高中英语写作策略学习 5页

Book4Unit1WomenofachievementPeriodFour:Writing（“高分作文”必备攻略）Step1：牢记英语优秀作文的评价标准：1.“齐全”：写作的全部信息点需要包括在文章中，不可遗漏；2.“准确”：符合英语的语法规范，尤其要注意人称和时态的正确使用；3.“顺畅”：前后内容符合逻辑，有适当的过渡词，做到篇章结构连贯；4.“高级”：适当使用“高级词汇”和“高级结构”，做到词汇丰富、句式多变。Step2：必备策略一选词策略Whichwordisbetter?“优”词“劣”词？然后做出选择并思考英语作文中选词的策略。1.(1)TodaywevisitedtheGreatWallwithourteachers.()(2)TodaywepaidavisittotheGreatWallwithourteachers.(√)Yourchoice:I①(①havenoidea②don’tknow)howtosolvetheproblem.Yourreason:2.(1)Thosemenarelessattractivetowomenfortheirlaziness.()(2)Thosemenarelessattractivetowomenintermsof/dueto/owingto/becauseoftheirlaziness.(√)Yourchoice:Wemiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnhowto①(①dealwith/makefulluseof②use)money.Yourreason:3.(1)Hedidn’tgotoschoolforcoldyesterday.()(2)Hewasabsentfromschoolforcoldyesterday./Hiscoldfailedhimtoattendclassesyesterday.(√)Yourchoice:Asweknow,wateris②(①important/②essential/significant)toourlife.Yourreason:4.(1)Shehuggedhimwarmly.()(2)Shethrewherarmsaroundhimtogivehimawarmhug.(√)Yourchoice:Hiswifesaidcoldlyand②(①angrilyclimbed/②stormed)upthestairsandrushedintoherroom.Yourreason:总结1：高中英语习作的选词策略概括起来就是1、名词优于动词；2、短语优于单词；3、高中词汇优于初中词汇；4、形象生动优于抽象空洞。Step3：“选词策略”运用51、出生于......bornin.../comefrom.../hisbirthplaceis...2、对......有浓厚的兴趣showagreatinterestin.../goinfor.../havegreatlovefor...3、在......奉献某人的一生devoteoneselfto.../hiswholehearted/extraordinarydevotionto...4、被认为是......beconsideredto.../beregardedas.../bethoughtas...5、被授予；获得beawarded.../winmanyawards6、因......而受到尊敬behonoredfor.../berespectedfor.../winone’srespectfor...55\nStep4：利用所学标准给这位同学的习作打分Step5：必备策略二常用过渡词(体现文章前后的逻辑关系，确保文章连贯)逻辑类别精华过渡词1、举例1.Forexample,句子；2.suchas+名词短语；3.take...forexample2、列举1.Foronething,….Foranother,….2.First(ly),….Second(ly),….Third(ly),….3.Firstofall;Besides;What’smore/What’sworse;Lastbutnotleast.3、转折1.However,….;2....while+从句;3.Onthecontrary;4.Inspiteof+名词短语4、因果1.because+从句;2.Therefore,….3.so+从句;4.Forthis/abovereason;5.Dueto/becauseof+名词短语5、比较1.Comparedwith…;2.justlik;3.Similarly;4.Oppositely6、时间1.Nowadays;2.…yearsago/later;3.After…;4.Before…;5.Meanwhile/Atthesametime6.Tobeginwith;Andthen;Afterthat;Eventually7.Fromnow/thenon;8.during7、目的1.Forthispurpose;2.sothat/so…that…;3.Inordertodosth.;4.Inorderthat+从句;5.soastodosth.8、让步1.Although+从句;2.Evenif+从句;2.Nomatterhow/wh-+从句9、条件1.If+从句;2.unless+从句;3.incaseof+名词短;4.onconditionthat+从句10、并列1.and;notonly…butalso…;2.either…or…;3.neither...nor;4.both...and...;5.aswellas;6....while+从句;7.Thus+从句11、强调1.Itis+被强调的成分（除谓语外）…that…(强调句型);2.Obviously;3.Withoutanydoubt/Undoubtedly;4.Aboveall12、概括1.Inaword;2.Inshort;3.Inbrief;4.Allinall;5.Inconclusion;6.Onthewhole,…13、观点1.Inmyview;2.Frommypointofview;3.AsfarasI’mconcerned;4.Asforme;5.Personally;Step6：必备策略三丰富的句型结构1)类例：BornonFebruary12inapoorfamilyinKentucky,AbrahamLincoln,the16thpresidentoftheUnitedStates,isarespectableleader.任务：出生在一个贫困的家庭，郎朗从小对音乐就有浓厚的兴趣。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2)类例：ForhiswholehearteddevotiontogettingridofslaveryinAmerica,hereallymadeanindependentandfreenationonthecontinent.任务：他一生都致力于音乐创作并取得很大成就。_______________________________________________________________________________3)例：AbrahamLincolnisconsideredtobeoneofthegreatestAmericanpresidents.任务：他被认为是中国最伟大的钢琴家之一。_______________________________________________________________________________5\n1)例：Hetookpartinmanyelections,inmostofwhichhefailed.任务：他在钢琴演奏比赛中获得了很多奖项。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2)例：ItisforhisstrongdeterminationtofreeblacksthatAbrahamLincolnsetanexampletothosefightingforfreedomandequalityallovertheworld.任务：因为他的成就，他受到很多爱好钢琴曲的年青人的尊敬。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step7：利用写作的“高分策略”将上面的句子写成较高质量的5句话英语作文。（特别注意：1、选词；2、过渡词；3、多变的句式）51）PossibleVersion：（豪华版）①Borninapoorfamily,LangLangshowedagreatinterestinmusicwhenhewasachild.②Forhisextraordinarydevotiontomusiccomposition,hehasgainedmanyachievements.③Therefore,heisconsideredtobeoneofthegreatestpianistsinChina.④LangLanghasparticipatedinalotofpiano-playingcompetitions,inmanyofwhichhewontheawards.⑤Itisbecauseofhisachievementsthatheishonoredbymanyyouthshavingstrongloveandpassionforpianomusic.(82words)总结2：1、平时学习的时候注意词汇的积累：初高中的差异；同义词和反义词；词组；2、有意识地理清前后文之间的逻辑关系，选用适当的过渡词使文章有层次感；3、学习单元重点语法的时候不仅要理解结构，更应多尝试在写作中运用，尽力做到英语习作中的句式灵活多变（常用在写作中的语法结构有16种，见P4）。2）一起看“门道”：①Borninapoorfamily,LangLangshowedagreatinterestinmusicwhenhewasachild.（靓点1）（靓点2）②Forhisextraordinary/great/wholehearteddevotiontomusiccomposition,hehasgainedmanyachievements.（靓点3）③Therefore/Asanhonor,heisconsideredtobeoneofthegreatestpianistsinChina.（靓点4）（靓点5）④LangLanghasparticipatedin/joinedin/takenpartin/competedinalotofpiano-playingcompetitions,inmanyofwhichhewontheawards.（靓点6）（靓点7）⑤Itisforhisachievementsthatheishonoredbymanyyouths/youngpeoplehavingstrongloveandpassionforpianomusic.（靓点8）（靓点9）（靓点10）5Step8：Homework：1.Collectmorerelatedexpressionsandsentencestodescribeapersoninyourexercisesandnewspaperofthe37thIssue;2.Trytorecitethemodifiedcompositionnextmorning;3.ThinkaboutthedesignedformandtrytoformyourownEnglishlearningstyle.5\n英语作文选词原则和句法结构运用学生自评表格Ⅰ.选词“四项基本原则”：1.高中词汇优于初中词汇；2.名词优于动词；3.短语优于单词；4.形象具体优于抽象空洞。1.你有自己的选词原则吗？它们是：2、若没有，谈下你对选词“四项基本原则”的认识：3、在今后的学习中你如何做好自己的词汇储备和选择？Ⅱ.丰富句型结构的灵活替换使用：1简单句;2分词结构;3介词结构句;4同位语;5并列句;6名词性从句;7定语从句;8状语从句;9倒装句;10虚拟语气;11强调句;12被动语态;13Therebe句型；14疑问句式（设问或反问）；15it的使用；16副词放句首作状语或形容词放句首作主语补足语等。1.这16种语言结构你最熟悉的是：2.最不熟悉的是：3.在写作中你最钟爱的语言结构是：4.结合日常英语学习和作文练习，详细写出自己是如何理解、模仿和运用这16种语言结构？（自己做笔记整理）然后谈下这些语言结构在英语作文或学习中的重要性和意义：5\nPossibleVersion“简装版”:5①Borninapoorfamily,LangLangwasinterestedinmusicwhenhewasachild.②Forhedevotedallhislifetomusic,hehasmademanyachievements.③Therefore,heisconsideredtobeoneofthegreatestpianistsinChina.④LangLanghaswonmanyawardsinalotofpiano-playingcompetitions.⑤Itisbecauseofhisachievementsthatheisrespectedbymanyyoungpeoplewholovepianomusicverymuch.(74words)①Borninapoorfamily,LangLangwasinterestedinmusicwhenhewasachild.②Forhedevotedallhislifetomusic,hehasmademanyachievements.③Therefore,heisconsideredtobeoneofthegreatestpianistsinChina.④LangLanghaswonmanyawardsinalotofpiano-playingcompetitions.⑤Itisbecauseofhisachievementsthatheisrespectedbymanyyoungpeoplewholovepianomusicverymuch.(74words)55①Borninapoorfamily,LangLangwasinterestedinmusicwhenhewasachild.②Forhedevotedallhislifetomusic,hehasmademanyachievements.③Therefore,heisconsideredtobeoneofthegreatestpianistsinChina.④LangLanghaswonmanyawardsinalotofpiano-playingcompetitions.⑤Itisbecauseofhisachievementsthatheisrespectedbymanyyoungpeoplewholovepianomusicverymuch.(74words)①Borninapoorfamily,LangLangwasinterestedinmusicwhenhewasachild.②Forhedevotedallhislifetomusic,hehasmademanyachievements.③Therefore,heisconsideredtobeoneofthegreatestpianistsinChina.④LangLanghaswonmanyawardsinalotofpiano-playingcompetitions.⑤Itisbecauseofhisachievementsthatheisrespectedbymanyyoungpeoplewholovepianomusicverymuch.(74words)55①Borninapoorfamily,LangLangwasinterestedinmusicwhenhewasachild.②Forhedevotedallhislifetomusic,hehasmademanyachievements.③Therefore,heisconsideredtobeoneofthegreatestpianistsinChina.④LangLanghaswonmanyawardsinalotofpiano-playingcompetitions.⑤Itisbecauseofhisachievementsthatheisrespectedbymanyyoungpeoplewholovepianomusicverymuch.(74words)①Borninapoorfamily,LangLangwasinterestedinmusicwhenhewasachild.②Forhedevotedallhislifetomusic,hehasmademanyachievements.③Therefore,heisconsideredtobeoneofthegreatestpianistsinChina.④LangLanghaswonmanyawardsinalotofpiano-playingcompetitions.⑤Itisbecauseofhisachievementsthatheisrespectedbymanyyoungpeoplewholovepianomusicverymuch.(74words)55