高中英语作文技巧 39页

提要：HowtoImproveWriting？\nDoyouwanttogethighscoresinwriting?\n18？20？?Nothingisimpossible!\n？HowtoImproveWriting\n高考作文谈谈减负前后自己的学习和生活的变化。Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclasseseveryday.Ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool.Iwenttobedat11:30intheevening.Ihadnotimetoplay.Iwasverytired.NowIcanvisitlibraries.Icanlearncomputeranddrawing.Intheevening,Icanreadbooksandnewspa-persandwatchTV.Igotobedat10:00now.信息全面，但句式单一，缺乏组织性17分\nI’mverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylifesinceourhomeworkhasreduced.Beforethat,learningduringthedaywasverysimple.Havingclassanddoinghomeworkwastheonlythingweshoulddo.Wecouldnotgotobeduntil11:30.Nevertheless,sincereducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuchmoreinteresting.Ioftenvisitlibrariesandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesinmysparetime.Intheevening,IalsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnewspapers.onthecontrary,Igotobedatabout10pm.Inshort,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.范文\nTopicsentence（主题句）Advancedphrases&sentences（高级词和句子）Coherence（连贯性）ⅠⅡⅢⅠ.Howtowriteagoodcomposition?\nAgoodcompositionTopicsentenceⅠ\nWehavehadaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherSeniorThreestudentsshouldgospringouting.Therearesomedifferentideasaboutit.Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSeniorThreestudentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshair.Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.Theysaythatwiththecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydon’tfeellikegoinganywhere.\n链接高考（2007全国卷I）：假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：1．年龄；2．性别；3．爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。\n实战演习（2007全国卷I）：笔友条件：爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）Ihopemypenfriendlikestravelling,sportsandkeepingpets.要点齐全、语言正确，但句式简单\nImproveit!Ilikesportsverymuch,爱好运动suchasbasketballandfootball.\nImproveit!Iliketofindapenfriendwhoisinterestedintravellingjustlikeme,爱好旅游sothatwecantraveltogetherandshareexperiences.\nImproveit!Ihaveanotherhobby,thatis,keepingpets,and喜欢养宠物Ihavekeptalovelydogforoneyear.\nIwanttohaveapenfriendwhoisinterestedintraveling,sportsandkeepingpets.Ilikesportsverymuch,suchasbasketballandfootball.Ialsohopetofindapenpalwhoisinterestedintravellingjustlikeme,sothatwecantraveltogetherandsharetravelingexperiences.What’smore,Ihaveanotherhobby,thatis,keepingpets.Ihavekeptalovelydogforoneyear.对比\n.Advancedwords,phrasesandsentencesAgoodcompositionⅡ\nChooseadvancedphrases(选取高级词汇)WordPhrase1.Ilikehistory.2.Iwanttohaveapicnic.befondof/beinterestedin/haveagreatinterestin…wouldliketo\nChooseadvancedphrases(选取高级词汇)SimplephraseAdvancedphrase1.Iwanttodosomethingforthelibrary.2.I’lltrymybesttoofferthebestservice.makeacontributiontosparenopains/effort\nUsedifferentsentences(使用多样句型）1.Thereisno________thatIcangetthereinashorttimebecauseIliveneartheschool.doubt2.Ilikehistoryverymuch.(使用强调）I___________likehistoryverymuch.do/really3.Ifyougivemethechance,I’llofferthebestservicetoothers.(使用非谓语动词）If________thechance,I’llofferthebestservicetoothers.given\n▲我过去常常晚饭后散步。Aftersupper,Iusedtotakeawalk.①使用习语（短语、成语）使语言更有文采\n▲只有通过努力学习，我们才能取得进步。Onlybyworkinghard,②使用倒装句canwemakeprogress.\n▲听到这条消息，他很兴奋。③非谓语动词——简捷、生动，富有内涵Hearingthenews，hegotexcited.\n▲我们积极参加活动，这对我们健康非常有益。Wetakeanactivepartinactivities,④定语从句的灵活运用whichisgoodforourhealth.\n.Coherence(语篇的连贯性)AgoodcompositionⅢ\nWhenhesawtheboyinthestreet,hestoppedtospeaktohim.Hesawtheboyinthestreet.Hestoppedtospeaktohim.\nWetriedourbest.Welostourgame.Wetriedourbest,butwelostourgame./Althoughwetriedourbest,welostourgame.Shefinishedthetaskaheadoftime.Shecametohelpus.Aftershefinishedthetaskaheadoftime，shecametohelpus.\n1.表罗列顺序2.表递进3.表转折4.表因果5.表目的6.表归纳firstofall/tostart/beginwith/inthefirstplace…and/then/also/besides/what'smore/inaddition...but/however/although/though/onthecontrary...because/since/therefore/so/thus/asaresult...inorderthat/sothat/forthepurposeof...inbrief/inshort/inconclusion/inaword...\n2008全国高考（II）假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文.请你根据下列要点写回信.要点:1.参加中文学习班;2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。\nDearPeter,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.BestwishesLiHuaitisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyoucanlearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowclassmates.italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.youshouldmakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.\nDearPeter,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyoucanlearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourclassmates.ithelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersinChinesewheneverpossible.itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs.youshouldmakemoreChinesefriendswhocanhelpyoulearnChinese.Tostartwith,Besides,Inaddition,Inshort,Isuggest\n北京国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊”夏令营活动，假设你是李华，请根据下列信息写一封申请信。注意：1、词数不少于100字。2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯姓名:李华性别:男年龄:17岁学校:长沙市一中其它:爱好音乐,摄影;善于与人交流,乐于助人;热爱自然,热爱和平参加夏令营的目的:结交朋友,了解外国文化Consolidation\nAsampleofwritingDearSir/MadamMynameisLiHua,andI’ma17-year-oldboy（1）就读（分词或定语从句）inChangshaiNo.1MiddleSchool.Ihavevarietiesofinterests.Firstofall,（2）我爱听音乐（doing作主语）.（3）过渡词,I’malsointerestedinphotography.Beinggoodatcommunicatingwithothers,Imakemanyfriends.（4）过渡词,I’malwaysreadytohelpothers.IwouldliketojointhePeaceandFriendshipSummerCampformanyreasons.ThefirstreasonliesinthefactthatIlovelife,natureaswellaspeace.But（5）最重要的原因是结交朋友对我来说很容易tomakefriendswithpeoplefromdifferentcountries..If（6）（省略&非谓语）thechance,Iwillmakefulluseofittobroadenmyhorizonandlearnfromothers.（7）（信的末尾，同学们可以自己完成吧？）Yoursfaithfully,LiHua\nAsampleofwritingDearSir/MadamMynameisLiHua,andI’ma17-year-oldboy(1)inChangshaiNo.1MiddleSchool.Ihavevarietiesofinterests.Firstofall,(2).（3）,I’malsointerestedinphotography.Beinggoodatcommunicatingwithothers,Imakemanyfriends.（4）I’malwaysreadytohelpothers.就读（分词或定从）(whois)studying过渡词Inaddition,过渡词What’smore我爱听音乐（doing做主语）listeningtomusicismyfavorite.\nAsampleofwritingIwouldliketojointhePeaceandFriendshipSummerCampformanyreasons.ThefirstreasonisthefactthatIlovelife,natureaswellaspeace.But（5）tomakefriendswithpeoplefromdifferentcountries.If(6)thechance,Iwillmakefulluseofittobroadenmyhorizonandlearnfromothers.（7）Yoursfaithfully,LiHuatheimportantreasonisthatitisgiven/getting最重要的原因是结交朋友对我来说很容易（省略&非谓语）（信的末尾，同学们可以自己完成吧？）Lookforwardtoyourreply.easyforme\n审要求，列要点,扩成句，连成文,查错误。英文写作五步法\nCheckyourcompositionquickly:名词单复数，动词时语态；主谓代词一致性，单词拼写须准确；固定搭配应规范，行文逻辑要连贯。\nWhichcompositionfeelsmoreattractive,why?\nHomeworkPleaseperfectyourcompositionafterclass.Makeyourfinalcopyasneataspossible.\n