高中英语作文__建议信 7页

........建议信(1)-----阐释原因；提出建议类请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括：1.菜价昂贵，菜市单一；2.排队时间长，浪费午休时间；3.味道不佳，浪费现象严重。注意：1.词数不少于120；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇:食堂canteenDearPrincipal,Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua作文范文：DearPrincipal,Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.Theproblemsareasfollows.Somestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighandthatthechoicesaretoolimited.Anotherconcernisthatthetimespentinwaitingissolongthatwehavelesstimetohavearest.Meanwhile,somestudentsthinkthatthetasteofthefoodisawful,whichleadstoalotofwaste.AsfarasI’mconcerned,measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.Firstofall,it’ssuggestedthatthepricesbemorereasonableandthechoicesofdishesbemorevarious.Inaddition,it’sbettertoopenmoreservicewindowstoreducewaitingtime.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!需注意的词汇、表达：1.deliciouswaitingtaste(n.味道)tasty(adj.可口的)cook(n.厨师)cooker(n.炊具)price价格2.lower/bringdowntheprice降低价格3.atalower/reasonableprice以较低的价格4.varietiesofdishes种类多样的菜品5.Foronething,…….Foranother,……6.makesb(not)dosth7.wait/standinline/inaqueueforalongtime8.Thekindsoffoodarefew.表达食堂出现的问题：9.Thepricesofdishesaresohighthatmanyofuscan’taffordthem.10.Therearesofewdishestochoosefrom,whichisfarfromsatisfactory./whichcan’tsatisfyourneeds.11.Ittakesussomuchtimetostandinline,whichdecreasesourtimeofrestatnoon.12.Thefoodinthecanteendoesn’ttastegood./nice.Thetasteoffoodinthecanteenisn’tgood.13.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobadthatalotoffoodisleftandwasted14.It’sawasteoftimetostandinlineforalongtime.15.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobad,whichleadstoaseverephenomenonofwastingfood.16.Inthelongrun,it’sbadforourhealthandstudy.17.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitwillinfluenceoursleepintheafternoon.表达提出的建议：18.Improvingthetasteofthefoodisalsoagoodsolutiontotheproblems.19.Ithinkit’snecessarytoprovidemorekindsoffood.20.It’shightimethatwetookmeasurestosolvetheproblems.Soit’shightimeforustotakemeasures21.Tosolvetheproblems,Ithinkthecanteenshouldsetupanewfigure(形象)andimprovethepresentconditiontosatisfythestudents’needs.22.Wehopethecanteencanprovideuswithdishesofahighqualityatareasonableprice.23.Thecanteenshouldopenmorewindowssothatweneedn’twaitsolong.24.AsfarasI’mconcerned,thecanteenshouldattachimportancetothequality.What’smore,differentkindsoffoodshouldbeprovided.参考.资料\n........1.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.建议模板：Dear….,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto…….(引出话题).Hereareafewsuggestions.Firstofall,itisimportanttodosth.Then,italsohelpstodosth.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatodosth.建议句型积累：1.Manywayscancontributetosolvingtheproblem,butIthinkthefollowingmaybethemosteffectiveones.2.I’dliketomakesomesuggestionson…….3.It’sofgreatimportanceforsbtodosth.It’snecessaryforsbtodosth4.Itwouldbeagoodideaforsbtodosth./Itwouldbeabetterideaif…….5.Itcontributes/helpsalotif………6.Isuggestthat…../Mysuggestionisthat…It’ssuggested/advised/recommendedthat……7.You’dbetterdosth./We’dbetterdosthIt’sbettertodosth8.MeasuresaresupposedtobetakentodosthWearesupposedtotakeeffectivemeasurestodosth9.It’shightimethatsbdidsth./It’shightimeforsbtodosth建议信(2)-----阐释原因；提出建议类假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫SadMother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。I’mthemotherofafourteen-year-old.RecentlyIhavefoundthatmydaughtertoldliestome.Theotherdayshetoldmethatshedidwellinthefinalexam.HoweverIfoundoutshefailedinmathandEnglish.WhatshouldIdo?写作要点：1.表明了解她的问题；2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因；3.提出至少两条建议要求：1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。4.书写需清晰、工整。Hi，SadMother，Ihavelearnedthat_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考.资料\n........_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________作文范文：Hi,SadMother,Ihavelearnedthatyourdaughtertoldliestoyou.Asapeerofyourdaughter,Ithinkthereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,maybethereasonwhyyourdaughtertoldalieisthatyouaretoostrictwithherandsheisafraidyouwillpunishherifshetellsyouthetruth.Besides,nowadays,parentsputtoomuchpressureontheirkids.Inordernottoletyoudown,shehasnochoicebuttolie.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Firstofall,you’dbetterhaveaheart-to–hearttalkwithher,makingherknowbeinghonestismoreimportantthanscores.Inaddition,don’tbetoostrict.It’ssuggestedthatyoushouldallowhertomakesomeminor(微小的)mistakes.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子：主格宾格形容性物主代词名词性物主代词反身代词第一人称Imemyminemyselfweusouroursourselves第二人称youyouyouryoursyourselfyouyouyouryoursyourselves第三人称hehimhishishimselfsheherherhersherselfitititsitsitselftheythemtheirtheirsthemselvesdaughter女儿expectation期望beworried/concernedabout担心calmdown冷静下来ataloss迷惑不解keepintouchwith保持联系bestrictwithsbinsth在某方面对某人要求严格heart-to-heart推心置腹的idea注意想法test测试text文本cheat欺骗wantsbtodosth想让某人做某事1.Itwasbecauseshedidn’twanttoletyoudownthatshepretendedtoachievehighscores.2.Sheisn’tawarethatthelieshavehurtbothyouandherself.3.Beingateenager,sheneedstobeencouraged.Andit’syouwhocandothis.4.Itisprobablyyourhighexpectationstoherthatmakesherdecidetolie.5.Youshouldfigureoutthereasonwhysheliedtoyoubeforesolvingtheproblem.6.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatlyingisbadbehavior.7.Thereasonwhyshedidn’ttellyouthetruthmaybethatshedidn’twanttoletyoudown.8.Itissuggestedthatyoushouldhaveaface-to-facetalkwithhersothatshemight参考.资料\n........openherhearttoyou.9.Toavoidthelies,youshouldencourageherratherthanblameherwhenshefailsinexams10.Thereasonthatleadstotheproblemmaybevarious.11.Confrontedwith(面对)theseproblems,youshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestohelpyoudaughter.12.AsfarasI’mconcerned,it’sbettertocommunicatewithherinafriendlywaytoletherknowit’swrongtotelllies.13.It’ssuggestedthatyoushouldattachmoreimportancetophysicalandmentalhealth.Moreover,it’sbettertoencouragehertodowhatshewants.改错：1.Therearesomeadvice.2.Don’tsad.3.Youshouldgivehermoreencourage.4.Shemayafraidthatifshefailsintheexam,youwillpunishher.5.Ifshehasdifficultyinlearning,youshouldinspiresheandhelpsheout.6.Shedoesn’twantyouangry.7.Pleasenottobesoworried.8.Oneofthereasonisthatsheisn’tdaretotellyouthetruth.9.Becausesheafraidparents.10.Soshedon’twanttomentionit.11.Youshouldapologytoher.12.You’dbettertoencouragehertobeahonestpeople.13.You’dbetterbecareaboutherhealthandstudy.14.I’mveryunderstandyourcondition.15.Shemaydoesn’twantyoutobeangry.参考.资料\n........建议信(3)为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1．表示理解并给予安慰；2．提出建议并说明理由。注意：1．词数120左右；2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：tempern.脾气，情绪HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchahadtimeatthemoment.Yours,JamieHiWorried,I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthisthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,Iquiteunderstandhowyouarefeelingnowandthereisnoneedtoworryaboutitsomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.Herearethreeusefultips.Firstofall,talktosomeoneyoutrustaboutthetroubleyou’refacedwith,whichisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Lastbutnotleast,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Havingapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyou'llsoonbecomecalmerandbetter.Yours,JamieHighlights:1.First,youaresupposedtofigureoutwhatmakesyouupset,andthenkeepawayfromit.2.What’smore,youaresupposedtotakeanactivepartinoutdooractivitiestorelax.3.Tosolvetheproblemassoonaspossible,youcanopenyourhearttoagoodfriend,参考.资料\n........talkingaboutyourtrouble.1.Carriedbytwo,burdensarelighter.2.It’shightimethatyoushouldrelieveyourpressure.3.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentocontrolyourtemper.4.Thereisnodenyingthateveryonewilllosehistemperwhensomethingunexpectedhappens.5.Insteadofbeingangry,whatisimportantforyouistolearntocontrolyourtemperfromnowon.6.It’scommonforteenagerslikeyoutoloseyourtemper,whichofcoursewillhaveabadeffectonyournormalstudyandlife.建议信(4)高二下期已经过去半学期，高三已经在向同学们招手。随着学习和心理压力日益加大，一些同学的正常生活受到影响，如睡眠不好，身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你根据以下要点，给学校的英语刊物写一篇稿子，向同学们提出建议，并简述理由或举例说明:1、劳逸结合；2、健康饮食； 3、适当锻炼； 4、保持乐观心态。注意：1、短文必须包括所列内容；2、词数120左右；     3、文章开头已给出；           4、写成一篇完整的短文，不要逐条列举。作文范文：WiththeapproachofSenior3,studentsareunderincreasinglygreatpressure,whichhasaffectedsomestudents’life,preventingthemsleepingwellandcausingproblemswiththeirhealth.Inordertoimprovethecondition,I’dliketooffersomeadvice.First,Combineworkwithrest.KeepinmindthatallworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.Second,itisimportanttokeepahealthyandbalanceddiet.Stayingaway参考.资料\n........fromjunkfoodandeatinghealthyfoodlikevegetablesandfishwillbenefityou.Third,gooutdoorsandtakeregularexercise,asphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofpressure.Lastbutnotleast,goodhealthmeansbeingbothphysicallyandmentallyhealthy.Keepinganoptimisticstateofmindwillcontributetoagoodphysicalstate.Isincerelyhopethatthesuggestionsabovewillbeofgreathelptoyou.句型及短语积累：1.Myadviceisasfollows.2.Thefollowingismyadvice.3.Finally,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.4.Thenitalsohelpstotakeproperexercise.Notonlycanitstrengthenyourhealth,butalsoitcanmakeyoufeelrelaxed.5.Gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasitisaneffectivewaytokeephealthy.6.Second,youmayaswelltakesomeexercise,whichisagoodwaytokeephealthy.7.Third,gooutdoorsandtakeexercise.Notonlycanithelpstudentskeephealthy,butalsoitisagoodwaytoreducepressure.8.Firstofall,Ithinkitisagoodideatocombinestudyandagoodrest,whichcanhelpuskeepenergeticandactive.9.Second,youaresupposedtoeathealthyfoodasitwillofferstudentsenoughenergy.1.Inaddition,youmusteathealthyfoodsoastokeepfit,whichisofgreatimportancetoyourstudy.2.Asanoldsayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy”.3.Gonearethedayswhenwewereatsenior2andthesenior3issayinghellotous.4.Goouttobreathefreshairandrelaxyourbrain.5.Keepingahealthydietisessentialtoyou,whichhelpsyoukeepfit.6.ThemostimportantthingIthinkistoseekforthebalancebetweenstudyandpleasure.7.keepabalancebetweenstudyandrelaxation8.keepfit/healthykeep(in)goodhealthkeepingoodcondition/shapekeepinagoodstateofhealth9.withtimegoingby/astimegoesby10.takeexercise纠错:1.Exerciseeverydaysothatyouwillbemuchstronger.2.remainaoptimisticattitudetowardslife3.Eatmorevegetables,whichcanstrengthyourhealth.4.Inaddition,haveabalanceddietcankeepyourhealth.5.Onlyifyoubelieveinyourselfyoucancarryonasnormal.6.takegoodrest7.Underpressureofstudy,notonlydoourlivesaffected,butalsoweareinpoorcondition.(两处错)8.Lastbutnotleast,remainoptimisticisagoodwaytoliftyourspirits.9.Takingexerciseproperlycontributestomakeyoufullofenergy.10.Youshouldeatsomethingwhichagreeswithyou.11.Atthesametime,wearefacedwithmuchstressthatresultsinmanystudentscan’tsleepwell.12.Herearesomeadviceonhowtosolveit.13.Onlyyouensureenoughnutritioncanyoustudybetter.14.Finally,keepanoptimisticattitudetolife,itwillbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.15.write---_________---___________---____________(写出过去式,过去分词,现在分词)occur---______________---______________---__________1.若不给自己设限，则人生中就没有限制你发挥的藩篱。2.若不是心宽似海，哪有人生风平浪静。在纷杂的尘世里，为自己留下一片纯静的心灵空间，不管是潮起潮落，也不管是阴晴圆缺，你都可以免去浮躁，义无反顾，勇往直前，轻松自如地走好人生路上的每一步3.花一些时间，总会看清一些事。用一些事情，总会看清一些人。有时候觉得自己像个神经病。既纠结了自己，又打扰了别人。努力过后，才知道许多事情，坚持坚持，就过来了。4.岁月是无情的，假如你丢给它的是一片空白，它还给你的也是一片空白。岁月是有情的，假如你奉献给她的是一些色彩，它奉献给你的也是一些色彩。你必须努力，当有一天蓦然回首时，你的回忆里才会多一些色彩斑斓，少一些苍白无力。只有你自己才能把岁月描画成一幅难以忘怀的人生画卷。参考.资料