高中英语基础写作课件 27页

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高中英语基础写作课件

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BasicWriting\n时间分配题型题量赋分时间(分钟)基础写作11510基础写作的命题特点:考生按所给的内容及要求,用5个规范的英语句子描述所给信息的全部内容,并组成连贯的短文。简而言之,考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力。\n对于书面表达的要求:1.Coverallthelanguagepointsandgiveninformation.覆盖所有的语言要点Avoidgrammarmistakesandwrongspelling应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性3.coherent,tight上下文的连贯性即有效地使用语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。4.usethewordsproperly语言的得体性5.Writeyourarticleclearly.6.Mindthenumberofyoursentences.\nTomakethearticletight,gracefulandclear.Toavoidusingrepetitivewordsorexpressions.表达时尽量用一些较高级的词汇,避免使用重复的词语,使语言不至于单纯和幼稚。也可以给文章增添亮点。(2)Tousesometransitionalwords恰当选用过渡词,使文章紧凑,流畅。(3)Tousemoresentencepatternssuchasinvertedorder,emphasis,acompoundsentenceoraparticipleadverbial适当使用多种句型,注意语言的丰富性,多样化,以变化多端的形式来表现丰富多彩的内容。\nBasicwritingskillsWaysofwritinggoodsentences\n方法一.一句多译Assoonaswearrivedatthevillage,wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers.Onarrivingatthevillage,wewerewarmly….Themomentwearrivedatthevillage,wewere…\nWewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagersimmediatelywearrivedatthevillage.Nosoonerhadwearrivedatthevillagethanwe……Hardlyhadwearrivedatthevillagewhenwe….\nUsedifferentwaystodescribethepicture方法一.一句多译一…就受到欢迎\nAssoonasLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairport,theywerewarmlywelcomed.Onarrivingattheairport,LienChanandhiswife…LienChanandhiswifewerewarmlywelcomedthemoment/immediatelytheyarrivedattheairport.NosoonerhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportthantheywere…HardlyhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportwhentheywere…方法一.一句多译\nPractice一句多译这本书花了我300元。Ispent300yuanonthebook.Ipaid300yuanforthebook.Thepriceofthebookis300yuan.Itcostme300yuantobuythebook.Thebookcostme300yuan.\nPractice一句多译昨天下午他才来。Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathearrivedhere.Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.\nRewritethesentences方法二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档(1)MostoftheartistswhohadbeeninvitedtothepartywerefromSouthAfrica.MostoftheartistsinvitedtothepartywerefromSouthAfrica.(2)Nowadaystheoldpeopleoftendomorningexercisesintheparkinorderthattheycouldkeephealthy.Nowadaystheoldpeopleoftendomorningexercisesintheparktokeephealthy.\n方法二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档Completethesentenceswithnon-predicate(非谓语动词)听到这个消息,他们变的很激动._________thenews,theygotexcited.2.尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错.__________________manytimes,hestillrepeatedthemistake.3.除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默.Unless________tospeak,youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting.HearingHavingbeentoldinvited\nTranslatethefollowingsentencesbyusingnon-predicate(非谓语动词)1,面对困难时,他从不放弃。2,引入市场后,该产品大获成功。3,做完作业后,他回家了。Facedwith/Facingdifficulties,henevergivesup.Introducedtothemarket,theproductmadeagreatsuccess.Havingfinishedhishomework,hereturnedhome.\n方法三.丰富的句式DescribethecharacterbyusingInvertedSentence(倒装句)Pooras/thoughhewas,hewashappy.\n方法三.丰富的句式SentencepatternsAreAlwaysUsefulThedogjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltothebank.Itwasthedogthatjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltosafety.ThesquareisneartheGreatWallHotel.NeartheGreatWallHotelisthesquare.YouwillhavetoworkhardforyearstospeakgoodEnglish.ItwilltakeyearsofhardworktospeakgoodEnglish.\nIfailedintheexamagain.WhatdisappointedmemostwasthatIfailedintheexamagain.MissLiwillgiveusareportsoon.MissLi,whohasawideknowledgeofEnglish,willgiveusareportsoon.WealllikeJim.WealllikeJim,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.WealllikeJimbecauseofhishelpfulnessandkindness.\n1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(使用名词性从句)2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气)Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.\n5.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.(使用状语从句)6.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.(用并列句)7.HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.\nUsedifferentwaystodescribeonesentence.Makesentencesbyusingnon-predicate.3.SentencepatternsarealwaysusefulSummaries:\nPractice此四幅画描述了爱鸟周活动中李明某一天所经历的事,由此写一篇文章。要求:1必须使用5个句子表达图画内容。2将5个句子组成连贯的短文。\n步骤一审题narrationpasttensethethirdpersontimeorderwritingstyle:tense:person:order:\ncaughtabirdfixedastringtoitagirllookformotherapolicecomforther步骤二要点\nsendherhomelostinthoughtsetthebirdfreefeelhappy步骤二要点\n步骤三.扩展成句,连句成篇1.Oneday,LiMingcaughtabirdandfixedastringtoit.2.Hesawagirlcrylookingforhermumandapolice-mancomforther.3.ThepolicemansentthegirlhomeandLiMingwaslostinthought.4.LiMingsetthebirdfreeandfeltveryhappy.\n步骤四.仔细检查,认真修改①查是否遗漏要点,信息是否完整,尤其是:人物、地点、时间、发生什么事、如何发生、怎样进行等方面是否遗漏。②查体裁格式是否正确。③查句式使用是否科学得当。④查叙述的顺序是否颠倒。⑤查过渡词是否使用合理。⑥查时态、语态是否一致正确。⑦查书写和标点符号是否规范清晰。⑧查字数是否符合要求。\nOneday,LiMingcaughtabirdandfixedastringtoit.Whenplayingwithit,hesawthegirlwhowascryingcouldn’tfindhermumandakindpolicemantriedtocomfortherandtoldherthathewouldsendherhome.Seeingthemgooff,LiMingwasdeepinthought.Heheardthecryofthebirdandsuddenlythoughtthatthebirdmightbemissingitsmother.Soheatoncesetthebirdfree,andthebirdflewhappilyintothesky.

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