高中英语短文改错 28页

高考备考法宝系列\nHowtodoProof-reading短文改错\nObjectives考查目标1）识别错误并正确校正语篇的能力2）综合运用英语知识的能力3）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻辑的能力\n解题步骤1.(浏览全文，掌握大意）2.（整句理解，上下兼顾）3.（复读全文，检查验证）\n动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟介词短语须关注．习惯用法要记住冠词连词常光顾．常见错误\n谓语非谓语动词语态donetodo主谓一致时态doing\n1.动词的时态错误.1.However,myfatherhadtoreturntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturday.(2011全国）2Istayedthereforoneandahalfhoursandmadesurethatthegirlwereallright.(2009全国卷2)3Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.flew动词形2.主、谓不一致的错误3.andbutso等连词前后动词时态不一致was__________visited4主动语态和被动语态的错用4Tooursurprise,themanwasturnedoutathief\谓语\n5.非谓语动词错误高考链接:1IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou.（2011新课标全国卷）buying2Iwasreallydisappointingandabouttoleavewhenhewalkedoutofabuilding.(2011陕西卷)disappointed3TheywereeagerknoweverythingaboutChinaandaskedmelotsofquestions∧to\n二、名词数指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。高考链接：1Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.（2011新课标全国卷）luggage2InearlyJanuarythisyear,therateofUFOreportswassteady,aroundthreeperweeks.(2011辽宁卷）week根据名词前的修饰语或谓语动词的单复数来判断不可数名词progress,furniture,weather,fun,news,information,adviceequipment,luggage=baggageknowledge\n三、还要注意形和副高考链接：1Whenshedroppedmeoff,Ipulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback.（2011浙江卷）2.Yes,itisclearlythatyourlifeinyourcountryisquitedifferentfrommine.slowly3Thedoctorsaysheisrecoveringfastthanexpected.(2009陕西）faster１形容词修饰名词，be动词，系动词后要用形容词２副词修饰动词，形容词，过去分词，整个句子３比较级和最高级的使用clear\n再叮嘱几句：五不改原则1.单词拼写不改2.大小写不改3.词序不改4标点符号不改5原意不改解题步骤1.(浏览全文，掌握大意）2.（整句理解，上下兼顾）3.（复读全文，检查验证）\n实战演练\n短文改错（共10小题；每题一分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词.删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分\nAtChristmasEve,JimwentwithhisfathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychooseabigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!Theyputtheminthecornerofthesittingroom.KatewascovereditwithalotofChristmaslight.Thesittingroomlookedreallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewasafireburninginthefireplace,buttheChristmastreelightswereshinningbrightly.Jimandhisparentssinginganddancehappily.\nAtChristmasEve,JimwentwithhisfathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychooseabigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!Theyputtheminthecornerofthesitting____On_________chose_______tall_______it动词形介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟\nroom.KatewascovereditwithalotofChristmaslight.Thesittingroomlookedreallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewasafireburninginthefireplace,buttheChistmastreelightswereshinningbrightly.Jimandhisparentssinginganddancehappily.＼_______lights_____________beautiful_____and∧were动词形还要注意形和副动词形名词数冠词连词须关注________dancing\nPracticemakesperfect!\nHomeworkMyfatherandIamtakingacampingtripinJulyandAugust.WewilltravelforabouttwomonthsbutwilltourtheUnitedStatesandpartsoftheCanada.Wehavedecidedtocampbecauseitdoesnotspendasmuchasvacationinginhotel,butwehadtoplancarefully.Ithinkthecarwhatwearegoingtodriveisverysmall,sowedecidetotakeonlyonesmallsuitcaseforbothofthemandasfewcampingthingsaspossibly.Wewilltakesomemedicinewithuspreventinsectsfromhurtingus,andalsosomefoodforpicnics.I'msurethatwewillhavefuns.\n∨werelikesexcitingNotonlythestudentsbutalsotheteacherlikethefilm.2.Whentheycamehere,Iwillshowthem.3.TheyeagertoknoweverythingaboutChinaandaskedmelotsofquestions.4.Ifoundthegameexcitedandmydadexplainedtherules.practicecome\n1.Heaskedangryifwehadfinishedthework.2.Yes,itisclearlythatyourlifeinyourcountryisquitedifferentfrommine.3.Hisfatherlooksmuchmorehappiertoday.angrilyclearpractice\n2.takeplacehappenbreakoutcomeaboutoccur发生1.looksoundsmellfeeltaste感官系动词3.belongtoconsistofdatefrom=datebackto4.turnoutcomeoutcometruecomeup\nIcangotohomenow.2.Ilikeplayingpiano.3.IamfondatEnglish.theWrongword∧MissingwordofUnnecessaryword高考短文改错的考查方式\n四、代词格，细领悟3.it作形主、形宾或指代时有缺漏(make,find,think)高考链接4：WiththehelpofKatia,aroommateofme…(2011重庆卷）mimeItwasonlywhenwedidtheirchemistryprojecttogetherthatIbegintounderstand…(2010辽宁卷）Hefounddifficulttolearnmathwell.our∨it1.人称代词，物主代词,反身代词的使用．2.代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误.\n2.IwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.3.IalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.4.OnedayIwrotealittlestoryandshowedtomyteacher.myselfeverything∨itSomestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.theirpractice\n五、介词短语须关注，习惯用法要记住．1.主要考查固定短语，固定介词的搭配。高考链接５：TherewasoneonparticularI’dreallywanted.(2011浙江卷)∧2.不定式后的动词短语中介词不能省3.时间状语前有指示代词this,that或one,next,last等修饰时不用介词.inHehadonlyasmallcoldroomtolive.inHepaidavisittohisgrandfatheronthatafternoon.\npracticeI’msuretheywilllaughtomeandseemeasafool.2.Atlastwereachedtothevillageatthefootofthehill.3.Whenayoungmanstartstoearnhisownliving,hecannolongerexpectotherstopayhisfood.4.Thegentlemaninsistedatmyreceivingthemoney.at∨foron\n２．连词but，and，or,so和although的逻辑性用法错误．高考链接６：六、冠词连词常光顾Hewasrighthereinthefrontofme.(2011陕西卷）Iboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloor.(2011新课标卷）１.冠词a,an和the的用法错误．and\nIcameintothelivingroomandsawoneofthemjustgothroughthekitchendoorbutturnonthelight.Hewillstaythereoneandtwodays.3.EverykindoftheChinesefoodisworthtrying.4.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrella.andoran