．AsD．For答案：文档大全\n实用标准文案A　考查连词的用法。句意：虽然我承认有问题存在，但是我不认为它们无法解决。此处的while表示“尽管，虽然”，引导让步状语从句。10．(2013·甘肃河西五校联考)Johnisthetallestboyinthebasketballteam,________accordingtohimself.A．fivefeeteightastallasB．astallasfivefeeteightC．asfivefeeteighttallasD．astallfivefeeteightas答案：B　as＋adj.＋as＋高度“高达……”为固定表达形式。11．(2013·安徽黄山三校联考)What________ourjourneywas!A．excitingexperienceB．excitedexperienceC．anexcitingexperienceD．anexcitedexperience答案：C　由句意知是“一次经历”，experience作经历讲时为可数名词，且v.ing修饰物，表示“令人……的”。12．(2013·云南省部分名校第一次联考)Itsuddenly________mehowwecouldimprovethesituation.A．struckB．happenedC．occurredD．realized答案：A　B项应为somethinghappenedtosb.意为“某人发生了某事”；C项应为Itoccurredtomethat...意为“我突然想到……”；D项应为sb.realized。Itstruckme...“我突然想到……”。13．Thenumberofthestudentsintheschoolhasincreased________10percentandhasgot________5,000.A．by;byB．to;byC．by;toD．to;to答案：C　表达增加或减少的幅度时用介词by；表示增加或减少到一定数量时用介词to。14．(2013·河南许昌第四次高三联考)Hewenttothestationhurriedly,only________thatthebushadgoneaway.A．totellB．tobetoldC．tellingD．beingtold答案：B　onlytodo表示一种出乎意料的结果，根据主语he可知应用todo不定式的被动语态。15．(2013·江苏四星高中学情调研)Johnhadtohavehiscarrepairedinagaragebecauseit________seriously.A．damagedB．wasbeingdamagedC．haddamagedD．hadbeendamaged答案：文档大全\n实用标准文案D　由句意可知damage动作先于主句动作发生，应用过去完成时，表示过去的过去；又因it(car)与damage之间是被动关系，故选D。第二节：完形填空(共20小题；每小题1.5分，满分30分)阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从16～35各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C、D)，选出最佳选项。(2013·辽宁六校协作第一次联考)Alandfreefromdestruction,inadditiontowealth,naturalresources,andlaborsupply—allthesewereimportant__16__inhelpingEnglandtobecomethecenterfortheIndustrialRevolution.__17__theywerenotenough.Something__18__wasneededtostarttheindustrialprocess(进程).That“somethingspecial”wasmen—__19__individualswhocouldinventmachines,findnew__20__ofpower,andestablishbusinessorganizationstoreshapesociety.Themenwho__21__themachinesofIndustrialRevolution__22__frommanybackgroundsandmanyoccupations.Manyofthemwere__23__inventorsthanscientists.Amanwhoisa__24__scientistisprimarilyinterestedindoinghisresearch__25__.Heisnotnecessarilyworking__26__thathisfindingscanbeused.Aninventororanyoneinterestedinappliedscienceis__27__tryingtomakesomethingthathasaconcrete__28__.Hemaytrytosolveaproblembyusingthetheories__29__scienceorbyexperimentingthroughtrialanderror.Regardlessofhismethod,heisworkingtogeta__30__result:Theconstructionofaharvestingmachine,theburningofalightbulb,oroneof__31__otherobjectives.Mostofthepeoplewho__32__themachinesoftheIndustrialRevolutionwereinventors,nottrainedscientists.Afewwerebothscientistsandinventors.Eventhosewhohave__33__ornotraininginsciencemightnothavemadetheirinventions__34__thegroundwork(基础工作)hadnotbeenlaidbyscientistsyears__35__.16．A.casesB．reasonsC．factorsD．situations答案：C　本句列举了英国成为工业革命中心的因素。A项意为“情况；例子”；B项意为“原因”；C项意为“因素”；D项意为“形势”。从句意看，这些都是天时地利的因素。17．A.ButB．AndC．BesidesD．Even答案：A　上文说“所有这些都是重要因素”，下文说“这些还不够”，显然用but表示转折。18．A.elseB．nearC．extraD．similar答案：A　根据上文意思，既然不够(notenough)，那么还需要别的因素，所以选else表示“其他的；别的”。19．A.possibleB．effectiveC．necessaryD．creative文档大全\n实用标准文案答案：D　后面定语从句说“可以发明机器的人”，那么一定是具有创造性的人，根据句意确定D项。20．A.productionB．sourcesC．basesD．discoveries答案：B　短文第一句提到“自然资源”，此处又提及“新的”，根据句意指开发新能源，也为下文的描述作铺垫。21．A.employedB．createdC．operatedD．controlled答案：B　此空用create与上文的inventmachines相呼应，指工业革命中的发明创造。22．A.cameB．arrivedC．stoppedD．appeared答案：A　指这些发明家的背景、职业不一样，他们来自各种背景及职业。23．A.lessB．betterC．moreD．worse答案：C　more与后文的than相呼应，more...than...意为“是……而不是……；与其……不如……”。句意：他们许多人与其说是科学家不如说是发明家。24．A.realB．practicalC．pureD．clever答案：C　根据句意及上下文可知该句讲述的是一心埋头于研究的“纯粹的”科学家。25．A.happilyB．occasionallyC．unwillinglyD．wholeheartedly答案：D　根据上下文，这种意义上的科学家一心一意地搞研究，不必关心其研究成果的应用。因此选D项。26．A.nowB．andC．allD．so答案：D　sothat引导目的状语从句，表示他工作的目的不一定是为了保证其成果能得到应用。27．A.seldomB．sometimesC．usuallyD．never答案：C　四个选项均为频率副词，根据句意应选C项，表示发明者总想制造成有用的东西。28．A.planB．useC．ideaD．means答案：B　此处指发明创造出具有用途的东西，与上文的appliedscience(应用科学)相呼应。29．A.ofB．withC．toD．as答案：A　不是“把科学与理论结合起来”，而是“用科学理论解决问题”，因此用of而不是with。30．A.singleB．onlyC．limitedD．particular答案：D　particular表示“具体的；特定的”。发明家在进行发明创造时是有其具体的目的或意图所在，为了得到某个具体的结果。31．A.fewB．thoseC．manyD．all文档大全\n实用标准文案答案：C　除了前面提到的两项之外，还有很多其他目的或意图。32．A.suggestedB．developedC．suppliedD．offered答案：B　develop在此表示“研究；开发”；其他选项均不合文意。33．A.littleB．muchC．someD．any答案：A　havelittleornotraining表示“很少甚至没有训练”。34．A.asB．ifC．becauseD．while答案：B　if引导条件状语从句，表“假设；如果”。35．A.agoB．pastC．aheadD．before答案：D　句意：如果没有科学家头几年打下的基础，那些在科学领域没有受过训练的人就不可能有那些发明创造。显然科学家的“groundwork”在先。文档大全