高中英语写作课件 17页

Welcome话题写作\nAdvertisementsTopic\nAdvantages…helpusinmanyaspects.…benefit…alot./…bebeneficialto…keepsb.informedof;haveaccessto;beaccessibletoexposesb.tosth.,help…compare…haveabetterunderstandingof…promotethesalesof,sellwelleducatesb.todo…/teachsb.todo\nHowever,thereexistalotofdisadvantages.misleadsb./cheatsb.into/takein..interruptsb./bothersb.doharmto./beharmfulto,increasethecostof…/waste…doing…Disadvantages\nYourattitude/opinion:1.AsfarasIamconcerned,…outweigh…2.Eventhough…Istillconsiderit…3.Withallits…wemustacknowledge…4.Ibelievewecan…aslongas……\nPart1:Part2:Part3:Learntoorganizeintroductiontoyourtopicadvantages/disadvantagesyouropinion\nAgoodcompositionOrganizationContentLanguage\nReadingAsscienceandtechnologydevelops,wecanseeadvertisementsalmosteverywhere.Advertisementshelppeoplegetmuchinformationaboutnewproducts.Companycansellmoreproductsthanbefore.Andsomeadvertisementseducatethepublic.Advertisementshavesomebadeffectsonourdailylife.Itwastesalotofnaturalresources,whichincreasesthecostofproducts.Theymisleadorevencheatconsumers.Theymakeusupset.Ithinkadvertisingisuseful.Ifwehaveenoughfactsfromads,wecaneasilymakeamuchbetterchoice.(Introduction)(Advantages)(Disadvantages)(Myopinion)(86words)\nLearntopolishAsscienceandtechnologydevelops,wecanseeadvertisementsalmosteverywhere增分策略一使用高级词汇peopleareconstantlyexposedtoads…Peoplehaveaccessto…/areaccessibletoads…Advertisingfindsitswayinto/floodsintoourdailylife….WithscienceandtechnologydevelopingWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,替换为：替换为：\n1.Itwastesalotofnaturalresources,whichincreasesthecostofproducts.1)…increasingthecostofproducts.增分策略二使用非谓语形式2)…causing/leadingto/resultingin/contributingto/bringingabout…2.Ifwehaveenoughfactsfromads,wecaneasilymakeamuchbetterchoice.…thehigherpricesofproducts.enoughfactsfromads,wecan….Havingenoughfactsfrom…Armedwith/Equippedwith\n1.Para.2isaboutadvantagesofadvertisements.Para3:Advertisementshavesomebadeffectsonourdailylife.However,advertisementshavesomebadeffectsonourdailylife.增分策略三巧用过渡连接表达2.Itwastesalotofnaturalresources,whichincreasesthecostofproducts.Theymisleadorevencheatconsumers.Theyalsomakeusupset.Inthefirstplace,itwastes….Inthesecondplace,theymislead….Furthermore,theymakeusupset.(段内句子之间衔接)(段际过渡)\n增分策略四加强一义多形Howtoexpressone’sopinionorsuggestion1.AsfarasIamconcerned…/Astome/Frommypointofview…weshouldattachmoreimportanceto…2.Asformyownideaabout…Ibelieve/think/propose/suggest…3.Personally/Butforme,Iwouldrather…/prefer…to….4.Eventhough…Istillconsiderit…5.Withallits…wemustacknowledge…\nAdvertisementshelppeoplegetmuchinformationaboutnewproducts.1)Itisadsthathelppeopleget../Itiswiththehelpofadsthatpeoplecan….增分策略五句式变换2)Itisbelievedthatadshelpinformpeopleofnewproducts.3)Ifitwerenotforads,peoplewouldn’tget…4)Howhelpfuladsareinprovidinginformationforpeople.\nWiththehelpofads,peoplecangetmuchinformationaboutnewproducts.Makinguseofads,companiescanpromotethesalesofproducts.Someadvertisementseducatethepublic1.Advertisementsbenefitusinmanyways.…增分策略六注重主题句2.Adsbringalotofbenefitstous.…3.Advertisementsarebeneficialtousinmanyaspects.…4.Adsareplayinganimportantpart/roleinourdailylife.…\nWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,peopleareconstantlyexposedtoads.Adsbenefitusinmanyways.Itisbelievedthatadscaninformpeopleofnewproducts.Makinguseofads,companiescanpromotethesalesofproducts.Advertisementseducatethepublic.However,thereexistsomebadeffectsonourdailylife.Inthefirstplace,itisawasteofnaturalresources,increasingthecostofproducts.Inthesecondplace,notonlydoadsmisleadorevencheatconsumersbutalsomakeusupsetanddisturbed.AsfarasIamconcerned,advertisingisofuse.Ifwearearmedwithenoughfactsfromads,itiseasyforustomakeamuchbetterchoiceofgoods.Appreciatingthepolishedwork(123words)\nSummaryTobecomplete.Tobeaccurate.Tobevaried.Tobecoherent.三性一复杂内容的完整性用词的准确性篇章的连贯性句子的复杂度\nThankyou!