高中英语短文改错2016.10.18 65页

高中英语短文改错兰陵四中王毅\n短文改错主要考查1.识别错误并准确校正错误的能力；2.综合运用英语知识的能力；3.准确理解语篇、掌握内容及行文逻辑的能力。\n改错处的设置试题采用1、1、8的方式，即：多了一词，少了一词，八处错误。\n短文改错的考点分布如下1词法错误名词：主要考查其可数性或单复的使用。代词：主要考查前后指代的一致性以及某些习惯用法等。动词：主要考查主谓一致、时态、语态、非谓语动词、情态动词、系动词等。冠词：主要考查定冠词、不定冠词和零冠词。\n形容词：主要考查比较等级、搭配等用法或者与副词的混用。副词：主要考查副词比较等级、搭配等用法，有时也考行文逻辑方面的问题等，或与形容词的混用。介词：主要考查介词的习惯搭配（比如与名词搭配、与动词搭配、与形容词的搭配等。并列连词：主要考查行文逻辑。各类从句引导词：主要考查各类从句的引导词的正确使用。\n2.句法错误从句法上考查简单句、并列句、复合句的否定、疑问、倒装、省略等。3.行文逻辑错误考查人物的性别、时间先后、肯定及否定、因果、并列与转折、递进关系等。\n改错10字要诀完整一致多少词法逻辑\n完整一个句子不可没有主语和谓语，缺少其中任何一个句子便不完整。判断一个句子的正误，首先就要看该句是否缺主语或多了主语以及有没有谓语或多一个谓语动词。\n1.Peoplefightwithfireusuallyendupwithashes.(在People后加who。定语从句中缺主语。）∧who或：Peoplefightwithfireusuallyendupwithashes.____fighting\n2.Allofthestudents,boysandgirls,theygoinforsports.(多了主语，应去掉they。）\n3.EverykindofChinesefoodisworthtrying,becauseeachhasadeliciousfoodandgoodforhealth.（09重庆卷）（good前加is,begoodfor“对。。。有好处”，缺谓语。）∧is\n4.Hewrotetoher,said,“I’llloveyouforever.”（多了谓语，应将said改为saying。）____saying\n一致主要是指：时态、语态、语气方面的一致及主谓一致；代词的一致。\n5.Toignorethefactsdonotchangethefacts.(do改为does。动词不定式短语作主语。）___does\n6.Stopthinkingaboutthingsthatworriesyou.（worries改为worry。先行词things是复数，定语从句的谓语与先行词一致。）_____worry\n7.Wheretogoandwhentosetoffhasnotbeenannounced.（主语是两个动词不定式，要看作是复数，谓语动词与主语的数不一致。要将has改为have。）___have\n7.Whenandwheretobuildanewfactoryhavenotbeendecided.（have改为has。主语是一个动词不定式短语，谓语动词要用单数。）____has\n8.Everymeanshavebeentriedtosettletheproblem.（have改为has。Means方法，单复同形，在此由every修饰，是单数，谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式。）____has\n9.Theteacher,aswellasanumberofstudents,wereaskedtoattendtheparty.（were改为was。主语是Theteacher。）____was\n10.Manycountriesintheworldfindwedon’thaveenoughwater.（2012全国卷II）（we改为they。指代不一致。）__they\n多了或少了主语、谓语；多了或少了不定式符号to;多了或少了冠词、介词、副词等。多少\n11.Heletmetohavearest.多了to多少\n12.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.(2015全国新课标I卷）（在countryside前加the。）∧the\n13.Heenteredintotheclassroom,bookinhand.(去掉into。）\n14.Honestlaborneedsnoamaster.（去掉a。）\n词法主要指：容易混淆的词：（如动词、介词等。）词性：（形容词与副词的混用。）名词：可数名词和不可数名词；名词的单复数；名词所有格。\n代词：人称代词的主格和宾格；形容词性的物主代词和名词性的物主代词；反身代词。关系代词、副词的误用。先行词。固定搭配。\n探究点一、名词错误\n(1)(2014年新课标I卷)Sincethen-foralltheseyear,wehavebeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.Asaresult,theplantsaregrowingeverywhere.(2)(2012年新课标I卷)FromthetimeIwasaboutfouruntilIwasaboutsix,Idestroyedeachofmytoy.(3)(2011年新课标I卷)LuckilyIhadallmymoneyinmypocket,buttheonlyclothesIhadwerethoseIhadon.Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.years____toys____luggage_______\n探究点二、代词错误\n(1)(2015年新课标I卷)Wemustfindwaystoprotectyourenvironment.(2)(2013新课标I卷)Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,andhewasstrongandpowerful.(3)(2014新课标I卷)Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtasty.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.(4)(2015年新课标I卷)Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Many____our____many____him______\n探究点三、介词错误及含有介词的固定短语\n(1)(2015年新课标I卷)Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.(2)(2014年新课标I卷)Nearlyfiveyearsago,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.(3)(2013年新课标I卷)Hewastall,withbroadshouldersandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgreyovertheyears.(4)(2012年新课标I卷)WhenItoreapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrain,myfathersaid,“That’sit.Nomoretoystoyou.”(5)(2011年新课标I卷)LuckilyIhadallmymoneyonmypocket,buttheonlyclothesIhadwerethoseIhadon.with__of__to____for__in__\n探究点四、冠词错误及含有冠词的固定短语\n(1)(2015年新课标I卷)WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthoughtIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.(2)(2014年新课标I卷)Sincethen-foralltheseyears-wehavebeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingeverywhere.(3)(2013年新课标I卷)Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawaywhentheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.(4)(2011年新课标I卷)IwasgoingtovisitafriendthereandafterthatIwouldgotoXiamenforlongholiday.∧the∧a∧a\n探究点五形容词和副词错误\n(1)(2015年新课标I卷)Lotsofstudieshaveshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.(2)(2014年新课标I卷)Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpofourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.(3)(2013年新课标I卷)Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshouldersandabeardthatturnedfromblacktograyovertheyears.(4)(2013年新课标I卷)However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.serious______ago____well____ever____\n动词的时态和语态\n探究点一上下文时态一致错误\n(1)(2015年新课标I卷)WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.(2)(2014年新课标I卷)Sincethen-foralltheseyears,wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.(3)(2013新课标I卷)Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.(4)(2012新课标I卷)WhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrain,myfathersaid,"That'sit.Nomoretoysforyou."Mypunishmentlastedayear.thought____have___passed____tore___\n探究点二被动语态错误\n(1)(2015年新课标I卷)Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriousproblem.(2)ThepartywillheldintheroofgardenoftheMainBuilding.(3)IwassopleasedtohearfromyouandI'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyschool.Youareright,quitefewchangeshavebeentakenplace.(4)IlikeEnglishandcomputerbestandIamverygoodatthem.LastyearIhadwonthefirstprizeintheschoolcomputercompetition.(5)I'dliketotellyousomethingaboutourschoolsportsmeetlastweek.ItwasholdingonOct.6th.∧beheld______\n探究点三情态动词错误\n(1)(2015年新课标I卷)Wemustfoundwaystoprotectourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we’lllivetoregretit.2)Myfathermustn’thavesaidsuchathingforhealwaystreatsmeinagentleway(3)Iwillliketoknowwhereyouwereborn.(4)Iwouldlikeyoureaditagain.(5)WhatwillyouliketodowhenyoufinishyourcourseatLeeds?(6)Ihopeyoucanvisitmycountrysoon,becauseI’dtoshowyousomebeautifulplacesnearmyhome.find____would___∧towould____∧like/lovecan’t____\n非谓语动词\n探究点一动词不定式错误\n(1)(2013年新课标I卷)Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.(2)(2012年新课标I卷)Meanwhile,IfoundoutthatwithmorepatienceIcouldmakemytoystolast.Myattitudechangedfromthenon.(3)Iwasusedtogotothecinemaonceaweek.(4)Hisfatherwouldnotlethimtogo.(5)Wehearitsayfrequentlythatwhatpresent-daymenmostdesireissecurity.(6)Youhadbetternottogothere.hold____said____\n探究点二动词-ing错误\n(1)(2011年新课标I卷)Mysummertravelstartedterribly.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou.(2)Healwaysenjoystoreadingadetectivestory.(3)TheysawAhFuswimmingtowardsthebankcarriedmylittlesister.(4)ThemainsubjectsIstudiedatschoolincludingChinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputer.buying____carrying_____included________\n探究点三动词done错误\n(1)ItisdifficulttomakeyourselfunderstandinEnglish.(2)Myparentsliveinthecountry.TheykeepadogcallingAhFu.understood__________called______\nTherearefiveenemiesofpeace:greed,ambition,envy,angerandproud.（proud改为pride。）greed(n.)–greedy(adj.)ambition--ambitiousenvy--enviousanger--angry______pride补偿训练\nHeistallthanhissister.（tall改为taller。）___taller\nMakeimportantdecisionwhenyouareinagoodmood.（decision改为decisions。）______decisions\nBewillingtoresistanythingwhichtakesyouoffyourchosenpath.（which改为that。）_____that\nIt’sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.（2015四川卷）（many改为much。指的是花费很多钱。）_____much\nFromthenon,we’vekepttouchwitheachotherthroughe-mails.（2010全国II卷）(touch前加in。keepintouchwith是固定短语，表“与。。。保持联系”。）∧in\nThatiswhichotherteacherssay.（2013辽宁卷）(which改为what。what在表语从句中作say的宾语。）_____what\nIdon’twanttolendhimsomemoney,soI’mafraidI’llloseourfriendship.（2015四川卷）(so改为but。“我不想借钱给他，但我怕失去我们的友谊。”两个分句有转折关系。）___but\nI’m30yearsold.IfonlyIwasachild!把was改为were;Ifonly引导的句子，谓语动词用虚拟语气。动词be要用were.___were\nHurryup,sowe’llbelate.（so改为or。前后分句有明显的转折关系，故换成表转折的“否则”。）___or\nSummingup（小结）短文改错有妙计完整一致看仔细词法侧重冠名动形副互换要留意分词出现多琢磨主动被动和语气全文一处多一词一处少词关介词时态人称要统一连词用法重逻辑\nMyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.高考真题再现2016____________wheresteadilyhave_______honestyandused∧of__ahis\n高考真题再现2015WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we’lllivetoregretit.thought____∧theand__with__serious_______air____Many____find____our____\nNearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen-foralltheseyear-wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!ago____of__years____have____∧aeverywhere________tasty____many____wonderful______高考真题再现2014