高中英语作文--建议信 7页

精品教育建议信（1）----阐释原因；提出建议类请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括：1.菜价昂贵，菜市单一；2.排队时间长，浪费午休时间；3.味道不佳，浪费现象严重。注意：1.词数不少于120;2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇:食堂canteenDearPrincipal,Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua作文范文：DearPrincipal,Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.Theproblemsareasfollows.Somestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighandthatthechoicesaretoolimited.Anotherconcernisthatthetimespentinwaitingissolongthatwehavelesstimetohavearest.Meanwhile,somestudentsthinkthatthetasteofthefoodisawful,whichleadstoalotofwaste.AsfarasI'mconcerned,measuresaresupposedtobetakentomprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.Firstofall,it'ssuggestedthathepricesbemorereasonableandthechoicesofdishesbemorevarious^addition,it'sbettertoopenmoreservicewindowstoreducewaitingtime.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!需注意的词汇、表达：1.deliciouswaitingtaste（n味道）tasty（adj.可口的）cook（n.厨师）cooker（n.炊具）2.lower/bringdowntheprice降低价格3.atalower/reasonableprice以较彳氐的价格4.varietiesofdishes种类多样的菜品5.Foronething,Foranother,6.makesb（not）dosth7.wait/standinline/inaqueueforalongtime8.Thekindsoffoodarefew.表达食堂出现的问题：9.Thepricesofdishesaresohighthatmanyofuscantaffordthem.10.Therearesofewdishestochoosefrom,whichisfarfromsatisfactory./whichcan'tsatisfyourneeds.11.Ittakesussomuchtimetostandinline,whichdecreasesourtimeofrestatnoon.12.Thefoodinthecanteendoesn'ttastegood./nice.Thetasteoffoodinthecanteenisn'tgood.13.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobadthatalotoffoodisleftandwasted14.It'sawasteoftimetostandinlineforalongtime.15.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobad,whichleadstoaseverephenomenonofwastingfood.16.Inthelongrun,it'sbadforourhealthandstudy.17.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitwillinfluenceoursleepintheafternoon.表达提出的建议：18.Improvingthetasteofthefoodisalsoagoodsolutiontotheproblems.19.Ithinkit'snecessarytoprovidemorekindsoffood.20.It'shightimethatwetookmeasurestosolvetheproblems.Soit'shightimeforustotakemeasures21.Tosolvetheproblems,Ithinkthecanteenshouldsetupanewfigure形象）andimprovethepresentconditiontosatisfythestudents'needs.22.Wehopethecanteencanprovideuswithdishesofahighqualityatareasonableprice.23.Thecanteenshouldopenmorewindowssothatweneedntwaitsolong.24.AsfarasI'mconcerned,thecanteenshouldattachimportancetothequality.Whatsmore,differentkindsoffoodshouldbeprovided.25.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.建议模板：Dear•••.,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto.（引出话题）.Hereareafew-可编辑-精品教育price价格suggestions.Firstofall,itisimportanttodosth.Then,italsohelpstodosth.Besides,itshouldbeagood-可编辑-\n精品教育ideatodosth.Ihavelearnedthat-可编辑-精品教育-可编辑-精品教育建议句型积累：1.Manywayscancontributetosolvingtheproblem,butIthinkthefollowingmaybethemosteffectiveones.2.I'dliketomakesomesuggestionson3.It'sofgreatimportanceforsbtodosth.It'snecessaryforsbtodosth4.Itwouldbeagoodideaforsbtodosth./Itwouldbeabetterideaif5.Itcontributes/helpsalotif6.Isuggestthat•••../Mysuggestionisthat…It'ssuggested/advised/recommendedthat7.You'dbetterdosth./We'dbetterdosthIt'sbettertodosth8.MeasuresaresupposedtobetakentodosthWearesupposedtotakeeffectivemeasurestodosth9.It'shightimethatsbdidsth./It'shightimeforsbtodosth-可编辑-精品教育-可编辑-精品教育建议信(2)----阐释原因；提出建议类假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫SadMother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,用英语给这位家长回复。I'mthemotherofafourteen-year-old.RecentlyIhavefoundthatmydaughtertoldliestome.Theotherdayshetoldmethatshedidwellinthefinalexam.HoweverIfoundoutshefailedinmathandEnglish.WhatshouldIdo?写作要点：1.表明了解她的问题；2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因；3.提出至少两条建议要求：1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。4.书写需清晰、工整。作文范文：Hi,SadMother,Ihavelearnedthatyourdaughtertoldliestoyou.Asapeerofyourdaughter,Ithinkthereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,maybethereasonwhyyourdaughtertoldalieisthatyouaretoostrictwithherandsheisafraidyouwillpunishherifshetellsyouthetruth.Besides,nowadays,parentsputtoomuchpressureontheirkids.Inordernottoletyoudown,shehasnochoicebuttolie.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Firstofall,you'dbetterhaveaheart-to—hearttalkwithher,makingherknowbeinghonestismoreimportantthanscores.Inaddition,don'tbetoostrict.It:ssuggestedthatyoushouldallowhertomakesomeminor（微小的）mistakes.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.-可编辑-精品教育Hi,SadMother;-可编辑-\n精品教育需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子:主格宾格形容性物主代词名词性物主代词反身代词A人称Imemyminemyselfweusouroursourselves第二人称youyouyouryoursyourselfyouyouyouryoursyourselves第三人称hehimhishishimselfsheherherhersherselfitititsitsitselftheythemtheirtheirsthemselves2.Don'tsad.3.Youshouldgivehermoreencourage.4.Shemayafraidthatifshefailsintheexam,youwillpunishher.5.Ifshehasdifficultyinlearning,youshouldinspiresheandhelpsheout.6.Shedoesntwantyouangry.7.Pleasenottobesoworried.8.Oneofthereasonisthatsheisritdaretotellyouthetruth.9.Becausesheafraidparents.10.Soshedoritwanttomentionit.11.Youshouldapologytoher.12.You'dbettertoencouragehertobeahonestpeople.13.You'dbetterbecareaboutherhealthandstudy.14.I'mveryunderstandyourcondition.15.Shemaydoesntwantyoutobeangry.-可编辑-精品教育-可编辑-精品教育daughter女儿expectation期望beworried/concernedabout担心calmdown冷静下来ataloss迷惑不解keepintouchwith保持联系bestrictwithsbinsth在某方面对某人要求严格heart-to-heart推心置腹的idea注意想法test测试text文本cheat欺骗wantsbtodosth想让某人做某事1.Itwasbecauseshedidntwanttoletyoudownthatshepretendedtoachievehighscores.2.Sheisritawarethatthelieshavehurtbothyouandherself.3.Beingateenager,sheneedstobeencouraged.And'itsyouwhocandothis.4.Itisprobablyyourhighexpectationstoherthatmakesherdecidetolie.5.Youshouldfigureoutthereasonwhysheliedtoyoubeforesolvingtheproblem.6.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatlyingisbadbehavior.7.ThereasonwhyshedidHttellyouthetruthmaybethatshedidn'twanttoletyoudown.8.Itissuggestedthatyoushouldhaveaface-to-facetalkwithhersothatshemightopenherhearttoyou.9.Toavoidthelies,youshouldencourageherratherthanblameherwhenshefailsinexams10.Thereasonthatleadstotheproblemmaybevarious.11.Confrontedwith（面对）theseproblems,youshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestohelpyoudaughter.12.Asfarasl'mconcerned,it;sbettertocommunicatewithherinafriendlywaytoletherknowit'swrongtotelllies.13.It'ssuggestedthatyoushouldattachmoreimportancetophysicalandmentalhealth.Moreover,it'sbettertoencouragehertodowhatshewants.改错：1.Therearesomeadvice.-可编辑-\n建议信⑶为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。汪思：1.词数120左右；2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：tempern.脾气，情绪HiWorried,I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchahadtimeatthemoment.Yours,JamieHiWorried,I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthisthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,Iquiteunderstandhowyouarefeelingnowandthereisnoneedtoworryaboutitsomuch.TheimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyouIIregret.Herearethreeusefultips.Firstofall,talktosomeoneyoutrustaboutthetroubleyou'refacedwith,whichisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Lastbutnotleast,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Havingapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyou'llsoonbecomecalmerandbetter.Yours,JamieHighlights:1.First,youaresupposedtofigureoutwhatmakesyouupset,andthenkeepawayfromit.2.What'smore,youaresupposedtotakeanactivepartinoutdooractivitiestorelax.3.Tosolvetheproblemassoonaspossible,youcanopenyourhearttoagoodfriend,talkingaboutyourtrouble.4.Carriedbytwo,burdensarelighter.\n精品教育1.It'shightimethatyoushouldrelieveyourpressure.2.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentocontrolyourtemper.3.Thereisnodenyingthateveryonewilllosehistemperwhensomethingunexpectedhappens.4.Insteadofbeingangry,whatisimportantforyouistolearntocontrolyourtemperfromnowon.5.It'scommonforteenagerslikeyoutoloseyourtemper,whichofcoursewillhaveabadeffectonyournormalstudyandlife.建议信(4)-可编辑-\n精品教育高二下期已经过去半学期，高三已经在向同学们招手。随着学习和心理压力日益加大，一些同学的正常生活受到影响，如睡眠不好，身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你根据以下要点，给学校的英语刊物写一篇稿子，向同学们提出建议，并简述理由或举例说明：1、劳逸结合；2、健康饮食；3、适当锻炼；4、保持乐观心态。注意：1、短文必须包括所列内容；2、词数120左右；3、文章开头已给出；4写成一篇完整的短文，不要逐条列举。作文范文：WiththeapproachofSenior3,studentsareunderincreasinglygreatpressure,whichhasaffectedsomestudents',l脚eventingthemsleepingwellandcausingproblemswiththeirhealth.Inordertoimprovethecondition,I'dliketooffersomeadvice.First,Combineworkwithrest.KeepinmindthatallworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.Second,itisimportanttokeepahealthyandbalanceddiet.Stayingawayfromjunkfoodandeatinghealthyfoodlikevegetablesandfishwillbenefityou.Third,gooutdoorsandtakeregularexercise,asphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofpressure.Lastbutnotleast,goodhealthmeansbeingbothphysicallyandmentallyhealthy.Keepinganoptimisticstateofmindwillcontributetoagoodphysicalstate.Isincerelyhopethatthesuggestionsabovewillbeofgreathelptoyou.句型及短语积累：1.Myadviceisasfollows.2.Thefollowingismyadvice.3.Finally,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.4.Thenitalsohelpstotakeproperexercise.Notonlycanitstrengthenyourhealth,butalsoitcanmakeyoufeelrelaxed.5.Gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasitisaneffectivewaytokeephealthy.6.Second,youmayaswelltakesomeexercise,whichisagoodwaytokeephealthy.7.Third,gooutdoorsandtakeexercise.Notonlycanithelpstudentskeephealthy,butalsoitisagoodwaytoreducepressure.8.Firstofall,Ithinkitisagoodideatocombinestudyandagoodrest,whichcanhelpuskeepenergeticandactive.9.Second,youaresupposedtoeathealthyfoodasitwillofferstudentsenoughenergy.10.Inaddition,youmusteathealthyfoodsoastokeepfit,whichisofgreatimportancetoyourstudy.11.Asanoldsayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.12.Gonearethedayswhenwewereatsenior2andthesenior3issayinghellotous.13.Goouttobreathefreshairandrelaxyourbrain.14.Keepingahealthydietisessentialtoyou,whichhelpsyoukeepfit.15.ThemostimportantthingIthinkistoseekforthebalancebetweenstudyandpleasure.16.keepabalancebetweenstudyandrelaxation17.keepfit/healthykeep（in）goodhealthkeepingoodcondition/shapekeepinagoodstateofhealth18.withtimegoingby/astimegoesby19.takeexercise纠错：1.Exerciseeverydaysothatyouwillbemuchstronger.2.remainaoptimisticattitudetowardslife3.Eatmorevegetables,whichcanstrengthyourhealth.4.Inaddition,haveabalanceddietcankeepyourhealth.5.Onlyifyoubelieveinyourselfyoucancarryonasnormal.6.takegoodrest7.Underpressureofstudy,notonlydoourlivesaffected,butalsoweareinpoorcondition.（两处错）8.Lastbutnotleast,remainoptimisticisagoodwaytoliftyourspirits.9.Takingexerciseproperlycontributestomakeyoufullofenergy.10.Youshouldeatsomethingwhichagreeswithyou.11.Atthesametime,wearefacedwithmuchstressthatresultsinmanystudentsctanleepwell.12.Herearesomeadviceonhowtosolveit.13.Onlyyouensureenoughnutritioncanyoustudybetter.14.Finally,keepanoptimisticattitudetolife,itwillbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.15.write---------写出过去式，过去分词，现在分词）-可编辑-\n精品教育occur———-可编辑-