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Writingaboutaplace\n【写作任务】巴黎是法国的首都,也是一个梦幻般的城市,每年吸引世界各地大批游客来观光游玩。请根据以下要点以Paris为题用英语写一篇介绍巴黎的短文。内容要点如下:1.地理位置:法国北部;2.人口:大约一千一百万;3.气候:不太热也不太冷,春秋天最好;4.基本情况:欧洲第二大城布。法国文化、教育、商业中心。时尚与浪漫之都,很多重大活动在此举行。有悠久的历史和丰富的旅游资源。最著名的有艾菲尔铁塔(theEiffelTower)、凯旋门theTriumphalArch)和圣母院(OldNotreDame)等。注意:1)不要逐条翻译,但是可增加细节,以使文章连贯、通顺;2)词数:120左右\n根据写作提示,进行适当总结和评论。准确掌握表示方位的词或短语注意说明顺序,详略得当,重点突出主要采用一般现在时注意行文的连贯性,要求用适量的过渡词。\n【范文展示】Paris,averybeautifulcityintheworld,thecapitalofFrance,islocatedinthenorthofFrance.Ithasapopulationofaboutelevenmillion.ItisthesecondlargestcityinEurope.Asfortheweather,itnevergetstoohotortoocold.Anditisatitsbestduringthespringandautumnmonths.Parisistheculture,education,businesscenterofFrance.Itisacityoffashionandromance.Somanyimportanteventshavebeenheldhere.ItiswellknownthatParisisamoderncitywithalonghistoryandrichtourresources.Therearesomanyplacesforpeopletovisit.ThemostfamousaretheEiffelTower,theTriumphalArchandOldNotreDame.Inaword,Parisisreallyagreatandattractivecity.\n【思路指导】地方介绍类说明文---旅游景点的描写客观介绍景点locationareaclimatehistoryresident/peoplenaturalresourcesbreath-takingscenery\n1.介绍地理位置(Location)belocatedin…besituatedin…liein…坐落于……脚下/顶部…standsatthefootof/onthetopof…常用词语\n2.介绍人口(Population):…hasapopulationof…,(acity)withapopulationof…北京是中国的首都,是一个有1200多万人口的大城市。(用一句话)Beijing,thecapitalofChina,isalargecitywithapopulationofover12,000,000.\n3.介绍面积(Area)has/coversanareaof…squarekilometers(acity)withanareaof…squarekilometers城镇面积100多平方公里It’satownwithanareaofover100squarekilometers\n4.介绍历史(History):…hasalonghistory(of…years)withalonghistory(of…years)历史悠久它是一个具有悠久历史的现代化城市。Itisamoderncitywithalonghistory.\n5.介绍交通(Transportation)takeabus,atrainoraplaneto…goto…bybus/train/plane坐汽车、火车、飞机到…交通便利…hasconvenienttransportation(acity)withconvenienttransportationbothonlandandwater\n6.名胜古迹有很多名胜古迹:placesofinterest/historicalspots承德是全国24个历史文化名城之一,也是44个风景名胜之一。ChengdeCityisnotonlyoneofthewell-known24historicalandculturalcitiesbutalsooneofthe44majorscenicspotsinChina.\n1.…,whichiswell-known/famousforbreath-takingscenery,attractsmillionsofvisitorsfromallovertheworld.2.Youcangoonthe…tourstoenjoythesights,tastethelocalfood,explorethelivelynightlifeandlearnaboutitshistoryandculture.3.…ishometo….Thus,awalkaround…isafeastforthemindaswellastheeye.4.Youaresuretohaveawonderfultimein….5.Fewvisitorsleavethecityfeelingdisappointed.\n因尝试高级词汇和复杂句型出现的少量错误不扣分。AsfarasIknow,…Itiswell-knowntousallthat…Itis∕was…that…Itis∕was+adj.∕n.+for∕ofsb.todosth.so…that…too…to…with+n.∕prep.∕v-ing.∕v-ed.,……How+adj.∕adv.+subject+be!What+adj.+n.+subject+be!教师点拨\n【模板展示】…,averybeautifulcity/countryintheworld,…,islocatedin….Ithasapopulationofabout….Itisthesecondlargest…in….Asfortheweather,it….….Itiswellknownthat…is…withalonghistoryandrich…resources.Therearesomanyplacesforpeopletovisit.Themostfamousare…,…and….Inaword,…isreallyagreatandattractive….\nWriting:WriteashortpassagetointroducetheWestLakeinHangzhouaccordingtosomekeywordsbelow.HangzhoucapitalofZhejiangProvince;oldcapitalofsixdynasties(六朝古都);TheWestLake60squarekilometersarea;wellknownbothforitspicturesquelandscape(风景如画)andforculturalheritagewonderfulten-viewsoftheWestLake(西湖十景)WhiteSnakeLegendXuxianandBaiSuzhen;arainydaymetonDuanqiaoBridgeBaiSuzhenborrowedanumbrellafromXuxian,themansheloved\nHangzhouisthecapitalofZhejiangprovinceanditspolitical,economicandculturalcenter.ThecityofHangzhouliesinthesoutheastofChinaandfacestheeastsea.itisfamousforitsbeautifulWestLakewithalonghistory.wheneveryoucometothismoderncityyouwillseemanyparksandsomeplacesofinterestaroundthewestlake.duringtheholidaysorfestivalsorattheweekends,peoplelikeboatingonthewaterorwalkingonthepathsofthewoodsorsittingonthegroundtohaveapicnic.Whatagoodtimetheyhave!sincethepoliticsofthereformingandopeningwerecarriedoutbythegovernmentofHangzhou,plentyoftallbuildingshavebeensetupandgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinthiscity.杭州\nEnlargementWestLake(inHangzhou)西湖是我国著名的旅游胜地,被誉为“人间天堂”。西湖景区由一山(孤山)、两堤(苏堤、白堤)、三岛(阮公墩、湖心亭、小瀛洲)、十景(曲院风荷、平湖秋月、断桥残雪、柳浪闻莺、雷峰夕照、南屏晚钟、花港观鱼、苏堤春晓、双峰插云、三潭印月)构成。西湖的美,在于晴中见潋滟,雨中显空蒙。无论雨雪晴阴,在落霞、烟雾下都能成景;在春花,秋月,夏荷,冬雪中各具美态。\nTheWestLakeisafamousfreshwaterlakelocatedinthehistoriccenterofHangzhou,thecapitalofZhejiangprovinceineasternChina.ThelakeisdividedbythecausewaysofSūTí(苏提/蘇堤),BáiTí(白堤),andYánggōngTí(杨公堤 /楊公堤).Therearenumeroustemples,pagodas,gardens,andartificialislandswithinthelake.TheWestLakehasinfluencedpoetsandpaintersthroughouttheagesforitsnaturalbeautyandhistoricalrelics,andithasbeenamongthemostimportantsourcesofinspirationforChinesegardendesigners,asevidencedbytheimpactithadonvariousChineseclassicalgardens.[1] ItwasmadeaUNESCOWorldHeritageSitein2011,andwasdescribedtohave"influencedgardendesignintherestofChinaaswellasJapanandKoreaoverthecenturies,andreflects"anidealizedfusionbetweenhumansandnature."\nInthefalloftheWestLakeisoneofthematurelandscape.Tenshoreofthesweet-scentedosmanthusfragranceyoureallymakepeopletoandfromthelingering;thelake,thelotusleafastheshylittlegirl,thelowerthehead,wentintohiding,andwaitingforthemtoremindpeopletotakeunderFlanagan'sLotusthen.Atthistime,HuaZhaolightoftheboat,hummingadittyofleisurely,gentlytakethenextlotusroot.Thatonlyalotusrootit,Baibaipanpang,anakedtruthofDollXiaoPang,peoplelove.Ifyouarefromthebasket,onarandomselection,thebiteonacleanwash,Cuishengsheng,ithasbeenabletotastesweettoyourheart.WestLakeinwinterisnoexception.Althoughtheflowershavetothank,butthelakebottomisclear,theplumblossominfullbloomisverybeautiful;snow,snow-wrapped,theedgeoftheembankmentinthecheerfulchildren'splay,laughter,thesoundXuefei,theco-Together,turnedintoabeautifulsymphony.Ah!WestLake!You'reabright,brightpearlyou!U.S.West\nYoucanrefertomye-class.