高中英语基础写作指导 25页

时间分配题型题量赋分时间（分钟）基础写作11510基础写作的命题特点：考生按所给的内容及要求，用5个规范的英语句子描述所给信息的全部内容，并组成连贯的短文。简而言之，考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力。\n对于书面表达的要求：1.Coverallthelanguagepointsandgiveninformation.覆盖所有的语言要点Avoidgrammarmistakesandwrongspelling应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性3.coherent,tight上下文的连贯性即有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。4.usethewordsproperly语言的得体性5.Writeyourarticleclearly.6.Mindthenumberofyoursentences.\n月考基础写作评讲总结\nStudyingGoalsLearntocombinesentencesandwritecomplexsentencesinwriting:I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：1)借助名词短语做同位语2)借助介词短语做定语3)借助介词短语做状语4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语II.巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句III.用好从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句）和引导词写出规范的复合句：\nCombinethetwosentencesintoone1.Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwoman.2.Shehastwobigeyesandlonghair.名词短语做同位语Myhistoryteacher,abeautifulwoman,hastwobigeyesandlonghair.with介词短语做定语Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwithtwobigeyesandlonghair.定语从句Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwhohastwobigeyesandlonghair.Revision&Leading-in\nCombinethetwosentencesintoone1.Australiaislocatedinthesmallestcontinent—Oceania.2.Australiaisthesixthlargestcountryintheworld.名词性短语做同位语Australia,thesixthlargestcountryintheworld,islocatedinthesmallestcontinent.非谓语动词做状语Locatedinthesmallestcontinent—Oceania,Australiaisthesixthlargestcountryintheworld.\nCombinethetwosentencesintoone1.Australiaismadeupof6states.2.MelbourneandSydneyarethelargestcitiesinthesixstates.定语从句Australiaismadeupof6states,inwhichMelbourneandSydneyarethelargestcities.\nCombinethetwosentencesintoone1.Australiacoversanareaof7,686,850squarekilometers.2.Australiahasapopulationof20million.Australiacoversatotalareaof7,686,850squarekilometerswithapopulationofabout20million.and引导的并列句Australiacoversanareaof7,686,850squarekilometersandithasapopulationof20million.\nCombinethetwosentencesintoone1.Australiaisfamousforitsbrightsunshine,countlesssheepandcattleanditsuniquewildlife.2.Thetouristsfromallovertheworldcometoenjoyitsscenery.状语从句BecauseAustraliaisfamousforitsbrightsunshine,countlesssheepandcattleanditsuniquewildlife,thetouristsfromallovertheworldcometoenjoyitsscenery.\n背景：草原上狼群和羊群之间的故事主要角色喜羊羊:聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢，是羊族的小英雄主要角色灰太狼：带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子，它贪婪但无论怎样总抓不住羊评价：童趣但不幼稚，启智却不枯燥成绩：迄今推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品；获得很多奖项[写作要求]1.使用5个句子表达全部的内容。2.句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。写作内容：\nLet’smakepreparations.Ⅰ.\nUsefulwordsandexpressions:以…为背景草原主要角色羊族乐观童趣启智迄今推出奖项相关的besetin/on…grasslandsmain/leadingcharactergoatfamilyoptimistic/holdapositiveattitudetowardlifefunnyinspiringuptonowputforwardawardrelevant\nLet’stranslatethesimplesentences!.Ⅱ.\nTranslatethefollowingsentences:这个动画片以生活在草原上的羊群和狼群为背景。故事童趣但不幼稚，启智却不枯燥。喜羊羊是主要角色之一。喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄。喜羊羊聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢。贪婪的灰太狼总是带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子。无论怎样，它总是抓不住羊。由于取得巨大成功，迄今卡通公司获得很多奖项，并推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品。\n这个动画片以生活在草原上的羊群和狼群为背景。1.Thiscartoonseriesissetonthegrasslandswherethegoatsandwolveslive.故事童趣但不幼稚，启智却不枯燥。2.Thestoriesarefunnybutnotchildish,inspiringbutnotboring.\n喜羊羊是主要角色之一。OneofthemaincharactersisPleasantGoat.喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄。PleasantGoatisalittleherointhegoatfamily.喜羊羊聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢。PleasantGoatisclever,braveandholdsapositiveattitudetowardhislife.合并句子（同位语，定语从句）3.OneofthemaincharactersisPleasantGoat,alittleherointhegoatfamily,whoisclever,braveandholdsapositiveattitudetowardhislife.\n贪婪的灰太狼总是带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子。（with介词短语做定语）ThegreedyBigBigWolfalwayswearsayellowhatwithpatches.无论怎样，它总是抓不住羊。（状语从句）Nomatterhowhardhetries,hecannevercatchanygoats.合并句子（非谓语动词做定语）4.ThegreedyBigBigWolf,alwayswearingayellowhatwithpatches,cannevercatchanygoats,nomatterhowhardhetries.\n由于取得巨大成功，迄今卡通公司获得很多奖项，并推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品。（状语从句）5.Becauseithasmadeagreatsuccess,uptillnowthecartooncompanyhaswonalotofawardsandputforwardrelevantproductsliketoys,booksandcomputergames.介词短语做状语(becauseof…)BecauseofthegreatsuccessofPleasantGoatandBigBigwolf,uptillnowthecartooncompanyhaswonalotofawardsandputforwardrelevantproductsliketoys,booksandcomputergames.\nThiscartoonseriesissetonthegrasslandswherethegoatsandwolveslive.Thestoriesarefunnybutnotchildish,inspiringbutnotboring.OneofthemaincharactersisPleasantGoat,alittleherointhegoatfamily,whoisclever,braveandholdsapositiveattitudetowardhislife.Bycontrast,thegreedyBigBigWolf，alwayswearingayellowhatwithpatches,cannevercatchanygoats,nomatterhowhardhetries.BecauseofthegreatsuccessofPleasantGoatandBigBigwolf,uptillnowthecartooncompanyhaswonalotofawardsandputforwardrelevantproductsliketoys,booksandcomputergames.\nAppreciationAppreciatesomecompositionsofyourclassmates,andtrytofindoutsomecomplexsentences..巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：1)借助名词短语做同位语2)借助介词短语做定语3)借助介词短语做状语4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语II.巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句III.用好从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句）和引导词，写出规范的复合句：\nHomework用5个规范的句子写一则日记，内容如下：我又一次考试不及格，回家遭到父亲的责骂。他说我过度沉溺于电脑游戏.我心情很沮丧，不知道该干什么，独自一人在外边漫无目的地闲逛。突然抬起头，看见树上有一个鸟巢，鸟妈妈正在给小鸟喂食。只有在这时候我才意识到，父亲所做的一切都是为了我好。我知道我以后我该怎么做了。\n①我又一次考试不及格。②回家③遭到父亲的责骂（scold）。④他说我沉溺于(beaddictedto)电脑游戏。⑤我心情很沮丧。(depressed)⑥不知道该干什么。⑦独自一人在外边漫无目的地闲逛(wander)。⑧突然抬起头，看见树上有一个鸟巢(nest)。⑨鸟妈妈正在给小鸟喂食。⑩只有在这时候我才意识到，父亲所做的一切都是为了我好。⑾我知道我以后我该怎么做了。\n1.Ifailedintheexamagain.2.Icamebackhome.3.Myfatherscoldedme.4.becauseIwasaddictedtoplayingcomputergames.5.Iwasdepressed.6.Ididn’tknowwhattodo.7.Iwanderedoutaimlessly.8.Ilookedupandsawanestinthetree.9.Themotherbirdwasfeedingherbaby10.AtthistimeIrealizedthatwhatmyfatherdidwasforme.11.IknewwhatIshoulddoinfuture.\nHavingfailedintheexamagain,IwasscoldedbymyfatherwhenIcamebackhome.HesaidthatitwasjustbecauseIwasaddictedtoplayingthecomputergamesthatIfailedagainandagain.Notknowingwhattodo,Iwanderedoutaimlessly.JustatthattimeIcaughtsightofatree,withanestinit,whereamotherbirdwasfeedingherbaby.OnlythendidIrealizewhatevermyfatherdidwasformeandIknewwhatIshoulddoinfuture.\nThankyouforattending!