高中英语作文高分策略 15页

英语作文高分策略：让阅卷人舒心的法宝：“四有好文”卖弄文采之法宝:有清晰的条理有自然的段间衔接有经典的词句有整齐美观的书写用词“老辣”----地道用句经典:倒装、强调、从句，非谓语名人名言\n首先_____________同时____________随着时间的流逝________________就我而言_____________众所周知___________正如这样的情况…________firstofall/tobeginwithmeanwhile/atthesametimeAstimegoesby,常用过渡词asfarasIamconcernedAsweallknow/AsisknowntoallAsisoftenthecase\n另外,此外___________更糟/严重的是___________更重要的是____________因此_____________我想_____________也就是说___________说实话_____________Inaddition/what’smoretomakemattersworsewhat’smoreimportantisthat…asaresult/thereforeItoccurs/occurredtomethat…that’stosay/inotherwordstobefrank/totellthetruth\n为……树立榜样________________一方面…另一方面____________相反的____________总之____________最后但同等重要____________比如____________如下____________想当然地认为____________setagoodexampleto…foronething…foranotheronthecontraryinconclusion/inshort/inbriefasfollowsforexample/take…forexamplelastbutnotleasttakeitforgrantedthat…\n经典句式1.有两个原因可以解释这种现象。2.许多因素可以引起这种变化。Therearetworeasonsthataccountforthisphenomenon.Anumberoffactorscanresultinthechange.\n4.如上所述，我们不难得出结论____________5.它让我很清楚地意识到_________________6.我应该承担起…的责任______________Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat…Ithasmademewellawarethat…Iamsupposedtotaketheresponsibilitythat…3.我深信______________Iamgreatlyconvincedthat…\n否定来表达肯定，语义更坚定1.毫无疑问，如果你坚持，你就一定能够达成目标。Thereisnodoubtthatyouaresuretoachieveyourgoalsifyousticktoit.2.不可否认,兴趣在学习中的重要作用。Thereisnodenyingthatinterestplaysanimportantroleinlearning.\n3.我们绝对不能放弃。_____________4.我们应该不遗余力的保持自然平衡。__________________________Bynomeanscanwegiveup.Weshouldsparenoefforttokeepthebalanceofnature.\n1.正如俗语所说，事物都有两面性。Asapopularsayinggoes,everycoinhastwosides.2.众所周知，一份耕耘一份收获。Asisknowntoall,nopains,nogains.经典习语3.我们必须记住除了努力工作，成功没有秘诀。Itmustbekeptinmindthatthereisnosecretofsuccessbuthardwork.4.努力总有回报。Hardworkalwayspaysoff.\n虚拟语气------提亮文章色彩1.实话实说，如果我们足够小心，我们本可以采取及时措施。Totellthetruth,timelymeasurecouldhavebeentakenifwehadbeencautiousenough.2.我们该意识到学习的重要性了。It’shightimethatweshouldbeawareoftheimportanceofstudy.\n倒装句和强调词可以加强语气。1.只要我们坚持，我们一定会成功。Wewillbesuccessfulaslongasweholdontotheend.2.只有这样我们才能最终实现我们的理想。Onlyinthiswaycanweliveourdreamintheend.3.是我们人类应该采取措施保护自然。Itismankindthatshouldtakemeasurestoprotectnature.\n观点对比类文章模版练习：\nThereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat（作文题目）Butitiswell-knownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.Amajorityofpeoplethinkthat观点一.Intheirviewsthereare2factorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows:inthefirstplace,原因一.Furthermore,inthesecondplace,原因二.Soitgoeswithoutsayingthat观点一....（如何正确）.People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeopleholdtheideathat观点二.Intheirpointofview,…ontheonehand，原因一.Ontheotherhand,原因二.Therefore,thereisnodoubtthat观点二…..(如何正确).AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat…….Itisnotonlybecause____,butalsobecause____.Themore____,themore___.\n四、写作练习某英文报社准备刊发一篇题为Livinginthecity的有关城市生活的利和弊的文章，根据下面提示，写一篇词数为100左右的短文。AdvantagesDisadvantages找工作容易生活消费高交通便利人口多，拥挤有公园、饭店等休闲场所空气污染、居住环境差\nLivinginacityhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Itisofteneasiertofindwork.Therearealwaysmanychoicesofpublictransport.Besides,therearealotofinterestingthingstodoandplacestosee.Youcaneatingoodrestaurants,visitmuseums,gotocinemasandgotoparkswheneveryouwanttorelax.However,livinginacityisoftenveryexpensive.Youmustfindawell-paidjob,otherwise,youwillnotbeabletoaffordthethingsyouwilldo.What'smore,thecityisalwayscrowded,noisyanddirty.Itisverydifficulttofindagoodplacewherepeoplecanenjoypeaceandfreshairasinthecountryside.