高中英语作文--建议信 5页

建议信〔1〕-----阐释缘由；提出建议类6.makesb〔not〕dosth7.wait/standinline/inaqueueforalongtime请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校8.Thekindsoffoodarefew.重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议；问题包括：表达食堂显现的问题：1.菜价昂贵，菜市单一；2.排队时间长，铺张午休时间；3.味道不佳，铺张现象严肃；9.Thepricesofdishesaresohighthatmanyofuscan’taffordthem.留意：1.词数不少于120；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增10.Therearesofewdishestochoosefrom,whichisfarfromsatisfactory./whichcan’tsatisfyour加细节，以使行文连贯；needs.参考词汇:食堂canteen11.Ittakesussomuchtimetostandinline,whichdecreasesourtimeofrestatnoon.DearPrincipal,12.Thefoodinthecanteendoesn’ttastegood./nice.Thetasteoffoodinthecanteenisn’tgood.Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.13.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobadthatalotoffoodisleftandwasted14.It’sawasteoftimetostandinlineforalongtime.15.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobad,whichleadstoaseverephenomenonofwastingfood.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou.16.Inthelongrun,it’sbadforourhealthandstudy.Yours,17.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitwillinfluenceoursleepintheafternoon.表达提出的建议：LiHua作文范文：18.Improvingthetasteofthefoodisalsoagoodsolutiontotheproblems.19.Ithinkit’snecessarytoprovidemorekindsoffood.DearPrincipal,20.It’shightimethatwetookmeasurestosolvetheproblems.Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.TheproblemsareasSoit’shightimeforustotakemeasuresfollows.21.Tosolvetheproblems,Ithinkthecanteenshouldsetupanewfigure〔形象〕andimproveSomestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighandthatthechoicesaretoolimited.thepresentconditiontosatisfythestudents’needs.Anotherconcernisthatthetimespentinwaitingissolongthatwehavelesstimetohavearest.22.Wehopethecanteencanprovideuswithdishesofahighqualityatareasonableprice.Meanwhile,somestudentsthinkthatthetasteofthefoodisawful,whichleadstoalotofwaste.23.Thecanteenshouldopenmorewindowssothatweneedn’twaitsolong.AsfarasI’mconcerned,measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthe24.AsfarasI’mconcerned,thecanteenshouldattachimportancetothequality.What’smore,canteen.Firstofall,it’ssuggestedthatthepricesbemorereasonableandthechoicesofdishesbedifferentkindsoffoodshouldbeprovided.morevarious.Inaddition,it’sbettertoopenmoreservicewindowstoreducewaitingtime.25.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou.需留意的词汇、表达：建议模板：1.deliciouswaitingtaste〔n.味道〕tasty〔adj.可口的〕cook〔n.厨师〕cooker〔n.炊具〕Dear.,price价格I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto.〔引出话题〕.Herearea2.lower/bringdowntheprice降低价格fewsuggestions.Firstofall,itisimportanttodosth.Then,italsohelpstodosth.Besides,itshould3.atalower/reasonableprice以较低的价格beagoodideatodosth.4.varietiesofdishes种类多样的菜品建议句型积存：5.Foronething,.Foranother,\n1.Manywayscancontributetosolvingtheproblem,butIthinkthefollowingmaybethemosteffectiveones.2.I’dliketomakesomesuggestionson.3.It’sofgreatimportanceforsbtodosth.It’snecessaryforsbtodosth4.Itwouldbeagoodideaforsbtodosth./Itwouldbeabetterideaif.5.Itcontributes/helpsalotif6.Isuggestthat../MysuggestionisthatIt’ssuggested/advised/recommendedthat7.You’dbetterdosth./We’dbetterdosthIt’sbettertodosth8.MeasuresaresupposedtobetakentodosthWearesupposedtotakeeffectivemeasurestodosth9.It’shightimethatsbdidsth./It’shightimeforsbtodosth建议信〔2〕-----阐释缘由；提出建议类假定你是中同学李华；在一位名叫SadMother的同学家长的博客上，你看到如下内容；请你依据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复；作文范文：I’mthemotherofafourtee-nyear-old.RecentlyIhavefoundthatmydaughtertoldliestome.TheHi,SadMother,otherdayshetoldmethatshedidwellinthefinalexam.HoweverIfoundoutshefailedinmathandIhavelearnedthatyourdaughtertoldliestoyou.Asapeerofyourdaughter,IthinktheEnglish.WhatshouldIdo.reasonsareasfollows.写作要点：Tobeginwith,maybethereasonwhyyourdaughtertoldalieisthatyouaretoostrictwithherand1.说明白解她的问题；2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的缘由；sheisafraidyouwillpunishherifshetellsyouthetruth.Besides,nowadays,parentsputtoomuch3.提出至少两条建议要求：pressureontheirkids.Inordernottoletyoudown,shehasnochoicebuttolie.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Firstofall,you’dbetterhaveaheart-to–hearttalkwithher,1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域；2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）；makingherknowbeinghonestismoreimportantthanscores.Inaddition,don’tbetoostrict.It’s3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；4.书写需清晰、工整；suggestedthatyoushouldallowhertomakesomeminor〔微小的〕mistakes.Hi，SadMother，Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Ihavelearnedthat\n2.Don’tsad.3.Youshouldgivehermoreencourage.需要留意积存的词汇、短语、和句子：4.Shemayafraidthatifshefailsintheexam,youwillpunishher.5.Ifshehasdifficultyinlearning,youshouldinspiresheandhelpsheout.6.Shedoesn’twantyouangry.主格宾格形容性物主代词名词性物主代词反身代词7.Pleasenottobesoworried.第一人称Imemyminemyself8.Oneofthereasonisthatsheisn’tdaretotellyouthetruth.weusouroursourselves9.Becausesheafraidparents.其次人称youyouyouryoursyourself10.Soshedon’twanttomentionit.11.Youshouldapologytoher.youyouyouryoursyourselves12.You’dbettertoencouragehertobeahonestpeople.第三人称hehimhishishimself13.You’dbetterbecareaboutherhealthandstudy.sheherherhersherself14.I’mveryunderstandyourcondition.itititsitsitself15.Shemaydoesn’twantyoutobeangry.theythemtheirtheirsthemselvesdaughter女儿expectation期望beworried/concernedabout担忧calmdown冷静下来ataloss困惑不解keepintouchwith保持联系bestrictwithsbinsth在某方面对某人要求严格heart-to-heart推心置腹的idea留意想法test测试text文本cheat欺骗wantsbtodosth想让某人做某事1.Itwasbecauseshedidn’twanttoletyoudownthatshepretendedtoachievehighscores.2.Sheisn’tawarethatthelieshavehurtbothyouandherself.3.Beingateenager,sheneedstobeencouraged.Andit’syouwhocandothis.4.Itisprobablyyourhighexpectationstoherthatmakesherdecidetolie.5.Youshouldfigureoutthereasonwhysheliedtoyoubeforesolvingtheproblem.6.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatlyingisbadbehavior.7.Thereasonwhyshedidn’ttellyouthetruthmaybethatshedidn’twanttoletyoudown.8.Itissuggestedthatyoushouldhaveaface-to-facetalkwithhersothatshemightopenherhearttoyou.9.Toavoidthelies,youshouldencourageherratherthanblameherwhenshefailsinexams10.Thereasonthatleadstotheproblemmaybevarious.11.Confrontedwith〔面对〕theseproblems,youshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestohelpyoudaughter.12.AsfarasI’mconcerned,it’sbettertocommunicatewithherinafriendlywaytoletherknowit’swrongtotelllies.13.It’ssuggestedthatyoushouldattachmoreimportancetophysicalandmentalhealth.Moreover,it’sbettertoencouragehertodowhatshewants.改错：1.Therearesomeadvice.\nyourtrouble.4.Carriedbytwo,burdensarelighter.建议信〔3〕5.It’shightimethatyoushouldrelieveyourpressure.为了帮忙中同学健康成长，某中学英文报开创了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏；假设你是该栏目6.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentocontrolyourtemper.的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信；信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容7.Thereisnodenyingthateveryonewilllosehistemperwhensomethingunexpectedhappens.易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响；请用英文给该同学写一封回信；8.Insteadofbeingangry,whatisimportantforyouistolearntocontrolyourtemperfromnowon.内容要点如下：9.It’scommonforteenagerslikeyoutoloseyourtemper,whichofcoursewillhaveabadeffecton1．表示懂得并赐予劝慰；yournormalstudyandlife.2．提出建议并说明理由；留意：1．词数120左右；2．信中不能显现与本人相关的信息；3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数；参考词汇：tempern.脾气，心情HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchahadtimeatthemoment.Yours,JamieHiWorried,I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthisthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,Iquiteunderstandhowyouarefeelingnowandthereisnoneedtoworryaboutitsomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.Herearethreeusefultips.Firstofall,talktosomeoneyoutrustaboutthetroubleyou’refacedwith,whichisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Lastbutnotleast,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Havingapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyou'llsoonbecomecalmerandbetter.Yours,JamieHighlights:1.First,youaresupposedtofigureoutwhatmakesyouupset,andthenkeepawayfromit.2.What’smore,youaresupposedtotakeanactivepartinoutdooractivitiestorelax.3.Tosolvetheproblemassoonaspossible,youcanopenyourhearttoagoodfriend,talkingabout\n12.Gonearethedayswhenwewereatsenior2andthesenior3issayinghellotous.建议信〔4〕13.Goouttobreathefreshairandrelaxyourbrain.14.Keepingahealthydietisessentialtoyou,whichhelpsyoukeepfit.高二下期已经过去半学期，高三已经在向同学们招手；随着学习和心理压力日益15.ThemostimportantthingIthinkistoseekforthebalancebetweenstudyandpleasure.加大，一些同学的正常生活受到影响，如睡眠不好，身体也开头亮起了红灯；请你根据以下要点，给学校的英语刊物写一篇稿子，向同学们提出建议，并简述理由或举例16.keepabalancebetweenstudyandrelaxation说明:17.keepfit/healthykeep〔in〕goodhealth1、劳逸结合；2、健康饮食；3、适当锤炼；4、保持乐观心态；keepingoodcondition/shapekeepinagoodstateofhealth留意：1、短文必需包括所列内容；2、词数120左右；3、文章开头已给出；4、写成一篇完整的短文，不要逐条列举；18.withtimegoingby/astimegoesby作文范文：19.takeexerciseWiththeapproachofSenior3,studentsareunderincreasinglygreatpressure,whichhas纠错:affectedsomestudents,’prelvifeentingthemsleepingwellandcausingproblemswiththeirhealth.In1.Exerciseeverydaysothatyouwillbemuchstronger.ordertoimprovethecondition,I’dliketooffersomeadvice.2.remainaoptimisticattitudetowardslifeFirst,Combineworkwithrest.KeepinmindthatallworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.3.Eatmorevegetables,whichcanstrengthyourhealth.Second,itisimportanttokeepahealthyandbalanceddiet.Stayingawayfromjunkfoodandeatinghealthyfoodlikevegetablesandfishwillbenefityou.Third,gooutdoorsandtakeregularexercise,as4.Inaddition,haveabalanceddietcankeepyourhealth.physicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofpressure.Lastbutnotleast,goodhealthmeansbeing5.Onlyifyoubelieveinyourselfyoucancarryonasnormal.bothphysicallyandmentallyhealthy.Keepinganoptimisticstateofmindwillcontributetoagood6.takegoodrestphysicalstate.Isincerelyhopethatthesuggestionsabovewillbeofgreathelptoyou.7.Underpressureofstudy,notonlydoourlivesaffected,butalsoweareinpoor句型及短语积存：condition.〔两处错〕1.Myadviceisasfollows.8.Lastbutnotleast,remainoptimisticisagoodwaytoliftyourspirits.2.Thefollowingismyadvice.9.Takingexerciseproperlycontributestomakeyoufullofenergy.3.Finally,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulin10.Youshouldeatsomethingwhichagreeswithyou.liftingyourspirits.11.Atthesametime,wearefacedwithmuchstressthatresultsinmanystudentscan’t4.Thenitalsohelpstotakeproperexercise.Notonlycanitstrengthenyourhealth,butalsoitcanmakeyoufeelrelaxed.sleepwell.5.Gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasitisaneffectivewaytokeephealthy.12.Herearesomeadviceonhowtosolveit.6.Second,youmayaswelltakesomeexercise,whichisagoodwaytokeephealthy.13.Onlyyouensureenoughnutritioncanyoustudybetter.7.Third,gooutdoorsandtakeexercise.Notonlycanithelpstudentskeephealthy,butalsoitisagood14.Finally,keepanoptimisticattitudetolife,itwillbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.waytoreducepressure.15.write---------写〔出过去式,过去分词,现在分8.Firstofall,Ithinkitisagoodideatocombinestudyandagoodrest,whichcanhelpuskeep词〕occur---------energeticandactive.9.Second,youaresupposedtoeathealthyfoodasitwillofferstudentsenoughenergy.10.Inaddition,youmusteathealthyfoodsoastokeepfit,whichisofgreatimportancetoyourstudy.11.Asanoldsayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy”.