高中英语_短文改错 29页

短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：把缺词处叫个娄子符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.短文改错\n解题步骤1.通读全文，掌握大意2.整句理解，上下兼顾3.复读全文，检查验证\nIhardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.我几乎记不起我的奶奶了，她过去常常把我抱在她的膝盖上并唱着古老的歌谣，她去世的时候我才四岁。此刻，对我来说，奶奶仅仅是一个遥远的记忆，我很清楚地记得我的爷爷。他个子很高，有着宽阔的肩膀和随着年龄渐长由黑变灰的胡子。他有着低沉的嗓音，这让他在我们校长里脱颖而出，他强壮有力。事实上，他甚至还会把那些来找我做功课或者玩耍的小伙伴吓跑。然而，他是我所认识的最温文尔雅的人。\n1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.2.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.3.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.4.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.5.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.6.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.7.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.8.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.9.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.\nIhardlyremembermygrandmother.1.Hardly：①几乎不，几乎没有（表否定，修饰名词时，名词前经常加有any，修饰动词时，动词前经常加有ever）Eg.Thereishardlyanytealeft.IthardlyeversnowedinWashingtoninthewinter②用于can或could之后，主要动词前，强调做某事很难Eg.IcouldhardlybelieveitwhenIreadtheletter③刚刚，才Eg.Wehadhadlysatdowntosupperwhenthetelephonerang.④hardly置于句首时要倒装，在hardly…….when结构中，hardly置于句首时，倒装在主句Eg.HardlyhaveIheardfromhimrecently.HardlyhadIreachedthebusstopwhenthebusstarted.\n1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.（√）2.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.3.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.4.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.5.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.6.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.7.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.8.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.9.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.\nSheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.hold1.注意区分usedtodosth.be/getusedtosth/doingsth和beusedtodo这三个搭配的用法①usedtodosth.过去常常做某事②be/getusedtosth./doingsth.习惯于某事/做某事③beusedtodosth.被用来做某事句型区分：Iusedtogetupearly.Iamusedtogettingupearly.Iusedtotravelbyair.Iamusedtotravelingbyair.Therobotcanbeusedtodosomedangerouswork.Theknifeisusedtocutfruits.\n2.hold－held—held①抱住，托住，拿着，抓住Eg.Thegirlheldherfather’shandtightly.②容纳，包含Eg.Theplaneholdsabout300passegers③怀有，持有（信念，意见）Eg.Heholdsstrangeviewsoneducation.④举行，召开Eg.Holdameeting⑤Holdon等着，停住Eg.Holdon!Thisisn’ttherightroad.3.Knee膝盖①bringsb.totheirknees（尤指战争中）打败某人，使某人屈膝投降②bringsth.toitsknees摧毁某物，使（组织等）瘫痪或崩溃\n1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.（√）2.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.hold3.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.4.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.5.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.6.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.7.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.8.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.9.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.\nIwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.passed1.Passaway①去世②终止，结束Eg.Allthistroublewillpassaway2.Passthetime=killthetime消磨时间Eg.Wekilledthetimeplayingcards\n1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.（√）2.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.hold3.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.passed4.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.5.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.6.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.7.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.8.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.9.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.\nSheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.1.Adistantmemory一个遥远的记忆Eg.Thehistorywasadistantmemoryforme.2.Inmemoryof作为对某人的纪念Eg.Hefoundedthecharityinmemoryofhislatewife\n1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.（√）2.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.hold3.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.passed4.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.（√）5.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.6.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.7.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.8.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.9.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.\nIremembermygrandfatherverymuch.well1.考查副词：此处需要修饰的是前面的动词remember，所以要用副词well\n1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.（√）2.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.hold3.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.passed4.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.（√）5.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.well6.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.7.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.8.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.9.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.\nHewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedshouldersfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.into/to1.Shoulder①考查名词的单复数，shoulder意思是肩膀，一般作复数形式②承担，担负Eg.Toshouldertheresponsibilityforsth.2.考查介词，此处用to与前面的from构成短语“from…..to…….”意为“从….到…..”turnfrom….to/into……为固定用法，意为从……变为……..\n1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.（√）2.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.hold3.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.passed4.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.（√）5.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.well6.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedshouldersfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.to/into7.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.8.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.9.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.\nHehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinhimoursmalltown,∧hewasstrongandpowerful.and1.考查人称代词，这句话为非限制性定语从句，主语是which指代adeepvoice,谓语动词为set，宾语可直接用名词的宾格，并且voice不予set构成人称上的反身关系，不能用反身代词himself。或者固定搭配：setsb.apartfrom…..使某人脱颖而出Eg.Hisaccentsetshimapart.2.考查并列连词\n1.Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.（√）2.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.hold3.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.passed4.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.（√）5.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.well6.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedshouldersfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.to/into7.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinhimoursmalltown,∧hewasstrongandpowerful.and8.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.9.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.\nInafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.1.考查固定搭配，infact为“事实上，实际上”2.考查从属连词，during为“在…..期间”，when为“在……时候”3.Sacaresb.……away把……吓跑Eg.Theymanagedtoscaredthebearsaway.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.①考查副词，never“从不”，ever“曾经，在任何时候”\nIhardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherholdkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheispassedjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromwellshouldersblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsetto/intohimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,∧hewasstrongandandpowerful.Inafactheevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheywhencameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.ever\n近三年高考短文改错错误类型统计设题方式试卷多一词(\)缺一词(∧)错一词(__)2009年浙江卷1182009年辽宁卷2172009年宁·海卷1182008年宁·海卷1182007年宁·海卷118\n一、多词总结1、时间状语前是否多了介词。2、形容词、副词比较级前是否多了相似词。3、固定搭配中是否多了词。4、不定式前是否多了应该省的to。5、及物动词后受母语的影响是否多了介词。\nLookatthesesentencesandcorrectthemistakesinthemwiththerightsigns.1、Wearegoingtohaveameetingonnextweek.2、Heismoretallerthanme.3、HeisfondoflikeEnglish.4、Thebossmadeworkerstowork10hoursaday.5、Hemarriedwithabeautifulgirl.\n二、缺词1.名词前特别是可数名词前是否缺冠词。2.不及物动词是否缺介词。3.不定式是否漏了to.4.被动语态是否缺少了助动词be.5.习惯用法是否漏了不可缺少的词。\nLookatthesesentencesandcorrectthemistakesinthemwiththerightsigns.1.Imetstudentyesterday.2.Heislookingamissingbook.3.Hewantshavearest.4.Hepraisedbytheteacherseveraltimes5.I’mlookingforwardyourletter.\n三、错词1.介词是否误用。2.动词的时态、语态是否误用。3.非谓语动词是否误用。4.主谓是否一致。5.判断句子中形容词和副词是否误用。6.从句中关联词是否误用。7.代词是否误用。8.连词是否误用。\n短文改错口诀：动词形(动词的时态和语态错误)，名词数(名词单、复数形式的用法错误);注意形和副;非谓动词细辨别;习惯用法要记住(多词、少词和搭配错误);句子成分多分析;逻辑错误须关注。\n知识回顾KnowledgeReview祝您成功！