高中英语写作指导 9页

高中英语写作指导   一、如何提建议—— 给交友有困难的同学提建议Iamsorryyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.【引出建议】Herearesometipstohelpyou.【列举建议】First, whynotgoandtalktopeoplestandingontheirown.Iagreethisisdifficultbutthatpersonmaybelonelytoo.Ifyoudothis,Iamsureyouwillsoonhaveanewfriend. Second,youcanbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes,【理由】whichwillmakeyoufindpeoplewiththesameinterests. Finally, youshouldtrytojoininadiscussion, 【理由】lettingpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.二、列举个例 —— 良好饮食习惯Asweallknow,wearewhatweeat.Therefore,it’simportantforustoformhealthyeatinghabits.However,somestudentshaveformedavarietyofbadeatinghabits, suchasnothaving breakfast,loving eatingsnacks, being particularaboutfood, eatinganddrinking toomuchandsoon, whichwillsurelydoharmtotheirhealth.Tokeephealthy,weshouldhavehealthydiets. Notonly shouldwe havevariousfoods, like fish,meat,vegetables,fruitsaswellasrice,noodles, butalso weshouldhavethefoodsregularlyandproperly. Personally,Ithink itisimportanttokeepahealthydiet, whichcontributestobuildingupastrongbody. Onlyinthisway canwehaveenoughenergytostudybetter.三、举例说明 —— 和谐师生关系对你的影响【要证明的观点】Actually,havingagoodrelationshipwithteachersmakesiteasierforustogetalongsmoothlywithourstudyatschool. 【引出例子】Takemeforexample. 【例子】Myteacherismygoodfriend.WhenIfailintheexam,itismyteacherthatfirsthelpsmtoanalyzetheproblem.Sheispatientenoughtomakemegetoverallthedifficultiesinmystudy.WhenIamunhappyshealwayslistenstomecarefullyandthengivesmesomereasonablesuggestions,sothatIcanfocusonmystudysoon.Also,Ihavelearnedtobehelpfulandconsiderate. 【重申主题】Butfor（要不是） thegoodrelationshipwithmyteachers,Icouldnothavemadesuchprogress.套语背诵\n1.Thereisnodenyingthat confidenceplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Aconvincingexamplethatjumpsintomymind isaboutspeakingEnglish.2.Suchexamplecanbeseeneasilyinourdailylife.Agoodcaseinpointis…这样的例子在生活中很容易见到，一个很好的例子就是……四、讨论或辩论 —— 禁止乞丐在地下人行道行气留宿【引出主题】Recently,Guangzhou has passedalawtobanbeggarsfrombegging andsleepinginthesubwaysandourclass hadadiscussionabout itlastMonday.【反对及其理由】56%ofthestudents don’tagreewith theidea because theythinksomebeggarsreallyhavedifficultyinmakingalivingandhavetoplaymusicinthesubwaytosurvive.【赞成及其理由】However,44%ofthestudents favourtheideabecause theythinkbeggarsbringalotoftroubleforthecity. What’smore,somebeggarsarejusttakingadvantageofpeople’scompassiontomakeeasymoney.【个人看法】Personally,Ithink itisagoodideatoforbidbeggarsinpublicplacesandweshouldtakesomemeasurestohelpthem.五、利弊对比 —— 网购的利弊【点明主题】Nowadaysmanypeopleprefertoshoponline. 【罗列益处】Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First, it’sconvenientforustoshoponline.Secondly,ithelpssavemuchtime,withwhichwecandomoreotherimportantthings. 【罗列弊端】Butjustasthesayinggoes,everycoinhastwosides.Itsnegativeaspectsarealsoapparent. Oneofthedisadvantagesisthatwearenotsurewhetherthegoodswebuyareingoodquality. 【你的观点】Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethat positiveaspectsofshoppingonlinefor outweigh negativeones. Therefore,Iwouldliketoshoponline.六、采访类 —— 中学生英语单词拼写的问题LastWednesday,I hadaninterviewwith MrWang,anEnglishteacher, concerningtheissueofEnglishwordspellingamongmiddleschoolstudents. Accordingto MrWang, slightlymorethanhalfof theseniormiddleschoolstudents’Englishhandwritingisverypoorandabout 45%of themcannotspellwordscorrectlyalthoughtheyareabletospeak. Healsopointedoutthat thecausesfor spellingproblems arethat therearenospecificwordspellingchecksinexams,andthereisnotenoughtraining.Worsestill,thestudentsarelazytomemorizewordspelling. He\nsuggestedthat we should raisetheawareness and placegreatemphasis onthat, andaboveall,weshouldmasterskillswhilewearetrainingourselves.七、调查类——21世纪最令人担忧的问题Lastweek,we made/didasurveyamong 500SeniorTwostudentsaboutthemostworryingproblemsinthe21stcentury. Thesurveyshowsthat 32%ofthestudentsthinkthattheyworryabout thenaturaldisasters（自然灾害）most, for earthquakesandfloodshavetakenmanypeople’slives. Besides,29%ofthestudents holdtheopinionthat environmentalpollution（环境污染）isthemostworryingproblem while 17%ofthestudentsconsider thehousingproblem（住房问题）tobethemostworryingone. Thepercentageof thestudentswhoworrymostabout employment（就业问题） isthesameasthatof thestudentswhoworrymostabout foodsafety（食品安全）.Asformyself,foodsafetyisthemostworryingproblembecauseitislinkedcloselytoourhealth.八、心得体会 —— 诚实/ 勿以善小而不为1. Afterreadingthestory,Iamsotouchedby Alan,whosebehaviorisworthpraising.Thereisnodoubtthathonestystill playsaveryimportantrolein people’slifeandonlythosewhoarehonestwillbetrustedandrespectedbypeople. （诚实）3.Afterreadingthestory,Iwaslostinthought.Icametorealizethat peopleshouldnever ignorethedeedofsmallkindness.Yoursmallgooddeedssometimeswillgetbigreturnsormakeagreatdifference! （勿以善小而不为）九、记叙事件经过或过程 —— 日记或游记【总述】TodaywevisitedQinghuaUniversity.【过程】 Earlyinthemorning wearrivedatthegateofQinghuaUniversity, where wewerewarmlywelcomedbyanoldprofessor, who then showedusaroundthecampus. Inthelibrary,wesawsomeuniversitystudentsreadingattentivelyinthereadingrooms. Afterthat,wecametothelabbuilding. Attheendofthevisit,theoldprofessorgaveusalectureonscience intheafternoon,whichinterestedusverymuch.Timepassed so quickly thatbefore weknewit, itwastimethat we had tosaygoodbyetotheprofessor.【结果】Sincethen,IhaveworkedharderatmylessonsthanusualandmadeupmymindtobeastudentofQinghuaUniversity.十、人物简介 ——用英语简介李敏同学\n【姓名职务与特点】 LiMin, monitorofClass1Grade2 (同位语),ishealthyandlively. 【成绩与爱好】 She doeswellin allhersubjects,andshe  isfondof sports,singinganddancing. 【事迹】When shecametoschool,she hadmuchdifficultywith English, but throughhardwork shemadegreatprogress.  In2006 she tookpartin theNationalPhysicsOlympicCompetitionand wonthefirstprize.LiMin isverystrictwith herselfinherworkanddailylife,and isalwaysreadytohelpothers.相关短语：1.beadmittedintoakeyuniversity 考上重点大学2.majorinlaw主修法律     3.getamaster’sdegree 获得硕士学位4.graduatefromHarvardUniversity  毕业于哈佛大学5.winthefirstprize  获得一等奖   6.winagoldmedal  赢得一枚金牌7.becomeaworldchampion 成为世界冠军8.setagoodexampletous    给我们树立了良好的榜样9.behighlythoughtof    受到好评10．beawardedamedalfor   因……而获得奖章11．beawardedthetitleof  获得…称号 12．devote...to... 把…专用于/奉献给13.bornofapoorclerk’sfamily    出生在一个贫困的小职员家庭中 十一、假设处境 —— 假如你当时在场，你会怎样做？IfIhadbeen onthespot, Iwouldhave jumpedintotherivertorescuethechildontheconditionthatIcouldswim. Ifnot, Iwouldhave firstcalledthepoliceandthenpersuadedthepeopleontheboatandtheswimmersnearbytohelp.(湖北大学生为救溺水小孩死三人事件)十二、说明异同 —— 古典音乐与流行音乐的异同【同】Fromthepointofmanypeople, therearemanysimilaritiesbetween classicalmusicandpopmusic.Bothofthemcanmakepeoplerelaxandenjoylifeaswell. 【异】 However,thedifferencesarealsoobvious.Classicalmusiccan remindthemof thesweetmemoriesinthepast. Besides,classicalmusic, which wasmadebythefamousmusicianslikeBeethovenisinhighclassandcanlastlong, while the\nwordsofpopmusicareoftenconcernedwithmodernlife,eventruelovebetweenfriendsorlovers.  What’smore,popmusiciseasytosing.十三、图表作文1. 【总述现象】 Fromthechart,wecanseeclearlythat therehasbeen asharprisein theaverageincomeofChinesefarmersinthepast30years. （从上表可以清楚地看出, 在最近30年里中国农民的人均收入急剧上升。）2.【数据变化】 Asearlyas 1978,theaverageincomeofChinesefarmerswas only 193yuan. Thenonly16 years later,it increasedto2181.52yuan. Andby2010,theaverageincomeofChinesefarmers hadreached 7890yuan, which was 40timesasmuchas 30yearsago.3.【解释原因】Therearemanyreasonsaccountingforthischange.Firstly...Secondly...Finally...有许多原因可以解释这种变化。第一……第二……最后……4. 【阐述观点】 AsfarasI’mconcerned,Ifirmlysupportthepolicyofreformandopeningup,whichistheexactway tomakeChinapowerful.（就我来说, 我坚决支持改革开放政策, 改革开放是强国之路。）十四、地点简介 —— 介绍广州 概况中国第三大城市；别称：五羊城、花城；广东省省会；全市面积7,434平方公里；人口：1,000多万。历史2,200多年的历史文化名城，历史上丝绸之路（海路）的始发港。地理珠江从市中心穿过，温暖湿润。旅游风光旖旎，旅游业资源丰富。 Guangzhou, thethirdlargestcity inChina, alsoknownas Five-lamb City,FlowerCityandsoon,servesas thecapitalcityofGuangdongProvince.Thiscity coversatotalareaof 7,434squarekilometers withapopulationof morethantenmillion.Guangzhou,afamouscity withahistoryof morethan2,200years,isastartingportoftheSilkRoadontheseainhistory. With thePearlRiver windingitswaythroughthecity,Guangzhouenjoysawarmandwetclimate.Thebeautifulcity,well-knownforitsbeautifulscenery, isalsoabundantin travelingresources.十五、邀请信 —— 邀请外籍老师参加学校新年晚会\nDearMr.Green,Onbehalfof theStudents’Union, I’mwritingthislettertoinviteyouto participatein ourNewYearEvening.Theparty isgoingtobeheldin theschoolmeetinghall from7:00p.m.to9:00p.m.nextFriday.Manywonderfulperformances, presentedbytheteachersandstudentsinourschool, willbeshown onthestage, suchas theChinesefolksongsanddances,Chinesemusicalinstruments,shortplaysoftraditionalstyle andsoon.Soitwillsurelyofferyou agoodopportunitytoobtainaclearerpictureofChinesetraditionalculture. Weshouldbeverydelightedifyoucouldcome;meanwhile,oureveningwouldbemorecheerfulifyoucouldgiveaperformance.Wearelookingforwardeagerlytoyourparticipation.Yours,LiMing十六、节日简介 ——介绍端午节[时间]TheDragonBoatFestival, atraditionalChinesefestival, iscelebratedonthefifthdayofthefifthmonthaccordingtotheChinesecalendar.Itdatesfromover2000yearsago,which fallson June6ththisyear.[方式] Onthisday,ChinesepeopleprepareZongzi—glutinous(粘黏的)ricedumplingswrappedinbambooleaves.Asthefestivalnameshows,peoplehavedragonboatracestocelebrateit,especiallyinthesouthernplaceswheretherearemanyriversandlakes.[意义]TheDragonBoatFestivalisinmemoryofQuYuan,agreatpoetofancientChina.十七、兴趣爱好 —— 我最喜欢的运动是游泳Myfavoritesportisswimming. 【喜欢的程度】Ifirst becameinterestedin swimming when Iwaseightinprimaryschool.NowIamamemberofmyschoolswimmingteamandIkeeponswimmingeverydayintherivernearmyhomeeveninwinter. 【喜欢的原因】Ilike swimming because itcannotonly helpme buildupmybody,butalso enrichmylife. 【最喜欢的运动员】Inthissport,althoughIlikeLiuYu,IadmireMichaelPhelps,whoisoneofthebestathletesintheworldandgot8goldmedalsinBeijingOlympics. 【愿望】HowIwishtobeanOlympicchampionsomeday!十八、通知 —— 举办“中学生才艺大赛”的通知Notice\nA“HighSchoolStudentsTalentShow” willbeheldin GuangzhouTelevisionStation onMay1. Therewillbe eightkindsoftalents, including speeches,songs,dances,andmusicalinstrumentsplayingetc.One1stprize,three2ndprizesandfive3rdprizesforeachtypeoftalent willbeoffered attheshow. Ifyou’dliketo haveatry,pleasegototheTVstation tosignupbefore April30.It’sagoodchanceforyoutoshowyourspecialtalent.TheStudentsUnion十九、分析原因 —— 分析极端天气出现的原因[指出现象与引出原因] Reasonsfor extremetemperatures arevaried.[分析原因] Foronething,human’sactivitieslikeburningfossilfuelsproducecarbondioxide, which maketheglobewarmer,causingtheglobaltemperaturetogoup. Foranother,people’scuttingdowntreesthatcanabsorblargequantitiesofcarbondioxideforfurniturealso contributesto thewarmingoftheearth, which givesrisetoextremetemperatures.二十、问题解决 —— 建设绿色校园Inorderto buildagreencampus, weneedtotakethefollowingsteps.(学校)  Ontheonehand,theschoolshould makerulesandregulations topreventstudentsdoingsomethingharmtoourgreencampus.(学生)  Ontheotherhand,studentsshouldtakesomeclassestoraisetheirawareness. Idon’tdoubtthat ourcampuswillbemorebeautifulifweworktogether.二十一、说明重要性 —— 责任心的重要性 [提出观点]Responsibility isessentialto us.[论证](正面)It notonly representsone’snoblequality,butalso enablesonetobesteady-going.Beingresponsible,youwillgainmanypreciousthings,suchastruelove.(反面)Withoutresponsibility, however,youwillbeanannoyanceandcan’tdoanythingsuccessfully. What’sworse，peoplewilllosebeliefinyouifyouareirresponsible.[总结] Inshort,onlywhenweareresponsiblewillweberespectedandlovedbyothers.二十二、发表看法 —— 假期外出旅游Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleareinfavoroftravellingduringvacation.[表明观点] Tobefrank,Ican’tagreemorewithit. [说明理由] Thereareseveralfactorscontributingtomypoint.Inthefirstplace, journeyscanwidenourknowledgeofgeography,customs,culturesandlifestylesofdifferentplacesandcountriesand\nenrichourexperiences.Inthesecondplace,itisagoodwaytorelaxourselvesinmyopinion. Furthermore,wecandevelopbetterrelationshipwithourfriendsorfamily.[得出结论]Therefore,itgoeswithoutsayingthat wecanbenefitalotfromtravelling.二十三、观点对比 —— 说说人们对幸福的理解[引出不同观点] Opinionsaredividedon thefeelingofhappiness.[观点一] Somepeoplebelievethat iftheyhavemuchmoneyormanythings,theywillbehappy.Withgreatwealth,theywillbeabletodoeverythingtheywant,withwhichtheywillbehappy.[观点二] Ontheotherhand,somepeopleregard theirintelligence,ortheirhealthastheirgreathappiness.[观点三] Stillothersmaintainthathappinessiscloselytiedtotheirfamily,fortheybelievethattheyfeelhappywhenallmembersoftheirfamilyarehappyandhealthy.二十四、经历感受 —— 拔苗助长Thestoryremindsmeofasimilarexperience ofmyfriend.Hewasoncebadlyillandwenttoseethedoctor.Thedoctorgavehimsomepills,tellinghimtotakethemthreetimesaday.However,hefailedtofollowthedoctor’sadviceandtookthem6timesaday.Tohisgreatsurprise,hebecameworse. Justastheoldsayinggoes,“morehastelessspeed”. Nomatterwhat wedo,weshouldobeythelawofnature. Itisthesamewith ourstudies. Onlyby learningstepbystepcanweachievesomething.二十五、概况记叙文的内容要点Theauthortellsastoryabout(某人)aChinesestudent withanexcellentacademicachievementwho(做某事) couldn’tfindajobinGermany(原因) becauseof hisstealingridesatthesubway,(启示)whichshows honestyisthebestpolicy.二十六、概况说明文的内容要点Asurvey madeinAustralia shows (现象)thatmanyteenagerslackonehour’ssleep(原因) duetoorganizedactivitiesandhomework,(结果)whichresultsin suchseriousproblemsasslowprogressinstudy,weightproblem,depression,illnessandsoon.二十七、概况议论文的内容要点Thepassagetriestotellus (论点)thatgettingupearlyinthemorning(论据)willbenefitusalot，includingabettermemory,healthierbodyandbetterpreparationfortheday.\nhttp://www.china-pa.com.cn/qgzdmfhswz/http://www.intowap.cn/sjsqxs/http://www.ganyingkaiguan.cn/bjtxtdzs/http://www.gcbz.com.cn/ombtsqdy/http://www.3and3.cn/pcdy/http://www.22hl.cn/pcchkb/http://www.1gol.com.cn/omrgxaspdy/http://www.08on.cn/omaprydwbf/http://www.33jixie.cn/tpyzrtys/http://www.228bolier.cn/xkghspznlz/http://www.xclhg.com.cn/nxhstp/http://www.dycar.com.cn/wddwyqs/http://www.gzyl.net.cn/xdxfxyybjyp/http://www.2amd.com.cn/gtcrxs/http://www.51wjn.cn/qjyydp/http://www.dg-aode.cn/nddqvod/http://www.china-jianzhu.cn/omsqtmxhc/http://www.3and3.cn/omsgmmmp/http://www.timkenchinagifts.cn/xycshsxsdbxz/http://www.2amd.com.cn/omssw/更多内容访问http://www.gzqisheng.com.cn_更多内容访问http://www.lvxingshe.org.cn北京久农农业研究所www.jnyjs.com.cn_更多内容访问http://www.nblianjian.cn