高中英语短文改错学案 5页

HowtodoProof-reading短文改错TodayisMid-AutumnDay.ThoughIhadtowork,Icouldhaverestaftermyclasseswasover.SoherfamilyandIdecidedtovisitmygrandma・Thereweresomanycarontheroad.Inarrivingatmygrandma'shouse,Icouldsmeltthetastyfoodthatshehadcooked.Wehadthemealhappy.Atnight,weenjoyedthefullmoonwhatwasroundandbright,eatmooncakes.At8p.m.,wedrovehomebecauseIhavetoworktomorrow.ThisisthemosthappiestfestivalIhad!一.命题考点：「词法冠词；名词；形容词，副词；动词的吋态，语态，主谓一致；非谓语动词；代词.句法行文逻辑Apoem口诀动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副。代词格，细领悟，介词短语须关注。习惯用法要记住，冠词连词常光顾。二.具体考查方面（一）动词形1.动词的利错误.Iholdmylunch-boxinmyhandwhenIwasgoingtoschool.（2011全国）Ourschoolsurroundedbymanytrees.2.的错误.Thereareanappleandtwobananas・Theboy,alongwithhisparents,gotothemuseum・谓语动词就近原则:therebe,notonly...butalso...neither...nor...either...or...等谓语动词就远原则：with,togetherwith,aswellas,alongwith,ratherthan等3.的错误IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou.（2011新课标全国卷）Manyhouseshavebathroomsdesigningforolderowners・（二）名词数\n指名词形式的用法错误。Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.（2015浙江卷）Ineedsomemoreinformations.常见不可数名词有：progress,furniture,weather,fun,news,information,advice,homework,knowledge,money等（三）还要注意形和副1.形容词和副词的误用.2.原级和比较级，最高级的混用或误用.3.单音节形容词比较级前用多余的more.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn'tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.（2016新课标）Hisfatherlooksmuchmorehappiertoday.方法：1.修饰名词；作表语2.修饰动词，形容词，副词和句子。（四）代词格，细领悟1.人称代词，物主代词，反身代词，不定代词2.代词指代的人或事物前后不一致3.it作形式主语、形式宾语或指代时有缺漏IwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingswentwrong,Igotangryandbrokeit.Hefounddifficulttolearnmathwell.（五）介词短语须关注，习惯用法要记住.1.主要考查固定短语，固定介词的搭配。2.介词的多用，漏用和误用3.时间状语前有指示代词this,that或one,next,last等修饰时不用介词.LuckilyIhadallmymoneyonmypocket.（2011新课标）Hehadonlyasmallcoldroomtolive.HewillpayavisittohisgrandfatheronthisFriday.\n（六）冠词连词常光顾1.冠词a,an和the的用法错误注意1.单数可数名词前要加冠词2.不定冠词与定冠词的区别一特指/泛指3.固定短语中冠词的使用Hewasrighthereinthefrontofme.(2011陕西卷)Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsofbecomingrichintheperiodoftime.2.连词but,and,or,so和although等的逻辑性用法错i吴.(1)关系代词，关系副词及从屈连词在复合句中的使用是否正确(2)表并列关系有and,both…and,notonly…butalso...,aswellas...;转折关系有however,but...;递进关系有whafsmore,moreover,besides...Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening・Iboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloor.实战练习Iwasahighschoolstudentthen,fromthelow-incomefamily.SoIhavetosupporthisfamily.Myfirstjobwastocleanthetablesinasmallrestaurant.Istillremembergoingthereearlyandfeltanxiousaboutthenewworld.IworkedharderbecauseIwasafraidoflosingthejob.Atthenight,Iwassometimesverytiredtofallasleep・AndIcametounderstandthatwasnoteasytoearnmoney,andthatknowledgescouldchangemylife.SowhatIlearnedfromthejob,inahardway,wasmuchmoreimportantaswhatIlearnedfromschool.课后巩固练习2013年新课标1Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderanda\nbeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However;heisthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.2013年新课标2ThebooklzmreadingoftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidtohavestartedintheearly1800's.Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner;thatmightnotbeserveduntil8o'clockatnight.Thiscustomsoonbecomesanothermealofday.Interesting,ithadacormectionbytheBritishporcelain（瓷器）industry.TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandies.WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.Thismadeforthegrowintheporcelainindustry.2013年（全国I卷）MyfatherandIstayedattheSouthLakeHotelforaweekwhenwevisitBeijinglastmonth.Itisinthedowntownarea,butitiseasytogotoanywherefromthehotelbypublictransport.Welivedinacomfortablydouble-roomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedbestwerethefreehigh-speedInternetconnectionintheroom.Icheckedmyemailmessageseveryday.IalsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotostakinginBeijing.Thefoodwaswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocaldish.ItissuchgreathotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoisgoingtoBeijing.2013年（全国II卷）Twoyearsbefore,ItraveledtoBrazilandIrentedforacar.Unfortunate,Ihadanaccidentandhitanothercar,andIneededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwoweek.Icalledmyparents,soIdidnottellthemwhathadhappened.IknewthattheywillbeworriedaboutmyselfbecauseIwassofartheraway,andthatmymotherwouldnotsleepifsheknew.Therefore,ItoldtheminterestedstoriesandhowIwasenjoyingBrazil.Asaresult,nobodyknewtruth.Istillthinkthatitwastherightthingtodo.2014年（全国I卷）\nNearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes（圣女果）inourbackgarden,sincethen-—foralltheseyear■一wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste・Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors・Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblem.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatoncost!2014年（全国II卷）Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.mandendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessoninthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn'tneedtodosomanyhomework・Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroom,buildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,satbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully・Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.（2015全国I卷）WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside・Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,welllivetoregretit・